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What makes you think Mary hasn't done that already Pssssh gossip, what gossip? Mary knows nothing about gossip. Just like Mary would said, she would be learning and confirming technical information that people won't usually talk about in casual conversation for a completely educational purposewelian said:All Mary needs to do is bug the teacher's lounge...
Just because I wrote Swan giving the signal didn't mean it was to attack, he asked Jericho to protect the public, not lay into the knights. What with her power to construct things like walls and shields, and her being a collateral damage lecturer, I thought that would have been a givenAldur said:If I may, the auto-hits wouldn't have been there most likely if Swan hadn't commandeered an attack. That's to say, I'm not trying to start a fight, here. Just pointing it out. He didn't really have a way of knowing that those suits would behave how they did, right? But Eve was just following orders.
I could try to justify her actions further, but I'll just agree with your last paragraph instead. I really wanna see what happens next.Giyari said:Just because I wrote Swan giving the signal didn't mean it was to attack, he asked Jericho to protect the public, not lay into the knights. What with her power to construct things like walls and shields, and her being a collateral damage lecturer, I thought that would have been a given
And even then, even if Swan did say to attack, I wasn't the GM for that scene, I couldn't have said to you to make those hits connect. That would have been Frixz's job.
But I digress. In my opinion, you should have spaced the actions out a bit more, maybe one or two directly replyable actions per post. That would have given Frixz a chance to respond individually to each punch headed her characters' way, because NPCs or not, Frixz was in control of the Knights' actions and therefore also their responses.
If that happened, we possibly could have extended the scene out, potentially given more chances for dialogue from either side, more flexible responses, more input from the other non teacher characters present who were sadly relegated to audience members due to the quick flurry of actions needing responses in single posts. It would also have given a chance to bulk the scene out more, add more description to the scenery, characters thoughts, feelings, and actions.
Sometimes it's not the best idea to go gung-ho and play all your cards at once, if you hold back some plays you can get better writing out in the long run, develop your character more.
Although given the wounds, I'd say Eve is definitely gonna be seeing some character development anyway, same with Swan over the failure, and Red too with his anger at losing a hostage. So... Although the good guys lost, that doesn't mean it's a bad thing from a writing perspective, it's given us a chance to embellish on our characters (in)ability to cope with loss, failure, and shame, which I for one think is a fucking fantastic opportunity as a writer
I was also... rather... teasing@Aldur[/URL]
also i bet 4chan would still look the same in 2040.
It's a post-modern thing. Throwback chassis are fashionable.Giyari said:@St Indigo Well, in the last RP, I used a character called Paige, an android built by Commonwealth, "she" looked pretty human, yet was entirely machine.Given that this RP is 22 years in the future, that's 22 years advancement in medicine and technology. Would he have to look so archaic?
St Indigo] [URL="https://www.rpnation.com/profile/11743-welian/ said:@welian[/URL]
You'll be pleased to know that I legitimately stated that he runs a fashion blog / Pinterest page dedicated to aesthetics.
It's mainly catered to a small niche of Engineers, Robotic & Cybernetic Enthusiasts.