Magical Squid Senpai
A big mistake
KarenAKAMint
Ah darn, I hope it's not too late but happy day of escaping the womb!!
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Lol, it's still my birthday where I'm at so you are on time, thanksKarenAKAMint Ah darn, I hope it's not too late but happy day of escaping the womb!!
Y'know I'm trying to write the easiest post about what Pluto is doing at work and I just keep thinking of new things. Like I kind of wanted to be a bit lazy with this. But no I keep putting in a bunch of kind of complicated outfits that I have to explain! Holy wow why am I doing this to myself!?!
I have found pictures for most of the outfits but I still feel like I need to explain. Also at the end of the post there will be a lot of pictures at the end Probably. For characters and such.use picture!
Lol, it's not going to be like that!What Karen said Magical Squid Senpai I'm kinda worried XD I don't want to read ten pages about his outfit lol. I like descriptive writing, but I don't want to know about how someone changed costumes ten times with great detail on each costume D:
I'll be sure to use more paragraphs. Although when I was typing it up I felt like I had done that but I guess it was just all a dream or something.Dear lord Magical Squid Senpai XD I'll work through the text, but, some advise for next time you write a novel, use more paragraphs. It's like a big ass wall of daunting text that seems insurmountable. It's intimidating, and normally, it's the type of post I skip over because I'm lazy and don't even read my books for college, even though I shell out the money for them every time, just in case XD.
Using paragraphs can make it a little easier to read. And especially with long posts, you want to make sure people have an easy time reading it. It should be a chore for you to write it, rather than a chore for someone else to read it
Your comment just popped up, and like you said, it's one of those posts that people will probably skip, or at the very least skim through. I'll be doing skimming myself XD But also, like I said, making them into smaller, easier to read paragraphs is a simple way to make it a whole lot easier to read. Think of reading a newspaper, or even a regular paper. What would you do if the entire paper was covered in text? Not read it XD There's nowhere to pause D: I'll stop ranting and let you off the hook with that
Also, not trying to be mean or anything, just trying to give some constructive criticism Still love you Squidie
The middle paragraph was more just Walter talking. I wanted his color to be black but I knew I should've at least done something better there.On the opposite end of the spectrum, the way you did the beginning and end were great. Paragraphs and colored text make it easy to get through. The middle part though, that's the only part I skimmed through I know it involved the photo shoot and some scene at Walter's place, but that's about it. Didn't seem super important and integral to the story XD
Also, it's pretty funny how you posted a reaction to the last time Pluto was with Sasha. It almost feels like forever ago, even though it wasn't, it's only been a long time since the post was done
On that note, KarenAKAMint I'm not sure we can get much more out of this. I don't know if spookie is coming back? Poor Sasha, I feel like this is the second time, out of three total interactions, that people have just stopped posting midway through D: Anyways, I think it's safe to skip that scene.
I'm going to still hold off till Saturday since I need to figure out how I'm going to code the event. Just note that we will start off right at the event which is the Movie Night, around 5pm. So be prepared.On the opposite end of the spectrum, the way you did the beginning and end were great. Paragraphs and colored text make it easy to get through. The middle part though, that's the only part I skimmed through I know it involved the photo shoot and some scene at Walter's place, but that's about it. Didn't seem super important and integral to the story XD
Also, it's pretty funny how you posted a reaction to the last time Pluto was with Sasha. It almost feels like forever ago, even though it wasn't, it's only been a long time since the post was done
On that note, KarenAKAMint I'm not sure we can get much more out of this. I don't know if spookie is coming back? Poor Sasha, I feel like this is the second time, out of three total interactions, that people have just stopped posting midway through D: Anyways, I think it's safe to skip that scene.
I am prepare to bring. The Gay™.I'm going to still hold off till Saturday since I need to figure out how I'm going to code the event. Just note that we will start off right at the event which is the Movie Night, around 5pm. So be prepared.
I forgot about night mode. Would it be OK if I did that tomorrow?Magical Squid Senpai Would you mind also changing some of the colors from grey? Its not very Nightmode friendly D: sorry
Yeah no problem! There is no interaction with my character so its no biggy for me, but just wanted to give you a heads upI forgot about night mode. Would it be OK if I did that tomorrow?