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Fantasy OOC

Nope, nope, nope, nope, nope. I don't want to see a one paragraph in my post. I want to have more things to write about, and kinadra won't like that at all.
 
As Serena was about to leave with Chiara and Ariella, she then noticed that James brought someone back with him, so she just smiled at En. "I guess you don't need to follow me now, for your guide is back, Chiara." said Serena. "Also hiya. Do you want to hang out with us, as we are going to head towards the cafeteria." Serena was talking to En, because she figured out that James left them to go help En for some reason. 'So the guide left to go help this boy out. How interesting.' thought Serena, since she was a bit curious here. <- Because I have to take this out. If I take it out it will be a one paragraph.
 
As Serena was about to leave with Chiara and Ariella, she then noticed that James brought someone back with him, so she just smiled at En. "I guess you don't need to follow me now, for your guide is back, Chiara." said Serena. "Also hiya. Do you want to hang out with us, as we are going to head towards the cafeteria." Serena was talking to En, because she figured out that James left them to go help En for some reason. 'So the guide left to go help this boy out. How interesting.' thought Serena, since she was a bit curious here. <- Because I have to take this out. If I take it out it will be a one paragraph.

Right. You take it out.. and then you rewrite it to have your character address the person that actually showed up. Bam. Two paragraphs again. /:
 
Okay, not following this super well cuz I'm really tired, so I don't know who this would be... Whichever side has fewer people that need to change their post should be the side that changes their post.

There. I've decreed. -flops again-
 

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