The Nexus Project

Name- Justin eye


Gender- male


Age- 24


Physical appearance- <p><a href="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_06/images.jpg.b5f8ae9c89e4ef6f98a08764d7760388.jpg" class="ipsAttachLink ipsAttachLink_image"><img data-fileid="55964" src="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_06/images.jpg.b5f8ae9c89e4ef6f98a08764d7760388.jpg" class="ipsImage ipsImage_thumbnailed" alt=""></a></p>


Primary power- can hit any thing he wants with any weapon of choise most likely a gun


Secondary power- can learn how to fight any way just by watching how someone fights


Tertiary power- can dodge any fight move brought to him


Personality- loves to be a leader and is very serious likes to get a job done right without a problem and hates swearing


Strongest memory- going into a lab chained and having many needles put in his head

 

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Gunar said:
Name- Justin eye
Gender- male


Age- 24


Physical appearance- View attachment 128254


Primary power- can hit any thing he wants with any weapon of choise most likely a gun


Secondary power- can learn how to fight any way just by watching how someone fights


Tertiary power- can dodge any fight move brought to him


Personality- loves to be a leader and is very serious likes to get a job done right without a problem and hates swearing


Strongest memory- going into a lab chained and having many needles put in his head
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I've got a lot of characters signed on right now so I'm going to have to consider accepting this one or not. I do have a few issues with it other than just having a large roster already. Your character seems geared to be just unbeatable unless by a fluke. Your powers do build off each other which I like but they don't follow a logical suit.


I would be willing to give you strength, weapon mastery, or speed. I can't give you all 3 even if you have to work to build them up. Try reevaluating a bit. If it helps, look at it from an MMO standpoint. Are you going to be a frontline tank, and ranged DPS, or a versatile support?


If you look over the other characters, you'll see the strengths they bring and then the weaknesses built with them. My character is blind. It's made up for with a limited perception but still blind to simple things like reading. We have several young characters with powerful abilities. their obvious weaknesses is that they could possibly be punted like a football. Keep that in mind.
 
Gunar said:
What if his weakness is some sort of order where he didn't like to kill
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That would still leave him well overpowered. Tone down the powers. Make them specific if possible.
 
How bout it takes him time to acquire the moves that he learns . also he has to be hit with the move a couple times before he can recognize that move. Last the the only weapon he can use his primary power on is a gun
 
How about we try this. Tell me what kind of character you're wanting to create and I'll try to give you combinations of powers that work. Your current powers either go far too powerful, or all over the place and still too powerful.
 
I just want a strong leader but with a passion that could go far and I like to have him use weapons for powers
 
i got a little rest, but i woke up to the sound of my neighbors mowing, so i figured i would come on here and edit again
 
@Gunar, your leadership qualities will have to come from your character's personality and actions. Otherwise, that would be an acceptable character.
 
Wait of the patients were all exposed to the nexus serum how can her character be 875 when the serum hasn't been around that long.
 
Revived mummy, reconstituted human DNA, accelerated aging, aging triggered by use of powers. Take your pick. I'm trusting @jakobtatee to be creative.
 
Oh ok, I vote mummy so one day our characters can visit s museum and read up on likely how she was a ruthless dictator lol
 
You're in. I'll figure a way to work you in once I get to an actual computer. I'm limited on my phone right now.
 
Name - Gabriel Anders


Gender - Male


Age - 17


Physical Appearance -
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Primary Power - http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Kinetic_Energy_Manipulation


Secondary Power - http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Flash_Precognition


Tertiary Power - http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Aura_Reading


Personality - Very intelligent, but antisocial and blunt. He's usually calm, but very emotional or even arrogant at times regardless. Under this cold exterior however, he's rather nice and has a soft spot for children.


Strongest Memory - He remembers sitting at a beside in a hospital, holding a little girl's hand as she lay sleeping. Tears are in his eyes.


Other - He has a British accent.
 
Name - Drake Dawson


Gender - Male


Age - 21


Physical Appearance -


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Primary Power -


Invisibility- Drake can turn invisible and make others around him invisible too


Secondary Power -


(Idk what to call this so I'll just make some random name up :P ) Removal- Drake has the ability to remove peoples senses


Tertiary Power -


None


Personality -


Drake is strong and self confident, sometimes to the point of over confident. He is incredibly stubborn but very logical and is very easy going. Drake is very witty too and knows how to get out of bad situations, or get into them...


Strongest Memory -


A redhead trying to hide behind a tree with a huge smile on her face.


Other -


Drake speaks 5 different languages. Japanese, Spanish, French, English and Chinese.

 

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