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Celestial Speck
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Ayeeee!!! That's what I'm talking about!!! XDDDAstralworks
Lol, sure. My original plan was to make a one-man army. Maybe the gang members constantly want to recruit him, but he always refused, given he essentially took down other gangs in the area by himself with what's essentially a bullshit buffing power.
The Black Knight
I'm not sure if this would be too much, but the power that would allow him to solo most gangs would be called 'Balance Breaking.' In which he's capable to break balances of concepts in himself or others. Such as strength, speed, endurance, etc, to make people get a massive, crazy boom in power. I was thinking he'd be something like a local legend, who'd 'join' gang for whatever objectives, personal or otherwise, and would essentially be like, 'I'm not an official member, I'm just working with you guys for now' like a tsundere. Maybe he could have some manner of past with your DMPC.
Otherwise, is the power fine? It's a bit broken, but I kinda wanted to make so he seemed powerful enough to solo gangs by himself, at least before the RP starts.
Celestial Speck He could have soloed gangs by himself because you wrote that he did without having a broken power that would make people not even join the game.
Celestial Speck What I mean is he could have had any power and defeated a gang of kids by himself because you wrote that he did. I won't allow him to have a broken power.
Character Name:Alright, not the best sheet I've ever made, but I always suck at doing 'em, so eh. Hopefully, it's decent enough.
Kyou Tana. Doesn't possess any nicknames, in virtue of not having many friends to give him one.
Alias:
AKUMA
Age:
15 years old. He'll be 16 somewhat soon, though.
Gender:
A manly man's man!
Height:
An unnerving 5'10". This unnatural height for someone of his age made so Kyou gained more of his reputation as a 'demon' in the streets, both by other students, teachers, or previous gangs he took down in the past.
Weight:
76 KG.
Not that much, considering his title and height. It isn't uncommon for people who have never seen him think he's some massive, hulking figure in mass, or being something like a buff sumo fighter by the rumors, much to his dismay.
Hair Color:
Black, messy hair that Kyou attempts to keep out of his eyes, something by moving it back. Making it almost seem like an incomplete pompadour at times due to being mildly long. It's a bit dirty at times as well- mostly due to the fights he gets into.
Eye Color:
Silver eyes that almost seem like to be jewels. People who went against him often claim they see his eyes changing colors to a deep red when he activates his power. Although, that's really just a case of his own aura permeating through him.
Complexion:
Kyou is relatively pale, being of eastern origin. Although, his skin is rough and a bit dirty, with a few scars in certain spots, making it not very smooth.
Build:
Kyou isn't a mass of muscle, but he isn't weak, either. He is certainly toned, however. With visible muscles on him, although not completely solid. Regardless, his height fits his apparent muscle mass, which he tries to develop by eating and training. (Although, said training often involves beating up goons.)
Grade:
Freshman, despite seeming like he belongs in older grades.
Visual Appearance:
'Canon' appearance.
Non-canon Oni appearance.
Personality:
Kyou may seem like your usual delinquent- foul mother, hot-blooded, and not afraid to get into a fight with anyone he meets. Be it a man, or a woman. However, many of the rumors surrounding Kyou largely bastardized his actual personality. While Kyou isn't a caring or 'good' person by any means in his own eyes, he certainly possesses a certain sense of justice and a personality that's more than just your usual delinquent.
He's one to not pick people who aren't worth fighting. Or at the very least, people who don't deserve it. Kyou tends to protect other, weaker people from attacks or from being 'tossed around' by others, often with large violence and brutality, depending on the situation. If one is to approach him despite this, they would find that Kyou isn't necessarily aggressive, just cold, and mildly dense to some regular social implications due to the fact of not having many friends. He isn't dumb by any means despite his grades, but his mind certainly is more focused on other aspects.
He speaks often in an extremely non-formal language, often butchering his sentences to a point where it's either ridiculous or perhaps even comical to some point.
Despite this, in fights, or in other situations, he can certainly be seen showing 'excitement' and having a large grin on his face. He seems to enjoy fights, principally if his enemy is strong- and enjoys, even more, when he's fighting against someone in a 'friendly match', or, well, something close to it- often laughing and pushing himself to the limit, making the fight last as long as possible, although always aiming to win if nothing is at stake. Otherwise, he'll always try and finish it quickly.
Beyond all of this...If one is able to befriend Kyou, they would find a rather excited boy who enjoys the company and often cares a lot about his friends, be the few he has, despite sometimes not being the best of showing it. Often giving advice to others (at bad times, occasionally) or just being there to support others, Kyou is much of a loyal ally to his friends, despite his occasional short temper, often causing him to be relatively protective.
Current Story:
Kyou Tana isn't from this town- he never was, yet, he was forced to come here as a transfer student. Born from an unknown woman and man, Kyou lives by himself with his grandfather at the commercial district of town, living atop a small convenience store his grandfather runs (with him occasionally helping along) in an apartment, Kyou arrived in Sommerset Highschool a short while ago, although, despite this short period, he formed a name for himself, much like he formed a name for himself in his previous city.
His appearance and personality often make people think of him as a Demon, hence his alias, as well as his extreme violence. Long before he ever joined Sommerset, Kyou lived in a town named 'Kyoto.' There, he lived and grew a quiet child. His grandfather, Kawaki Tana, often was away from their home to properly care for Kyou, despite showing great care and love for his grandson, leaving the boy to lack familial or parental love from a young age.
He was average, once. Despite his height and strong muscle mass, he was a normal student. His grades weren't great, but they were good enough. He had a small group of people he isn't even sure he could 'consider' friends. He earned money by taking care of his grandfather's store, he occasionally got into some trouble, but he never did anything major. He was, by all means, a nobody.
So, the many or few people that know of him ask themselves what caused his change. Some say he grew bored and snapped. Others say he always enjoyed fighting, and just hid it very well. But, despite all the theories, the truth is often disappointing, or unexpected. This was the case with him. Kyou changed to a life of fighting and hot-bloodiness for a simple reason:
He watched people that didn't deserve getting hurt get hurt. As such, as he acted, and attacked.
The feeling of blood rushing, and the feeling of actually doing something, protecting something smaller than him, made Kyou realize his own potential, much to his grandfather's dismay. He was skilled in his attacks, but also possessed the strength to properly execute them. A trait he knew that wasn't natural to him. Something perhaps from his parents, or his grandfather, even. Despite this, he never questioned his past, or who his parents were, taking solace in wishing to protect things smaller or bigger than him.
Weapon(s):
Kyou always uses his fists. Weapons just hold him back.
Aura:
Kyou's aura is a deep and burning red that seems to be made out of literal flames. Constantly moving, burning, and powering him on. Those who thought him on the past say his aura has the shape of a Eight-Headed dragon, and that they could almost feel said dragon swallowing and burning them alive like flames when he dealt the final blow. Although, of course, this is simply a feeling those weaker than him sense.
Power:
The power to 'Break Balance', or, 'Balance Breaking' by his own name. While Kyou is already extremely strong and mildly superhuman, many people just think his power is that- simply having superhuman characteristics. But in actuality, Kyou's true power is the power to break his and other's own physical traits such as endurance, speed, strength, eyesight, and other concepts or utilities their body has.
This power comes with its downsides, however. Kyou uses his power using his own fighting spirit as 'fuel' to 'burn up' the concept he wants to 'break', or 'burn away' its boundaries. As such, whenever Kyou uses this power, he often burns away his own stamina, forcing him to rest up temporarily before being able to use it again on himself or others. While other people he uses this power on may feel burned out as well, Kyou will take most of the exhaustion, and while he never pushed Balance Breaking to its limits, he feels as if it could be dangerous to his body, and own lifeforce.
Fighting Style:
Kyou 'pretends' to have a style, which in actuality, is just a mixed martial style between 'winging it' and proper martial arts. He calls it the 'Devil Style', style where he combines both the usage of his hands and feet to deal as much damage as possible to the opponent, with the intention of brutalizing them and wearing them down. He has two styles to it:
The Open Palm, where Kyou's strength is halved, and he often uses it against weaker opponents, or when he doesn't want to completely beat them up to an inch of their life, and the Closed Palm, which is the exact opposite to the non-lethal style of the Open Palm- taking the form of a simple clenched fist, in which he uses his full strength to fully break and beat down the enemies to finish fights quickly, or when he is really pissed.
He also seems to possess specific moves to each style, although, most of the time, Kyou completely wings it, and creates new moves on the spot, much to any actual martial artist's dismay of him pretending to know anything of martial arts.
Techniques
Kyou doesn't possess any techniques of note, at least none that work with his power, given the way it works. Despite this, he possesses techniques in each of his styles, that while aren't as powerful as proper techniques, as they're simple and raw martial arts, they still play a role in his worth in the field. However, given the nature of Balance Breaking, perhaps one day he'll push past the current limits of it, perhaps not.
However...There is one. One he always uses. One he never forgot.
'Akuma No Ken.'
A single punch aided by the Closed Palm. That's all there is to it. A punch directed at the person he's using. However...That punch is filled with 'broken balance.', and seems to be shining with his own aura, like a flaming fist. The punch causes massive damage to the enemy, as well as Kyou, depending on the situation. Despite this, this ability was only used so many times, and often, it led to a path of destruction where Kyou used it. Craters, destroyed nearby objects, and a large shockwave.
It's Kyou's single strongest and most trustworthy move- one used when he determines the enemy is strong enough to handle it, and when he wants to deal as most damage as possible in very little time. It is a truly terrifying move...Yet one Kyou doesn't use often, with his hand also being dealt some damage due to the impact, or even breaking sometimes. Despite this, in Kyou's words, 'a true man ain't afraid of losin' a hand to protect people he cares 'bout!'
Three things I'm skeptical of: 1) You add that "other concepts" caveat to your character's breaking ability. I don't like people adding "etc." so you really need to specify what aspects his powers specifically enhance; 2) the drawing of your character looking like a demon. Your character is human and only allowed one power. If you want him to have a demonic form, that would be a second power, which would not be allowed. You can only have one; and 3) you contradict yourself in techniques. "Kyou doesn't possess any techniques of note, at least none that work with his power, given the way it works. Despite this, he possesses techniques..."
Of course I understand and you aren’t quite wrong. It’s just I jokingly said that xDI think that most mafia’s have actual power, and his idea of gangs more or less just fight one another for no reason. I may be wrong though.