Puella Magi Madoka Magica-Reboot

the story started. we are all in a different part of the city guarding our respective zones as magic girls. So pick up a keyboard and post your entry.
 
lol nice


i'd love that at my school...me and my friends...it'd be brilliant xD
 
on top of your home >.> infi


hana a stalker... she wants Rei's goodies...


YOU CANNOT HAVE REI's GAMEBOY... it is hers...@technavslol
 
Alright wasn't sure...so Kasumi has two people to deal with xD
 
And here Kasumi thought she'd catch a break only finding a sleeping Rei xD


 
Oohhh, Unyie, Rei should have a video game stash at Kasumi's lol
 
Hey Everyone.


I'm sorry to say I will not be participating in this roleplay. I'd love to follow and read this, and maybe later join, but I don't have spare time to do this roleplay. You can still PM me with any questions or concerns. -AeRo
 
@Technavslol The way to write longer posts, is to think about the surroundings. Or what your character is thinking. Notice in my recent post that my first paragraph was completely Kasumi waking up, trying to figure what was going on. Then I put her response to Rei's crying. Don't just put what happened. To write longer posts, you want to make things real, more or less. Just describe their actions more.


Don't do this;


Kara walked down the street then fell twisting her ankle.


Try this;


As Kara walked down the dirty street, doing her best not to stumble, she cried out in pain when she tripped over a glass bottle, twisting her ankle painfully in the process.





Does that makes sense?
 
@Technavslol


I always write what my character is thinking in great detail. and i describe there actions and add other stuff. Sometimes when im writting i almost slip into the first person lol


thats how i end up writing all these words >.>


@everyone


since Aero is too busy


lets plan out how we will push this RP forward.


I say


we create a Wrath for each person that everyone chases to some center point. Then the Wrath fuses creating a super wrath and revealing that there is a bigger villain around. This will give us 4/5 an incentive to meet up.
 

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