Realistic or Modern Riverminster Police: Night Shift Chat Club

[llewelyn]

llewelyn Not entirely sure about Lysandra just yet. Her "seductive nature and southern charm" and "usual, warm personality" contrast heavily with her honestly kinda depressing upbringing, "dark sarcastic humor" and "vulnerability to addiction." I'm not so sure all those go together. If the former two are just a facade she projects, that's OK, but it'll need clarifying in her profile. Also not sure about that "champion sniper" bit that seemingly came out of nowhere.

sorry, i was kinda jumping between a few things. I'll go over it, fix some things up. thanks for letting me know!

 

[llewelyn]

llewelyn Not entirely sure about Lysandra just yet. Her "seductive nature and southern charm" and "usual, warm personality" contrast heavily with her honestly kinda depressing upbringing, "dark sarcastic humor" and "vulnerability to addiction." I'm not so sure all those go together. If the former two are just a facade she projects, that's OK, but it'll need clarifying in her profile. Also not sure about that "champion sniper" bit that seemingly came out of nowhere.

read over it again if possible, i changed a few things to clarify. let me know if anything else seems wonky.

 

[capMARVELOUS]

read over it again if possible, i changed a few things to clarify. let me know if anything else seems wonky.

So her upbringing by Uncle Ronny is what developed her "southern charm," instead of being around her neglectful parents?

 

[llewelyn]

So her upbringing by Uncle Ronny is what developed her "southern charm," instead of being around her neglectful parents?

ronny and the environment itself got her her whole southern charm. she was with her parents half the time, which had the negative impact on her life, ronny the other half.

 

[capMARVELOUS]

ronny and the environment itself got her her whole southern charm. she was with her parents half the time, which had the negative impact on her life, ronny the other half.

It checks out.

 

[myst.erion]

Anybody else pumped as h e c k for this??

 

[capMARVELOUS]

Anybody else pumped as h e c k for this??

Ooh! Ooh! Me! I am!

 

[myst.erion]

Ooh! Ooh! Me! I am!

I honestly cannot wait to see the different dynamics between all these characters~

 

[capMARVELOUS]

I honestly cannot wait to see the different dynamics between all these characters~

This is gonna be so good.

 

[myst.erion]

This is gonna be so good.

agreeeeeed

 

[FireMaiden]

Safety Hammer

 

[Safety Hammer]

Huh

 

[FireMaiden]

Huh

This is the cop thingy I told you about, I was ragging you so you could see if you wanted to join it

 

[Safety Hammer]

This is the cop thingy I told you about, I was ragging you so you could see if you wanted to join it

OOOOOH SHIT!!! I'm gonna make my CS

 

[FireMaiden]

OOOOOH SHIT!!! I'm gonna make my CS

Lol. There's four roles left I think.