OOC Discussion

[crackedbat]

@readingraebow


Oh, wow, you really did deliver on this one. I think you explained her powers really well - on that note, pretty interesting! I don't know if I've personally seen a character that utilizes traveling through tree roots, hah. I dunno what to say besides I love her! Her family history/relatives make her feel a lot more fleshed out and easier to get a grasp on, if that makes sense. Awesome sheet as far as I can tell.


One thing - and you don't have to answer if you don't want to - did Laurel have a surrogate mother, or was it a 'natural' birth (for me forgetting a probably more fitting term)?


Maybe one more, and maybe you answered this before: why'd she dye her hair green if she's not very interested in using her powers? For self-confidence? Fresh start at Aegis? Haha. Or maybe just family encouraging her to take pride in it?


edit: Oh, duh. Something I overlooked: I think being able to carry objects through roots should be delegated to the secondary powers section as well.

 

[simj26]

why'd she dye her hair

main character hair colour syndrome, duh.

 

[call me rae]

@readingraebow
Oh, wow, you really did deliver on this one. I think you explained her powers really well - on that note, pretty interesting! I don't know if I've personally seen a character that utilizes traveling through tree roots, hah. I dunno what to say besides I love her! Her family history/relatives make her feel a lot more fleshed out and easier to get a grasp on, if that makes sense. Awesome sheet as far as I can tell.


One thing - and you don't have to answer if you don't want to - did Laurel have a surrogate mother, or was it a 'natural' birth (for me forgetting a probably more fitting term)?


Maybe one more, and maybe you answered this before: why'd she dye her hair green if she's not very interested in using her powers? For self-confidence? Fresh start at Aegis? Haha. Or maybe just family encouraging her to take pride in it?


edit: Oh, duh. Something I overlooked: I think being able to carry objects through roots should be delegated to the secondary powers section as well.

Lol it was a natural birth, her MaDa has essentially a simplistic version of shapeshifting. He can mimic the appearance of other people - by which he changes his body entirely. So I guess it could be technically both - as he would have appeared to be a different person throughout the pregnancy.


And the hair is more because her MaDa had a thing about matching her appearance to her powers ( her other siblings all have to dye their hair similar elemental colors ). Laurel likes the color and honestly it wasn't worth trying to argue about it.


EDIT - thanks for the tip! I'll move the Transportation in a sec. Heading home now so got to close my work station.

 

[Dano]

@readingraebow - I like the overall feel of your character, the powers seem a bit odd. The teleportation thing with the roots is interesting, and in a city such as Baltimore, I'm not sure how many trees would be readily available for you to use?


Also - you said you were teleporting 50 meters then it would take 10 minutes? This brought up two questions:


1) You could walk the 50 meters and back multiple times in 10 minutes


2) What exactly is happening in those 10 minutes that it takes you to travel the distance?


I think the root system idea is really solid and just use that with instant teleportation (no mater the distance) would work fine? Also, with teleporting objects, I like that the more weight you are trying to teleport, the less effective the range is (although I think there should be a minimum of 10ft otherwise, whats the point?) Idk, just a few thoughts I had


Overall great job!

 

[simj26]

Well, say what you want, but @readingraebow 's character? You can leaf it up to her to get to the root of the matter. Even if the possibilities branch out, she will never bark up the wrong tree.

 

[call me rae]

@readingraebow - I like the overall feel of your character, the powers seem a bit odd. The teleportation thing with the roots is interesting, and in a city such as Baltimore, I'm not sure how many trees would be readily available for you to use?
Also - you said you were teleporting 50 meters then it would take 10 minutes? This brought up two questions:


1) You could walk the 50 meters and back multiple times in 10 minutes


2) What exactly is happening in those 10 minutes that it takes you to travel the distance?


I think the root system idea is really solid and just use that with instant teleportation (no mater the distance) would work fine? Also, with teleporting objects, I like that the more weight you are trying to teleport, the less effective the range is (although I think there should be a minimum of 10ft otherwise, whats the point?) Idk, just a few thoughts I had


Overall great job!

lol yeah that was a typo, i had meant to say a minute. which is still wrong i just hadn't bothered to look it up and just pulled numbers off the top of my head. in truth it would probably average out to be seconds to travel between trees and the total time lag would only show up if she was running through multiple trees back to back. which in an urban setting would be fairly unlikely.


and yeah in an urban setting her powers are virtually useless but i went with the power because i liked the uniqueness and because it's kind of a quintessential D rank power.


it's not meant to be super useful that's not the point. i mean not everyone has to have a power that translates into a combat ability or is even especially useful in day to day life. that's not how powers would work in a realistic world, i mean just because mutations exist doesn't mean they'd all be super awesome abilities that will make fighting super easy.


plus it's not like the power has no uses. in a rural setting or as a wilderness search and rescue team she'd kick ass. because she'd be cover a lot of ground fairly easily.

 

[call me rae]

@Dano and @crackedbat : updated the powers. mom got off early so this is about all the computer time i'll have tonight. if you see anything else that needs fixing let me know and i'll update it tomorrow afternoon.

 

[sorrow made you]

OH GOD, I'M ALIVE I SWEAR! ;;A;;


Mon-Wed are my busy school days. Dx


Anyone up to do some relationship plots with my teacher, Leo? 8D

 

[macathan]

HIP-HIP HOORAY!


I LOVE LAUREL!


SHE'S SO CEWL!

 

[welian]

Arcadia Caulfield

Add one more weakness, to make it three. Then you'll be good.

HALE, LAUREL

Awesome job! Accepted on the first go of course, it probably helps that you've been sticking around and helping others.

 

[Seelenlos]

This is a stupid question, but are there slots still open.

 

[macathan]

This is a stupid question, but are there slots still open.

Not stupid question!


They are, just seems like there not any spots

 

[Sagitarius]

s-so ;_; a-am...i...you know...accepted?

 

[welian]

s-so ;_; a-am...i...you know...accepted?

Whoops! I accidentally scrolled past your app the first time! Sorry about that, that's completely on me. I went back and read Ben's profile - don't sweat too hard, you did fine. All I want you to do is write down one more major weakness. You've already got the fact that he needs to have metal to work with, and that his secondary powers ruins his eye. Those are two very good, very solid weaknesses. When you've come up with a third one (and we're all more than happy to help), tag me so I can see.

 

[call me rae]

Add one more weakness, to make it three. Then you'll be good.
Awesome job! Accepted on the first go of course, it probably helps that you've been sticking around and helping others.

Thanks, I did take some of the previous criticms into count. It also helped that I worked out stiff in my head a lot before I typed it up.

 

[Sagitarius]

Whoops! I accidentally scrolled past your app the first time! Sorry about that, that's completely on me. I went back and read Ben's profile - don't sweat too hard, you did fine. All I want you to do is write down one more major weakness. You've already got the fact that he needs to have metal to work with, and that his secondary powers ruins his eye. Those are two very good, very solid weaknesses. When you've come up with a third one (and we're all more than happy to help), tag me so I can see.

Q_Q please do help me, i cant think of a third one atm. My brain is dead

 

[theunderwolf]

@Sagitarius Hmm why not something like electrical interference? Both your powers could have adverse effects on your environment, frying nearby gadgets or wiping computers.


Alternatively you could have something that shorts you out, like getting to wet while manipulating electricity will make your powers fizzle.

 

[philocaly]

Oh my god, school why you do dis.


@readingraebow wow, Laurel seems awesome. I feel like she'll get along well with Seiko for the most part.


Good job!

 

[Dano]

[QUOTE="CRiTiCAL ERR0R]
OH GOD, I'M ALIVE I SWEAR! ;;A;;
Mon-Wed are my busy school days. Dx


Anyone up to do some relationship plots with my teacher, Leo? 8D

[/QUOTE]
I'm up for relationship/backstory with any staff

 

[macathan]

Oh my god, school why you do dis.

I feel ya'!

 

[Pigeon]

It is done! My character is finally ready for review! Lovely people, allow me to introduce:


Benetton, Kit

• General
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name	Kit Tomas Benetton
  Codename	N/A
  Gender	Male
  Age	17
  Rank	D
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	Hispanic
  Eyes	Brown
  Hair	Dark brown
  Height	6'0"
  Build	Stocky - slightly muscular but still soft with baby fat
  Limiter	N/A
  Notes	Chronic case of bed head; thick, burly eyebrows

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	?????????​	Courageous	06	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	?????????​	Altruistic	03	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	?????????​	Orderly	03	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	?????????​	Kind	07	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	?????????​	Proactive	07	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  Loyal
  
  
  It's not in Kit's nature to be fickle about his feelings or opinions. Especially where people are concerned, his loyalties are fierce and unbreakable. When it comes to his word, if he says he'll do something, he'll do it.
  
  
  Gregarious
  
  
  Kit is a people person. He loves socializing, talking, and generally being in the company of others (granted that they're not Gloomy Guses or Negative Nancies). He's the sort of person who strikes up conversation with strangers and makes friends easily. When alone, he gets antsy and distressed.
  
  
  Playful
  
  
  If Kit were to come with a warning label, it would say that he shouldn't be taken seriously. He enjoys sarcasm, good puns, and the occasional prank. He also loves games. He'll turn just about anything into a fun competition, all in the name of harmless mischief.
  
  
  Childish
  
  
  Kit likes to live on the fun, happy side of life. Responsibilities bum him out, so he steers clear of things that bore him like homework, chores, and working out at the gym. He goofs off more than he should and gets distracted easily.
  
  
  History
  
  
  A few weeks after Kit's fourteenth birthday, he jolted awake in the middle of the night, having woken to the unpleasant feeling of falling in his sleep. Except he really was falling. One second he was sound asleep, floating in midair and bumping against the ceiling of his bedroom; the next he was plunging toward the ground, panicked and flailing. It was a short plummet, and his mattress cushioned his fall, but the experience was nevertheless a shock.
  
  
  Kit's falling incidents came and went unexpectedly over the following months, but only seemed to occur while he was asleep. Waking to the heart-hammering sensation of falling wasn't conducive to a restful night's slumber, so his parents sent him to a sleep clinic where the doctors gently told him he'd been levitating in his sleep, and to please contact the Commonwealth office as soon as possible.
  
  
  For the past three years he has been enrolled at Facility 108 in Baltimore, where he's been learning to control his ability.
• Family
  
  
  Diago Benetton [Father, 48, E rank]: Kit gets his goofball charm from his dad. Even though there are more than thirty years between them, they act like brothers.
  
  
  Lucia Benetton [Mother, 47, E rank]: She's loving and nurturing, but isn't afraid to dole out tough love. She's both good cop and bad cop, and the solid, if not totally neurotic rock in Kit's life.
  
  
  Priya Benetton [sister, 19, E rank]: When Kit's parents thought they couldn't have a child, they adopted Priya. She's the mature, responsible one. She likes to lecture Kit; he likes to annoy her. Typical sibling disagreements abound.
  
  
  Positive
  
  
  TBD
  
  
  Neutral
  
  
  TBD
  
  
  Negative
  
  
  TBD
  
  
  

• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	?????????​	03	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	?????????​	04	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	?????????​	01	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	?????????​	02	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	?????????​	02	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	?????????​	01	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  Flight
  
  
  Kit's ability began as a simple defiance of gravity: he floated away like a balloon, aimlessly (and helplessly) drifting as high as the environment would allow. After some training, he's gained some control over limiting and maintaining his altitude, speed, and trajectory.
  
  
  Secondary powers
  
  
  Altitude Adaptation
  
  
  Kit's body adapts to varying levels of atmospheric pressure and oxygen. Theoretically, he could fly to extremely high altitudes without suffering internal adverse effects (such as asphyxiation or vertigo).
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  Exhausting
  
  
  Flying is a great way to get from Point A to Point B, but Kit's top speed is currently limited to about as fast as he can run. However, the act of defying gravity puts a lot of strain on the body, so he expends over twice as much energy flying as he would if he ran the same distance. Flying requires fitness.
  
  
  Automatic Flight Response
  
  
  In the beginning, Kit could only float, and did so only when he was asleep. Now that he's begun "exercising his flight muscles," Kit finds himself uncontrollably zipping into the air, and has suffered more than one minor head injury from plowing straight into the ceiling. This tends to happen when his physiological responses elevate (from excitement, stress, anger, etc).
  
  
  Difficulty Maneuvering
  
  
  When Kit flies, he feels as though his whole body is fighting itself to control the direction of his trajectory. His back wants to push him forward. His hip wants to push him sideways. His feet want to push him up. He hasn't yet completely figured out how to command his warring appendages, and isn't entirely certain it's possible.
  
  
  Speed vs. Agility
  
  
  The faster he flies, the clumsier his movements. He can't turn sharply, stop gracefully, or even change elevation smoothly when he's at top speed. If he's going too fast and wants to dive, his body sometimes "short-circuits" and he ends up falling.
• 
  
  
  
  
  

Hope this guy will fit in! Any and all feedback is welcome.

 

[macathan]

It is done! My character is finally ready for review! Lovely people, allow me to introduce:
Benetton, Kit

• General
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name	Kit Tomas Benetton
  Codename	N/A
  Gender	Male
  Age	17
  Rank	D
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	Hispanic
  Eyes	Brown
  Hair	Dark brown
  Height	6'0"
  Build	Stocky - slightly muscular but still soft with baby fat
  Limiter	N/A
  Notes	Chronic case of bed head; thick, burly eyebrows

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	?????????​	Courageous	06	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	?????????​	Altruistic	03	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	?????????​	Orderly	03	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	?????????​	Kind	07	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	?????????​	Proactive	07	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  Loyal
  
  
  It's not in Kit's nature to be fickle about his feelings or opinions. Especially where people are concerned, his loyalties are fierce and unbreakable. When it comes to his word, if he says he'll do something, he'll do it.
  
  
  Gregarious
  
  
  Kit is a people person. He loves socializing, talking, and generally being in the company of others (granted that they're not Gloomy Guses or Negative Nancies). He's the sort of person who strikes up conversation with strangers and makes friends easily. When alone, he gets antsy and distressed.
  
  
  Playful
  
  
  If Kit were to come with a warning label, it would say that he shouldn't be taken seriously. He enjoys sarcasm, good puns, and the occasional prank. He also loves games. He'll turn just about anything into a fun competition, all in the name of harmless mischief.
  
  
  Childish
  
  
  Kit likes to live on the fun, happy side of life. Responsibilities bum him out, so he steers clear of things that bore him like homework, chores, and working out at the gym. He goofs off more than he should and gets distracted easily.
  
  
  History
  
  
  A few weeks after Kit's fourteenth birthday, he jolted awake in the middle of the night, having woken to the unpleasant feeling of falling in his sleep. Except he really was falling. One second he was sound asleep, floating in midair and bumping against the ceiling of his bedroom; the next he was plunging toward the ground, panicked and flailing. It was a short plummet, and his mattress cushioned his fall, but the experience was nevertheless a shock.
  
  
  Kit's falling incidents came and went unexpectedly over the following months, but only seemed to occur while he was asleep. Waking to the heart-hammering sensation of falling wasn't conducive to a restful night's slumber, so his parents sent him to a sleep clinic where the doctors gently told him he'd been levitating in his sleep, and to please contact the Commonwealth office as soon as possible.
  
  
  For the past three years he has been enrolled at Facility 108 in Baltimore, where he's been learning to control his ability.
• Family
  
  
  Diago Benetton [Father, 48, E rank]: Kit gets his goofball charm from his dad. Even though there are more than thirty years between them, they act like brothers.
  
  
  Lucia Benetton [Mother, 47, E rank]: She's loving and nurturing, but isn't afraid to dole out tough love. She's both good cop and bad cop, and the solid, if not totally neurotic rock in Kit's life.
  
  
  Priya Benetton [sister, 19, E rank]: When Kit's parents thought they couldn't have a child, they adopted Priya. She's the mature, responsible one. She likes to lecture Kit; he likes to annoy her. Typical sibling disagreements abound.
  
  
  Positive
  
  
  TBD
  
  
  Neutral
  
  
  TBD
  
  
  Negative
  
  
  TBD
  
  
  

• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	?????????​	03	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	?????????​	04	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	?????????​	01	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	?????????​	02	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	?????????​	02	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	?????????​	01	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  Flight
  
  
  Kit's ability began as a simple defiance of gravity: he floated away like a balloon, aimlessly (and helplessly) drifting as high as the environment would allow. After some training, he's gained some control over limiting and maintaining his altitude, speed, and trajectory.
  
  
  Secondary powers
  
  
  Altitude Adaptation
  
  
  Kit's body adapts to varying levels of atmospheric pressure and oxygen. Theoretically, he could fly to extremely high altitudes without suffering internal adverse effects (such as asphyxiation or vertigo).
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  Exhausting
  
  
  Flying is a great way to get from Point A to Point B, but Kit's top speed is currently limited to about as fast as he can run. However, the act of defying gravity puts a lot of strain on the body, so he expends over twice as much energy flying as he would if he ran the same distance. Flying requires fitness.
  
  
  Automatic Flight Response
  
  
  In the beginning, Kit could only float, and did so only when he was asleep. Now that he's begun "exercising his flight muscles," Kit finds himself uncontrollably zipping into the air, and has suffered more than one minor head injury from plowing straight into the ceiling. This tends to happen when his physiological responses elevate (from excitement, stress, anger, etc).
  
  
  Difficulty Maneuvering
  
  
  When Kit flies, he feels as though his whole body is fighting itself to control the direction of his trajectory. His back wants to push him forward. His hip wants to push him sideways. His feet want to push him up. He hasn't yet completely figured out how to command his warring appendages, and isn't entirely certain it's possible.
  
  
  Speed vs. Agility
  
  
  The faster he flies, the clumsier his movements. He can't turn sharply, stop gracefully, or even change elevation smoothly when he's at top speed. If he's going too fast and wants to dive, his body sometimes "short-circuits" and he ends up falling.
• 
  
  
  
  
  

Hope this guy will fit in! Any and all feedback is welcome.

Me likey!


Very well written, I like your character's superpower!


Very nice!


:3

 

[philocaly]

It is done! My character is finally ready for review! Lovely people, allow me to introduce:
Benetton, Kit

• General
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name	Kit Tomas Benetton
  Codename	N/A
  Gender	Male
  Age	17
  Rank	D
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	Hispanic
  Eyes	Brown
  Hair	Dark brown
  Height	6'0"
  Build	Stocky - slightly muscular but still soft with baby fat
  Limiter	N/A
  Notes	Chronic case of bed head; thick, burly eyebrows

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	?????????​	Courageous	06	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	?????????​	Altruistic	03	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	?????????​	Orderly	03	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	?????????​	Kind	07	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	?????????​	Proactive	07	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  Loyal
  
  
  It's not in Kit's nature to be fickle about his feelings or opinions. Especially where people are concerned, his loyalties are fierce and unbreakable. When it comes to his word, if he says he'll do something, he'll do it.
  
  
  Gregarious
  
  
  Kit is a people person. He loves socializing, talking, and generally being in the company of others (granted that they're not Gloomy Guses or Negative Nancies). He's the sort of person who strikes up conversation with strangers and makes friends easily. When alone, he gets antsy and distressed.
  
  
  Playful
  
  
  If Kit were to come with a warning label, it would say that he shouldn't be taken seriously. He enjoys sarcasm, good puns, and the occasional prank. He also loves games. He'll turn just about anything into a fun competition, all in the name of harmless mischief.
  
  
  Childish
  
  
  Kit likes to live on the fun, happy side of life. Responsibilities bum him out, so he steers clear of things that bore him like homework, chores, and working out at the gym. He goofs off more than he should and gets distracted easily.
  
  
  History
  
  
  A few weeks after Kit's fourteenth birthday, he jolted awake in the middle of the night, having woken to the unpleasant feeling of falling in his sleep. Except he really was falling. One second he was sound asleep, floating in midair and bumping against the ceiling of his bedroom; the next he was plunging toward the ground, panicked and flailing. It was a short plummet, and his mattress cushioned his fall, but the experience was nevertheless a shock.
  
  
  Kit's falling incidents came and went unexpectedly over the following months, but only seemed to occur while he was asleep. Waking to the heart-hammering sensation of falling wasn't conducive to a restful night's slumber, so his parents sent him to a sleep clinic where the doctors gently told him he'd been levitating in his sleep, and to please contact the Commonwealth office as soon as possible.
  
  
  For the past three years he has been enrolled at Facility 108 in Baltimore, where he's been learning to control his ability.
• Family
  
  
  Diago Benetton [Father, 48, E rank]: Kit gets his goofball charm from his dad. Even though there are more than thirty years between them, they act like brothers.
  
  
  Lucia Benetton [Mother, 47, E rank]: She's loving and nurturing, but isn't afraid to dole out tough love. She's both good cop and bad cop, and the solid, if not totally neurotic rock in Kit's life.
  
  
  Priya Benetton [sister, 19, E rank]: When Kit's parents thought they couldn't have a child, they adopted Priya. She's the mature, responsible one. She likes to lecture Kit; he likes to annoy her. Typical sibling disagreements abound.
  
  
  Positive
  
  
  TBD
  
  
  Neutral
  
  
  TBD
  
  
  Negative
  
  
  TBD
  
  
  

• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	?????????​	03	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	?????????​	04	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	?????????​	01	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	?????????​	02	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	?????????​	02	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	?????????​	01	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  Flight
  
  
  Kit's ability began as a simple defiance of gravity: he floated away like a balloon, aimlessly (and helplessly) drifting as high as the environment would allow. After some training, he's gained some control over limiting and maintaining his altitude, speed, and trajectory.
  
  
  Secondary powers
  
  
  Altitude Adaptation
  
  
  Kit's body adapts to varying levels of atmospheric pressure and oxygen. Theoretically, he could fly to extremely high altitudes without suffering internal adverse effects (such as asphyxiation or vertigo).
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  Exhausting
  
  
  Flying is a great way to get from Point A to Point B, but Kit's top speed is currently limited to about as fast as he can run. However, the act of defying gravity puts a lot of strain on the body, so he expends over twice as much energy flying as he would if he ran the same distance. Flying requires fitness.
  
  
  Automatic Flight Response
  
  
  In the beginning, Kit could only float, and did so only when he was asleep. Now that he's begun "exercising his flight muscles," Kit finds himself uncontrollably zipping into the air, and has suffered more than one minor head injury from plowing straight into the ceiling. This tends to happen when his physiological responses elevate (from excitement, stress, anger, etc).
  
  
  Difficulty Maneuvering
  
  
  When Kit flies, he feels as though his whole body is fighting itself to control the direction of his trajectory. His back wants to push him forward. His hip wants to push him sideways. His feet want to push him up. He hasn't yet completely figured out how to command his warring appendages, and isn't entirely certain it's possible.
  
  
  Speed vs. Agility
  
  
  The faster he flies, the clumsier his movements. He can't turn sharply, stop gracefully, or even change elevation smoothly when he's at top speed. If he's going too fast and wants to dive, his body sometimes "short-circuits" and he ends up falling.
• 
  
  
  
  
  

Hope this guy will fit in! Any and all feedback is welcome.

He seems so cool >:3


If you don't mind, if my character gets accepted, I would like to establish a relationship between him and Seiko

 

[welian]

Why did I sign up for an 8am precalc class...

 

[philocaly]

[QUOTE="Lilah Tunth]
Me evilz.
Oh, and really, expand on your weaknesses


I am serious.

[/QUOTE]
Bruh.


I will.


Later. >:3