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You cannot challenge the matrix. The Matrix is Love. The Matrix is Life.


-face-palms and then kills self at that joke-


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Anyone said:
You cannot challenge the matrix. The Matrix is Love. The Matrix is Life.
-face-palms and then kills self at that joke-


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You cannot defeat the Fey. The Fey are eternity. The Fey are life incarnate. xD
 
TaeYeon said:
@Reika Suzuya I would have to ask you to post more since the niveau that you are posting in is meant for simple RP's.
Try to write at least a paragraph (5 lines of text).
OwO I'll try. I always do my best, so poof!~


 


TaeYeon said:
@Reika Suzuya I would have to ask you to post more since the niveau that you are posting in is meant for simple RP's.
Try to write at least a paragraph (5 lines of text).
P.S. That was five lines. xD I just counted.
 
Grammar Nerd Moment #1: A good paragraph is at least three sentences long.


Grammar Nerd Moment #2: A good paragraph should not have run-on sentences.
 
[QUOTE="Reika Suzuya]Grammar Nerd Moment #1: A good paragraph is at least four sentences long.
Grammar Nerd Moment #2: A good paragraph should not have run-on sentences.

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4 sentences: F.e. Mila wakes up. She gets out of bed. Looks out of the window to see clouds. Feels that this is going to be a good day. <-- As you see, there lacks some story behind it.


A bit of detail is not murder...
 
TaeYeon said:
@Reika Suzuya Those are five sentences actually.
Five sentences, depending on how many words, can make five lines.

[QUOTE="Reika Suzuya]Location: Cake Shop, Harajuku
Reika hummed to herself as she skipped along towards the Cake Shop. Once there she pressed her hands and face to the window next to the door and stared. A few people eating their cakes noticed her and became uncomfortable with the strange ghoul; she was back and still at it.


"Oi! Go away, stupid girl!" one of the workers yelled at her, making a shooing motion. She didn't ,one from where she stood, making little begging eyes.

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TaeYeon said:
4 sentences: F.e. Mila wakes up. She gets out of bed. Looks out of the window to see clouds. Feels that this is going to be a good day. <-- As you see, there lacks some story behind it.
A bit of detail is not murder...
xD Unless it's detail on murder.
 
Haaah... I'll let it go this time, but please don't start writing just one or two lines the whole time... It makes my eye twitch.

[QUOTE="Reika Suzuya]Five sentences, depending on how many words, can make five lines.
 



xD Unless it's detail on murder.

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TaeYeon said:
Haaah... I'll let it go this time, but please don't start writing just one or two lines the whole time... It makes my eye twitch.
xD Got it. I shall do my best to keep my posts as long as possible without making them sound stupid. Sometimes too much info is a bad thing because it turns into useless rambling. Useless rambling irks me more than a short post, as long as that post isn't one word long.
 
[QUOTE="Reika Suzuya]
xD Got it. I shall do my best to keep my posts as long as possible without making them sound stupid. Sometimes too much info is a bad thing because it turns into useless rambling. Useless rambling irks me more than a short post, as long as that post isn't one word long.

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I think we came to an agree then. ^^
 
TaeYeon said:
I think we came to an agree then. ^^
Certainly so.~ I am obsessed with correct grammar, hence the Grammar Nerd moments. Being random helps with writing longer posts, which is why I made her personality the way it is. She's crazy enough to do a bunch of things that result in a post that isn't just two sentences or less. Unfortunately, that also depends upon the person/people I'm RPing with at that point in time as to whether I can make her reaction form a good post. I hate when I can't think of something good to post in reply. xD I just got wordsy there.~


 


[QUOTE="Reika Suzuya]Certainly so.~ I am obsessed with correct grammar, hence the Grammar Nerd moments. Being random helps with writing longer posts, which is why I made her personality the way it is. She's crazy enough to do a bunch of things that result in a post that isn't just two sentences or less. Unfortunately, that also depends upon the person/people I'm RPing with at that point in time as to whether I can make her reaction form a good post. I hate when I can't think of something good to post in reply. xD I just got wordsy there.~

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xD Five lines, eh?~
 
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[QUOTE="Reika Suzuya]Certainly so.~ I am obsessed with correct grammar, hence the Grammar Nerd moments. Being random helps with writing longer posts, which is why I made her personality the way it is. She's crazy enough to do a bunch of things that result in a post that isn't just two sentences or less. Unfortunately, that also depends upon the person/people I'm RPing with at that point in time as to whether I can make her reaction form a good post. I hate when I can't think of something good to post in reply. xD I just got wordsy there.~
 



xD Five line, eh?~

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(-n-) I get it.
 

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