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Could you please write your personality as a proper text? I know it can be hard, but try turning your bullet points into a flowing text. The size of your biography would be ideal but a sentence less is not gonna hurt anyone either.
 
ok so i put my CS up (probably will add a few things )and I might have stolen the basis for my bbcode from @Veirrianna Valentine is looking good ) let's start seeing some Males, yeah?


Happy hunting.
 
Added a little bit on how her experience changed her view to the point she might actually join the Grey Guild. Might need a little cleaning up but hoping it is enough.
 
Oooohh, this looks nice. Is it still accepting?


If so, what spots are available?~
 
It's still open, yeah! There is 1 apprentice spot, and 2 Grey Masters spot remaining, but there are plenty of roles outside of that with no restriction on count.
 
@Veirrianna Valentine are good places to look for examples of a proper CS.


Also, @AntiMatter you did not do your points right, please read the rules on points, and if you have any questions please ask.


Thank You
 
Oh also @Guydaguy I am currently not accepting any sith lords. Please read the overview and focus of this roleplay. This roleplay is for greys only, though as the roleplay goes on they may switch sides. And if you have a plot idea in mind how a sith lord would fit in, ask me in a PM. But as of right now, I'm not accepting any Jedi Knights or Sith Lords.
 
Hello! I'm interested in joining, but I'm a little new to this site. Do I post my CS in the Character Sign-Up section, or is that only for accepted CSs?
 
Squee said:
Hello! I'm interested in joining, but I'm a little new to this site. Do I post my CS in the Character Sign-Up section, or is that only for accepted CSs?
You post it in the sign up section, and then you'll be notified whether or not it's okay or what needs work and stuff in this tab. :) Also welcome to the site! ^-^/
 
AntiMatter, would you like to use this in your bio? I made it purple for you :)


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Alternatively....


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@AkuTheWolfOkami, I have some questions regarding the proficiency points with the force categories. As it reads, it seems that the Masters have a total of 20 points, the apprentices start with 9 with the potential to improve to a total of 20 as a master, and the knights have 16 with no option to improve.


My questions are:


1. Is it intentional that knights are not supposed to be able to have the same maximum point potential as the other ranks?


2. If I submit a Master who would have no reason to have any piloting skill, could I move those points to another category, or perhaps reflavor it to beast/animal riding?
 
Oy mate! I'm glad to answer your questions.


1. It is intentional that there is a max on the third party force users/knights, etc. It is for plot purposes. It is intended for the Masters and Apprentices to eventually go separate ways, and possibly be on separate sides of the war. For example, An apprentice becomes a Master and decides that they will actually join the Jedi in a future plot point i have cooking. The master decides they'll join the sith in this future plot point. It is really meant to be a Masters vs Apprentice type thing in the war, where they are the Queens on the chess board. If that makes sense, haha.


2. I did take that liberty with my character to reallocate a pilot point to to the other slots, but i won't allow less than 2. That being said, because I do enjoy the unique idea of beast/animal riding, if you want, you can add that category to your CS. You'll get a free extra point if you put 2 into pilot, and then you'll have 4 remaining, but three have to go into the beast riding skill.


In case that doesn't make sense, if choose to put 2 in the pilot section. You'll really have 2 points left to dish out in cats, with a 3 in beast, meaning in total you'd have 24 points in total.


Here's an example since i feel like i'm just jabbering , haha.


Alter: 4/5


Control: 3/5


Sensitivity: 3/5


Lightsaber: 4/5


Pilot: 2/5


Beast Riding: 5/5
 
@AntiMatter It's a little short, and I feel a little bit of a... lack in personality and bio? It's not bad, just, it seems a little narrow in focus.


@Talon @CoolKittyCassie I'm unsure if you were finished, but since it's not marked as work in progress: Please expand on your characters. There isn't really any personality listed anywhere (you have biography AND past for some reason?) and the current information is much too short.
 

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