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Fantasy The Changing Room

What is your usual post length if your para is 4 lines each?

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Collidias Rex Collidias Rex
So, Virgil ignored Akira or...?

Not at all.

Akira advised him not to go too far alone. Wherever Akira meant "wait for me" or whether he meant "don't go alone", Virgil interpreted this as "keep someone with you". A sensible suggestion - danger may lurk ahead.

Akira has now left to deal with other matters, and Ash has asked to accompany Virgil. Virgil has accepted her offer, and is heading in, asking her to follow behind him.

... aaand now I'm just realizing that Akira perhaps intended to come with. Is this sudden realization correct?
 
Not at all.

Akira advised him not to go too far alone. Wherever Akira meant "wait for me" or whether he meant "don't go alone", Virgil interpreted this as "keep someone with you". A sensible suggestion - danger may lurk ahead.

Akira has now left to deal with other matters, and Ash has asked to accompany Virgil. Virgil has accepted her offer, and is heading in, asking her to follow behind him.

Admittedly though, he said: "I'll get her, but please don't head too far away yourself"... not by yourself, but yourself. But we can chalk that up to mishearing I guess.
 
Admittedly though, he said: "I'll get her, but please don't head too far away yourself"... not by yourself, but yourself. But we can chalk that up to mishearing I guess.

If Akira wants to come along, I can make a short edit near the start. Still will have Virgil entering the door, but in a way that we can chalk it down to him being impatient and antsy. Maybe an offhand comment of "don't take too long" as Akira parts.
 
If Akira wants to come along, I can make a short edit near the start. Still will have Virgil entering the door, but in a way that we can chalk it down to him being impatient and antsy. Maybe an offhand comment of "don't take too long" as Akira parts.
That could work, you can also head off with Ash alone if you prefer, just saying he'd have to ignore Akira for that...
 
Sorry my postst take so long to write by the way guys, my laptop keeps dying while I'm typing and I'm slow in the first place
 
That could work, you can also head off with Ash alone if you prefer, just saying he'd have to ignore Akira for that...

Eh ... I suppose so.

Alright. I'll make a little edit because I misinterpreted Akira's request earlier. Virgil won't be heading in yet - he'll wait near the doorway with Ash.
 
Collidias Rex Collidias Rex
I'm going to see what the door says first, that might be important, and see how Elizabeth reacts to Akira. Then he'll probably join them, possibly with Elizabeth, depending on what Hel does.
 
Collidias Rex Collidias Rex
I'm going to see what the door says first, that might be important, and see how Elizabeth reacts to Akira. Then he'll probably join them, possibly with Elizabeth, depending on what Hel does.

Not a problem.

I've made my short edit, so Virgil's now waiting on Akira before heading through the 12 door.

Sidenote - Virgil's spiky-bits aren't really needles in any conventional sense. I believe they look more like horns than barbs or fine needles. At a guess, they're more suited for goring and tearing than clean puncturing. But then again - I don't know what element of needles Akira is afraid of, so he could still be afraid of that for all I know.
 
Not a problem.

I've made my short edit, so Virgil's now waiting on Akira before heading through the 12 door.

Sidenote - Virgil's spiky-bits aren't really needles in any conventional sense. I believe they look more like horns than barbs or fine needles. At a guess, they're more suited for goring and tearing than clean puncturing. But then again - I don't know what element of needles Akira is afraid of, so he could still be afraid of that for all I know.

Akira is afraid of most pointy things clearly made for hurting? Although needles are the worst, he's also uncomfortable around things like horns or even ice picks/slim knives. Thorns and barbed wire are also not a favourite.
 
Just to update those who'd already read my post: I did a little edit at the begining to make Elizabeth's interaction with the door more specific. It's a little thing.

Also, InsanEleven InsanEleven Elizabeth will probably try to figure out what the writing on the door is, the paper door and puzzle would be more appealing to her, because of how her mind works. She probably will agree to go the 'easier' route once she really feels like her time is running out, if that makes sense
 
Cool that's cool, look I was AM interested but I don't have a chance anymore because school is ending and I'm gonna be a senior and I'll be very busy this summer
Understandable and sad to hear that you won't be able to continue with us. That said I hope you'll have a fruitful summer.
 

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