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Fandom Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: War Of Zodarus

I got you Riolux.


This is the general sheet we've been following so far @cubone-blaster-gaster, but you can omit some of the lower things, or add things if you want. Riolux said there wasn't a set format for the CS, as long as it could be read, but here's the general CS from last time we had this RP. 


CS according to LittleLoon:


The Essentials:


Name:


Age:


Gender:


Species:


Faction:


Alignment: (Eg; Chaotic Good, True Neutral, Lawful Evil, etc.)


Fatal Flaw: (Note from me: Your character's absolute worst -but not necessarily negative- quality, the one which causes the most regresses in their life. This is not something that should fade away with time; consider it a 'core' characteristic of sorts, a fundamental part of their personality.)


Saving Grace: (Your character's absolute best -but not necessarily positive- quality, the one which causes the most progress in their life. This is not something that should fade away with time; consider it a 'core' characteristic of sorts, a fundamental part of their personality.)


Appearance:


Fighting style:


Personality and/or Writing example: (Note from my brother on writing example: Now this one might seem kind of weird but hear me out. I think it's better to write an example of your character doing something rather than describe their personality because a) we tend to change it anyways through development or not b) it shows us how they actually think and stuff c) I can see how you write and if you can portray your characters traits in actual writing versus telling me how they're like. Don't give too much description to the setting, we mostly want to see how your characters acts/thinks/etc.)


History:


The Extra:


Likes:


Dislikes:


Talents:


Hobbies:


Fears:


Crushes:


Orientation:


Theme Song:


Other:
 
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Name: lord iren blad


 


Age: 20


 


Gender: male


 


Species: aegislash


 


Faction: darkrai 


 


Alignment: lawful evil


 


 


 


Fatal Flaw: his pride: though a warrior of honour, he boasts his superiority and believes that he, is among better then others especially those of the opposite gender, believing that females should be on the ground while males should do as he commands, that's just the thing...he is an aegis lash after all.


 


Saving Grace: his honor: as stated he is a warrior,  so his honor comes to play especially to darkrai, if you help him out or treat him with respect, he will fight by you're side and protect you the best of his abilities. This does however present to awkward moments...especially as he is apart of such a dark group.


 


Appearance: http://orig04.deviantart.net/0797/f/2013/311/a/4/shiny_aegislash_global_link_art_by_trainerparshen-d6te1gq.png


 


Fighting style: using his shield he performs the powerful king shield, enabling to block all incoming attacks, though this means he must attack soon through dear his shield will break. His sword seems to imbued the power to shadow sneak behind his opponents, to gain a power so sacred that it grows in strength and enable him to increase in the number of strikes after performing his sword dance. 


 


Personality and/or Writing example: the roaming sword and shield floated through a forest, noting some straggling pokemon being attacked, he rushed to action the sword throwing his shield to activate the strength to block an attack from the ursaring slash attack, as it proceeded to shoot over pointing his sword to strike the beast with his sacred sword attack, this....scared the bear away. 


 


'hm...coward....how dare it attack other pokemon' the blade turned to the wounded pokemon, and went to go closer...however they mearly ran, knowing he was of darkrai's faction. "Sigh....alone again..." he begun to float off. 


 


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The Extra:


 


 


 


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Theme Song:


 


Other:
 
@cubone-blaster-gaster I don't mean to offend, but the alignment doesn't seem to match up with any part of their personality except maybe their fatal flaw and you don't have to be evil to be prideful and bossy or even chauvinistic. You can have any person be like that. There's also the fact that Iren simply doesn't seem to have the personality trait that someone such as Darkrai would look for as he seems social and honorable while most of Darkrai's Servants are loners and liars, including my own (ex-)Servant of Darkrai.  Also there's an inconsistency with grammar that sort of throws me off. You're willing to show the proper capitalization when it comes to character dialogue, but nowhere else. Not even in the same writing sample. While this makes me sure that you DO know how to do so, I would appreciate it if you did so with the rest of the CS and during the roleplay, capitalizing names and species. Overall, it's a very nice start, but could use some refinement and possibly a shift in Faction as Darkrai probably wouldn't be the one who'd bring him to Zodarus. His code of honor would definitely land him with Pokemon seeking Followers or with Zekrom, as they are considered good-aligned, which would seem to fit him better. 


@Thanatoaster I have no problem with having Gen 7 Pokemon though I do not plan on changing the Legendary Pokemon leading factions unless there's a large demand for it.
 
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@Thanatoaster, you got anything? Sorry, but its just me and Riolux right now in the RP. I don't know about Taykillz, but he hasn't responded recently.

Life got busy. I'm also mulling over ideas and don't know which one to go with. My sense of time is also pretty skewed, so I kinda don't realize how long something's been often. Whoops. (It feels like maybe 3 days when it has in fact been over a week. ._. )
 
Name: Avonmora James Nugrnt


Age: 18


Gender: male


Species: fralagator


Faction: kyoger


Alignment: true neutral


Fatal Flaw:


Avon is crippled from an earlier accident during the first month of his summoning. Almost all of his left leg is gone leading him to be unable to fight well out of water and is a constent reminder for himself about being cocky.


Saving Grace: 


Being unable to walk lead him to become an extremely good tactician. He is often credited by his men as the reason they win battle after battle.


Appearance: 7f7d48d5ed6084c93ce3fae9762070707c877d88_hq.jpg


Fighting style: in tbe water he prefers to grapple and drown non water breathers but on land he is almost helpless besides his long range attacks due to a missing leg.


Personality and/or Writing example:


A rush of wind sweeps across a beach where forces of Kyoger are fighting Groudon over a landing strip that would give the water born troops a fighting edge farther inland. Avon roars and smashes his sheild into a rival Pokemon sending him flying back. Thos had been going on four four hours now with each side momentary pushing the other ones back before the loading side would get reinforced. Avon smiles as the final part of his plan comes into play. Above them several skarmary and swellows get into a tight V-shape and all preform brave bird and swoop down on the Groudon forces brakeing them and forceing them to run. The Kyoger forces begin to cheer not seeing up on thr ledge the leader of forces they defeated chargeing up a Hyper beam before it was to late. The area erupted into panic as the beam tore the beach up and any pokemon caught in tbe path simply vanished. Avon himself saw the world faide to black after it hit him. After a few days Avon woke up in a tent with the remains of his forces, the chancee that saw him wake up informed him of the loss of his leg... And the end of his career as a front line fighter


Likes: oranberries. Apples, Meat, cheese


Dislikes: walking long distances


Talents: cooking


Hobbies: cooking, writeing


Fears: any type of light beam attacks


Crushes: no one currently


Orientation: straight


Theme Song: team away grunt intro. Team skull intro
 
@Truthblade It's mostly for identification. I mean it'd get pretty confusing if the Legendary Pokemon didn't do something to help identify their "soldiers". It'd be that or to specifically pick a certain Type and I'm sure they're smarter than to do something that could put them at such a possibly severe disadvantage. 
 
@Riolux



God, it's been a while, wasn't it? A year and a half? I'm surprised to see this still running, and would like to try joining again if possible. Will probably revise my old OCs because...*shudders* I'm scared of what I came up with. 


May the cringe begin. @ V @

 I also cannot BELIEVE you guys are still using my old CS template
 
@LittleLoon


Hiya! Glad to see you again! And honestly it's barely running. It's down to...well...two people. Me and Runesage. Also heck yeah! Your Template's awesome!
 
@Riolux


Mayhaps a reboot is in order then? ^ ^"


Still surprised to see it still running at all though. And thanks!


Glad to see ya as well!
 

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