Fantasy The Dark World (ooc)

[Thalia_Neko]

sorry yes I was waiting for pug to finish, my character will be up before the end of the day friends

kay! thats fine! cool ^^ 33 i was just a bit concerned, good to see youre still around! ^^

How's that look friendos?

give your charrie a look in a second! ^^

Completely understandable. I should fix that. I when writing the bio, I had to make the sentence more realistic for someone of that age group. I can, however, detail it more so it is more realistic to the abnorm's potent. I was planning on in the RP to write in the way you were speaking with the detail for the cat. If you'd like, I can make it so that he's capable of summoning animals through detailed writings about them.

Also, I'm actually trying to avoid doing drawing, because there's so many sides to the image that you're missing.

As for Iamthemanfish , they were probably waiting for my character to be finished.

Summoning or creating things through images is much more plausible, and even less problematic, than creation through writing. There is an old Japanese myth of a man who was able to bring his drawings to life, and though he didn't truly have restrictions, he was a kind soul.

Further, there are more problems to writing than drawing. Sure, you're missing a few sides to a picture, but to describe? If you wish to truly bring forth something through text alone the description should leave absolutely no room for the imagination in that everyone who reads whatever is written would get the same mental image. Suffice to say, that is near impossible. Drawing, on the other hand, gives a clear picture, no pun intended, as well as limits what you can do based on the canvas you have on hand. You can't make a car on a notepad, but if you took the time to draw a realistic enough car on the side of a building wall, well there you go.

My point is you're better off forgoing writing in favor of art because, frankly, art is a much better medium to use and opens a lot less doors for headaches. Truly if your only concern of the art route is 'missing sides', don't because there IS breathing room for these powers, even reality altering ones. And if you still are, then honestly you should be having a panic attack with all the countless small nuances that you constantly have to take into account when trying to create through writing.

But, that's just my opinion.

I also think drawing is just a better way to go about it, and it doesnt stop the whole "my character studied writing a lot" -he could just be "my character studied art a lot" now, but anyway. Im not against your writing power, I just need to see how it actually works. And reality altering powers in the world isnt... well lets say it isnt not allowed there are those type of abilities. The problem is we (I) need some sort of way to see your power doesnt just break the rp fundamentally. Like what stops your character from just writing "I solve all of the issues we face in the rp effortlessly." or something like that? this sort of power needs some stipulations, some weaknesses, some sort of nerf or something to.. well im not concerned with it being OP, because peoples charries will delve into being S rank eventually making them OP, im just concerned that its just a "fix all" button that means theres no stakes or anything in the rp, not when he could just write the problem away.

 

[Kiroshiven]

kay! thats fine! cool ^^ 33 i was just a bit concerned, good to see youre still around! ^^


give your charrie a look in a second! ^^



I also think drawing is just a better way to go about it, and it doesnt stop the whole "my character studied writing a lot" -he could just be "my character studied art a lot" now, but anyway. Im not against your writing power, I just need to see how it actually works. And reality altering powers in the world isnt... well lets say it isnt not allowed there are those type of abilities. The problem is we (I) need some sort of way to see your power doesnt just break the rp fundamentally. Like what stops your character from just writing "I solve all of the issues we face in the rp effortlessly." or something like that? this sort of power needs some stipulations, some weaknesses, some sort of nerf or something to.. well im not concerned with it being OP, because peoples charries will delve into being S rank eventually making them OP, im just concerned that its just a "fix all" button that means theres no stakes or anything in the rp, not when he could just write the problem away.

Forever Army shows up on the mainland. Character proceeds to write in book that the Army was back in Africa. Problem solved in one post.

 

[Thalia_Neko]

Forever Army shows up on the mainland. Character proceeds to write in book that the Army was back in Africa. Problem solved in one post.

yah something like that is the issue, that would deff be an SSX power for sure

 

[Ninth]

Forever Army shows up on the mainland. Character proceeds to write in book that the Army was back in Africa. Problem solved in one post.

If he even writes something simple like "Ashelynn is not blind" or "(Insert name) can not speak" or even "(blank) is invisible". I'm going to be severely annoyed. After all, if he can change his hair color, can't he just as easily make it invisible? This power covers everything in the book (literally), which easily puts him SSX.

 

[Thalia_Neko]

If he even writes something simple like "Ashelynn is not blind" or "(Insert name) can not speak)" or even "(blank) is invisible". I'm going to be severely annoyed. After all, if he can change his hair color, can't he just as easily make it invisible? This power covers everything in the book (literally), which easily puts him SSX.

yah its why im gunna have Spice rework his power
besides... there may be a certain type of Abnorm that i reveal later for this sort of thing lol i mean like power level

 

[Thalia_Neko]

Randomfella
Few things, why is your character's power "Hydrokinesis" when its clear an Ice-based power? It should be the equivalent of Ice-kinesis, so there can be an actual "Hydrokinesis" power in the rp later, whether from another person, or an npc we meet.

FAS at this time in the rp is extremely secretive, very little people actually know about them, because they have limited resources and dont want to be attacked by gangs and be wiped out. Ill allow your bio/town to have something to do with FAS, but yah, just letting you know. It isn't a common name.

Im a bit surprised your charrie has knowledge of fauna and biology, considering the state of the world, but its not a huge deal. ^^

As for your Abnorm Type, are you telling me her powers were given to her by the experiments, or that she was just an Abnorm experimented on?

 

[Kiroshiven]

Randomfella
Few things, why is your character's power "Hydrokinesis" when its clear an Ice-based power? It should be the equivalent of Ice-kinesis, so there can be an actual "Hydrokinesis" power in the rp later, whether from another person, or an npc we meet.

FAS at this time in the rp is extremely secretive, very little people actually know about them, because they have limited resources and dont want to be attacked by gangs and be wiped out. Ill allow your bio/town to have something to do with FAS, but yah, just letting you know. It isn't a common name.

Im a bit surprised your charrie has knowledge of fauna and biology, considering the state of the world, but its not a huge deal. ^^

As for your Abnorm Type, are you telling me her powers were given to her by the experiments, or that she was just an Abnorm experimented on?

Cryokinesis. The word you're looking for.

 

[Thalia_Neko]

Cryokinesis. The word you're looking for.

there we go! :3 ya that!

 

[Thalia_Neko]

Kiroshiven
hifumis power is very close to ashelynns, just letting you know

shes also very similar to a character i was going to introduce eventually X3

also "knowing someones abnormality" is an OP ability, and (one i might or might not have introduced later in the rp for someone else), it also takes away the intrigue of what an Abnorm can or cant do. for instance Vira's abnormality... well people probably dont even know shes an abnorm, but if you can "just know what she does", then it makes fighting her much much easier

also, everyone, lets not make every single character op in combat XD even for skilled bounty hunters, abnorms are difficult to just subdue

 

[Clockwork Syringe]

Kiroshiven
hifumis power is very close to ashelynns, just letting you know

shes also very similar to a character i was going to introduce eventually X3

also "knowing someones abnormality" is an OP ability, and (one i might or might not have introduced later in the rp for someone else), it also takes away the intrigue of what an Abnorm can or cant do. for instance Vira's abnormality... well people probably dont even know shes an abnorm, but if you can "just know what she does", then it makes fighting her much much easier

also, everyone, lets not make every single character op in combat XD even for skilled bounty hunters, abnorms are difficult to just subdue

perhaps just knowing someone's an abnormal based on her ability, yet doesn't know what their ability is would be an apt correction.

 

[Ninth]

Well, Ashelynn does locate everyone. So she can't necessarily pinpoint who is an Abnorm. More so their ability and current rank.
That, and Hifumi has to be in extremely close proximity. (Ashe has a 1600 meter range (radius) in comparison to her 25-50(Radius))

 

[Thalia_Neko]

perhaps just knowing someone's an abnormal based on her ability, yet doesn't know what their ability is would be an apt correction.

yah i could accept that ^^

Well, Ashelynn does locate everyone. So she can't necessarily pinpoint who is an Abnorm. More so their ability and current rank.
That, and Hifumi has to be in extremely close proximity. (Ashe has a 1600 meter range in comparison to her 25-50)

wait ashe can also tell their ability and rank? rank is determined by the WG, so she'd have to just guess an abnorms rank

 

[Ninth]

yah i could accept that ^^


wait ashe can also tell their ability and rank? rank is determined by the WG, so she'd have to just guess an abnorms rank

No no no no! She can't! Haha.

I'm actually kind of in favor of buffing Hifumi with a wider range. After all, a combination between her and Ash would be fantastic. (Though Hifu's goal is to turn in the Abnorms.)

Differences:
Ashelynn serves much like a satellite, she get's perception over a wide area. She can't tell the difference between people, doubly so when you include the fact that she can't view things in full color. She probably has a hard time figuring out if someone is even male or female.

Hifumi appears to only be able to locate Abnorms. From my perception, probably with very little environment detail. (Does she go off 'He is directly above me?') And she can easily serve as an on the field member as opposed to Ashe. I would probably poke Kiroshiven to double the range.

 

[Kiroshiven]

Kiroshiven
hifumis power is very close to ashelynns, just letting you know

shes also very similar to a character i was going to introduce eventually X3

also "knowing someones abnormality" is an OP ability, and (one i might or might not have introduced later in the rp for someone else), it also takes away the intrigue of what an Abnorm can or cant do. for instance Vira's abnormality... well people probably dont even know shes an abnorm, but if you can "just know what she does", then it makes fighting her much much easier

also, everyone, lets not make every single character op in combat XD even for skilled bounty hunters, abnorms are difficult to just subdue

In regards to knowing exactly what it is, it's not really that way. She can get a rough idea, so she'd know Ryuji has some sort of healing ability, or that Locking eyes with Rose would be bad, In Vira's case it'd be along the lines of seeming to have exceptional reflexes, but she wouldn't know EXACTLY what the power is or capable of.

 

[Kiroshiven]

No no no no! She can't! Haha.

I'm actually kind of in favor of buffing Hifumi with a wider range. After all, a combination between her and Ash would be fantastic. (Though Hifu's goal is to turn in the Abnorms.)

Differences:
Ashelynn serves much like a satellite, she get's perception over a wide area. She can't tell the difference between people, doubly so when you include the fact that she can't view things in full color. She probably has a hard time figuring out if someone is even male or female.

Hifumi appears to only be able to locate Abnorms. From my perception, probably with very little environment detail. (Does she go off 'He is directly above me?') And she can easily serve as an on the field member as opposed to Ashe. I would probably poke Kiroshiven to double the range.

And yes, she doesn't get a perfect image like Ashe, but she can generally go, "He's directly 63 meters above me." But nothing beyond that. So in a crowd it's fairly easy for her to identify, but she has to stop and concentrate to do so.

 

[Ninth]

And yes, she doesn't get a perfect image like Ashe, but she can generally go, "He's directly 63 meters above me." But nothing beyond that. So in a crowd it's fairly easy for her to identify, but she has to stop and concentrate to do so.

That's like a match in heaven if they could find radios or something. (If those even exist.)

Another random note; Thalia_Neko What if the detect 'abnorm ability/general power' was altered to touch along with Kiro's previous reiteration?
Randomness trying to find some middle ground!

 

[Thalia_Neko]

That's like a match in heaven if they could find radios or something. (If those even exist.)

Another random note; Thalia_Neko What if the detect 'abnorm ability' was altered to touch with Kiro's previous reiteration?
Randomness trying to find some middle ground!

yah all that seems fine ^^ and this is good, but it wasnt indicated well in the description (no offense Kiro lol), just trying to line up the power to seem to fit the world/way thinks work. ^^

In regards to knowing exactly what it is, it's not really that way. She can get a rough idea, so she'd know Ryuji has some sort of healing ability, or that Locking eyes with Rose would be bad, In Vira's case it'd be along the lines of seeming to have exceptional reflexes, but she wouldn't know EXACTLY what the power is or capable of.

mhm got it ^^

 

[Clockwork Syringe]

So I'm going to ask the question, we good to go Thalia_Neko ?

 

[Pyosimros]

RPN disabled the cheat that allowed me to do fake tabs just now. If the tabs don't work it's bc I'm working on re-making them through an alternate method >x>b

 

[Iamthemanfish]

I have the outline up, I have a few errands to run so i'll put up the history a bit later

 

[Thalia_Neko]

RPN disabled the cheat that allowed me to do fake tabs just now. If the tabs don't work it's bc I'm working on re-making them through an alternate method >x>b

AW! bad rpn!! pyos bio was so pretty! okie dokie hehe hope it works out!

I have the outline up, I have a few errands to run so i'll put up the history a bit later

gotcha! ill look at what youve got up anyway! ^^

So I'm going to ask the question, we good to go Thalia_Neko ?

nope not yet, some bios need to be fixed and ya but almost!!

 

[FrostFire]

I'm a bit late to the party.... But I have been summoned!
My CS is basically done, but I won't post it until it's as good as I can get it~

 

[Thalia_Neko]

haiiiiii frostfire hunny!! ~

 

[FrostFire]

haiiiiii frostfire hunny!! ~

Heyyyyyy! Long time no rp haha

 

[Thalia_Neko]

Heyyyyyy! Long time no rp haha

hehe mhm!! ^^ missed rping wiff yaz!