OOC Discussion

@Gus


So

not only humanity is doomed, but solar system and probably the universe as well since Aaron is basically a star-devourer now.
 
I sort of pictured eating the sun as being lethal to Aaron as well, but I suppose he could just become and endlessly hungry sentient singularity with the power to teleport... It would take a few billion years to ear them all, but yeah, that prompt could be interpreted as the birth of Galactus.


Generally though, my head cannon is that his gravitational effects only go out of control if he dies (and maybe not even then) so I think only earth is doomed. Bright side: if you stay away from the zombies long enough you get to freeze to death, which I hear is an ok way to go. Bad news for the zombies though: if cold won't kill them, they are going to be hungry a long, long time.


@ViAdvena
 
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[QUOTE="St Indigo]lol, r.i.p character roster, you'd get 50 characters a day.

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But then you'd be required to write posts for all of them regularly enough that welian doesn't have them piano'd.


Captain Hesperus
 
[QUOTE="St Indigo]lol, r.i.p character roster, you'd get 50 characters a day.

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Worth it to see you crank em out IN ADDITION to the fifty thousand words a day minimum just to make E ranks. For fifty B ranks, 200,000 words.


Bring it. I will never need to pay for entertainment ever again
 
[QUOTE="Captain Hesperus]But then you'd be required to write posts for all of them regularly enough that welian doesn't have them piano'd.
Captain Hesperus

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Also that.
 
Gus said:
Also that.
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And for illustration of what 'being piano'd' means:


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Captain Hesperus
 
ViAdvena said:
But if the sun no longer exist, what will become planets that revolve around it?
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Mass is still there, so there is still gravity, just no light.
 
Right now, @Teh Frixz character is, according to Danny only seconds away from time in a darkened room with a video camera and McNabb's genitals. This could be followed by neck-snapping. Only Victoria can save her!


Captain Hesperus
 
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Hey now. McNabb gave her his coat. Danny was the one with a camera. :P


Edit: some old weird guys are nice.


(And some are nanites wearing a dead body... BUT STILL NICE!)
 
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I am guessing the neck snap was a reference to "Feedback"?


But I was thinking Welian was maybe referring to party in cia collab


Fingers crossed we get to see that posted later today?
 
Gus said:
Mass is still there, so there is still gravity, just no light.
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Ooh

I thought Aaron literally eat it, like, engulfing the whole mass. So wait, you mean he devour the source of energy? And there's really no light? Not even from white dwarf? So Aaron speed up the sun's life cycle from 12 billion years to several minutes? o_O *mindblown*
Gus said:
Fingers crossed we get to see that posted later today?
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Mmaaaaybe *goes back to collab*
 
ViAdvena said:
Ooh
I thought Aaron literally eat it, like, engulfing the whole mass. So wait, you mean he devour the source of energy? And there's really no light? Not even from white dwarf? So Aaron speed up the sun's life cycle from 12 billion years to several minutes? o_O *mindblown*
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If a primordial black hole ran into the sun, an accretion disk would form around it due to conservation of angular momentum as the black hole's gravity pulled the sun's mass into itself. The tidal forces and friction in the disk would actually cause it to get hot enough to emit hard radiation. However, due to the small size, I am pretty sure it would not make a huge difference to the total energy output. Just like an arc welder is super hot, but is too small to heat the whole room, you know? Eventually, over weeks or months or even years, all of the sun's matter would be pulled into the black hole and incorporated into its mass. What you would have at the end would be a black hole with an event horizon about the size of Manhattan. The planetary orbits would still be stable, because Aaron (our primordial black hole proxy in this example) only has the mass of Saturn, which is a negligible increase in the total mass of the solar system. All light would be cut off (though it is possible that some form of fusion would continue?) because all of the sun's mass would be compacted so tightly that the escape velocity would be too high for light to leave it. So everything would freeze, since the average temperature of space is about 4 kelvin. (Geothermal heat would allow some forms of life to continue for a billion more years or so.) The upshot is, no, Aaron definitely could not eat the sun in a matter of minutes. Totally blew through physics for dramatic purposes and fast forwarded to the end result. Because having Jordan do exposition about how they were all screwed in a year or two, with math and diagrams didn't seem fun to write. I did allow for 8 minutes travel time for him to get there and 8 minutes more for the light to die, because fun fact: it takes 8 minutes for the light from the sun to reach earth. If Aaron eats the sun right now (silly concept!) we would not see the dying of the light for 8 minutes. Probes around Neptune wouldn't see the sun die for almost 4 hours. So yes. Major plot hole. However, the takeaway is this: In universe there ARE forces more powerful than those of mere physics. Dramatic conventions rule all.

ViAdvena said:
Mmaaaaybe *goes back to collab*
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YAY! Write all the writing!


So excited!
 
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As an aside, I'd imagine the 'endpoint' of Danny's energy absorption power would be the ability to start directly siphoning sunlight. He'd essentially become a shadow as he absorbed all the light that struck his body, massively amplifying his strength.


Captain Hesperus
 
A giant space shadow traveling the galaxies swallowing up energy only to be stopped by a rag tag team of alien mercenaries and scientists.


In a lot of these scenarios, Penny will have work cut out for her. People need energy.
 
SUMNER, C

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I literally do not care how long It takes her to learn how to wield it, but she better learn how to wield a badass Urumi or fucking Meteor Hammer.


Just imagine your casual teen, walking the street, about to get mugged, and she fucking pulls out a Meteor hammer out of thin air and cracks some skulls with that shit.


Beautiful.


@RemainingQuestions
 
Annnyywwayy, Critique shit!


I really like the concept and Codename personally, It's a fairly unique power without being overly niche so I think It's pretty cool!


The overall template of the character is nice, but could maybe use some further elaboration and detail?


Just to add some meat to her traits and fully flesh them out.


For her Biography, would you be able to add detail on the friends plotting against her and everything?


Such as what they did, why they did It and everything.


It just seems a little bit barebones for such a key aspect of shaping who she is.


Overall, I think she's got a neat concept and I love the character!


Though, It could use some more meat on it; Especially in regards to her Trait descriptions and her friends betraying her and everything.


Other than those two bits, I like it!


@RemainingQuestions


P.S {PERSONAL TWO CENTS BIT HERE, NOT OFFICAL CRITIQUE OR ANYTHING}


I think It would give her a bit more diversity and interest in her powers without having the need to rank up her ranking by adding the Secondary ability of being capable of summoning Medieval armour's and such for protection?


Think that would make her even neater whilst also beefing up her abilities versatility slightly?


Not needed at all, however, just think It would be cool!


@RemainingQuestions
 
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P.S {PERSONAL TWO CENTS BIT HERE, NOT OFFICAL CRITIQUE OR ANYTHING}


I think It would give her a bit more diversity and interest in her powers without having the need to rank up her ranking by adding the Secondary ability of being capable of summoning Medieval armour's and such for protection?


Think that would make her even neater whilst also beefing up her abilities versatility slightly?


Not needed at all, however, just think It would be cool!


@RemainingQuestions
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For the history, I was afraid of going into too many details about this whole group of people that are all mostly irrelevant, but fleshing the characteristics is something that still needs doing, yes. It's the standard high school drama, but at a very pivotal time in her life, so the timing was really more important than the actual act of betrayal.


For adding the ability to summon armor, I purposefully didn't add that, because it would give her a big opening, and also, she'd need to take her shirt of to ensure skin to armor contact at all times. That...that might actually be a funny pay off.


Also, those weapons are the reason she would be constantly in hospital. Maybe eventually. They really are super cool.
 
Got spoilered that one of my favourite character dies in the LN. Cannot sleep, heart is broken to pieces. So I decided to write the write the prompt to cure my sadnesses

The supervillain is S ranked, with his limiter broken and with an dangerous superpower: Quake.


For a B rank, fresh graduate like her, his file that is filled with criminal doings and horrible things he can do with his power screamed more death than every single death metal music combined.


But she still has to do it. She's the only who can stop him.


Not like she's special or anything but because she's the only one available right now.


So she donned her super suit, one given to her the day she graduated. A protective combat suit, like ones that usually appear in Hollywood sci-fi movies. Equipped with a stun gun strapped on her waist, she entered the police station that the villain hold hostage.


The initial report of the criminal wearing a 'funny looking suit' is obviously very wrong. She's staring at a top quality super suit. Thick plating, heavy armor, scary looking gloves and intimidating mask.


"Hi?" Mitch meekly greeted him. "Uh I am sent to speak with you."


"You? Fresh meat?" The villain laughs as he make his way to approach her. The closer he gets, the more she realize how BIG he really is. Twice her body size.


"No please stop right there I don't know what will happen next if you don't- Uwahh!" Mitch shierked, as the villain grabbed her hand and easily picked her off the ground.


“Either you let me go, or I bring the place down on us.” Mitch warned.


“You just said you can’t control your powers.” The villain mocked.


“Exactly.” After reading all the horrible things he can do with his power, it was hard for her to think of a 'safe' way to defeat him. One that doesn't involve broken bones or destroyed inner organs. The sound of metal clanking is her first sign of success. It surprises the villain so much that he let her go, but Mitch did not stop.


Quake. Shatter his armor.


And the his power, which she copied, did exactly like so. His suit, powerful and strong, shattered into pieces. The vhalf naked villain's jaw dropped, and before he could say another word Mitch shot him in the chest with her stun gun. He dropped to the ground and she could hear a loud crack.


What was it?


She didn't accidentally break his bone, right? She stares at the villain, and afteraking sure it did not come from him, looks around.


It was as if the building was shook by a brief but powerful earthquake. The tables and chairs are thrown everywhere, the floor cracks open and the ceiling looked like it's about to collapse.


"Borrower here," Mitch reported to the police waiting in front. "Villain secured. And please don't send me the bills."
 
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