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Fantasy The Dark World (ooc)

the only issue i see in "Dogs" bio is the fact that the family is so big :P something thats quite difficult in this time
I can shrink that, but it's still an Irish family so it should generally be large for even this timeframe. (I'm part Irish so I can get away with this stereotype.)
 
Feel free to take a gander at Ezra, if you'd like. ^^ I'll complete his history soonish! I'm currently multi-tasking between this and video games atm, haha.
 
Feel free to take a gander at Ezra, if you'd like. ^^ I'll complete his history soonish! I'm currently multi-tasking between this and video games atm, haha.
hehe kay

well immediately off the bat
he cant be S <3 im not accepting S ranks at the beginning of the rp <3

his guild has the same idea as FAS, too, but the two groups existing alongside each other is fine ^^, tho rn in the rp, FAS is sort of a spoiler, since it wont affect the beginning of the rp <3

the rest looks good! ^^
 
Oh, oops! I completely misunderstood the FAS, haha. I'll change his guild as well.
FAS is "Future for Abnorms Society", the name leads to such misunderstandings. But its for freedom for Abnorms, so that like, all people can live together in harmony.

but both groups can coexist, you dont have to change your guild lol
 
I also think drawing is just a better way to go about it, and it doesnt stop the whole "my character studied writing a lot" -he could just be "my character studied art a lot" now, but anyway. Im not against your writing power, I just need to see how it actually works. And reality altering powers in the world isnt... well lets say it isnt not allowed :P there are those type of abilities. The problem is we (I) need some sort of way to see your power doesnt just break the rp fundamentally. Like what stops your character from just writing "I solve all of the issues we face in the rp effortlessly." or something like that? this sort of power needs some stipulations, some weaknesses, some sort of nerf or something to.. well im not concerned with it being OP, because peoples charries will delve into being S rank eventually making them OP, im just concerned that its just a "fix all" button that means theres no stakes or anything in the rp, not when he could just write the problem away.
Sorry for disappearing on you for the day. Anyway, you've convinced me with the drawing piece. It sounds much nicer and easier to manage. As for the abnorm change, it's just seems easier to manage, and I've already thought of so much for it. You'll see what I mean when I change my cs
 
Sorry for disappearing on you for the day. Anyway, you've convinced me with the drawing piece. It sounds much nicer and easier to manage. As for the abnorm change, it's just seems easier to manage, and I've already thought of so much for it. You'll see what I mean when I change my cs
kay! <3 ^^ thankies! i look forward to how you change it :3
 
Whew, that was genuinely fun to write. Very well-made universe, Thalia. c:
History is done, and Ezra is completely finished.
 
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first, the bio is very difficult for me to read, for some reason the font color is like nearly the same as the color of my background, but whatever :P

and lastly, ill accept his bio ^^ but if you ever want him to start remembering stuff, and make it affect the rp (or anything about him affect the rp), let me know beforehand, so i can tell you if its okay <3

other than that, hes good ^^
 

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