Fantasy The Legend of the Legendary Mages OOC

[Unit A2]

oh shit i havent really been keeping up with yall, whats happened? what do i need with my bio?

 

[Hachi Machi]

The more I think about the it, the more convinced I get that this might not be for me. So I'm going to drop out of this. Sorry.

Thank you for letting me know.

 

[Hachi Machi]

oh shit i havent really been keeping up with yall, whats happened? what do i need with my bio?

I've completed the Magic section for the Character Sheet, that's the only thing that was added. Just fill out everything to the best of your ability, and if you're stuck on a part, let me know, and we can work through it together.

 

[Unit A2]

msg me tomorrow alright, im heading to bed

 

[FTR]

Hachi Machi Sorry I'm taking centuries to do anything but time and drive have both been lacking in my life lately. I'll hopefully have something like a sheet and a list of spells these next couple of days.

 

[Hachi Machi]

Hachi Machi Sorry I'm taking centuries to do anything but time and drive have both been lacking in my life lately. I'll hopefully have something like a sheet and a list of spells these next couple of days.

You still have plenty of time, so it's no big deal. Hopefully, you get back your drive.

 

[Hachi Machi]

The first character sheet to be completed and approved was made by MiraAutumn

Everyone has until Saturday, or Sunday to finish their character sheets. If you have any questions, or if you're stuck on a part let me know. Next week on Saturday, or Sunday, the roleplay will commence! The first plot will involve students using magic in a set of trails. Teachers, Military Mages, and Evil Mages will be preoccupied with other events as the Trials take place. I will determine the events for each individual character according to their character sheets. Expect early character development, or events leading to early character development.

Unit A2 Skout64 gingira Sir. Wizard MiraAutumn GamerCarrot ViciousVip3R That Lass Over There D dwarfking1999 LieutyXII FTR Shagranoz Drakerus Kloudy Plutoni

Here's an example of an approved character sheet:

Sharlett Elane

~finally completed & approved~​

• General
• Appearance
• Equipment
• Capabilities
• Personality
• History
• Magic
• Supplementary

• 
  General
  
  Name: Sharlett Elane
  Nickname: Miss Elane(among students), Lotti(among colleagues), Ruby(Her name to the Scholars Of Gnosis)
  Titles: Ruby, the Doll Maker
  Age: 24
  Gender: Female
  Faction: Scholars of Gnosis
  Role: An evil mage undercover as an academy teacher
  
• 
  Appearance
  
  Picture:
  Spoiler: Appearance

  
  Details: Pastel red hair(dyed from red) which reaches a little below her shoulders(used to reach her lower back), crimson/ruby eyes, wears contacts(used to wear glasses), typically ties her hair in a quick bun to retain a sophisticated and mature image, even out of working hours, due to her face natually being quite youthful.
  Attire: She typically wears a black blouse, dark-coloured skirt and low heels on a work day, or a semi-formal dress such as this. On a casual day out, she'd usually wear a knee-length dress, with flat boots, a long coat, a leather belt and maybe a corset. When she's at home, or simply by herself safe, she'd literally wear a simple top and shorts.
  Height: 5' 6
  Weight: 138 lb
  
• 
  Equipment
  
  Supplies: She typically carries a rather large patterned bag wherever she goes, filled with various bits and bobs of stationery, and her teacher ID. She has a small camera(magic photos=permanent projection of an image) in there with her purse, along with a book or two. Off to the side, is a small box with her lunch, along with a small bottle of fruit juice. In the small pockets of her bag, there are small bundles of charms(mainly for Boulder Smash, Confuse and some others) ready whenever she needs them. Her bag is engraved with a small geometric circle(Bind) which acts as a method of quick deterrant against potential thieves and such. When a thief approaches, if Sharlett notices(which she should due to her paranoia), she will quickly cast a spell against the culprit to stop him. The communicator charm she uses for reporting to the Scholars of Gnosis is kept hidden at home, which she uses every night.
  
  Tools: She has a few chalk sticks in her pocket, and a couple charms(Heal, Lightning Shock and Haste.) and a Ley Line communicator charm(teacher) which she hangs from her neck. She has a few tiny needle-like daggers attached to the inside of her clothing, such as her cuffs, not particularly for direct combat, but for engraving geometric circles in emergencies, or cutting thin rope.
  
• 
  Capabilities
  
  Mental Strengths: Calm, resourceful, as a teacher she is rather responsible in her duties
  Physical Strengths: Her thin stature makes dodging and escaping easier, she can also create rather intricate arrays on small surfaces(dexterous).
  Emotional Strengths: Confidence in herself, very good at keeping a smile on her face no matter what(or at least a poker face), appearing empathetic
  Mental Weaknesses: When placed in front of the opputunity to gain more forbidden knowledge or power, she'll feel incredible excitement which will be hard to hide. She'll attempt to leave momentarily at least to contain herself.
  Physical Weaknesses: She has very limited natural eyesight, and is rather thin and weak. She does not know how to fight physically(and therefore likes making things fight for her). Her real smile appears creepy compared to her fake smile.
  Emotional Weaknesses: She is rather lenient towards her students, and is internally emotionally unstable due to her obsession, and her fear of herself.
  
• 
  Personality
  
  Goals: To satiate her lust for knowledge and power, and to take revenge against those from her past.
  Fears: Who she's become, and fufilling her goals(what would she do afterwards?), having people become important to her
  Personality Traits: Calm, lenient, trustworthy, kind, paranoid, broken, afraid, obsessive
  Summary: On the surface, she is a lenient, kind and trustworthy teacher, whom students can always go to for advice on personal topics. She appears calm & confident in her abilities. As well as rather resourceful. Students will virtually never find her without her welcoming smile. But behind that warm facade, lies an insane greed. Knowledge, power, revenge. Her obsession has grown immensely over the years, almost leaking past her mask. She's rather paranoid as well, constantly wary of the people in her vicinity, and who they are. But even behind that, lies a broken soul. Deep within her heart, she knows she doesn't really want any of that, but it's the only way she knew how to deal with the sorrow of her grandpa's death, and has been chained to it ever since. She's afraid of losing her current state, and having it all fall apart in front of her, since she's partially forgotten what her true personality is like. Currently, she's somewhat content hiding behind her acting.
  
• 
  History
  
  Background: Sharlett grew up in one of the biggest cities in the kingdom, as an only child. She was raised primarily by her grandpa, due to her parents early death. Since she never knew them, she never felt any particular sorrow for them. Due to her genetics, she began wearing glasses when she was young. At an early age, she began taking an interest in books and the interesting knowledge she could learn from them. She also had a unique interest in fairytales, and loved the little romance tales between princes and princesses.
  
  Due to her dull appearance and unique interests, she quickly became a prime target for bullies, who picked on her everyday without fail. One day, as her stress levels were reaching their limit, her grandfather was hospitalized, due to him collapsing on the street. She felt frustration and regret well up inside her, angry that she didn't realize that he was growing weaker every day. She ultimately blamed herself for his condition, but also the bullies, who took away most of her awareness everyday.
  
  It wasn't long before her grandpa died, not even a week. Things passed by in a blur, as she was forced to move and live with her aunt. She and her sons tried to make her feel welcome, but she rejected it all in her mourning. She blamed the bullies. The mere anger she used to feel against them twisted into a warped desire for revenge. And for revenge, she needed strength.
  
  She wanted to dedicate herself to research on magic, since she knew the destruction it could cause compared to mere physical training, but struggled to find a tutor. She didn't know anyone around her who knew magic, or at least to the extent of being a tutor. But then, her eldest cousin returned home for a visit with his wife. Due to some stroke of luck, his wife was originally a teacher at the Jalder Military Academy, who specialized in transmutation magic. After finding out she was cheating on her cousin, she blackmailed her into being her magic tutor. Sharlett wasn't particularly interested in transmuation magic at the time, but forced her to teach her all of the most devastating magic she knew. When she had learnt all the knowledge she could leech from her, she let her be free to go back to her home country with her husband, still keeping some evidence to blackmail her again if need be, and taking most of her magic books.
  
  After that, she began researching magic on her own, quickly delving in the elemental and destructive magic side. As she explored the most dangerous spells she could legally find, she came across the Scholars of Gnosis. They welcomed her into the group, and she aided them in their crimes, slowly making a name for herself with her abilities. A certain incident earned her the title of 'Doll Maker', as she managed to locate and collect the key to a restricted area, through using her dolls to travel through the thin air vents. She even managed to return the key without raising a fuss, after the scholars had copied it's structure. After gaining their trust, she found forbidden spells unlike any she had seen before. She felt a dark presence grow in her heart, as her lust for vengeance grew. She no longer wanted to simply punish the criminals of her past, she wanted to torture them till their last breath. As this need grew, the reasoning behind her actions were slowly beginning to fade away from her mind, gradually becoming a thought irrelevant to her.
  
  The Scholars of Gnosis decided to send Sharlett as a spy to the Jalder Military Academy, due to her calm capabilities and great ambitions. They warned her of the dangers, such as other spies from other factions, and cautioned her to tread carefully. It's been a year, and as of yet, she hasn't found any vital information. She knows that waiting is key for the empire to let down their guard, but she's growing ever so slightly impatient.
  
  Timeline:
  1443 - January 14th: Sharlett was born, and her widowed mother didn't survive the procedure.
  1448 - August 27th: Sharlett got her first glasses(5yr)
  1455 - February 19th: Sharlett's grandfather collapsed and was admitted into a hospital(12yr)
  1455 - February 24th: Sharlett's grandfather died and she moved in with her aunt.
  1455 - March 1st: Sharlett dedicated herself to research on magic
  1460 - April 4th: Sharlett moved out to live by herself(17yr)
  1462 - December 27th: Sharlett joined the Scholars of Gnosis under the alias Ruby(19yr)
  1465 - December 27th: Sharlett was given the title: Ruby the Doll Maker(22yr)
  1466 - August 20th: Sharlett changed her appearance(23yr)
  1466 - September 1st: Scarlett joined the Jalder Military Academy as a teacher
  
  1467 - September 2nd: Present day(24yr)
  
  Class Status: She's a commoner/criminal, who has mainly assisted other criminals, but has killed a couple mages herself. Due to the fact that she's mainly a side character in major crimes(preferring to not exert herself unless she needs to), she's not too well-known compared to other criminals. Some have a watchful eye on her however, due to the fact that she's been involved in a large majority of the incidents. The empire does not have any photos on her, as she isn't a top priority at the moment. She used to have her hair in long red twin-tails and wear glasses. To change her appearance, she cut her hair to reach just below shoulder-length, dyed it a much lighter colour, and began wearing contacts.
  
• 
  Magic
  
  Reasoning: She started off with a great interest in elemental magic, along with destructive to create devastating effects, since blatantly, her desire was to be able to torture her enemies with incredible power. She learnt warp magic as a basic method of escape/defence, even though she is still a heavily offensive mage. However, due to her growing desire for forbidden knowledge(her reason for being an evil mage), she grew fond of the idea of manipulating objects to gain access to areas her human body could not(Animation). Such as using tiny little dolls(Transmutation), or even tiny cameras with transmuted legs to creep in through creeks and fufill their tasks. She's even advanced her ability with this enough to earn her title, as well as create little suicidal doll bombers(Transfer).This has led to her ability to create rather small arrays, yet still manage to keep them complex.
  
  Magic Spells List:
  Advanced = ll / Intermediate = ll / Basic = ll
  

  Transmuation(Basic)

  1. Basic doll
  2. Spider Spy
  

  Animation(Advanced)

  1. Travel
  2. Retrieve
  3. Clairvoyance
  4. Kamikaze
  5. Activate
  

  Transfer(Intermediate)

  1. Store Destruction
  

  Elemental(Advanced)

  1. Boulder Smash
  2. Icicle Storm
  

  Destruction (Intermediate)

  1. Extinguish Ray
  

  Warp(Basic)

  1. Blink(Object)
  

  
  
  Primary Spells List:
  Proficient = lllll lll / Average = lllll lll / Weak = lllll lll
  

  Elemental Magic

  1. Lightning Shock (Proficient)
  2. Fireball (Proficient)
  3. Wind Blast (Average)
  

  Hexes Magic

  1. Slow (Proficient)
  2. Confuse (Proficient)
  3. Sleep (Average)
  

  Force Magic

  1. Move (Average)
  2. Levitate (Weak)
  3. Bind (Proficient)
  

  Heal Magic

  1. Cure (Proficient)
  2. Awaken (Weak)
  3. Alleviate (Weak)
  

  Empower Magic

  1. Haste (Proficient)
  2. Might (Average)
  3. Balance (Weak)
  

  Transformation Magic

  1. Apple Transformation (Weak)
  2. Knight Transformation (Proficient)
  3. Box Transformation (Average)
  

  Transmutation Magic

  1. Stone Apple (Weak)
  2. Wood Sword (Average)
  3. Stone Stairs (Weak)
  

  Ley Lines Magic

  1. Communicate (Average)
  2. Connect (Average)
  3. Locate (Weak)
  

  
  
  Magic Stats List:
  Proficient = lll / Average = llll / Weak = lll
  

  Incantation

  1. Incantation Speed: Proficient
  2. Incantation Accuracy: Average
  3. Incantation Eloquence: Weak
  

  Geometric Circle

  1. Geometric Circle Defense: Average
  2. Geometric Circle Accuracy: Proficient
  3. Geometric Circle Eloquence: Average
  

  Magic Defense

  1. Spell Effect Resistance: Weak
  2. Spell Damage Resistance: Weak
  

  Magic Energy

  1. Magic Energy Level: Proficient
  2. Magic Energy Perception: Average
  

  
  
• 
  Supplementary
  
  Birthday: January 14th
  Likes: Books, writing, learning, knowledge, power, magic, cold foods, blue, black, well-planned/organised events(pretends she likes: taking pictures(actually for observation), flowers, animals, clothing, cake)
  Dislikes: ignorance, arrogance, pride, non-magic users, pink, tea, overly-friendly people, ants(and other creatures which heavily rely on each other)
  Relatives: Her widowed aunt and her three sons(who she used to live with), and a distant uncle
  Relationships: The people closest to friends she has are members of the Scholars of Gnosis(not many). She's a respected member of the terrorist group.
  Quirks: Taps her finger repeatedly when nervous or angry.
  

 

[Unit A2]

waiit wheres my bio i was mostly done creating? i cant see it

 

[Hachi Machi]

waiit wheres my bio i was mostly done creating? i cant see it

What do you mean? Isn't your character sheet in the character sheets thread?

 

[Unit A2]

i can see that i posted but i cant see the post itself

 

[Hachi Machi]

i can see that i posted but i cant see the post itself

If you're talking about your second post, I deleted it, since it wasn't a character sheet, but instead a question. Your first post with your character sheet is still up.

 

[Unit A2]

no character sheet that i can see

 

[Hachi Machi]

Name: Alexandria Hikari
Nickname: Alex
Titles: She has had many impressive feats like killed a 40 foot high beast but she has no title.
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Faction: Im flexible.. ill see what other people pick
Role: who knows
Appearance

Picture:

Details: She has been branded as a scholar of genosis near her breasts but thats it.
Attire: look at the picture.
Height: 5'9
Weight: 145 Lbs

Equipment

Supplies: She carries a few dark charms to help her cast dark magic
Tools: She carries a dagger on her.

Capabilities

Mental Strengths: she doesnt care about her consequences and how it may harm others, she typically remains calm, few things frighten her.
Physical Strengths: Her only strength physically is her ability to react quicker than most people
Emotional Strengths: She doesntt feel very often. But she for sure doesnt care about peoples feelings.
Mental Weaknesses:She has PTSD of.... well figure it out later.
Physical Weaknesses: She doesn't take much damage but in return she is one of the stronger black mages.
Emotional Weaknesses: She will almost never work with other people she will never be seen being kind which makes her tons of enemies.... shes just really cold.

Personality

Goals: Depends on which faction ill be
Fears: Losing the only person she has left.
Personality Traits: Cold, mean, near emotionless, commited to her task, defiant.
Examples: i dont understand
History
To sleepy for any of this. Ill tell another time.
Magic (Add spells here as your character learns them in the roleplay. Please Leave this section blank for now, since I'm working on spells.)

Supplementary (Optional)
Ill add to this later

no character sheet that i can see

Do you not see this? Because I see this in the character thread.

 

[Unit A2]

guess ill copy and paste that

 

[Hachi Machi]

guess ill copy and paste that

It's weird that you can't see your own post. I would ask RPnation staff about that.

 

[Unit A2]

well i found it i guess, and updated it
tell me if i missed something

 

[Hachi Machi]

well i found it i guess, and updated it
tell me if i missed something

I've checked your character sheet, and you're missing three things: The Magic Section, Class Status, and Timeline.

 

[Unit A2]

i updated it hun is it alright?

 

[Hachi Machi]

i updated it hun is it alright?

Unit A2

Since your character's an academy student please lower their age from 21 to 16~19. If she recently enrolled into the academy, please lower it to 16~18.

Alright, here's a list of comments to help you with fixing your character sheet. You can make the changes in your character sheet.

There's a lot of spelling mistakes. I recommend using a spell checker to help you out with those fixes. I don't mind a few spelling/grammatical errors, because I make those same mistakes as well, but it's just something I recommend.

For details in the appearance section, can you provide a little more information for your character's face? All I know from the picture is that they have brunette hair.

For Physical Strengths in the capabilities section, I'm assuming you mean your character can react quickly to let's say a punch thrown at her, or magic cast at her? Or do you mean your character acts quickly?

For Mental Weaknesses in the capabilities section, can you explain her PTSD in a little more detail? Like what are the symptoms, or what does PTSD make her do? How does it mentally weaken her?

For Physical Weaknesses in the capabilities section, I'm assuming you mean she can't defend that well against attacks? If you actually mean, "She doesn't take much damage but in return she is one of the stronger black mages," then that'd be a physical strength since she's durable.

For Goals in the personality section, please list some goals.

For examples in the personality section, how is it confusing? You just post an example of your character acting out a personality trait.

For the History section, I can allow the Gnosis faction to slaughter your village, but it'll probably be a ways away from the Legant Empire's center. What gift does your character have in relation to magic? Is it the ability to learn magic spells quickly? Or high magic energy reserves? Or what is it? Also, why did she join the academy? Or how was she accepted? Did someone help her get into the academy? I'm also confused by this sentence: "after 8 years with them, she managed to bet saome guards and rescue her sister, she now is in the academy, wanting to make up for all the wrong she has done in her life." What are the guards, and how does she rescue her sister? Is she helped by the Legant Empire? That could be a reason. The Legant Empire helps her out, and they learn of her magic capabilities, so they send her to the academy.

For the Timeline section, how does your character begin practicing magic again? She'll need a tutor to learn new spells, since it's difficult to learn by one's self.

For the Magic section, please do the Magic Spells List, Primary Spells List, and Magic Stats Lists properly. If you're confused on how to fill it out, there's instructions in the encyclopedia.

Currently, I cannot accept your character, until you've fixed those mistakes and answered my questions.

 

[That Lass Over There]

I unfortunately must withdraw due to hellish school... Forgive me, comrades

 

[Hachi Machi]

I unfortunately must withdraw due to hellish school... Forgive me, comrades

Thanks for letting me know. If you ever want to return, once you get your bearings, you're free to.

 

[Hachi Machi]

How's everyone? If you have any difficulty with your character sheets, let me know. It's my duty to help you all out!

 

[Hachi Machi]

Unit A2 Skout64 gingira Sir. Wizard MiraAutumn GamerCarrot ViciousVip3R D dwarfking1999 LieutyXII FTR Shagranoz Drakerus Kloudy Plutoni

Hello everyone!

This is a reminder to mention or PM me when your character sheet is finished. The roleplay begins Sunday, so get ready for some fun! If you cannot finish your character sheet in time, I'll find a way to fit your character in, so don't worry about time, if this week isn't well for you.

 

[Shagranoz]

I'm sorry, but this sheet is just too thick and detailed for me, and is taking far too much of my time. I'm out.

 

[Hachi Machi]

I'm sorry, but this sheet is just too thick and detailed for me, and is taking far too much of my time. I'm out.

Alright, thanks for letting me know. The sheet's there to build your character, so I know how to incorporate them into the roleplay for character development and plot.