The Battle for FableWood - OOC

Lioness075 said:
Yeah, that's what I did with both of my characters. I added little excerpts at the bottom of their bios to document what they've gone through or how they've changed while in the original RP.
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That gave me an idea.


Perhaps, later there would be journal entries and the likes
 
crucialstar said:
That gave me an idea.
Perhaps, later there would be journal entries and the likes
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Journal entries? Like a separate thread for those or something? Knowing my character, Luness, she'd never keep a journal and would probably just scoff at anyone writing one. xD
 
Lioness075 said:
Journal entries? Like a separate thread for those or something? Knowing my character, Luness, she'd never keep a journal and would probably just scoff at anyone writing one. xD
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Ah! A new thread would be nice but perhaps that can be in a notes forum.


BUT. Since the CS has tabs there can be a whole tab dedication to journal entries if anyone's character would do that. :)
 
Well i have a couple of questions, my character is largely netural is that okay? Also how can i inform the gm what my character is doing, for example if he is withing a stronghold, alone?
 
WHOO!! Leo is up in the CS'. I will have Otto up tomorrow morning.


Ya'll, I can not tell ya how excited I am!!! xD
 
@SilverFlight


Hi! I just wanted to let you know that I haven't finished Ariella yet since I need to add in her biography. However, I'm heading to bed soon so I just wanted to post up what I had before it gets erased or so! I'll tag you in OOC when I finish, or when I finish my profile, I'll tag you on the CS.
 
forgefan said:
Well i have a couple of questions, my character is largely netural is that okay? Also how can i inform the gm what my character is doing, for example if he is withing a stronghold, alone?
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It won't be much fun for you if your character is alone, the point of the rp is to interact with others, but if they are neutral you'll need to come up with a good reason as to why they wish to help the allies (or Caraboss for that matter). If you're not going to post your character's actions when they are alone, I suppose you could always put it here.
 
zCrookedz said:
(:3)@SilverFlight can Leo be a general???
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Of course he can be a general! Pick a title, general of anything. Ward will be sorry to not have him on the quest but we'll manage ^^
 
@Bolts I love the character, the profile is a bit short, maybe a bit more for personality, you could also give him a few more abilities if you like, but that rampage thing should definitely be mentioned in powers and abilities.
 
@forgefan A very interesting character, I do have a few notes if I may present them:


1. I am not sure how your character fits the description of 'wraith', could you elaborate?


2. I am afraid you have far too many powers, and the way they are laid out makes me think I'm reading a DA Inquisition ability tree. For the zombie powers you could have a large sub header titled 'necromancy' and give me a one paragraph description on some of the abilities that he can do. For the other powers I am limiting you to three more and I would like all with proper descriptions please. In addition percents mean absolutely nothing in a written rp like this, you don't need them.


3. Fundamentally your character is much too powerful and is entirely lacking in weakensses. I will have to deny your character's golem body. They can be a powerful sorcerer and neceomancer, but they should be physicaly weak. Or you could keep the strenthened golem form and leave out the neceomancy.


Its a bit of work but I would like you to change those things before I accept your character.
 
SilverFlight said:
@Bolts I love the character, the profile is a bit short, maybe a bit more for personality, you could also give him a few more abilities if you like, but that rampage thing should definitely be mentioned in powers and abilities.
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Okay, I'll see into spicing it up. Thanks.
 
SilverFlight said:
@Bolts I love the character, the profile is a bit short, maybe a bit more for personality, you could also give him a few more abilities if you like, but that rampage thing should definitely be mentioned in powers and abilities.
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Okay, added a bit more to personality, weakness, and placed the rampage into abilities/powers. I wasn't sure if you also meant the bio was too short, if so, I can try to figure out more in the morning.
 
SilverFlight said:
@forgefan A very interesting character, I do have a few notes if I may present them:
1. I am not sure how your character fits the description of 'wraith', could you elaborate?


2. I am afraid you have far too many powers, and the way they are laid out makes me think I'm reading a DA Inquisition ability tree. For the zombie powers you could have a large sub header titled 'necromancy' and give me a one paragraph description on some of the abilities that he can do. For the other powers I am limiting you to three more and I would like all with proper descriptions please. In addition percents mean absolutely nothing in a written rp like this, you don't need them.


3. Fundamentally your character is much too powerful and is entirely lacking in weakensses. I will have to deny your character's golem body. They can be a powerful sorcerer and neceomancer, but they should be physicaly weak. Or you could keep the strenthened golem form and leave out the neceomancy.


Its a bit of work but I would like you to change those things before I accept your character.
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will do.
 
SilverFlight said:
It won't be much fun for you if your character is alone, the point of the rp is to interact with others, but if they are neutral you'll need to come up with a good reason as to why they wish to help the allies (or Caraboss for that matter). If you're not going to post your character's actions when they are alone, I suppose you could always put it here.
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Well firstly, i have edited my character so please check it out ! And secondly, no i was not thinking of neutral that kind of way, i meant that my character might betray someone, if the circumstances are correct.
 
SilverFlight said:
@forgefan A very interesting character, I do have a few notes if I may present them:
1. I am not sure how your character fits the description of 'wraith', could you elaborate?


2. I am afraid you have far too many powers, and the way they are laid out makes me think I'm reading a DA Inquisition ability tree. For the zombie powers you could have a large sub header titled 'necromancy' and give me a one paragraph description on some of the abilities that he can do. For the other powers I am limiting you to three more and I would like all with proper descriptions please. In addition percents mean absolutely nothing in a written rp like this, you don't need them.


3. Fundamentally your character is much too powerful and is entirely lacking in weakensses. I will have to deny your character's golem body. They can be a powerful sorcerer and neceomancer, but they should be physicaly weak. Or you could keep the strenthened golem form and leave out the neceomancy.


Its a bit of work but I would like you to change those things before I accept your character.
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I changed the character. Please read through the new powers and weaknesess.
 
SilverFlight said:
Of course he can be a general! Pick a title, general of anything. Ward will be sorry to not have him on the quest but we'll manage ^^
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Well the way I see it, Leo has had so much CD already and since we have another healer with Leandra, he can take a step back from the normal group and let her be the healer for a while. Then he can be on the front lines healing and helping keep Carabosse back.


But now I am faced with a question. What Leo is the general of. I was thinking General of Oz, he could be over the flying monkeys, the munchkins, and all the other Ozite warriors.


Or General of Healers, in charge of getting healers stations along the front lines and keeping people alive.


Thoughts? Suggestions?


ALSO, OTTO IS UP xD


@Lioness075 wanna take a look over his background and make sure I typed it out correctly concerning him and Luness? I would hate to have missed something important or mixed something up.
 
zCrookedz said:
Well the way I see it, Leo has had so much CD already and since we have another healer with Leandra, he can take a step back from the normal group and let her be the healer for a while. Then he can be on the front lines healing and helping keep Carabosse back.
But now I am faced with a question. What Leo is the general of. I was thinking General of Oz, he could be over the flying monkeys, the munchkins, and all the other Ozite warriors.


Or General of Healers, in charge of getting healers stations along the front lines and keeping people alive.


Thoughts? Suggestions?


ALSO, OTTO IS UP xD


@Lioness075 wanna take a look over his background and make sure I typed it out correctly concerning him and Luness? I would hate to have missed something important or mixed something up.
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I'll look it over when I get the chance. ^^
 
I actually totally forgot to mention Otto being her half brother lol. Just reedited Luness' CS accordingly.
 
I'm finally done with my character. I tried my best with his bio, seeing as I suck with them. Anyways, care to revision it and see if I need to change anything?


@SilverFlight
 
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