Futuristic THE SEA (Lore based, Futuristic RP, Under Construction)

[VirtualUnity]

So guessing it's Accepted?


@Wixed

 

[Wixed]

@VirtualNotoriety


Just finished reading it.


Other than grammatical errors and zero punctuation, save for commas, in your background info--it's accepted. Tidy it up and you're good to go. xD

 

[VirtualUnity]

Yeah people have been telling me that I'm somewhat wrong in grammar and sometimes ask me why I a few to none periods xD but sure I'll try and fix it

 

[Wixed]

Keep it clean, sir. Gotta act like this is advanced rp. Bahahahaha. In disguise.

 

[Wixed]

@roguetick


Is your Cs complete?

 

[roguetick]

@roguetick
Is your Cs complete?

roger. i'll probably just more stuff in the extra section if needed.

 

[Wixed]

roger. i'll probably just more stuff in the extra section if needed.

Okay. So as it stands, and I've yet to add this to the lore, The Earth is not 75% ocean anymore. The Sea refers to the ocean of trees as the surface is all greenery. HOWEVER. Obviously species cannot survive without water, so you'll be glad to know that there are shallow oceans that are mostly underground. So he can still live within The Sea and also within an underground ocean.


@roguetick

 

[DrBa3]

('OoO')

 

[Wixed]

(B')

 

[DrBa3]

Merh...

 

[BloodyKharma]

Are the Ultra and the Alfar able to understand one another, do the species inhabiting The Sea all share one common language?

 

[Wixed]

@BloodyKharma A few things here, the trees are miles high, so no sunlight would be penetrating them at ground level. Just a very very meager amount. And since Barumal isn't even a mile high, his tearing wouldn't expose much.


Just for future reference for you as well as others rp-ing in The Sea.

 

[Steviemac]

Oops! I know that I've referenced an expedition that took place a couple of centuries past. Would you like me to change that to maybe some sort of unmanned probe, or maybe they had tapped into an aging satellite that was only usable for a very brief period to image the area before the satellite stopped functioning?

 

[Wixed]

As long as the mission was strictly governmental and not released to the public or conducted by a private sector/ organization.


Pyxis is highly monitored and structured and they've kept all virus information from the current generations, as well as any nefarious activity. The government is known as "The Cardinal" and they tend to preach an "all for one, one for all" sort of existence, so anything selfish or indulgent on their part is kept secret to maintain order.


Hope this helps.

 

[Steviemac]

Got it. Thank you.

 

[Lenchan]

Alright, now for some questions and things.


-Should I request tabs for the locations so that rp can be designated? (Ex: a tab for The Sea, Pyxis, and Seoul9?)

Personally, I prefer them in a collective. It encourages people to read everything (which I'm an advocate of) - this helps when chars finally meet and backstory/rp-story is relevant. I do understand the appeal, however, and it won't affect me much.



-What needs improvement or work to make your experience better?

More cowbell, please. (read: "too early to say for me.")

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Responses in blue

 

[Buckteeth]

Is this still open?

 

[Wixed]

Yes it is! Feel free to join.

 

[typhoon]

@UlyssesTheSnowman


Im guessing you dropped out?

 

[UlyssesTheSnowman]

Sorry! Been sick the past few days so I haven't been online much. I'm still in and I'll make sure not to drop out again.

@UlyssesTheSnowman
Im guessing you dropped out?

 

[typhoon]

Sorry! Been sick the past few days so I haven't been online much. I'm still in and I'll make sure not to drop out again.

Sorry! I was just assuming, lol. Hope you feel better!

 

[Buckteeth]

@Wixed Cs completed.

 

[Irubus]

I'm honestly curious of what Barumal is saying. I get the gist to some degree but I'm getting lost.


@Anaxial


Also I'll post again soon and interact with Yu, and Chiaro. If that's alright with the two of you.


@yonmita rae @Lenchan