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Fandom [OOC] Naruto - Trials of the Forgotten

For any of you who use Discord, I've got a discord set up. While currently the only RP related to it is this RP, I plan to use the Discord for any potential future RPs I make, as well as keep it open for players from any RP that comes to an end so that they can have an easy means of connecting with one another even after all's been said and done with the RP in question. If you're interested, feel free to DM me and I'll send the Discord Invite your way ^~^

Also, with regards to RP so far... We're only three rounds of posts into the RP, but I'd like to get some feedback so far. So what does everyone think so far? Anything you like, dislike, etc.? Any suggestions for my writing style, the way I structure my posts, anything like that?

Human__Ramen Human__Ramen B Billicious Phayne Phayne Uncultured Uncultured The Silent Z The Silent Z Jade Emperor Jade Emperor
 
Hmm... I do have a Discord account due to some RPN pals who got me to join and when we don't have our Rps we are in together active, we chat there from time to time. So I do have one yes, I wouldn't mind a invite though to join another server. ^^ Sounds like a good idea of yours imo.

As for the Rp itself... Since I'm still getting together how I'll write for Zî and piecing together his history/personality with relevance to the plot and scenes, I'm not sure I'd be the best to offer much advice here since its early and we are all possibly getting a feel for everything. But with that said I'm liking the Rp and what you've been doing so far, nicely threw off Zî and allowed for a semi or partially in small form, comical inner scene with himself and being over thinking the entire scrolls presence. Haha

Kiyoko Tomoe Kiyoko Tomoe
 
For any of you who use Discord, I've got a discord set up. While currently the only RP related to it is this RP, I plan to use the Discord for any potential future RPs I make, as well as keep it open for players from any RP that comes to an end so that they can have an easy means of connecting with one another even after all's been said and done with the RP in question. If you're interested, feel free to DM me and I'll send the Discord Invite your way ^~^

Also, with regards to RP so far... We're only three rounds of posts into the RP, but I'd like to get some feedback so far. So what does everyone think so far? Anything you like, dislike, etc.? Any suggestions for my writing style, the way I structure my posts, anything like that?

Human__Ramen Human__Ramen B Billicious Phayne Phayne Uncultured Uncultured The Silent Z The Silent Z Jade Emperor Jade Emperor

I think that you've been a great GM so far. I do like the scripted story style as an intro to the RP, however I think to foster interactions, at some point the strings should be detached a little to give people the opportunity to freelance more. This is a great way to get the ball rolling and I appreciate how much effort you've put into this, especially because you dont really have a character of your own so being invested in this has to be a little tough for you.

Maybe have a main thread for the scripted story style where we have the main story like what we have now and a second thread for more of a "slice of life" chill out and interact in character thread/training with the squad thread. I've been in a couple like that and it can work so long as the chronology doesn't get twisted.

At the end of the day though these areall just brainstorm suggestions, I am down to continue the story as is if you want to keep it like it is now.
 
Kiyoko Tomoe Kiyoko Tomoe I'll go next for J2 so long as he fights Hina cause hes bent on that. Also B Billicious if you want I can just post up next or Jade Emperor Jade Emperor can of you are busy & dont really want to do a reaction post, if you do want to do that post than by all means go for it and I'll just kick back and keep the keyboard warm for when you post.
 
Kiyoko Tomoe Kiyoko Tomoe I'll go next for J2 so long as he fights Hina cause hes bent on that. Also B Billicious if you want I can just post up next or Jade Emperor Jade Emperor can of you are busy & dont really want to do a reaction post, if you do want to do that post than by all means go for it and I'll just kick back and keep the keyboard warm for when you post.
Ye I thought i said id put one up, but part of my reply requires what park would say, so I was waiting till bill put his post up
 
Jade Emperor Jade Emperor

Jin called out Kiro but you know who he wants to fight. So Kiro can either deflect and pass the fight to you or I can have him get emotional because Jin's talking big and jump into the fight because "whatever I'm the best I'll just beat both of them" lol.
 
Jade Emperor Jade Emperor

Jin called out Kiro but you know who he wants to fight. So Kiro can either deflect and pass the fight to you or I can have him get emotional because Jin's talking big and jump into the fight because "whatever I'm the best I'll just beat both of them" lol.
Ah shoot

Well my post was originally gonna have Hiro just jump in and declare that she was gonna fight, idk how to go with this now tho. The time between the talking wouldn't match Hiros reaction, so I'd have to stop waiting for parks reaction. So it's really depend on kiro. If he wants to deflect he can, but if he choses to fight then things might get tense between the two. But not Hiro she'd give in as long as he left her someone to beat up, so either one works ig?
Uncultured Uncultured B Billicious
 
Ah shoot

Well my post was originally gonna have Hiro just jump in and declare that she was gonna fight, idk how to go with this now tho. The time between the talking wouldn't match Hiros reaction, so I'd have to stop waiting for parks reaction. So it's really depend on kiro. If he wants to deflect he can, but if he choses to fight then things might get tense between the two. But not Hiro she'd give in as long as he left her someone to beat up, so either one works ig?
Uncultured Uncultured B Billicious

Kiro dodged Jins challenge so it's all you Jade.
 
It looks like one move was overlooked by Kimito Kiyoko Tomoe Kiyoko Tomoe pointing out case I'm missing something or it was accidentally overlooked and could effect the post. Besides the Paralysis Technique and side strike at the knee there was a following spin and repositioning to attempt a kick toward the back to help set up the kunai attempts at the back of the each knee.
 
It looks like one move was overlooked by Kimito Kiyoko Tomoe Kiyoko Tomoe pointing out case I'm missing something or it was accidentally overlooked and could effect the post. Besides the Paralysis Technique and side strike at the knee there was a following spin and repositioning to attempt a kick toward the back to help set up the kunai attempts at the back of the each knee.
Right, I'll edit it into the post so that everything's covered.
 
The Silent Z The Silent Z Uncultured Uncultured Phayne Phayne Human__Ramen Human__Ramen Jade Emperor Jade Emperor B Billicious

I'll be giving you all some time to do some free roaming and free interactions as part of the in-RP day. During this time, I'll be placing NPCs in and out of the areas that characters are in, in order to give potential interaction opportunities with the NPC characters. If you want, you may also actively seek out (and thus find) Jin, Kira, Hina, Kimito, Shizuka, and/or Kuroh, whom, aside from Hina and Kimito who'll be at the Kouen residence, will all be found at Sparring Field 1, the academy, or somewhere in the nearby area.
 
Oh, by the way, hope you don't mind the way things went with Kimito vs Zi. Was a sort of dirty thing for Kimito to do, to be quite honest :x
Nah it's fine haha. Actually the post kinda surprised me and was pretty good, I just noticed I forgot to mention the body Flicker jutsu besides describing it. Plus a few typos in my last post. Haha. But your post was fine with me! ^^
 
Nah it's fine haha. Actually the post kinda surprised me and was pretty good, I just noticed I forgot to mention the body Flicker jutsu besides describing it. Plus a few typos in my last post. Haha. But your post was fine with me! ^^
I think Kimito was the best opponent for Zi, as it put Zi's specific skill set against an opponent who knew how to both shut out Zi's complex strategy and still not dominate the fight. Shizuka would've just gone straight for Zi like she did with Rengetsu, and Kuroh would've been overly defensive for Zi. Considering the fighting styles of Rengetsu and Yume though, they worked perfectly, as Rengetsu had to work on defending against an opponent whose offense is greater than his high defensive capabilities, while Yume had to try and outdo Kuroh's high defensive capabilities with her offense.
 
I think Kimito was the best opponent for Zi, as it put Zi's specific skill set against an opponent who knew how to both shut out Zi's complex strategy and still not dominate the fight. Shizuka would've just gone straight for Zi like she did with Rengetsu, and Kuroh would've been overly defensive for Zi. Considering the fighting styles of Rengetsu and Yume though, they worked perfectly, as Rengetsu had to work on defending against an opponent whose offense is greater than his high defensive capabilities, while Yume had to try and outdo Kuroh's high defensive capabilities with her offense.
Yeah it definitely looked like you pit the right opponent against each genin. I saw that you put a lot of thinking into the match ups as the battles progressed and Zî experienced a challenge of a sensor and shinobi like Kimito. Tbh character wise it definitely tested Zî quite a bit and he was starting to grow frustrated with his failures and chakra bits, cause he was running out of ways to get past Kimito's sensory of his chakra. He's not big on competing less he has too but also hates when he fails plus the pressure he's got doesn't help. So a great test for him imo too ^^

Kimito surprised me though with the ending! I think Zî is going to take him up on the offer and grow his skill set further with the guys tutelage.
 
Yeah it definitely looked like you pit the right opponent against each genin. I saw that you put a lot of thinking into the match ups as the battles progressed and Zî experienced a challenge of a sensor and shinobi like Kimito. Tbh character wise it definitely tested Zî quite a bit and he was starting to grow frustrated with his failures and chakra bits, cause he was running out of ways to get past Kimito's sensory of his chakra. He's not big on competing less he has too but also hates when he fails plus the pressure he's got doesn't help. So a great test for him imo too ^^

Kimito surprised me though with the ending! I think Zî is going to take him up on the offer and grow his skill set further with the guys tutelage.
The thing I love most about being a part of an RP is getting to put other players' characters in a position that'll either make or break the character in a literal sense. When a character is pushed hard by something polar opposite to what they intend to do, it brings out either the best or the worst in that character; sometimes even both.
 
The thing I love most about being a part of an RP is getting to put other players' characters in a position that'll either make or break the character in a literal sense. When a character is pushed hard by something polar opposite to what they intend to do, it brings out either the best or the worst in that character; sometimes even both.
Yeah it's definitely a cool aspect to it all!
 
Kiyoko Tomoe Kiyoko Tomoe So during the fight, I've noticed that Kuroh's whole shtick is summoning jutsus. Does this mean Kuroh is good with Senjutsu? And if so, can Yume ask him to help her enhance her capability with Senjutsu?
 

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