Skyrim: Alduin's Bane

@Peaceswore, I have a few notes on your character, I am one of the moderators of this thread.

  • First off, a thieving High Elf. High Elves are known for their noble personalities and they feel like they are generally better than every other race, especially Nords or other barbaric races. High Elves are also more magic based, being the most magic attuned race, so a thieving High Elf would not be likely.
  • I have already talked with @StoneWolf18 and we both agree that a character shouldn't have two "titles". Which means, no one could be the Guild Master and the Dragonborn.
  • Cana Netherlink is not really Elvish. Nether and Link are just two words combined together, much more Nordish. Cana sounds Elvish. I'm not saying to change it, I'm just putting in my opinion.
  • I feel your history was rushed. Like you just wanted to finish it real quickly. Back to the deal with High Elves, it is rare to see one in a bandit camp, as they feel they are better than everyone else.


Those are my notes. Just a few.
 
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