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Groovy Dude
Alright when going into the backstories I want to just make a quick disclaimer:
I'm going to be pretty easy going with how I usually am. Another RP forum I use and moderate I am far more strict on with a lot of things but only because we're uptight assholes lol.
I want to say that anything I do mention is purely objective and I'm trying to be fair as possible. Please don't take personal offense from me saying anything because I don't mean to be a jerk. In no way is anything I say a personal attack on you or your character and I am not judging your ability to write grammatically, structurally, or creatively.
@QuestingBeast everything seems good to go. I like the character dedication and look forward to potential trouble with the former army/gang he was part of if you choose to involve them.
@DarknessSpirit I wasn't aware a mermaid character would show but I'm not complaining. Creative concept, dig the daddy issues. My only thing is I ask if you could tell me how developed her magic skills are for balance reasons.
@Leusis dude I love everything about this. Aged character adds variety. Varls are awesome. Looking forward to our RP.
@Yuuki Kagami Similar to Darkness I'd just like to see what you think her skill with the weaponry would range at. The other concerns that come up are with the backstory as it seems a tad off to me that a small child stabbed and killed many bandits then got away and built her own home. I don't mean to change the backstory or your character in great depth but perhaps some slight revision. Everything else is fine and I like the development of this intelligent and tough half-elf.
@Rinslette This all seems fine to me. Like how the character is more healer and surgeon oriented than anything else.
@Thane Korino I really like the character race design and think it'll be an interesting mix to the bunch. The only thing is that I would tone down the hand-to-hand skill considering the character is only 15 and already as a plethora of knowledge. It's good for characters to start softer or weaker and develop stronger in the RP we're going for.
I'm going to be pretty easy going with how I usually am. Another RP forum I use and moderate I am far more strict on with a lot of things but only because we're uptight assholes lol.
I want to say that anything I do mention is purely objective and I'm trying to be fair as possible. Please don't take personal offense from me saying anything because I don't mean to be a jerk. In no way is anything I say a personal attack on you or your character and I am not judging your ability to write grammatically, structurally, or creatively.
@QuestingBeast everything seems good to go. I like the character dedication and look forward to potential trouble with the former army/gang he was part of if you choose to involve them.
@DarknessSpirit I wasn't aware a mermaid character would show but I'm not complaining. Creative concept, dig the daddy issues. My only thing is I ask if you could tell me how developed her magic skills are for balance reasons.
@Leusis dude I love everything about this. Aged character adds variety. Varls are awesome. Looking forward to our RP.
@Yuuki Kagami Similar to Darkness I'd just like to see what you think her skill with the weaponry would range at. The other concerns that come up are with the backstory as it seems a tad off to me that a small child stabbed and killed many bandits then got away and built her own home. I don't mean to change the backstory or your character in great depth but perhaps some slight revision. Everything else is fine and I like the development of this intelligent and tough half-elf.
@Rinslette This all seems fine to me. Like how the character is more healer and surgeon oriented than anything else.
@Thane Korino I really like the character race design and think it'll be an interesting mix to the bunch. The only thing is that I would tone down the hand-to-hand skill considering the character is only 15 and already as a plethora of knowledge. It's good for characters to start softer or weaker and develop stronger in the RP we're going for.