grapedrank
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Ooh most definitely!jukeboxingirl90 said:Hi can I make another character? I want to make Catherine's half brother. Although I'm not sure if I can keep him long because well... Let's just say that he's a wicked boy xD
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Ooh most definitely!jukeboxingirl90 said:Hi can I make another character? I want to make Catherine's half brother. Although I'm not sure if I can keep him long because well... Let's just say that he's a wicked boy xD
He's accepted, you're very detailed in your writing which is a good trait to have, however I've noticed several spelling/grammar issues in your posts, do you need someone to beta/go over your posts before you post them? It'll help you with being in this roleplay a lot and help your writing, and I would gladly help out should you want it.jukeboxingirl90 said:
Name: Clear Clairvoyance
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Sexuality: bisexual, although after all this years Clear just had his affection on his half sister.
Social Class: Poor / Rags
Personality:
Most people seen Clear as a kind and active young man. He lived with his father all his life (or, he liked to call the man in private, mother), helped him running a food shop which sold breads, cheese, and some dried foods (mostly dried fruits and vegetables, and sometimes meat). He was told by many people that he resembled his father. A lot. From their eyes, hair, and even to their slim but lean posture. If those people had known any better then, the father and son was more alike in personality. They knew that their beauty was one of their useful assets, so they made sure they always cleaned themself (well, as clean as rags could achieve) then made sure people was interested in them enough to be lured to buy at their shop. Sometime they also helped others with free breads or dried fruits. Actually although it was part from their act of generosity , it was more because they must made friends in this area if they wanted to survive. And although both of them opposed any acts of violence, they didn't mind of thievery. In fact, that was their side job. But they just stole petty things though, like few coins from nobles passing nearby or some foods from carriage. And there was one trait that got them often agree with each other, and that was their obsession for the object of their own affection. Clear would do anything to get closer, or even just get a glimpse of her, just as his father to him. Close friends meant nothing to him if Clear could use them to get him into her arms.
Background:
Born from the affair of Lilia von de Carlais and Noir Leisa Clairvoyance, he spend the first two years of his life in de Carlais Manor, at the insistence of the woman who gave birth to him (his father just called that woman 'mother' in front of her presence or in a mocking tone). He didn't remember that time of his life, him being just a babe at that time, but strangely he remembered a girl with flowing blond hair and piercing blue eyes. All too well in fact. So he was grateful when he was kicked out of his house, Lilia von de Carlais also slipped a painting of the girl. It was the best thing that woman gave to him, even that include his own life. His father delicately placed the painting in front of his bed, so Clear could see her in his awoke and his sleep. And he did, gazing adoringly at those eyes in the painting everyday.
No long after he moved from the Manor to the lowtown, Clear learned that her name was Catherine von de Carlais, none other than his own half-sister. That fact made him happy at first, knowing that they were related, so they were supposed to be close. One day in his fifth birthday he admit it to his father who agreed with a soft laugh, then scoffed and said that they certainly would be had that Lady Lilia was gone. At first he was confused why his father thought ill of that woman, while she always called him as 'my love'. But as he grew older, he understood. Perfectly.
Most people, be they were nobles or rags, knew the story of intriguing (and quite amusing) love affair of Lilia von de Carlais and Noir Clairvoyance. They thought that both man and woman was so in love that they dared to devied their status difference, even going against Garrett von de Carlais, the cruel and pathetic nobleman. In those love-lorn delusional eyes anyway.
But the truth was far more intriguing. Noir Clairvoyance successfully seduced Lilia in attempt to make her a laugh matter in noble peerages, therefore brought a shame in Carlamnell name, the woman's family. That, and his father really wished that Garrett, the real one Noir really love, would see what a vermin his wife was. That act seemed like a cruel thing to do, but not without a worthy cause. If the Carlamnell family didn't frame him of false attempt at assasination to Leona von de Carlais, or rather, Garrett's mother, his father would be a legal spouse and concubine of the current Head of von de Carlais House. And Garrett would never, ever marry that woman. But the fact that had happened was otherwise.
Yes, the real love affair was happened between Noir Leisa Clairvoyance and Garrett von de Carlais. It was started when they just reached their maturity, years before the wall was build. An innocent heir of prestigous family with a kind smile and kinder eyes and a quick minded orphan who excellent at cook. The love blossomed slowly but growing stronger each day, even at the danger of being caught by anyone from both high town and low town. They met in secret, and sometime Noir even would wear a dress and disguised himself as a woman to avoid accusation, so even at present time their affair was not known by anyone but them self. But when they reached the age of 22, Garrett wanted to make their relationship known. Noir gleefully agreed, thus they seek Garrett's mother, Leona, to have her approval. In truth Leona had known the affair for a long time, and she liked the white haired young man as long as he didn't betray her son.
They would have their bonding ceremony had that incident didn't happened. Carlamnell family was a lower noble who hungry to have more authority, wealth and fame. de Carlais family who had an only son as the heir was a prime target to them. So it was natural that they would do anything to get that 'disgusting, unhonorable' ceremony cancelled. After several attempt, they finally succeed framing Clear's father at the incident that almost took Leona's life. Garrett believed that false act, and the man clearly hurt of his lover. He forbid the young man from seeing his family again. Few months later Garrett and Leila were married, at Carlamnell constant suggestions and pressures. From now on Noir Clairvoyance swore to take his lover back from that woman's grasp and make Carlamnell family regretted for commiting the act.
Even though Clear was not created from his parents's love, he was content because he still can lived until this day to love his sister. Clear would do anything to make her notice him, and eventually love him back.
Strengths/Weaknesses:
Strengths:
- Speed. Clear was used to run to one place to another either delivering foods or running after steal something.
- He able to train his expression and sentences well
- Lockpicking and sneaking
- Noir could use a dagger in a combat, but just for self-defense
Weakness:
- Clear's obsession for Catherine was dangerous for him if he was desperate.
- one-on-one combat. Clear had not enough strength to face a fight. He prefer peace or running.
- If Clear had reached a breaking point, he would explode. He could break anything in front of him. A trait he shared with his dear sister.
Appearance:
Clear's skin was porcelain white, if he did not live in low town and dirtied daily his skin would definitely more beautiful.
Uuh... I think I just create a wrecked family O.o
I like her a lot, loved the pun as well, and she's definitely accepted, however if you don't mind me asking, is there anyway you might be able to add just a few things to her? Her personality doesn't talk about much about her flaws, even if her strengths and weaknesses do. If you could elaborate on those more or add in a few things such as her opinion on the nobles, how she reacts in dangerous situations, if the drought, famine or plague affected her family at all, etc. But she's definitely accepted and you can post anytime you want.lavenderecho said:Name: Philana (Grace) Eros
Age: 22
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Social Class: Rags/Commoner
Personality: Quiet and soft spoken, Philana might be a mere commoner, but her parents have showered her with everything she desired. She has never desired much though, knowing that her family was struggling to pay the most simple of expenses. Although dressed in the drab clothing of a peasant and living on a humble farm, she has the grace and elegance of a noble (which is where her nickname, Grace, comes from). Always looking for the best in others, she is quick to accept and quick to forgive. She is a kindhearted woman who will do anything for her loved ones.
Strengths/Weaknesses:
+ Her skill at horse back riding. Some say she rides as well as/better than most men.
+ Has elegance and poise.
+ She can easily pick out all the good qualities in other people.
- On the other hand, she isn't all that great at finding out the negative traits of others.
- This also makes her very gullible and prone to being harmed.
- Not too street smart, she's been sheltered her whole life.
+- Always positive. Which can go either way.
Background: Grace's parents are farmers, and all three of them live on a cozy little farm where they have chickens, a single cow, and of course, Grace's beloved companion, Zephyr. Zephyr is a stallion Grace spotted at the annual horse auction. Although her love for horses has always been with her, Zephyr was the first thing she ever asked for from her parents, and that was because she saw the poor creature was limping. Unable to watch the brown stallion's suffering, she had begged her father to purchase him for her. And when he did, obtaining a rather good deal due to Zephyr's injury, she brought him home and nursed him back to health. Then when she was sure she was completely healed, she swung herself onto the horse and galloped around the field. Because her parents could not afford Zephyr as well as a saddle, she learned to ride bareback.
Appearance: Grace is slender and willowy, almost bordering on skinny. Shining hair the color of freshly harvested wheat, often braided messily down her back. After all, she doesn't really want to deal with all that hair flying into her mouth when she's riding. Kind green eyes rest over a button nose and pretty pink lips, which are almost always curved into a smile.
I hope you guys can handle all this pundemonium.
So long as it is an NPC then it's fineKattz said:Do you mind if I make quick servant character to my noble character?
No character sheets necessary! She can come in whenever you want her to, but be careful that she doesn't become her own character. The only reason I say no to making a servant character is because this roleplay is meant to be pretty black and white in terms of who is on which side of the wall and the divide in class. Servants are sort of this "gray area" that doesn't really fit well into the dynamics of the roleplay since they are lower class but not nobility yet living in the High Town regardless. I simply think it would make things too complicated, so I would to remember that NPCs are more of a tool to help move plot along and create interactions with your own character and not their own character.grapedrank said:So long as it is an NPC then it's fine
Of course! Although, since we have a prince and a king, make sure your character's last name matches. If I were you, I would message the person who is playing the prince to clear up anything, but that's just my recommendation.xXLostGirlXx said:Do you have space for a princess? If not I can figure something else out.
If you're still interested in roleplaying, so far the characters have all chosen their stances on the announcement that the wall will be torn down and a masquerade was held in which there was an assassination attempt. After that it was announced that peace negotiations would be had and some other events that I have yet to catch up on occurred.BrownBear said:Name: Luis "Naga" Serpiente
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Social Class: Noble/Riches
Personality: Cocky in his abilities and quite the extrovert. When it comes to doing his job though, he is able to put on any role. He even sees it as a game sometimes. He does his best under pressure, and much like sherlock holmes, seems to be able slow time for himself to think.
Background: He is the youngest son of Julius Serpiente, of House Serpiente. They are known for founding the Secret Police for the nobles and for the crown. They investigate, infiltrate, and assassinate mostly. His father is the General. Luis only has the rank of 1st Lt. Luis believes in his family's duty and honor above all else, however tends to slip up on nights that concern intoxication. His weakness is women, and drink. He likes to be secretive to keep an air of mystery to him. Being the youngest of 3 brothers of high rank, he works hard in his missions to surpass them. Being the youngest however, causes him to make more mistakes. He has done well in the field though for the past 4 years. He has gone undercover and assassinated a couple major players in the black market. He sometimes sympathizes with the commoners however. Being the youngest he knows how it feels to be ignored, and placed to the side. Usually when he catches someone he lets them off with a warning if its something not major
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Strengths/Weaknesses: He is large and built, but prefers to be light and quick. He sees every part of the city as a route and calculates it like a game of chess. He knows when to run from a fight. He can free run and blends in well with the crowd. He can be easily distracted with fun or women. He's a gambler.
Appearance: 5'10" 175 pounds
"Are you an angel... or am i just in heaven?"
Please summarize :3
looking foreward to the new face ^w^BrownBear said:So the masquerade is done? Ok... ill try to fit in somehow... thanks for letting me know lol
take your time. sean hasnt been posted as a character yet, but he was the first one i thought up, so im planning on posting his discription soon, though.BrownBear said:Really? Lemme read up on your guy then ill let you know. Rival families sound cool though
Accepted!Nightfang said:I'll just post this... my original disc. for Sean~ Allonsy.
Name: Nefrilink Knave
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Un-Interested
Social Class: Rags
Personality: Nefrilink will never admit anything about his past, if he’ll talk to you at all. Usually he speaks only to his brother, unless it’s necessary to talk to others. Then his speech is riddled with sarcasm and horrible jokes. To the uninitiated his speech patterns seem like a cocky lowtown thief. The initiated hear a voice filled with disguised disdain for others, as well as a cocky low town thief.
He hates fighting, going out in the sunlight, and interacting with people in general. He communicates to people he doesn’t trust through actions, placing some objects in important places or taking them without anyone noticing. Contrariwise, if you have a job for him he's your best friend, just check your pockets every time you meet him. Sean is as elusive as a night mist, a master of legerdemain and stealth, he'll do anything for money from pick-pocketing to assassination, even jail-breaking is on his job description.
He's not without his own redeeming, sometimes social qualities, luckily. Sean hates to see people upset, especially small children. If he sees somebody in true need he'll drop everything, even important missions, to help them. Little children he will also stop to give a treat or a bit of pocket money, it was they who kept his hope up and inspired him to his job, after all. If asked where they got their new toys from, they would always say "the giant raven” or “The ghost-priest.” His other redeeming quality is his abhorrence of corruption. Ironic for a thief, yes, but he believes that if anyone has a job, they should do that job to the best of their ability, thieves should steal, guards should guard, lords should exercise dominion and craftsmen should craft. While it keeps him neutral on most subjects, he’s quick to exercise his own punishment on those he think step out of bounds.
Background: Sean was fifteen when he fled town, having been caught many times filching food as a child, then small trinkets as a teen, he was always punished by a night or two in the barracks. It quickly escalated when he developed a taste for the rush that came when he was on a job, as well as when he discovered he could easily escape his prison if he knew how. What made him flee when he was thirteen, though?
He was on one of his nightly strolls when he overheard an exchange, the details of it never came to light, but he followed one of the men home to discover they were a corrupt lord looking to usurp the throne. The boy did the first thing he could think of- he killed the man. The servants heard, however, and without any evidence he was forced to flee. That was the first bounty he ever had on his head.
Disowned from the Tordjas family and chased out of the high town for his criminal activities, Sean Tordjas, now Nefrilink Knave, developed quite a name for himself as a mercenary thief and assassin. he moved into the steeple of an abandoned church, the owner having died of the plague, and used the draught-dried well as a hiding place for his treasures. A short while after he moved in, the well became a well known wishing well- if you tossed a coin in and voiced your wish aloud, the ghost of old priest would grant it as best he could. Apart from starting this myth, Nefrilink became secluded from others, mistrusting anyone but his brother, who would smuggle supplies out to him and others in need, as well as provide hiding places while Nef’ was in high town.
Strengths/Weaknesses:
+Stealthy
+Master of sleight of hand
+Connected to a powerful smuggler
+Skilled escapist
+Keeps a collection of wanted posters, bounty letters and assassin contracts, mostly for him. Some are for others, those he uses as his own contracts.
+/- Escaped most jails already, people don’t keep him imprisoned for long, nor do they want to.
-Known criminal, known haunt
-Compulsive
-Lacks many necessary social skills
-Goes out of his way to help others, whether they trust him or not.
Appearance:
I thought up ten puns to find which one would fit... no pun in ten did.