Fantasy The Lost Book OOC

[Bakuyoshi]

Hello all.

 

[Petroshka]

Hello all.

Hello ya'll

 

[HighSanguinaryPriest]

That's great I love it can you just specify where in Ariael the forge shows up? In the capital? outside the capital? In the forest or near the Seaport?

Sure, I'll make an edit to the post in a bit

 

[HighSanguinaryPriest]

He're's the extra paragraph

He came to, several minutes later when the sound of beating rain on his forge's roof stirred him from his surprisingly pleasant nap on the stone floor. Grumbling about some no good, ork loving, commie bastard book, He looked out the door. What greeted him was a scene that is not of the stone halls of Hammerstone, but the ocean by the shore, and heavy rain. Too shocked to properly vocalize his surprise, Flint made his way back in and set to work, finishing his blade. Minutes passed, when he once more broke the silence. "Well, Fuck..." Followed by the Hiss of hot metal in oil.

Desert Rose

 

[ProRPer]

ProRPer - A couple of things on your intro.
Love the pictures however for the rest of the play you can put them in as thumbnails if you so choose to incorporate them.

Also I noticed you switch tenses throughout the post. I'm not a grammar nazi but it tends to be a little distracting so just a heads up there in case you didn't realize you were doing so.

Last thing- If Alec got stabbed through the back and into his spine how is he alive or rather how is he even able to move? Please clarify. Thank you

Still it was an enjoyable read and look forward to your contribution to the play.

Haha, sorry about all that. It's been a while since I've done this. Anyways, I'll make sure to change the spine thing, and for future reference I'll try my best to use one tense and put the images in as thumbnails. Thanks for the tips (:

 

[Petroshka]

Haha, sorry about all that. It's been a while since I've done this. Anyways, I'll make sure to change the spine thing, and for future reference I'll try my best to use one tense and put the images in as thumbnails. Thanks for the tips (:

i like pass tense

 

[Desert Rose]

I'll give a cookie to whoever catches onto the reference I made at the end of my post

 

[Bakuyoshi]

Ok I have to think of a way to Introduce Cef. Given her world it may seem weird because it's from DnD the king of weird.

 

[Desert Rose]

Ok I have to think of a way to Introduce Cef. Given her world it may seem weird because it's from DnD the king of weird.

Which will make it so much fun

 

[Bakuyoshi]

Just which scenario from the Chronicles of Cefrey should I pick. Maybe the Warlock- no wait RPN may not approve of that. The whole having to deal with being the servant to a Dragon, no wait best plan, the beginning of Tyrin.

 

[HighSanguinaryPriest]

I'ma make a set of new eyes for that faerie Pandora.

Desert Rose

 

[Bakuyoshi]

I have posted.

 

[HighSanguinaryPriest]

Desert Rose

to give you an Idea how rune magic works

http://warhammerfantasy.wikia.com/wiki/Rune_Magic

 

[Petroshka]

*dances*

 

[HighSanguinaryPriest]

bored

 

[Desert Rose]

I'll send a tag out to whoever is left in need of reply. I want to get this thing going

 

[Bakuyoshi]

I'm working with Petroshka in the meantime when the time for replying comes.

 

[HighSanguinaryPriest]

From what I've gathered so far, The dwarf, the assassin and fairy are the only ones at the seaside village

 

[Dragonix975]

Is this still open

 

[Petroshka]

Is this still open

*coughs* you asked this in the IC

 

[Desert Rose]

Dragonix975 yes it's opened

 

[Desert Rose]

Kazanna Enolx The Comet jole875
I believe you are the only ones we are waiting for on intro.

I don't want to wait too long so posts can now start being made regularly. I don't want mass posting though.... I want everyone to be able to keep up.

 

[jole875]

I'm almost done

 

[Kazanna]

I have two to write, I'm half way done with my first one. Intros take time. :|

 

[Petroshka]

I have two to write, I'm half way done with my first one. Intros take time. :|

excuses!