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"Most people say my name as one word: Shivara, thats fine too."

Age: 27

Species: Human

Alliance: Former Jedi

Rank: N/A

Appearance details: About 5'4 with a slender, statuesque frame. She has long, black hair thats usually kept braided, with stubborn, free-flowing strands surrounding a soft, youthful face. As far as femme physique, Shiva-Ra isnt outstandingly voluptuous, but still carries a woman's curves with her bust, waist, and hips. She (preferably) dresses modestly (with her Jedi upbringing and all) but does as shes told, even if the choice of her outfit has already been made for her.

Dark lashes accent her green eyes and pop against her lightly sun-kissed skin. She wears no make up, has no body alterations (i.e. jewelry, etc.) And has some (but small) scars scattered along her body from training injuries as a child. Nothing major.

She carries herself as gracefully as she can, and can typically be seen trying to keep a calm a face during any situation as she struggles to stick to her Jedi teachings and prevent her emotions from taking hold. Even her walk is willowy and prim, with each step planned and precise.

Shiva-ra holds unique head-turning traits. Most males wouldnt think twice about looking at a woman with a body that could stop a truck but seeing as how her frame isnt anything exceptional and just pleasantly ordinary, its her heavenly beauty that encaptures most. Shivara has a certain level of radiance that exudes from her. Whether she is unaware of it or chooses not to entertain vanity (most likely both) it hardly goes unnoticed by others.
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Gender: Female

Expertise:
Shiva is very sensitive to the Force. Like her former Jedi Master, she she relies on the Force as a 6th sense. Her Master saw it in her and took her under his wing to help her grow more attuned with the Force and what it has to offer internally.
(Not including its physical attributes, of course she learned the basic "pull/lift/push" with the force but other than that... she struggled)

Through hours of meditation and self exploration, the Force has kept her grounded and focused as a Jedi....
So far...

Equipment: She doesnt carry much, infact doesnt really carry anything at all. She does still have her lightsaber (its a miracle she does) but is only allowed to use it when her master permits it and under his supervision.

Abilities/Talents:
-Good pilot
-Adequate saber skills
-Very in-tune with the Force
-Resilient against harsh living conditions (i.e. weather)

Weaknesses:
-Conflict with her emotions
-Talking about her past as a Jedi
-Lightsaber combat techniques against multiple opponents (shes not helpless and can defend herself, she knows the basic stances and techniques but she needed more time to train, and even became a little rusty during her time as a slave)
-Mentions of her Jedi Master (very sensitive subject)


History:
Like most Jedi in the making, Shiva'ra's journey to Jedi-hood began at a very young age. The young human girl was visited in her humble home on Tatooine by a pair of strange men in their earthy brown robes. Her large doe eyes took note of the metal hilts attached to their hips. The strange men spoke to her parents for what felt like hours. They used words and terminology she didnt understand, like "Jedi", "midichlorians", and something called "the Force". For a small child, the memory should be distant, but Shiva-Ra remembers it all too well. That was the day her parents had let go of their only child to ensure her future. It was an honor to have their daughter admitted into the Jedi teachings, but it was bitter-sweet as the price for such a future was never seeing their daughter again. Shiva-Ra grew up with out knowing her family, or even remembering what they look like (ther perks of being taken so young) so detattachment came very easy, and it allowed her to focus on the long road ahead.

Shiva-Ra, after becoming an initiate, went through the first set of initiate trails to become a padawan, only to be selected by a Jedi Knight almost imediately for one-on-one training. She has learned the basics about the Force and using a saber, but now it was time to apply those teachings and shadow a real Jedi first hand. His name was Sarlak Rahool...

The first missions were hard. Her young training had helped her immensely with physical conflict, but her mental and emotional teachings were tested. Thing were much different in the real world and Shiva-Ra learned on the way. But as a fresh padawan, she couldnt help but wonder why Sarlak had chosen her as his student. "Im so clumsy, and sometimes I forget to let go of my feelings."

When ever Shiva would doubt herself, her master would put a hand on her shoulder and bent over to her level so that they were eye to eye, "Shivara, you are too hard on yourself. Dont forget every great Master was in your place once. Have faith in the Force, it will guide you, and I will help."

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Years had passed, mission after mission, training when ever she could with her Master or others, seeking advice, and learning to have a harmonious relationship with the Force. Of course she still had so much to learn, but Shiva-Ra was on her way to mastering the art of dettachment. Feelings, worldy materials, emotions, they were all distractions and she tried her best to treat them as such. Her skills, too, had matured noticeably, she had grown out of the clumsiness she was so worried she would never overcome. She was focused and took her profession seriously, however behind the scenes with just her master alone, she displayed signs of kept youth. Making jokes, having sarcasm, and having friendly competitions with Sarlak.

After a few months Sarlak had passed his own trials and joined the rank of Master. He wasted no time in convincing the Council that Shiva-ra was ready to be a Jedi Knight.

Fastfowarding through it all, Shiva-Ra passed at the ripe age of 21 with flying colors, and made Sarlak extremely proud. She gained a few scars from the Trail of Flesh but was relieved to come out with her body intact. The Trial of Spirit, however almost costed her a passing grade. Once completed, Shiva was a little shaken up. She had seen things about herself that she had forgotten and refused to speak about it when her Master asked how she was holding up. Needless to say it was an eye opening experience.
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Shiva-Ra was a knight now, and both her and her Master held a lot more responsibility than before. Their missions grew tougher and their skills were tested further but nevertheless they performed above and beyond to succeed. They were a good match for student and teacher, in sync and feeding off the other's energy. Things were good.

But their relationship was cut short.

(Im just gonna skip the fluff and get this done, I can elaborate in le rp)

During their final mission together, Shiva-Ra and her master were seperated. Her master outnumbered, and she outskilled. Both were ambushed, Sarlak was killed and Shiva felt it through the force. It was the first time she felt sadness and anger in a very long time. She worked hard to forget those emotions but her heart sunk to her stomach and was fueled by revenge. She struggled to defeat her opponent to get to her master, but lost in her emotions she was unable to sense a sneak attack and was stunned into unconsciousness.

Instead of being killed, Shiva-Ra was forced into slavery. For 3 years shes lived her life as a servant. Traded and sold every few months due to her sharp tongue and tendency to escape. She never got very far when ever she managed to break herself free, and was always caught again. For some reason those that owned her lived in very barren, simple lands with little places to hide.
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(Skipping more stuffff making this real short)

A few months ago, Shiva was sold to a very....interesting buyer. Goes by the name Darth Nar'ah. Of course she protested, but what choice did she have.

And thats where we are k thanks, the end.


Extras:
Ill come up with something​

 
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INTERNAL USE ONLY

SIS OPERATIVE PROFILE:

Name: REDACTED

Code Name: Atlas

Aliases: James McGill, John Outrider, Zed Zeroni, Mike Bane, Vedik Sun, Krome B’guil.

Note: He has developed more Aliases outside the organization.

Handler: REDACTED (KIA)

Age: 30

Note: Born in or around Vreni Island on Corellia.

Species: Human

Affiliations/Alliance: Trained by the Republic Strategic Information Service Section REDACTED however his Current Status: ROUGE.

Rank: Operative in Section REDACTED

Known Images of Operative:

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Description of Known Appearance:

Height: 6’4

Weight: 250lbs.

Bulky Muscular, red headed male with a broad chest. He has handsome features with a well groomed beard and mustache that connects around the mouth. He is able to change his embedded ID chip to any of his aliases at whim and tends to go undercover during operations.

Note: Has Ocular and Cochlear implants that connect directly to his Neural AI implant in the brain. Operative also has trans-dermal implant in the left wrist to connect with computers and robots.He has an advanced AI code named REDACTED………. All Implants resistant to scans, mind control, and mental manipulation except for invasive probing techniques. Implants are not visible on his persons.

Gender: Male

Note: Has been known to impersonate aliens during operations.

Expertise:
  • Spycraft/Subterfuge
  • Hand to Hand Combat/Grappling
  • Hacking
  • Long Range Weapons (Sniper Rifles, ect)
  • Advanced Interrogation Techniques

Equipment:
  • Customized Republic Operative wrist straps with built in utilitool, light grappling hook, dart gun, and flashlight.
  • Smart Spider Silk Armor
  • Armored Environmental Suit in his ship
  • Q4 hold-out blaster pistol
  • DL-44 heavy blaster pistol
  • Modified X-415 Spec Ops Sharpshooter collapsible with modifications for dart, explosive, and non-lethal ammunition.
  • Firespray DL-87 stun rifle
  • Various types of Explosives, Poisons, and Drugs
  • Other items on the ship

Vehicles:

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  • SIS Modified Lethisk-class armed freighter : Heavy double laser cannons, 2 Concussion Missile Launchers with 12 Missile Complement, Small concealed antipersonnel laser turret above cargo entrance.
  • Crew 1-2 as needed
  • Passengers 10
  • Cargo capacity: 55 tons
  • Consumables: 2 months
Note: Additional internal security modifications, 2 droids aboard for maintenance, 1 Medical droid aboard, and 1 Astromech droid for emergencies, a few small security droids, and 1 espionage droid. Designed to interact with an advanced AI assistant to support 1 person crew complement for piloting the craft. Modified living quarters, medical bay, training room, and armory.


Abilities/Talents:
  • Piloting all types of vehicles
  • Singing, Dancing, Cooking, Acting
  • General knowledge of all types of weapons use. Except Melee style weapons.
  • Micro-Mid Level Explosives,
  • Poison creation and use (Aerosol/Liquid/Gels)
  • Dart/Stun Guns

Weaknesses:
  • Melee Weapon Combat
  • Propensity for Alcohol and Woman
  • Natural Paranoia
  • Very Strong Willed but also Unpredictable Behavior (Classified UNSTABLE)

Archival Information/History: REDACTED was recruited on Corellia around the estimated age of 5. He had no family and no known associates. REDACTED sponsored his entrance into Section REDACTED where he successfully graduated to operative within Section REDACTED. Atlas was given to handler REDACTED who supervised and directed his operations. Handler REDACTED reported 25 successful operations with Atlas. Handler REDACTED noted an unstable personality and was attempting to bring in the asset for reeducation when REDACTED was KIA by Atlas.

CURRENT STATUS: All operatives are to bring in the asset and Section REDACTED resources that were ascertained by Atlas during the failed extraction.

Extras:

OOC notes: My Character will go by Atlas in the game and his built in AI companion is Athena. I may also write a origin short story to add to the character sheet if it is approved.
 
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One issue right off the bat here is that a Sith Empire Trooper cannot use Force abilities without being recruited into the Sith Order. Also, your picture is a republic trooper. So you may want to change that. You also can't get an Ancient Sith Sword without being in the Sith Order either. Your backstory needs to elaborate on somethings, I.E. how he became a captain after ONLY six years of service, and how and why he was trained by the Emperor's finest. A lot of things here don't make too much sense. Also, a submachine gun that uses different "rounds", (I'm assuming bullets), are going to be largely ineffective against just about any kind of armor in this universe.

Just some things to change.
 



"Most people say my name as one word: Shivara, thats fine too."

Age: 27

Species: Human

Alliance: Former Jedi

Rank: N/A

Appearance details: (Anything the picture can’t fully capture)

Gender: Female

Expertise:

Equipment:

Abilities/Talents: (Not to be confused with expertise. This is where you list off what your character can do. Short descriptions)

Weaknesses:

History:

Extras:

Least you've got the history pretty much done
 
INTERNAL USE ONLY

SIS OPERATIVE PROFILE:

Name: REDACTED

Code Name: Atlas

Aliases: James McGill, John Outrider, Zed Zeroni, Mike Bane, Vedik Sun, Krome B’guil.

Note: He has developed more Aliases outside the organization.

Handler: REDACTED (KIA)

Age: 30

Note: Born in or around Vreni Island on Corellia.

Species: Human

Affiliations/Alliance: Trained by the Republic Strategic Information Service Section REDACTED however his Current Status: ROUGE.

Rank: Operative in Section REDACTED

Known Images of Operative:

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Description of Known Appearance:

Height: 6’4

Weight: 250lbs.

Bulky Muscular, red headed male with a broad chest. He has handsome features with a well groomed beard and mustache that connects around the mouth. He is able to change his embedded ID chip to any of his aliases at whim and tends to go undercover during operations.

Note: Has Ocular and Cochlear implants that connect directly to his Neural AI implant in the brain. Operative also has trans-dermal implant in the left wrist to connect with computers and robots.He has an advanced AI code named REDACTED………. All Implants resistant to scans, mind control, and mental manipulation except for invasive probing techniques. Implants are not visible on his persons.

Gender: Male

Note: Has been known to impersonate aliens during operations.

Expertise:
  • Spycraft/Subterfuge
  • Hand to Hand Combat/Grappling
  • Hacking
  • Long Range Weapons (Sniper Rifles, ect)
  • Advanced Interrogation Techniques

Equipment:
  • Customized Republic Operative wrist straps with built in utilitool, light grappling hook, dart gun, and flashlight.
  • Smart Spider Silk Armor
  • Armored Environmental Suit in his ship
  • Q4 hold-out blaster pistol
  • DL-44 heavy blaster pistol
  • Modified X-415 Spec Ops Sharpshooter collapsible with modifications for dart, explosive, and non-lethal ammunition.
  • Firespray DL-87 stun rifle
  • Various types of Explosives, Poisons, and Drugs
  • Other items on the ship

Vehicles:

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  • SIS Modified Lethisk-class armed freighter : Heavy double laser cannons, 2 Concussion Missile Launchers with 12 Missile Complement, Small concealed antipersonnel laser turret above cargo entrance.
  • Crew 1-2 as needed
  • Passengers 10
  • Cargo capacity: 55 tons
  • Consumables: 2 months
Note: Additional internal security modifications, 2 droids aboard for maintenance, 1 Medical droid aboard, and 1 Astromech droid for emergencies, a few small security droids, and 1 espionage droid. Designed to interact with an advanced AI assistant to support 1 person crew complement for piloting the craft. Modified living quarters, medical bay, training room, and armory.


Abilities/Talents:
  • Piloting all types of vehicles
  • Singing, Dancing, Cooking, Acting
  • General knowledge of all types of weapons use. Except Melee style weapons.
  • Micro-Mid Level Explosives,
  • Poison creation and use (Aerosol/Liquid/Gels)
  • Dart/Stun Guns

Weaknesses:
  • Melee Weapon Combat
  • Propensity for Alcohol and Woman
  • Natural Paranoia
  • Very Strong Willed but also Unpredictable Behavior (Classified UNSTABLE)

Archival Information/History: REDACTED was recruited on Corellia around the estimated age of 5. He had no family and no known associates. REDACTED sponsored his entrance into Section REDACTED where he successfully graduated to operative within Section REDACTED. Atlas was given to handler REDACTED who supervised and directed his operations. Handler REDACTED reported 25 successful operations with Atlas. Handler REDACTED noted an unstable personality and was attempting to bring in the asset for reeducation when REDACTED was KIA by Atlas.

CURRENT STATUS: All operatives are to bring in the asset and Section REDACTED resources that were ascertained by Atlas during the failed extraction.

Extras:

OOC notes: My Character will go by Atlas in the game and his built in AI companion is Athena. I may also write a origin short story to add to the character sheet if it is approved.
It is approved. So have fun
 
Senjak Nar'ah
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Age:
17
Species:
Human (Force Sensitive)
Alliance:
Jedi
Rank:
Jedi Knight - Healer
Appearance details:
"I am a practitioner of stoicism and anonymity, thusly, my appearance should be of no consequence to you, or anyone else. I am Jedi, my actions are all that define me, not the flesh that the force wills into action."
Gender:
"What does that matter? One's gender only becomes important in moments of intimacy. Need I remind you that the Jedi do not condone such frivolous concepts? If it should make you more comfortable, feel free to address me by any respectable title or name you deem fit."
Expertise:
"I am a healer, the youngest in some time I am told."
"It should come as no surprise that my expertise lies in force healing. Using my powerful connection with the force, I repair the flesh and soul of those who have fallen with wound, grievous or otherwise. However, you will not find me in the infirmaries often, for my skills are far more beneficial in the heart of conflict, so that I might replenish the children of the force who fight so boldly."
"I have also been able to harness my powerful connection with the force to create barriers or protective shields. I am a bastion in the heart of war, lending hearth and protection to those otherwise defenseless."

Equipment:
"The fact I should have to carry any weapon on me is shameful, isn't it? Hmm?"
"Well yes, it is true that the lightsaber is for self-defense, but it is still a weapon. Granted, I am confident enough in my abilities with this weapon that I know I can deter an enemy without killing them."
"Ahh, yes it is a unique design isn't it? Thank you for noticing. I have tried to minimize it's lethality. You think that foolish? You may be right, but it's design was sent to me during meditation, the force willed it to be so. It is a Lightsaber lance (pike), not something you see often. If you look here, you can see it is akin to a saber staff, however the lance has a shaft of saber-resistant metal know as Phrik alloy, and a short blade on only one end. A standard saber has more use as a slashing weapon, but with the lance I can employ a serious of quick jabs to keep an enemy at bay with my superior reach. A jab from my lance generally does less damage than your standard saber's slash, though a well placed blow could easily spell the end for the target. Outside of that, I carry no weapon on me. I have my medical kits, communicator and armor – which you know is not something I will likely take off around others. Oh?"
"Ah yes, I nearly forgot. It seems nothing escapes your eye, curious one."
"Do you recall my affinity for force barriers? Well this little device, is my Tower Shield. When activated, I can send the force flowing through it to create a more concentrated force barrier. The area of the barrier is substantially smaller than if I were to be left to my own will, but the barrier is significantly stronger, sculpted into the form of a mighty tower shield."

Abilities/Talents:
"I am a scholar of the force, a philosopher of its intricacies. The force has always been a potent entity within my flesh, and at first I thought it a curse. Now – with eyes unclouded – I see its beauty. I have spent much time studying it, meditating in seclusion or pouring over books of lore. There are moments when in these deep meditations, or during periods of intense thought where I find myself receiving visions. I cannot control them, but they do come. They are part of the reason I study so hard, and because of my dedication, I am now Jedi, and I can perform most any basic application of the force any Jedi worth their salt could. Not only that, I am an exceptional healer and can easily repair the broken and sick, and with my barriers, keep others from winding up in such unfortunate situations. Beyond that, in combat, I excel in playing a defensive game, utilizing my barriers and reach to tire out my opponents."
"Any secret talents, you say? Well, I suppose there is one thing I don't normally talk about. You see, I've always had a hard time feeling emotions. To clarify, I do not mean in the way that Jedi are not supposed to express emotion, rather, emotion is foreign to my mind. To fit in when I was younger, I became very good at faking and fabricating my own emotions. I'm an exceptional actor because of it. My master frequently told me that, had I not been so adamant on practicing healing, I would have been an excellent Shadow."

Weaknesses:
"My flaws? I have a few, as is the human condition. Perhaps my greatest flaw is my inscrutable disdain for death. In the past I have gone to great lengths to refrain from taking life, even putting my own needlessly on the line in intense moments of combat. This has occurred on multiple occasions, but I believe my path and philosophy to be correct and righteous."
"While we're on the topic of combat, I should mention I am no master duelist. I like to focus on defense, but that is all I am usually good for when faced with violent oposition."

History:
"My my, you really are a curious one. Well, your restless mind deserves reward I suppose. Alright, I'll tell you my tale. Go ahead, take a seat."
"I have been told that my birth was an unfortunate one, a moment in time that caused great pain for another. You see, I was born to a mother who was once slave to a powerful and dangerous Sith. When this particular slave woman was pregnant, she was given enough money by the Sith to allow her and a child a comfortable life – a final kindness I suppose – before being released from captivity. However, as fate would have it, this slave was not destined to have one child but two. Twins. So, upon birth a decision was made by the ex-slave to discard one of these children so that she might be allowed a better future with her other child. I was that discarded child."
"When the Jedi order first found me, I was four years old. I was malnourished in an orphanage, covered in bruises and scrapes from the abuse of the older children. They took me from that place, though is was somewhat taboo. However, it seemed I was of great interest to many, and because of this I was to be taught and trained so that I might one day further the Jedi cause. This would not be the first time I would be an exception."
"For many years I trained diligently. In that time, friendship was alien to me. Disconnection and seclusion from the others provided me an environment with no distraction, something that allowed me an edge amongst my peers. With my dedication and natural talents, I quickly ascended the ranks at a very young age. This would be the second time that I would be an exception. You see, I am only seventeen, yet I already posses the title of Jedi Knight. This speaks volume of my skill and dedication, does it not?"


"I have journeyed to many battle fronts already, where I have practiced my path, thanklessly saving others. However, recently I was tasked with a... unique mission. My twin, a brother I have never met, has been discovered. He is untrained in the force, though his raw power is evident. Currently, he seeks our father. I must intercept him before he tumbles into the hands of that man. So, if you'll excuse me, I must be on my way."
Extras:
Twin sibling of Longhead Longhead 's character and child of shadowz1995 shadowz1995 's character
 
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Senjak Nar'ah
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Age:
17
Species:
Human (Force Sensitive)
Alliance:
Jedi
Rank:
Jedi Knight - Healer
Appearance details:
"I am a practitioner of stoicism and anonymity, thusly, my appearance should be of no consequence to you, or anyone else. I am Jedi, my actions are all that define me, not the flesh that the force wills into action."
Gender:
"What does that matter? One's gender only becomes important in moments of intimacy. Need I remind you that the Jedi do not condone such frivolous concepts? If it should make you more comfortable, feel free to address me by any respectable title or name you deem fit."
Expertise:
"I am a healer, the youngest in some time I am told."
"It should come as no surprise that my expertise lies in force healing. Using my powerful connection with the force, I repair the flesh and soul of those who have fallen with wound, grievous or otherwise. However, you will not find me in the infirmaries often, for my skills are far more beneficial in the heart of conflict, so that I might replenish the children of the force who fight so boldly."
"I have also been able to harness my powerful connection with the force to create barriers or protective shields. I am a bastion in the heart of war, lending hearth and protection to those otherwise defenseless."

Equipment:
"The fact I should have to carry any weapon on me is shameful, isn't it? Hmm?"
"Well yes, it is true that the lightsaber is for self-defense, but it is still a weapon. Granted, I am confident enough in my abilities with this weapon that I know I can deter an enemy without killing them."
"Ahh, yes it is a unique design isn't it? Thank you for noticing. I have tried to minimize it's lethality. You think that foolish? You may be right, but it's design was sent to me during meditation, the force willed it to be so. It is a Lightsaber lance (pike), not something you see often. If you look here, you can see it is akin to a saber staff, however the lance has a shaft of saber-resistant metal know as Phrik alloy, and a short blade on only one end. A standard saber has more use as a slashing weapon, but with the lance I can employ a serious of quick jabs to keep an enemy at bay with my superior reach. A jab from my lance generally does less damage than your standard saber's slash, though a well placed blow could easily spell the end for the target. Outside of that, I carry no weapon on me. I have my medical kits, communicator and armor – which you know is not something I will likely take off around others. Oh?"
"Ah yes, I nearly forgot. It seems nothing escapes your eye, curious one."
"Do you recall my affinity for force barriers? Well this little device, is my Tower Shield. When activated, I can send the force flowing through it to create a more concentrated force barrier. The area of the barrier is substantially smaller than if I were to be left to my own will, but the barrier is significantly stronger, sculpted into the form of a mighty tower shield."

Abilities/Talents:
"I am a scholar of the force, a philosopher of its intricacies. The force has always been a potent entity within my flesh, and at first I thought it a curse. Now – with eyes unclouded – I see its beauty. I have spent much time studying it, meditating in seclusion or pouring over books of lore. There are moments when in these deep meditations, or during periods of intense thought where I find myself receiving visions. I cannot control them, but they do come. They are part of the reason I study so hard, and because of my dedication, I am now Jedi, and I can perform most any basic application of the force any Jedi worth their salt could. Not only that, I am an exceptional healer and can easily repair the broken and sick, and with my barriers, keep others from winding up in such unfortunate situations. Beyond that, in combat, I excel in playing a defensive game, utilizing my barriers and reach to tire out my opponents."
"Any secret talents, you say? Well, I suppose there is one thing I don't normally talk about. You see, I've always had a hard time feeling emotions. To clarify, I do not mean in the way that Jedi are not supposed to express emotion, rather, emotion is foreign to my mind. To fit in when I was younger, I became very good at faking and fabricating my own emotions. I'm an exceptional actor because of it. My master frequently told me that, had I not been so adamant on practicing healing, I would have been an excellent Shadow."

Weaknesses:
"My flaws? I have a few, as is the human condition. Perhaps my greatest flaw is my inscrutable disdain for death. In the past I have gone to great lengths to refrain from taking life, even putting my own needlessly on the line in intense moments of combat. This has occurred on multiple occasions, but I believe my path and philosophy to be correct and righteous."
"While we're on the topic of combat, I should mention I am no master duelist. I like to focus on defense, but that is all I am usually good for when faced with violent oposition."

History:
"My my, you really are a curious one. Well, your restless mind deserves reward I suppose. Alright, I'll tell you my tale. Go ahead, take a seat."
"I have been told that my birth was an unfortunate one, a moment in time that caused great pain for another. You see, I was born to a mother who was once slave to a powerful and dangerous Sith. When this particular slave woman was pregnant, she was given enough money by the Sith to allow her and a child a comfortable life – a final kindness I suppose – before being released from captivity. However, as fate would have it, this slave was not destined to have one child but two. Twins. So, upon birth a decision was made by the ex-slave to discard one of these children so that she might be allowed a better future with her other child. I was that discarded child."
"When the Jedi order first found me, I was four years old. I was malnourished in an orphanage, covered in bruises and scrapes from the abuse of the older children. They took me from that place, though is was somewhat taboo. However, it seemed I was of great interest to many, and because of this I was to be taught and trained so that I might one day further the Jedi cause. This would not be the first time I would be an exception."
"For many years I trained diligently. In that time, friendship was alien to me. Disconnection and seclusion from the others provided me an environment with no distraction, something that allowed me an edge amongst my peers. With my dedication and natural talents, I quickly ascended the ranks at a very young age. This would be the second time that I would be an exception. You see, I am only seventeen, yet I already posses the title of Jedi Knight. This speaks volume of my skill and dedication, does it not?"


"I have journeyed to many battle fronts already, where I have practiced my path, thanklessly saving others. However, recently I was tasked with a... unique mission. My twin, a brother I have never met, has been discovered. He is untrained in the force, though his raw power is evident. Currently, he seeks our father. I must intercept him before he tumbles into the hands of that man. So, if you'll excuse me, I must be on my way."
Extras:
Twin sibling of Longhead Longhead 's character and child of shadowz1995 shadowz1995 's character
Accepted. Just add that one ability for consistency
 



"Most people say my name as one word: Shivara, thats fine too."

Age: 27

Species: Human

Alliance: Former Jedi

Rank: N/A

Appearance details: About 5'4 with a slender, statuesque frame. She has long, black hair thats usually kept braided, with stubborn, free-flowing strands surrounding a soft, youthful face. As far as femme physique, Shiva-Ra isnt outstandingly voluptuous, but still carries a woman's curves with her bust, waist, and hips. She (preferably) dresses modestly (with her Jedi upbringing and all) but does as shes told, even if the choice of her outfit has already been made for her.

Dark lashes accent her green eyes and pop against her lightly sun-kissed skin. She wears no make up, has no body alterations (i.e. jewelry, etc.) And has some (but small) scars scattered along her body from training injuries as a child. Nothing major.

She carries herself as gracefully as she can, and can typically be seen trying to keep a calm a face during any situation as she struggles to stick to her Jedi teachings and prevent her emotions from taking hold. Even her walk is willowy and prim, with each step planned and precise.

Shiva-ra holds unique head-turning traits. Most males wouldnt think twice about looking at a woman with a body that could stop a truck but seeing as how her frame isnt anything exceptional and just pleasantly ordinary, its her heavenly beauty that encaptures most. Shivara has a certain level of radiance that exudes from her. Whether she is unaware of it or chooses not to entertain vanity (most likely both) it hardly goes unnoticed by others.
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Gender: Female

Expertise:
Shiva is very sensitive to the Force. Like her former Jedi Master, she she relies on the Force as a 6th sense. Her Master saw it in her and took her under his wing to help her grow more attuned with the Force and what it has to offer internally.
(Not including its physical attributes, of course she learned the basic "pull/lift/push" with the force but other than that... she struggled)

Through hours of meditation and self exploration, the Force has kept her grounded and focused as a Jedi....
So far...

Equipment: She doesnt carry much, infact doesnt really carry anything at all. She does still have her lightsaber (its a miracle she does) but is only allowed to use it when her master permits it and under his supervision.

Abilities/Talents:
-Good pilot
-Adequate saber skills
-Very in-tune with the Force
-Resilient against harsh living conditions (i.e. weather)

Weaknesses:
-Conflict with her emotions
-Talking about her past as a Jedi
-Lightsaber combat techniques against multiple opponents (shes not helpless and can defend herself, she knows the basic stances and techniques but she needed more time to train, and even became a little rusty during her time as a slave)
-Mentions of her Jedi Master (very sensitive subject)


History:
Like most Jedi in the making, Shiva'ra's journey to Jedi-hood began at a very young age. The young human girl was visited in her humble home on Tatooine by a pair of strange men in their earthy brown robes. Her large doe eyes took note of the metal hilts attached to their hips. The strange men spoke to her parents for what felt like hours. They used words and terminology she didnt understand, like "Jedi", "midichlorians", and something called "the Force". For a small child, the memory should be distant, but Shiva-Ra remembers it all too well. That was the day her parents had let go of their only child to ensure her future. It was an honor to have their daughter admitted into the Jedi teachings, but it was bitter-sweet as the price for such a future was never seeing their daughter again. Shiva-Ra grew up with out knowing her family, or even remembering what they look like (ther perks of being taken so young) so detattachment came very easy, and it allowed her to focus on the long road ahead.

Shiva-Ra, after becoming an initiate, went through the first set of initiate trails to become a padawan, only to be selected by a Jedi Knight almost imediately for one-on-one training. She has learned the basics about the Force and using a saber, but now it was time to apply those teachings and shadow a real Jedi first hand. His name was Sarlak Rahool...

The first missions were hard. Her young training had helped her immensely with physical conflict, but her mental and emotional teachings were tested. Thing were much different in the real world and Shiva-Ra learned on the way. But as a fresh padawan, she couldnt help but wonder why Sarlak had chosen her as his student. "Im so clumsy, and sometimes I forget to let go of my feelings."

When ever Shiva would doubt herself, her master would put a hand on her shoulder and bent over to her level so that they were eye to eye, "Shivara, you are too hard on yourself. Dont forget every great Master was in your place once. Have faith in the Force, it will guide you, and I will help."

Years had passed, mission after mission, training when ever she could with her Master or others, seeking advice, and learning to have a harmonious relationship with the Force. Of course she still had so much to learn, but Shiva-Ra was on her way to mastering the art of dettachment. Feelings, worldy materials, emotions, they were all distractions and she tried her best to treat them as such. Her skills, too, had matured noticeably, she had grown out of the clumsiness she was so worried she would never overcome. She was focused and took her profession seriously, however behind the scenes with just her master alone, she displayed signs of kept youth. Making jokes, having sarcasm, and having friendly competitions with Sarlak.

After a few months Sarlak had passed his own trials and joined the rank of Master. He wasted no time in convincing the Council that Shiva-ra was ready to be a Jedi Knight.

Fastfowarding through it all, Shiva-Ra passed at the ripe age of 21 with flying colors, and made Sarlak extremely proud. She gained a few scars from the Trail of Flesh but was relieved to come out with her body intact. The Trial of Spirit, however almost costed her a passing grade. Once completed, Shiva was a little shaken up. She had seen things about herself that she had forgotten and refused to speak about it when her Master asked how she was holding up. Needless to say it was an eye opening experience.

Shiva-Ra was a knight now, and both her and her Master held a lot more responsibility than before. Their missions grew tougher and their skills were tested further but nevertheless they performed above and beyond to succeed. They were a good match for student and teacher, in sync and feeding off the other's energy. Things were good.

But their relationship was cut short.

(Im just gonna skip the fluff and get this done, I can elaborate in le rp)

During their final mission together, Shiva-Ra and her master were seperated. Her master outnumbered, and she outskilled. Both were ambushed, Sarlak was killed and Shiva felt it through the force. It was the first time she felt sadness and anger in a very long time. She worked hard to forget those emotions but her heart sunk to her stomach and was fueled by revenge. She struggled to defeat her opponent to get to her master, but lost in her emotions she was unable to sense a sneak attack and was stunned into unconsciousness.

Instead of being killed, Shiva-Ra was forced into slavery. For 3 years shes lived her life as a servant. Traded and sold every few months due to her sharp tongue and tendency to escape. She never got very far when ever she managed to break herself free, and was always caught again. For some reason those that owned her lived in very barren, simple lands with little places to hide.

(Skipping more stuffff making this real short)

A few months ago, Shiva was sold to a very....interesting buyer. Goes by the name Darth Nar'ah. Of course she protested, but what choice did she have.

And thats where we are k thanks, the end.


Extras:
Ill come up with something​

Hahahahahahahaha accepted ???
 

WIP BOI beep beep bitches ill edit later
Name: KA-73

Age: 1

Species: droid

Alliance: Republic

Rank: Destroyer of Hostile Organics

Appearance:
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Appearance details: (Anything the picture can’t fully capture)

Gender: no thanks you nonce

Expertise: (Even the greatest of force users didn’t excel at everything. They had specialized fields. What are yours?)

Equipment: (Force users travel light.)

Abilities/Talents: (Not to be confused with expertise. This is where you list off what your character can do. Short descriptions)

Weaknesses: (Real weaknesses. Not, “I get tired if I fight for too long” Im sure you know the types Im talking about)

History: (Not necessary unless you are making an influential character. I’ll let you know if you need one.)

Extras: (Extra details you wanna put down. Quote, warning, song, memes, whatever)
 
Name: "Oh - One"
(HK-01-51P)

Age: 1

Species: Droid - HK Series

Alliance: Feather - Not the Schar

Rank: Enoch (Feather's Personal Bodyguard/Assassin Droid)

Appearance:
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Appearance details: "Statement: I am six feet tall. The only other description that is not shown in the picture above is the fact that I have magnetic plates installed on the soles of my feet, and my palms.

Conclusion: My design is nothing special."

Gender: ---

Expertise: "Statement: As a Hunter-Killer series droid, I am a hybrid between a protocol and an assassin droid. I have many more assassination functions than protocol functions, and thus, my expertise is killing organics. I was made to be 90% more efficient than the average Mandalorian combatant, and an improvement on the HK-47 model. I fire 21% more accurately than an HK-47 model, raising my accuracy to a 98%. While killing is my main profession, like I have previously stated, I have a few protocol droid functions such as cleaning, cooking, and bilingualism."

Equipment: "Reassurance/Statement: Of course, Master. As an assassin droid, I have come installed with many weapons that I can use in. The quality of most of them are standard at best, but they'll definitely allow me to do my job. I have a micro missile launcher on my right arm that is loaded automatically. The munitions are stored inside my body. The engineers at Czerka Corporation have tried something new, and have installed an energy shield into my left forearm, akin to those worn by mandalorians. I have pre-installed long range communications, and a holoprojector. Incase the scenario requires finesse, I also come with a Stealth field generator, or an invisibility function, and a retractable vibro blade for close combat. It's material is 100% guaranteed to be able to stop a lightsaber."

Abilities/Talents: (Read Expertise. All Around Combatant)

Weaknesses: "Confession/Reassurance: I am not perfect. I am the first HK-51 to be put into service, and I am only a prototype. I am very prone to failure, and in a sense, you have scammed out of your credits. I am sure you will receive compensation if you return me WITH a list of issues that I have. I will still try my best to perform as needed."

History: "Explanation: I have not been active for very long. I was purchased by Feather almost a year before I was delivered. My delivery time only took so long due to failure on the part of the workers from Czerka meant to deliver me. They decided to purposefully go to the wrong places as a practical joke. I would have came sooner had it not been for their immaturity and incompetence. Czerka knowingly sent me to master Feather has a prototype test. My service has been largely -"

"Uneventful."

Extras: Croaker Croaker / Feather's bodyguard.

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Name: "Oh - One"
(HK-01-51P)

Age: 1

Species: Droid - HK Series

Alliance: Feather - Not the Schar

Rank: Feather's Personal Bodyguard/Assassin Droid

Appearance:
HK51-25-e1467925995846.jpg


Appearance details: "Statement: I am six feet tall. The only other description that is not shown in the picture above is the fact that I have magnetic plates installed on the soles of my feet, and my palms.

Conclusion: My design is nothing special."

Gender: ---

Expertise: "Statement: As a Hunter-Killer series droid, I am a hybrid between a protocol and an assassin droid. I have many more assassination functions than protocol functions, and thus, my expertise is killing organics. I was made to be 90% more efficient than the average Mandalorian combatant, and an improvement on the HK-47 model. I fire 21% more accurately than an HK-47 model, raising my accuracy to a 98%. While killing is my main profession, like I have previously stated, I have a few protocol droid functions such as cleaning, cooking, and bilingualism."

Equipment: "Reassurance/Statement: Of course, Master. As an assassin droid, I have come installed with many weapons that I can use in. The quality of most of them are standard at best, but they'll definitely allow me to do my job. I have a micro missile launcher on my right arm that is loaded automatically. The munitions are stored inside my body. The engineers at Czerka Corporation have tried something new, and have installed an energy shield into my left forearm, akin to those worn by mandalorians. I have pre-installed long range communications, and a holoprojector. Incase the scenario requires finesse, I also come with a Stealth field generator, or an invisibility function, and a retractable vibro blade for close combat. It's material is 100% guaranteed to be able to stop a lightsaber."

Abilities/Talents: (Read Expertise. All Around Combatant)

Weaknesses: "Confession/Reassurance: I am not perfect. I am the first HK-51 to be put into service, and I am only a prototype. I am very prone to failure, and in a sense, you have scammed out of your credits. I am sure you will receive compensation if you return me WITH a list of issues that I have. I will still try my best to perform as needed."

History: "Explanation: I have not been active for very long. I was purchased by Feather almost a year before I was delivered. My delivery time only took so long due to failure on the part of the workers from Czerka meant to deliver me. They decided to purposefully go to the wrong places as a practical joke. I would have came sooner had it not been for their immaturity and incompetence. Czerka knowingly sent me to master Feather has a prototype test. My service has been largely -"

"Uneventful."

Extras: Croaker Croaker / Feather's bodyguard.

shadowz1995 shadowz1995 no bbcode this time
Accepted. Very nice.
 

Reid “Jason" Nar'ah
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Age: 19


Species: Human


Alliance: Untrained Force Sensitive


Rank: ---


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Appearance details: “Reid’s nothing like his father in terms of how he looks. The only thing he’s got from him is the Force. He doesn’t have his height, his dad’s around 6 feet tall - he’s five feet and nine inches. He isn’t built like his dad either. He’s about 160 pounds in just muscle. He’s got slim shoulders too. He’s a really compact athlete and fighter. His hair is blonde, again unlike his father. His eyes are dark brown. Any other details can be picked up from his images.


His armor? Yeah, it’s a cheap knockoff of a Mandalorian scout’s armor….Maybe I shouldn’t say cheap. It’s a lot more expensive than any kind of Republic Intelligence armor. Last time he was encountered on Nar Shadaa, one of the mercenaries intelligence hired reported that even a heavy blaster pistol was only good to knock him down for a few seconds. Reid wiped the burn mark right off of his armor and kept running, no dent or anything. He also reported that the Jedi sent to assist him managed to put a cut in his chest piece - so he’s not entirely immune to weapons. A military grade blaster rifle and most Jedi lightsabers burn at around the same temperature. A pistol may not be enough, but any rifle made by Czerka Corp? You’re good.


The armor comes equipped with a modified mandalorian vambrace.

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This is just what the normal vambraces look like. We don’t know exactly what’s been changed about it, but we can definitely say that the mini rocket launcher was scrapped, and the motion sensor has a wider range. His jetpack isn’t as effective as other Mandalorian soldiers - it’s only good for short bursts that make long jumps possible. He won’t be doing any kind of flying with it, but with his skillset, he doesn’t need to fly.”


Gender: M


Expertise: “Reid’s gig is being able to get in and get out without being noticed. His shot is definitely reliable, his armor and skills are more than sufficient for him to survive a prolonged hit and run attack against any fortified area, but despite this, he prefers to engage in covert activities. His vambrace has a modification that allows him to hack and link with console and computers. We haven’t found a firewall that can limit its abilities yet, but that’s only because Reid is smart enough to not sneak into certain places. This vambrace will allow him to open and lock doors and trigger alarms in buildings. He could also disable the artificial gravity or life support in a ship. He excels at hand to hand to combat, and is incredibly lethal with just his two hands. His skills with his hands excel most standard mandalorian’s. He has a knack for changing his look using basic holo-transmogrification, or simply dying his hair and cutting it. Currently, most big criminal organizations we can name know him simply as "RJ", his first two initials.


You can see why we normally send Jedi to deal with this guy - he normally doesn’t fight them. He just runs.”


Equipment: “Alright so here’s his package. His helmet’s HUD is linked with an implant in his brain. It monitors his heart rate and body temperature. It’s also got a link with his blaster rifle’s scope. He can see through the scope without even actually holding the gun in front of him. He can shoot around corners without exposing his head or body because of this. His helmet - much like a Mando scout - has a smart targeting computer in it. While his aim without it is in good quality, his helmet paints the areas to shoot, allowing him to accurately lead his shots in front of moving targets. Hell, it even compensates for drop off and blaster bolt size reduction over range. More on his helmet - it keeps track of his armor’s state and temperature as well as filters out anything that’s not oxygen, even underwater. And most dangerous of all - it’s got a flashlight.


Onto his the rest of his armor. I’ve given you the rough structure of his vambraces, so I won’t cover that a second time. He’s got a thermally balanced G-suit under the armor plates, so he can survive in the vacuum of space. His vambrace is on his left arm. His righ- Oh yeah, he’s left handed. Anyways, his right arm has a vambrace that’s just armor. The knuckle plates have a retractable vibroblade for close encounter, making his hand to hand combat skills even more formidable.


What do you mean what about his boots? The only thing remotely special about them is that they won’t erode when in acid. Other than that, they’re ordinary combat boots, good for all terrain and the occasional stubborn door.

Now, his rifle is something special. All of his equipment except for his pistol and explosive ordinance is apart of a set. I’ve already mentioned that the scope on the rifle is linked with his helmet. It has three modes, stun mode, the standard firing mode, and a unique ion blaster mode. The ion bolts are only good to shock organics, it usually won’t give anything more than second degree burns, but wreak havoc on machines. These bolts will bounce off of walls up to two times. The vambrace on his left arm, see those two barrels? One fires ion bolts, the other fires normal ones. The blaster itself virtually has no recoil, and a lot of range. It can fire in bursts or semi-automatically. The bolts come out orange, and the cooling power on this thing is insane. Once it overheats it only stays like that for a few seconds. It’s almost like it’s been submerged into Hoth’s waters so many times that it’s permanently cold. It has a laser emitter under the barrel. The laser can only be seen by a camera that specifically sees UV waves. Luckily for Reid, his helmet can do that. It can be remotely fired too.


Oh yeah, and it looks pretty damn cool.
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Did I mention he’s got a blue lightsaber too? We don’t have any pictures or any specifics about it, because he barely uses it, but we’ve got reports from a few agents that they’ve seen it. We don’t even know where it came from. We only know that its cutting power isn’t as good as any average Jedi lightsaber. We suspect the crystal isn’t a kyber crystal. It’s probably a gem that has the same properties as kyber crystals that power Jedi lightsabers.


But don’t get me wrong.


It’s definitely still strong enough to put a hole into any blast door, or you.”

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Abilities/Talents: “We’re running out of briefing time here. A quick rundown of his other skills. He’s an outstanding pilot, he has a vast knowledge of computers and technology, he knows the biology and culture of many different species, as well as their race specific weaknesses beyond getting shot. He’s bilingual as well. He’s amazing at changing his personality and face to fit any environment, and is masterful at faking accents. Above all, he’s Force sensitive too. The seers over at the temple of Coruscant say he’s got a good deal of potential. Council even said that they regret not finding him as a child, but he’s too old for them now. Intelligence and the Jedi are only mildly afraid about what he could do if he was trained, especially by the Sith. Those guys are scary ruthless, and I’m pretty sure we don’t want him to gain their abilities too. At best, he’s mastered the ability to use Force techniques without the usage of hand gestures."


Weaknesses: “Reid seems like an overall combative powerhouse, yeah, and you might be thinking ‘well Reid’s only weakness has to be another Reid’. But no, that’s not it. Well, that is something yeah, another equally trained combatant like him probably could take him out, but beyond that. His stern and calculating demeanor only takes him so far. What I’m saying is, If Plan A doesn’t work, then he goes to Plan B, if that doesn’t work, then he’s screwed. He plans ahead, but not very far ahead. That’s usually why Force sensitive guys who can see into the future or some mystical crap like that are usually a step ahead of him. I mean, any human who sees him do anything can anticipate what’s going to happen, he’s awfully predictable, even if Intelligence only knows so much about his goals, when he’s carrying out a plan, it takes our guys maybe a few seconds to figure out his objective. He’s too consistent.”


History: “Our knowledge of his background is limited. His mother is an expert at dodging questions, and it’s pretty obvious why we can’t ask his dad. But at most we’ve gathered some basics.


Reid was originally born on Ord Mantel, but his father, Dark Councilor Nar’ah - yeah, that guy - relocated her to some outer rim planet. She was supplied with more than enough luxury and credits to live for the rest of her predicted lifespan, as well as be able to support a single child. Despite the luxury literally just given to her, she moved herself back to her home planet, Mandalore, taking Reid with her. Reid often demonstrated his sensitivity to the Force unconsciously. His mother only remarks that he’s incredibly gifted with it. Between Nar’ah’s kids that we know about, examples being Jedi Knight Senjak Nar’ah, and her unfindable twin brother, Kaiser Nar’ah, they are all very strong with the Force, even without any kind of formal training from a force sensitive faction. Reid’s not a stranger to this fact either. While he’s untrained, and could easily be beaten out by any Knight worth his or her rank in a power struggle, it’s not the raw power you have to pay attention to, it’s the intelligence of Reid you have to look at. While untrained, his power is comparable to a Jedi Knight, yes, but we have footage of Reid using the Force in clever ways that even Battlemaster Krastag Nurat finds amusing.


Anyways, I’m getting off-topic. By the time he turned 10, he was put into a youth military academy program where he received training to become a soldier as opposed to a normal school. His mother, being an exceptional soldier herself, also gave him extra training to go with what he learned at the academy. With her help, he was easily placed in the top half of sixteenth of his class, out of 800. He didn’t graduate in first, surprisingly. He came in fourth, which is still pretty good in a mandalorian school. He graduated at age 18, and has been training on his own ever since. While he’s technically a soldier in the Mandalorian ranks, when we questioned their government officials, they acted as if Reid never existed to begin with. He’s been running around and causing trouble for the past 368 Coruscant standard rotations. One year. His main goal is largely unknown, but we suspect that he’s planning to make a move somewhere on Dromund Kaas next - so he’s the Empire’s problem for right now, not ours.


We don’t have a lot about him. We’re aiming to fix that. Agent. Most of our questions will be answered if we just ask him yourself.”

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Reid “Jason" Nar'ah
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Age: 19


Species: Human


Alliance: Untrained Force Sensitive


Rank: ---


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Appearance details: “Reid’s nothing like his father in terms of how he looks. The only thing he’s got from him is the Force. He doesn’t have his height, his dad’s around 6 feet tall - he’s five feet and nine inches. He isn’t built like his dad either. He’s about 160 pounds in just muscle. He’s got slim shoulders too. He’s a really compact athlete and fighter. His hair is blonde, again unlike his father. His eyes are dark brown. Any other details can be picked up from his images.


His armor? Yeah, it’s a cheap knockoff of a Mandalorian scout’s armor….Maybe I shouldn’t say cheap. It’s a lot more expensive than any kind of Republic Intelligence armor. Last time he was encountered on Nar Shadaa, one of the mercenaries intelligence hired reported that even a heavy blaster pistol was only good to knock him down for a few seconds. Reid wiped the burn mark right off of his armor and kept running, no dent or anything. He also reported that the Jedi sent to assist him managed to put a cut in his chest piece - so he’s not entirely immune to weapons. A military grade blaster rifle and most Jedi lightsabers burn at around the same temperature. A pistol may not be enough, but any rifle made by Czerka Corp? You’re good.


The armor comes equipped with a modified mandalorian vambrace.

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This is just what the normal vambraces look like. We don’t know exactly what’s been changed about it, but we can definitely say that the mini rocket launcher was scrapped, and the motion sensor has a wider range. His jetpack isn’t as effective as other Mandalorian soldiers - it’s only good for short bursts that make long jumps possible. He won’t be doing any kind of flying with it, but with his skillset, he doesn’t need to fly.”


Gender: M


Expertise: “Reid’s gig is being able to get in and get out without being noticed. His shot is definitely reliable, his armor and skills are more than sufficient for him to survive a prolonged hit and run attack against any fortified area, but despite this, he prefers to engage in covert activities. His vambrace has a modification that allows him to hack and link with console and computers. We haven’t found a firewall that can limit its abilities yet, but that’s only because Reid is smart enough to not sneak into certain places. This vambrace will allow him to open and lock doors and trigger alarms in buildings. He could also disable the artificial gravity or life support in a ship. He excels at hand to hand to combat, and is incredibly lethal with just his two hands. His skills with his hands excel most standard mandalorian’s. He has a knack for changing his look using basic holo-transmogrification, or simply dying his hair and cutting it. Currently, most big criminal organizations we can name know him simply as "RJ", his first two initials.


You can see why we normally send Jedi to deal with this guy - he normally doesn’t fight them. He just runs.”


Equipment: “Alright so here’s his package. His helmet’s HUD is linked with an implant in his brain. It monitors his heart rate and body temperature. It’s also got a link with his blaster rifle’s scope. He can see through the scope without even actually holding the gun in front of him. He can shoot around corners without exposing his head or body because of this. His helmet - much like a Mando scout - has a smart targeting computer in it. While his aim without it is in good quality, his helmet paints the areas to shoot, allowing him to accurately lead his shots in front of moving targets. Hell, it even compensates for drop off and blaster bolt size reduction over range. More on his helmet - it keeps track of his armor’s state and temperature as well as filters out anything that’s not oxygen, even underwater. And most dangerous of all - it’s got a flashlight.


Onto his the rest of his armor. I’ve given you the rough structure of his vambraces, so I won’t cover that a second time. He’s got a thermally balanced G-suit under the armor plates, so he can survive in the vacuum of space. His vambrace is on his left arm. His righ- Oh yeah, he’s left handed. Anyways, his right arm has a vambrace that’s just armor. The knuckle plates have a retractable vibroblade for close encounter, making his hand to hand combat skills even more formidable.


What do you mean what about his boots? The only thing remotely special about them is that they won’t erode when in acid. Other than that, they’re ordinary combat boots, good for all terrain and the occasional stubborn door.

Now, his rifle is something special. All of his equipment except for his pistol and explosive ordinance is apart of a set. I’ve already mentioned that the scope on the rifle is linked with his helmet. It has three modes, stun mode, the standard firing mode, and a unique ion blaster mode. The ion bolts are only good to shock organics, it usually won’t give anything more than second degree burns, but wreak havoc on machines. These bolts will bounce off of walls up to two times. The vambrace on his left arm, see those two barrels? One fires ion bolts, the other fires normal ones. The blaster itself virtually has no recoil, and a lot of range. It can fire in bursts or semi-automatically. The bolts come out orange, and the cooling power on this thing is insane. Once it overheats it only stays like that for a few seconds. It’s almost like it’s been submerged into Hoth’s waters so many times that it’s permanently cold. It has a laser emitter under the barrel. The laser can only be seen by a camera that specifically sees UV waves. Luckily for Reid, his helmet can do that. It can be remotely fired too.


Oh yeah, and it looks pretty damn cool.
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Did I mention he’s got a blue lightsaber too? We don’t have any pictures or any specifics about it, because he barely uses it, but we’ve got reports from a few agents that they’ve seen it. We don’t even know where it came from. We only know that its cutting power isn’t as good as any average Jedi lightsaber. We suspect the crystal isn’t a kyber crystal. It’s probably a gem that has the same properties as kyber crystals that power Jedi lightsabers.


But don’t get me wrong.


It’s definitely still strong enough to put a hole into any blast door, or you.”

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Abilities/Talents: “We’re running out of briefing time here. A quick rundown of his other skills. He’s an outstanding pilot, he has a vast knowledge of computers and technology, he knows the biology and culture of many different species, as well as their race specific weaknesses beyond getting shot. He’s bilingual as well. He’s amazing at changing his personality and face to fit any environment, and is masterful at faking accents. Above all, he’s Force sensitive too. The seers over at the temple of Coruscant say he’s got a good deal of potential. Council even said that they regret not finding him as a child, but he’s too old for them now. Intelligence and the Jedi are only mildly afraid about what he could do if he was trained, especially by the Sith. Those guys are scary ruthless, and I’m pretty sure we don’t want him to gain their abilities too. At best, he’s mastered the ability to use Force techniques without the usage of hand gestures."


Weaknesses: “Reid seems like an overall combative powerhouse, yeah, and you might be thinking ‘well Reid’s only weakness has to be another Reid’. But no, that’s not it. Well, that is something yeah, another equally trained combatant like him probably could take him out, but beyond that. His stern and calculating demeanor only takes him so far. What I’m saying is, If Plan A doesn’t work, then he goes to Plan B, if that doesn’t work, then he’s screwed. He plans ahead, but not very far ahead. That’s usually why Force sensitive guys who can see into the future or some mystical crap like that are usually a step ahead of him. I mean, any human who sees him do anything can anticipate what’s going to happen, he’s awfully predictable, even if Intelligence only knows so much about his goals, when he’s carrying out a plan, it takes our guys maybe a few seconds to figure out his objective. He’s too consistent.”


History: “Our knowledge of his background is limited. His mother is an expert at dodging questions, and it’s pretty obvious why we can’t ask his dad. But at most we’ve gathered some basics.


Reid was originally born on Ord Mantel, but his father, Dark Councilor Nar’ah - yeah, that guy - relocated her to some outer rim planet. She was supplied with more than enough luxury and credits to live for the rest of her predicted lifespan, as well as be able to support a single child. Despite the luxury literally just given to her, she moved herself back to her home planet, Mandalore, taking Reid with her. Reid often demonstrated his sensitivity to the Force unconsciously. His mother only remarks that he’s incredibly gifted with it. Between Nar’ah’s kids that we know about, examples being Jedi Knight Senjak Nar’ah, and her unfindable twin brother, Kaiser Nar’ah, they are all very strong with the Force, even without any kind of formal training from a force sensitive faction. Reid’s not a stranger to this fact either. While he’s untrained, and could easily be beaten out by any Knight worth his or her rank in a power struggle, it’s not the raw power you have to pay attention to, it’s the intelligence of Reid you have to look at. While untrained, his power is comparable to a Jedi Knight, yes, but we have footage of Reid using the Force in clever ways that even Battlemaster Krastag Nurat finds amusing.


Anyways, I’m getting off-topic. By the time he turned 10, he was put into a youth military academy program where he received training to become a soldier as opposed to a normal school. His mother, being an exceptional soldier herself, also gave him extra training to go with what he learned at the academy. With her help, he was easily placed in the top half of sixteenth of his class, out of 800. He didn’t graduate in first, surprisingly. He came in fourth, which is still pretty good in a mandalorian school. He graduated at age 18, and has been training on his own ever since. While he’s technically a soldier in the Mandalorian ranks, when we questioned their government officials, they acted as if Reid never existed to begin with. He’s been running around and causing trouble for the past 368 Coruscant standard rotations. One year. His main goal is largely unknown, but we suspect that he’s planning to make a move somewhere on Dromund Kaas next - so he’s the Empire’s problem for right now, not ours.


We don’t have a lot about him. We’re aiming to fix that. Agent. Most of our questions will be answered if we just ask him yourself.”

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