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Nami

One Thousand Club
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[QUOTE="Sugiura Yoshitoki]
Name: Adder
Gender:male



Race:
(Light Elf, Dark Elf, Dihart Elf) dark elf


Age: (12-19 is the age range) 13


Talent: (Choose from the list) Smithing


Personality: quiet, calm and collected. you wont see much of him, hes just watching everyone


Background History: adder's family was killed by enemies because the weapons they made were to dangerous. adder escaped with 1 arm sliced off, and because of his ability of smithing, he crafted a new arm. he recieved a letter, or an invitation.



Appearance:
(Try and describe their appearance, but it's extremely recommended that you include a photo! c:) he looks like the guy in the photo.

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Thank you for signing up!! I just have a few adjustments! I'm sorry! I'm taking off the Dark Elf option for choice of race for a little longer, so would you mind switching him to either a Light Elf or a Dark Elf? Also, the invitations were sent out ages ago, considering they've been on this journey for a long while now (we're over 500 pages into the roleplay xD ) so if he DID receive an invitation he must be a Light Elf from Fayland. After all, the invitations were only sent out to a few young elves in Fayland from Faye. On the other hand, you can have him stumble upon the group and have a reasoning for him being in the forest, which I recommend for new characters at this point! And lastly, which picture are you referring to for your elf's appearance? :o


That's all! I hope you don't mind fixing those few things! :3
 
Name: Adder


Gender:male



Race:
(Light Elf, Dark Elf, Dihart Elf) Dihart Elf


Age: (12-19 is the age range) 13


Talent: (Choose from the list) Smithing


Personality: quiet, calm and collected. you wont see much of him, hes just watching everyone


Background History: adder's family was killed by enemies because the weapons they made were to dangerous. adder escaped with 1 arm sliced off, and because of his ability of smithing, he crafted a new arm. he stumbled upon a group of elves, and plans to join them.



Appearance:
(Try and describe their appearance, but it's extremely recommended that you include a photo! c:) he looks like the guy in my profile picture.
 
[QUOTE="Sugiura Yoshitoki]
Name: Adder
Gender:male



Race:
(Light Elf, Dark Elf, Dihart Elf) Dihart Elf


Age: (12-19 is the age range) 13


Talent: (Choose from the list) Smithing


Personality: quiet, calm and collected. you wont see much of him, hes just watching everyone


Background History: adder's family was killed by enemies because the weapons they made were to dangerous. adder escaped with 1 arm sliced off, and because of his ability of smithing, he crafted a new arm. he stumbled upon a group of elves, and plans to join them.



Appearance:
(Try and describe their appearance, but it's extremely recommended that you include a photo! c:) he looks like the guy in my profile picture.

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Ah, okay! That's better! Accepted! :3 Feel free to jump into the roleplay whenever you're ready!


The group is currently in a large clearing deep in the forest. There are hundreds of rows of bronze plates lining the grass in honor of those who died there in the Blackwald War years ago. The elves there are Ruineth, Jess, Faye, Varexes, and Juniper is off collecting some herbs nearby. ^^
 
Okay. I have to say something here. I FINALLY found your flippin cs and I have to say it's pretty crap.


All right, these are my major issues:


1: he's 13. not an issue, but it ties into 2.


2: he lost his arm, but crafted a metal fist for himself, that connects to his nerves and functions as a normal fist... with ONE hand. how does this make ANY friggin sense?


3: the backstory is pretty crap. you have virtually no details.


4: your profile picture looks to be of an early 20's homosexual psychopathic murderer. the white hair, the red eyes, and the overall look and feel of the character is one of energy and murder, which doesn't suit your personality.


Please make an effort on your cs...
 

Name:


Fiahaari Ridirvara


Gender:



Female


Race:



Light Elf


Age:


17


Talent:


Music


Personality:



Bubbly, Spunky, Enthusiastic, Energetic, Caring, Loving and Compassionate.


Background History:



She used to be a Tailor but along the line she's learn't she was more talented in Music, she tries to be there for any person who needs her because otherwise she feels alone and lost her main goal is to help other because other then her music that is what makes her happy.


Appearance:



Blue Hair, Blue/Violet Eyes, Tall For An Elf, And slender built.


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Hello! I apologize for the late response!! :u I just took a look at your character sheet and it seems to be perfectly fine! :3 Hoorah! ^^ Hahah, Accepted! :3 Feel free to jump into the roleplay whenever you're ready!


The group is currently in a large clearing deep in the forest. There are hundreds of rows of bronze plates lining the grass in honor of those who died there in the Blackwald War years ago. The elves there are Ruineth, Jess, Faye, Varexes, Juniper, and a new elf, Adder. Adder and Varexes are currently fighting one another ^^ You should probably read at least the previous ten posts to have some sort of understanding of what's going on at the moment ^^


Thanks for signing up!! c:
 
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