Fantasy OOC

[Blackrose7]

Just think about what your character is doing at the orientation before Tempest arrived, since they could be doing something else.
Once Tempest arrived, you can run, help the injured, or fight. Also since there is no personality in the cs, you can create them what you want them to be like.
Coffeepot Giraffe

 

[Coffeepot Giraffe]

Blackrose7 alright, but I think I'll sign off for now.

 

[Blackrose7]

Ok.
Coffeepot Giraffe

 

[Kyrenka]

Just posted! Did my best to proofread, but if you guys catch anything I missed let me know!

 

[Deathkitten]

Coffeepot Giraffe It's totally awesome. I'm happy that you're trying. That's the important thing. I don't think you're a bad writer, but you can use this as an opportunity to get better!

 

[Deathkitten]

Kyrenka I like your post from what I glanced at! Haven't fully read it yet though.

 

[Blackrose7]

I agree with kinadra, since you just need some help with what you are doing in the post.
Coffeepot Giraffe

 

[elextrified]

everyone’s trying to fight while my character is standing there admiring the bad guy like an idiot

someone go get my boy

 

[Deathkitten]

XDDD

 

[Blackrose7]

Serena isn't fighting.
elextrified

 

[elextrified]

she’s not idly standing so i’d say she’s a winner in my book Blackrose7

 

[Blackrose7]

Serena is trying to get the injured to the nurse office, since everybody else is distracting the villain.
elextrified

 

[elextrified]

yes.. i read,

if you wanna shoot a portal up underneath my boy that’d be great ;^;

 

[Blackrose7]

Well, I would if Serena wasn't doing a ritual spell here, since this is the first time that she is using a long distance portal spell.
Snap- Close portal
Channeling- Area portal: She needs to see it in order to do that.
Ritual- A long distance portal: Can't see it, but knows where it is.
elextrified

 

[Kyrenka]

yes.. i read,

if you wanna shoot a portal up underneath my boy that’d be great ;^;

Eh don't worry, mortal wounds build character.
shoves Taylor into battle with no weapons as he pleads for mercy

 

[Blackrose7]

Crawl Zephyr crawl by using your hands, since Serena can't be interrupted during the ritual portal spell.
elextrified

 

[elextrified]

oh snap
well
guess when he gets his ass kicked he’ll be thrown in that pile anyways Blackrose7

Ppffffttttt lmfao
If Taylor was to bleed out, could he shove his blood back into his body? Cause that’d be lit Kyrenka

 

[Blackrose7]

Yep, and Serena will ignore it, since she is trying to focus on her ritual portal spell, because she really wanted to help them with that portal. <- Her first ritual portal spell needs to be perfect for their sake.
elextrified

 

[Kyrenka]

oh snap
well
guess when he gets his ass kicked he’ll be thrown in that pile anyways Blackrose7

Ppffffttttt lmfao
If Taylor was to bleed out, could he shove his blood back into his body? Cause that’d be lit Kyrenka

Nah he can't. Once the blood is out of the body it's exposed to ~germs~ and stuff, so it wouldn't be a good idea to put it directly into his bloodstream. It would be pretty cool though.

Gently pets Taylor as he bleeds out. "Don't worry, what doesn't kill you makes you stronger!"

I'm such a great OC mom.

 

[Blackrose7]

True, and after the ritual portal spell is opened. She will throw all of the injured into the portal, and quickly find any injured that she might have missed.
Serena: "Nobody is getting left behind."
elextrified Kyrenka

 

[Deathkitten]

People can die in this first encounter! No worries though. They won't stay dead if that happens. ^w^

 

[Kyrenka]

People can die in this first encounter! No worries though. They won't stay dead if that happens. ^w^

OH BOY

 

[Blackrose7]

How are they going to come back?
Deathkitten

 

[Deathkitten]

Blackrose7 Like nothing even happened. ;p

 

[Kyrenka]

How are they going to come back?
Deathkitten

With the power of ~Plot Holes~