Fantasy The Void [Info still being made]

[Leonofthehouse]

Welcome to the void a world most wouldn't expect to exist watch as you take control of a nation or a character.

Spoiler: Races

There are many races first of like many world's but some are more different from others some have claws some have scales. But this doesn't change anything in the long run war will continue to happen. Some races are more powerful

Spoiler: Elk

Elk are a grand race of beings that are weak mentally they are most know for being raiders with their gray skin and long arms that almost reach the ground including the horns on his head it is a creature to be feared. They have a low intelligence but high Power standing about 6'2

Spoiler: Elk History

The start of the race was grand they rose with their great power they dominated the battlefield. But when the smarter race’s appeared they lost outsmarted again after again they were beaten in all battles they devolved into scavenger’s

There were some elk the kingdom’s left but they in fought but one of the kingdoms’s the kingdom of Elaes with the death of the king the kingdom split up causing the lands to start a war called the 3 elk war.

Spoiler: Elk Reference Photo

Spoiler: Anubis

Anubis or otherwise called lizardmen they are a scaley lizard-like creatures that stand on 2 that are bigger than their counterparts standing about 5'9 with high intelligence and high power they are perfect but they have a weakness called a desert.

Spoiler: Anubis History

They evolved from alligators a weaker type after coming out they were seen as weak and were hunted in the swamps but so many years’s passed their intelligence grew and grew along with their power until they ruled

Spoiler: Anubis Reference Picture

Look up Lizardmen

Spoiler: Trua

The Trua most know for being a sort of friendly giant with their giant size they have a high attack but their intelligence is quite lacking but most wont dare mess with them they are very protective of their young even fighting dragons to defend them. With their giant teath they can chop through branched

Spoiler: Trua History

Coming soon

Spoiler: Trua Reference Photo

Spoiler: System

The system is made of many things which may be hard to explain I am going to try to explain everything in here.

Spoiler: Renown

Renown depends on your character start and life desiceins

If you start as a king there is 1000 renown compared to a peasant that starts with 10. Also, you can gain Renown from doing things.

If you give someone 1 Denar you gain .001 Renown so it will take a lot of money to gain a good but wars are here for a reason.

Spoiler: Infamy

Infamy is gained and lost by what you do there are also some traits that give you high infamy but it is used to create Death stares which can cause an opponent to flee or to cause Immitaion Grounds which cause your enemy to feel scared if they are weaker than you.

The ways of gaining infamy are from doing evil like murder and robbery.

 

[Leonofthehouse]

Update 1.00

This Update Bring's The Frist System into it the regular System for keeping track of thing's including magic money and skill point with the next update probably bringing new races.

 

[Leonofthehouse]

Update 1.10

Small Change's to the system including an infamy and renown system including the adding of a new race the trua

 

[Leonofthehouse]

Update 1.11

Property system added with income and expense including new skill type's Bussines with the properties and companies their are now share's

 

[Leonofthehouse]

Update 1.12

Now a city system with population and tax including unrest and race also a national system with races and net income including unrest

 

[Leonofthehouse]

Official Recruitment

DM if you want to be in a pre-test called the 3 elk war.The 3 elk war was caused by the split in the Kingdom Of Eleas the 3 princes took power and control the land but war broke out also you can be a soldier or something else if you want but you would be a side character.

 

[Leonofthehouse]

Update 1.12.5

Added a role system

 

[Leonofthehouse]

Official Recruitment Update

Still looking for people also if you want to know what the makeship map look like here Dm me for more also if you want to add a race send it to me at least some details about them


Green - Kingdom of Elas
Blue - Kingdom of New Eleas
Yellow - Kingdom of Eleas

 

[Leonofthehouse]

Update 1.13

Map update

 

[Martydi]

If you're hoping to host a nation builder, you need to make a better first impression. It's painfully obvious English isn't your first language. The whole post is riddled with grammar errors, jumbled sentences and typos. It's barely comprehensible.

Your worldbuilding needs a lot of work as well. There is barely anything said about the setting, and what little is there doesn't make much sense.

that are weak they are most know for being raider

Why is a physically weak species known for its military exploits? Wouldn't it make more sense for a species more associated with physical prowess to form a martial society?

Their history use to be great but during the rise of different races they were outshined easily and were beaten again and again but when an elk lord arose they had a small victory. but this victory turned into defeat after defeat.

That is not a great history. Mediocre at best, perhaps not even that. You're contradicting yourself.

They have a low intelligence but high Power standing about 6'2

That is a contradiction. Previously you said they are physically weak.

Also, elk.

bigger than their counterparts standing about 5'9

Bigger than what counterparts?

with high intelligence and high power they are perfect

In many aspects, groups and species are like characters. Having one be good at absolutely everything hardly sounds fun.

but they have a weakness called a desert.

Why are they living in a desert? If they are so intelligent and living there is such a weakness, why haven't they emigrated out? Or done something to compensate for it?

You might also want to consider giving players more freedom in setting out their nations, and perhaps even species. Of course, slotting players into pre-made nations can work well, but for that you'd need a setting built to accommodate a game like this. What you have here is not enough. If you do decide to open up the game for people to come up with their own nations and species, you might want to consider setting up some form of a sign up sheet, so people know what information you're looking for.

You would also do well to actually explain how you plan to run this game. You've said that you have several mechanics in place, but that really doesn't inspire confidence when we don't even know how exactly does all of this work. People will be more likely to join up if they know what they're getting into. You should write up a more detailed explanation.

 

[Leonofthehouse]

If you're hoping to host a nation builder, you need to make a better first impression. It's painfully obvious English isn't your first language. The whole post is riddled with grammar errors, jumbled sentences and typos. It's barely comprehensible.

Your worldbuilding needs a lot of work as well. There is barely anything said about the setting, and what little is there doesn't make much sense.

Why is a physically weak species known for its military exploits? Wouldn't it make more sense for a species more associated with physical prowess to form a martial society?

That is not a great history. Mediocre at best, perhaps not even that. You're contradicting yourself.

That is a contradiction. Previously you said they are physically weak.

Also, elk.

Bigger than what counterparts?

In many aspects, groups and species are like characters. Having one be good at absolutely everything hardly sounds fun.

Why are they living in a desert? If they are so intelligent and living there is such a weakness, why haven't they emigrated out? Or done something to compensate for it?

You might also want to consider giving players more freedom in setting out their nations, and perhaps even species. Of course, slotting players into pre-made nations can work well, but for that you'd need a setting built to accommodate a game like this. What you have here is not enough. If you do decide to open up the game for people to come up with their own nations and species, you might want to consider setting up some form of a sign up sheet, so people know what information you're looking for.

You would also do well to actually explain how you plan to run this game. You've said that you have several mechanics in place, but that really doesn't inspire confidence when we don't even know how exactly does all of this work. People will be more likely to join up if they know what they're getting into. You should write up a more detailed explanation.

I see I will fix it Just allow me some time. Also, the pre-made nation's are for the kinda the pretest the creator creation is allowed I asked people for recommendation. But I see where you are coming from I will fix everything.

 

[Leonofthehouse]

Update 1.13.5

Small system up date

 

[Dark Hero]

I'd definitely would join this