Fantasy The Five Kingdoms - The Fall of Sarthenfall - OOC

[Inheritance]

Why.....

Cause I'm gonna declare my love to you

Naw fool just watch

 

[NinjaGirlGamer]

Cause I'm gonna declare my love to you

Naw fool just watch

Ivanna: *breathes*

Jeod:

 

[Xanto]

Also NinjaGirlGamer

I want you to pay close attention to this next post

bruh your writing flow is getting better

 

[explosiveKitten]

Angie: ...

 

[Inheritance]

bruh your writing flow is getting better

The hell did you just take a shot at my previous posts?

I think he did?

I'll admit I have some choppy shit. I used to be a better writer back when I read more and...drank less. But ya know how it is. Pretty tacky to take the shot though.

 

[Inheritance]

Ivanna: *breathes*

Jeod:
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iight you literally assaulted Jeod when a simple push would have done it

 

[NinjaGirlGamer]

iight you literally assaulted Jeod when a simple push would have done it

Ivanna “assaulted” Jeod, so Nox didn’t kill him. If Jeod were to hate Ivanna instead of Nox, he would be in a safer position. Ivanna got no hate towards him.

 

[Inheritance]

Ivanna “assaulted” Jeod, so Nox didn’t kill him. If Jeod were to hate Ivanna instead of Nox, he would be in a safer position. Ivanna got no hate towards him.

So comin from a dude who has played the sober peacemaker, I understand you need force to pull people from a fight. But I think there's been maybe 1 or 2 times that I had to use half as much brutality as Jeod did.

Knock the gun out, shove him back. Done. Not slap the gun away twist his wrist then try to break his nose.

The kinda person that would do the latter is the kinda person who enjoys causing pain to people who clearly couldn't fight back.

If I went and beat the shit outta every drunk person that started a fight, my entire house would fuckin kill me.

 

[Xanto]

The hell did you just take a shot at my previous posts?

I think he did?

I'll admit I have some choppy shit. I used to be a better writer back when I read more and...drank less. But ya know how it is. Pretty tacky to take the shot though.

*face palms* my attempt at giving ya a complement and saying that your writing is getting better..doesnt mean it sucked to begin with

*sighs* aight just disregard it all

 

[NinjaGirlGamer]

So comin from a dude who has played the sober peacemaker, I understand you need force to pull people from a fight. But I think there's been maybe 1 or 2 times that I had to use half as much brutality as Jeod did.

Knock the gun out, shove him back. Done. Not slap the gun away twist his wrist then try to break his nose.

The kinda person that would do the latter is the kinda person who enjoys causing pain to people who clearly couldn't fight back.

If I went and beat the shit outta every drunk person that started a fight, my entire house would fuckin kill me.

Well, if she would done the “first option” it would be seen as a slap on the wrist to Nox. If you examine the discipline Nox have to the Hound, she’s not the type of person to just “slap you and take away the gun then tell you to go to your room.”

Ivanna didn’t do the assault to harm Jeod because she enjoys the suffering of others. She did it to save him even if he hated her.

Jeod has an outsider’s view on Ivanna, so of course he would think she’s a psychopath. Pretty much everyone does lol. She doesn’t interact with people often, and constantly travels alone.

So was the assault “too much,” mostly I agree. But does she deserve the hate for doing it, well depends on if you knew the true intentions.

 

[Inheritance]

Well, if she would done the “first option” it would be seen as a slap on the wrist to Nox. If you examine the discipline Nox have to the Hound, she’s not the type of person to just “slap you and take away the gun then tell you to go to your room.”

Ivanna didn’t do the assault to harm Jeod because she enjoys the suffering of others. She did it to save him even if he hated her.

Jeod has an outsider’s view on Ivanna, so of course he would think she’s a psychopath. Pretty much everyone does lol. She doesn’t interact with people often, and constantly travels alone.

So was the assault “too much,” mostly I agree. But does she deserve the hate for doing it, well depends on if you knew the true intentions.

Hold up you sayin if she didn't beat his ass Nox would have?

 

[Inheritance]

*face palms* my attempt at giving ya a complement and saying that your writing is getting better..doesnt mean it sucked to begin with

*sighs* aight just disregard it all

Dude your hand probably hurts. That facepalm probably hurt as bad as the backhanded compliment you gave!

I know dude I'm messin with ya. Thank you.

 

[NinjaGirlGamer]

Hold up you sayin if she didn't beat his ass Nox would have?

That’s exactly what I just said.

Ivanna did it to save him, not be like “I’m going to beat this man to the ground.”

Cause if you read the previous deeds she’s done so far in the story. She saved a girl in Fransen, comforted another girl at a funeral. You would see the true intentions better.

 

[Inheritance]

That’s exactly what I just said.

Ivanna did it to save him, not be like “I’m going to beat this man to the ground.”

Cause if you read the previous deeds she’s done so far in the story. She saved a girl in Fransen, comforted another girl at a funeral. You would see the true intentions better.

Definitely not gonna go back and read it that's way too much effort.

But no that's not what you said, you said "it would be like a slap on the wrist to Nox" implying she is getting punished. Not, "If he just shoved her, Nox would have fed him his own kidney."

Now look I understand that she was tryin to do good there- but I am not writing from my perspective. I am writing from Jeod's perspective: Someone who is terrified of this creature. Fear is the strongest emotion we have, and when that drives a belief it is hard to steer it off. So getting attacked when he was following what his fear drove him to do is going to be shocking for his mind. And it wasn't like she cleared it up with him either.

Not to say she should. I don't know what her character is gonna do-that's your job. I doubt she's the apologetic type, especially when she was helping him. But he doesn't know that. He sees someone who chose a demon over him, attacked him, then insulted him.

 

[NinjaGirlGamer]

Definitely not gonna go back and read it that's way too much effort.

But no that's not what you said, you said "it would be like a slap on the wrist to Nox" implying she is getting punished. Not, "If he just shoved her, Nox would have fed him his own kidney."

Now look I understand that she was tryin to do good there- but I am not writing from my perspective. I am writing from Jeod's perspective: Someone who is terrified of this creature. Fear is the strongest emotion we have, and when that drives a belief it is hard to steer it off. So getting attacked when he was following what his fear drove him to do is going to be shocking for his mind. And it wasn't like she cleared it up with him either.

Not to say she should. I don't know what her character is gonna do-that's your job. I doubt she's the apologetic type, especially when she was helping him. But he doesn't know that. He sees someone who chose a demon over him, attacked him, then insulted him.

Dude I know you’re writing from Jeod’s perspective.

But you previously said “You assaulted Jeod” meaning I have something to do with it. I didn’t decide that, Ivanna did. If I was in Ivanna’s shoes I would be too scared to even step in and probably not say a word.

 

[Inheritance]

Dude I know you’re writing from Jeod’s perspective.

But you previously said “You assaulted Jeod” meaning I have something to do with it. I didn’t decide that, Ivanna did. If I was in Ivanna’s shoes I would be too scared to even step in and probably not say a word.

Touche

 

[NinjaGirlGamer]

Touche

But hey, just know that Ivanna wouldnt have the same thoughts that Jeod has for her. And I’ll leave it at that.

My writing might not be clear with the message, but everything will be revealed later on to why Ivanna is the way she is.

 

[Inheritance]

But hey, just know that Ivanna wouldnt have the same thoughts that Jeod has for her. And I’ll leave it at that.

My writing might not be clear with the message, but everything will be revealed later on to why Ivanna is the way she is.

I figure. I don't expect her to care about him at all but I figure she just kinda tolerates him without much of an opinion. Could be wrong

 

[NinjaGirlGamer]

I figure. I don't expect her to care about him at all but I figure she just kinda tolerates him without much of an opinion. Could be wrong

Well, again, I don’t want to reveal anything. Just pay close attention to what she does in the future.

 

[Inheritance]

Well, again, I don’t want to reveal anything. Just pay close attention to what she does in the future.

See now I'm gonna be super excited to read your posts.

 

[Inheritance]

See what you did?

 

[NinjaGirlGamer]

See now I'm gonna be super excited to read your posts.

Well Good, you’ll pay attention more lol

 

[Inheritance]

Well Good, you’ll pay attention more lol

Only to Sparrow, Xanto, and your posts.

I'll go back and read stuff about Ivanna. Any monumental posts I should read?

Btw Jeod isn't a very hateful person. His 'vow' isn't like a blood oath

 

[NinjaGirlGamer]

Only to Sparrow, Xanto, and your posts.

I'll go back and read stuff about Ivanna. Any monumental posts I should read?

Btw Jeod isn't a very hateful person. His 'vow' isn't like a blood oath

Well go to page 21 of the Main RP and read all the posts. It reveals a lot about her character and thoughts.

 

[Inheritance]

Sounds good