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[SirGrey]

takki My CS is done

 

[takki]

Once you guys finished your CS, then you can now reply to the main thread.

 

[takki]

Main Thread

 

[Veltsu VI]

Jakiro i am going to be interested to see your mafia in action (mostly because it's only thing right now that has potentially to interact with Hanah, and i don't want go same way than last time...)

 

[Crystal Cali]

takki I didn't get my pictures drawn, but my cs is technically done. I'll post my intro after I get home from work tonight, if that's cool.

 

[Verdance]

Hey y'all, I think I'm going to bounce, didn't want to be rude and just ghost. Probably see some of y'all another time. Later.

 

[Jakiro]

takki Would it be okay for you if her backstory would be revealed in tiny little tidbits over the course of the RP? Also, the accordions started screwing me over big time (I suck at bbcodes, you can guess) so I'm sorry foe the really long post.

 

[takki]

takki I didn't get my pictures drawn, but my cs is technically done. I'll post my intro after I get home from work tonight, if that's cool.

Sure, that's fine with me.

takki Would it be okay for you if her backstory would be revealed in tiny little tidbits over the course of the RP? Also, the accordions started screwing me over big time (I suck at bbcodes, you can guess) so I'm sorry foe the really long post.

Yep, its okay. Also, the posts have no limit. You guys can have like a ten-paragraph long post if you want (im exaggerating).

 

[Veltsu VI]

this is the worst CS i've ever done

Because it's WIP still?

 

[aliara.s]

no , because at first it was all pretty/ correctly formatted and aaron's personality really shone through . now i'm just giving yall the basics about him and yall really won't know who he is until i jump in the RP . i really . really . really . did not want to do all of that stuff over again :[ but i also wanted to start .... so.... the CS is so crappy

 

[Veltsu VI]

no , because at first it was all pretty/ correctly formatted and aaron's personality really shone through . now i'm just giving yall the basics about him and yall really won't know who he is until i jump in the RP . i really . really . really . did not want to do all of that stuff over again :[ but i also wanted to start .... so.... the CS is so crappy

But don't worry it's not that bad, question how old Aaron's little sister is now?

 

[aliara.s]

But don't worry it's not that bad, question how old Aaron's little sister is now?

in my reply it's her birthday so she's 19 now . they're a year apart in age . i don't really plan on ever talking about her again lol . she's a plot device

 

[Veltsu VI]

in my reply it's her birthday so she's 19 now . they're a year apart in age . i don't really plan on ever talking about her again lol . she's a plot device

"and on his 17th birthday" there is typo then

 

[Veltsu VI]

Crystal Cali Hanah and Fayette aren't rich, they are poor...( was going to say that they aren't corrupted but in own way they are... just not way that rich and corrupted are, they have been corrupted by environment to think that their only way to survive is stealing stuff)

 

[Jakiro]

Huh. You guys have a vendetta against sweets or something?

 

[Johannes]

lol Jakiro . Since I made a villain, and villains ain't sweet, I guess he wouldn't like candies. But I did notice how a lot of characters disliked sweets.

 

[Crystal Cali]

Crystal Cali Hanah and Fayette aren't rich, they are poor...( was going to say that they aren't corrupted but in own way they are... just not way that rich and corrupted are, they have been corrupted by environment to think that their only way to survive is stealing stuff)

Althouth Celeste's main targets are the rich and corrupt, she's not going to just shrug off someone suspicious in her audience.

 

[Veltsu VI]

Daniel Reaving here i think this would be good theme:

 

[Daniel Reaving]

Daniel Reaving here i think this would be good theme:

Your right

 

[Veltsu VI]

Althouth Celeste's main targets are the rich and corrupt, she's not going to just shrug off someone suspicious in her audience.

Saying it as i don't want either of them dead

 

[Crystal Cali]

Saying it as i don't want either of them dead

She wouldn't kill someone for stealing, plus I wouldn't try to kill your characters without talking to you first.

 

[aliara.s]

"and on his 17th birthday" there is typo then

no typo love . he's 19 now , meaning he's been vigilante-ing for 2 years .

 

[aliara.s]

Huh. You guys have a vendetta against sweets or something?

i do have a personal vendetta against sweets , i had three root canals at age 9 because of overindulgence in candies and apple juice . that was such a traumatic experience for 9 year old me

 

[Jakiro]

i do have a personal vendetta against sweets , i had three root canals at age 9 because of overindulgence in candies and apple juice . that was such a traumatic experience for 9 year old me

Oh lord that must've been dreadful. How are the pearly whites now tho? (and do you still enjoy sweet stuff?)

 

[aliara.s]

now i take my sweets in the form of coffee . and i get them professionally whitened every year and i do the crest strips at home pretty irregularly . the pearly whites are white , and thats it XD i had a molar pulled this year . i guess i just have weak , sugar intolerant teeth !