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Observer of Reality
Okay, I re-read your World entry. I do not intend to come off as rude, but I am a bit confused/baffled about how you're using the MU-0 Universe I designed. For any others who will be adding Worlds, please note that I will analyze all Universe/World entries line-by-line (all content will be reviewed). I do apologize if I come off a bit harsh, but my background leads me to question everything I read in accordance to the String/M Theory of higher dimensions (since I used the 10-D (or 10+1) theory for MU-0's construction). Without further ado:
You've created an alternate Universe (to my original MU-0), called MU-X. Assuming that you followed the example I gave, your Universe has its own set of initial conditions (different from MU-0 in at least one way).
You've created "Dimensions" - which I'm guessing are actually different ways that reality have played out in either MU-0 or MU-X, over the course of time. Alternate histories, if you will (usually called Timelines)?
You have Worlds - great! Can't wait to see how things will play out in them...
Your 'Timelines' appear to be more so Time-frames, or events. They could very-well have played out in the same timeline, or different timelines altogether. I'll look for the explanation later in your post...
You state that "As a part of the MU-0 universe, multiple timelines create a so-called universe MU-X, which expands the dimensions, and collapses a few in an unknown event called 'The Wave'." I created MU-0. How do any of the timelines from MU-0 create a new Universe? I don't remember creating anyone or anything, in MU-0, that is capable of doing such. According to the very model that MU-0 is based upon, doing such would require that at least one entity from MU-0 have the ability to manipulate the 6th Dimension. Furthermore, if your 'Universe' is truly a part of Universe MU-0, it can't actually be a seperate Universe. It branches off from the same starting conditions, making MU-X simply a timeline of the MU-0 Universe. Your naming scheme appears to be using my Multiverse designations as names for Timelines. I'll need to pay better attention...
You then go on to state that "Galaxies and dimensions will unravel in the story, as we found out more of the secret past of Dimension 5, also called The Black Pivot of the universe." This 'Black Pivot' can only originate from the Timeline (MU-X) that you have created. Also, what happened in Dimension 5 in your Timeline? You'll need to delineate such whenever you get the chance. I also run into the issue of determining what your 'Dimensions' are. Are they different ways that History/Time played out (from a central set of starting conditions for a particular Universe)? Are they the actual locations at which entities can be found (by coordinates) and defined (by their physical properties)? You haven't defined the terminology for your model, which is a bit confusing.
"Dimension X is a parallel universe mostly based on Dimension 1, which is home to most past events, and used to replicate ones happening around the galaxies." If this is so, are the starting/initial conditions for Dimensions X and 1 the same? String/M Theory would suggest that these 'Dimensions' (possibly Timelines) are possibly part of the same Universe, and represent Alternate Histories, where different events transpired. If no, then they can't be part of the same Universe. They would be two, separate Universes, with no causal connection between them.
"Most of the nations and races of Dimension 1 try stop the expanse of Dimension X, as its the major cause of The Wave." Firstly, how does a Dimension expand? Secondly, assuming that Dimensions can do such, have you explained what is causing the aforementioned expansion? According to the theoretical basis that was used to construct MU-0, Dimensions are already of infinite size. Thus, the size of a Dimension can't change, for it is always infinitely large (from the perspective of one who exists within said Dimensions, instead of above). Assuming that Dimension X is another Universe instead, experiencing a form of expansion similar to what the real (irl) Universe experiences (due to Dark Energy), that shouldn't pose an issue for other Universes, let alone cause a noticeable 'Wave' in the higher dimensions of any sort. Assuming that Dimension X has indeed somehow expanded to unbelievable proportions, and is noticeably 'warping' the Nth-dimensional fabric that it sits upon, wouldn't this cause more than a simple 'Wave' - assuming that some form of non-Super gravity exists on this plane?
"Neocretia is a dimension with human-based advancements, also the only dimension out of all in MU-0 and X that has humans in Current timeline." This 'Dimension' (most likely, a Timeline) can't be the only one. As I stated before, MU-0 is the Universe that I created - and all of its current Timelines (or 'Dimensions') have humans in them as the dominant species on Earth. Perhaps this can be true for MU-X, but not MU-0. In order for your above statement to be true, I would have to negate most of the content I've already written for MU-0, removing anything I've contributed to this RP.
"These humans have developed possibilities to visit other dimensions, but no real outlook on The Wave, as their dimension has its own history and 'repeater' dimensions." I'm guessing that the 'Repeater Dimensions' are Parallel Timelines or Universes, where the differences between the two items being compared are so insignificant that they might as well be the same (but the difference is still there nonetheless - nature doesn't repeat itself needlessly).
"Dimension 5 is, like mentioned [earlier], a secret mystical power, causing most outbreaks and events in Dimension 1. It's believed that it's not the only dimension that has the strongest force of affects on its siblings though." How can one 'Dimension' affect the other? Once one possibility is observed, all others become unavailable to the observer. Jumping to another location in the 5th Dimension (or another Timeline, in short) requires going through the 6th Dimension in the model used to construct MU-0. Are you suggesting that someone in said 'Dimension' is altering the fabric of reality in ways that are affecting the flow of time for the other 'Dimensions'(Timelines)? If so, please tell how.
The sections after the Description, however, are extremely good. In fact, I'm willing to admit that (by itself) to the list of Worlds/Timelines if they were their own entry (written by you - don't anyone else try stealing this entry). I like how your created the diverse species for this entry - Bravo!
Overall, I'm feeling a bit confused about how you're going about using the given source material. If you can explain this better to me, I would be much better off. Otherwise, I would suggest checking out the content I posted recently, to understand how the rules of MU-0 work. Adding onto MU-0 will be a bit difficult without knowing the underlying theory that allows MU-0 to function. If you would like to continue working on that World/Universe entry, feel free to do so - your entry is still valid. However, you may have to disconnect your World/Universe from MU-0 if your Physics/Mechanics can't be reconciled with what is already in use in the original source material. I can't rewrite years worth of story content to accommodate for this World entry in its current state. Once again, I apologize if I came off as hostile or rude.
I am simply asking for clarity.
