OOC Discussion

[Suzuki Mine]

I keep making characters that I don't even know if I'll put into this roleplay.


Someone make it stahp. ;;; u ;;;

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• Heroism
• Statistics

• Aspect	Scale
  COUR	???????????????????????????	09
  ALTR	??????????????????	09
  ORDR	????????????????????????	09
  KIND	?????????????????????	09
  PRCT	???????????????????????????????????????	09
  DIPL	?????????????????????	09

• Aspect	Scale
  HLTH	?????????	02
  STRN	?????????	05
  DEFN	?????????	04
  AGLT	?????????	02
  INTL	?????????	02
  WILL	?????????	02

• General
• Appearance
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name
  
  
  
  
  
  
  Morrigan
  
  
  Nicknames
  
  
  
  
  
  
  Morri, Endergirl
  
  
  Codename
  
  
  
  
  
  
  N/A
  
  
  Gender
  
  
  
  
  
  
  Female
  
  
  Age
  
  
  
  
  
  
  Sixteen
  
  
  Rank
  
  
  
  
  
  
  C
  
  
  Limiter
  
  
  
  
  
  
  Level 2, Active
  
  
  Role
  
  
  
  
  
  
  Student
  
  
  
• Race
  
  
  
  
  
  
  Caucasian/???
  
  
  Hair
  
  
  
  
  
  
  Black
  
  
  Eyes
  
  
  
  
  
  
  Silver (Purple)
  
  
  Height
  
  
  
  
  
  
  6'7"
  
  
  Figure
  
  
  
  
  
  
  Lean and slender
  
  
  Notes
  
  
  
  
  
  
  N/A
  
  
  
• Helpful
  
  
  Be it holding doors open for others, giving her seat to the elderly or expressing her pleases and thank yous, Morrigan is quite the mannered individual. She likes to be of use to others, and with her abilities and her height she knows she can do things others cannot. Sometimes she gets a bit of payment for what she does, but mostly she helps others because she genuinely likes to make people happy.
  
  
  Taciturn
  
  
  Tall, dark and quiet. Morrigan rarely speaks unless the circumstance demands that she does, and even then her words are short and to the point. Her expression also looks quite stoic and serious, so figuring out what she's thinking from that isn't advised. The majority of her communication is done through hand gestures and drawing pictures.
  
  
  Awkward/Creepy
  
  
  Though she's been living with her makeshift family for years now, Morrigan still hasn't gotten a full grasp on the basics of interaction. When work is involved she does so without a stutter in step or the bat of an eye. But when it comes to hanging out and having a casual conversation with someone, Morrigan becomes flustered and her hand gestures become harder to decipher. From the way she looms over others with her height to her eternally deadpan stare, it's not too farfetched to think that Morrigan is also kinda creepy. It also doesn't help that she has a habit of staring at people.
  
  
  Explosive
  
  
  Everything considered so far, Morrigan looks to be a pretty stand-up gal. And then someone has to go and make her angry. Not just anything'll trigger it; mostly genuine threats to herself or those that she cares about. Suddenly that cold stare turns into a cold fire as Morrigan goes from neutral to silent rage in half a second flat. Furthering the shock of this is that, when she does have this switch flipped, she has no qualms with literally breaking a person in half. That little voice in a person's head that tells them 'stop, you're gonna kill them'? She doesn't have that. They wanted to hurt someone else, so she hurt them first.
  
  
  History
  
  
  The first records of Morrigan have her at the age of ten, when she was first spotted within the backstreets of a particularly impoverished portion of Baltimore. Having been adopted into one of the street families that dotted the city, when the 'mother' was asked about her they said they just found her wandering. She didn't know her name, her age, where she was from or even how she got to where she was. She barely knew any words, and when she did try to communicate it was more through grunts, grumbles and hand gestures. They tried getting her to write, but what little she was able to write looked like gibberish or childish drawings to them. It was almost as if she was just brought into existence as is.
  
  
  As years went on the girl - whom had been named Morrigan by her self-appointed parents - began developing defined personality traits. She appeared to be very helpful and wanted to do everything from folding laundry to collecting cans and bottles. She also displayed impressive strength, and began using it to net temporary jobs moving heavy things around stores and warehouses in the city. A bit strange, but as she was doing it for less than minimum wage the employers just shrugged it off. She was a bit slow on the uptake when it came to reading and writing, but was able to copy spoken words after a few dozen tries. And then the incident occurred.
  
  
  Having nearly killed a man without even realizing it, nor really showing any signs of being troubled over her actions, the family had a meeting and sat down to discuss what would be done. The other two children thought it was pretty cool what Morrigan had did, but the parents felt that there was something wrong with the girl; something that may have been a part of her origins. As if on cue Morrigan approached them with a newspaper article, mentioning the AEGIS program that was located in Baltimore. While her parents were reluctant to allow her to be a part of a program associated with the Commonwealth, Morrigan's desire to find out more about herself eventually broke down their reservations.
  
  
  Not long after she hugged her family goodbye before being whisked away to Facility 108. The first year there was incredibly tough for Morrigan. Not only was she around way more people than she was use to, but both her lack of knowledge about herself, her lack of skill in using her abilities and her illiteracy held her back significantly. On more than one occasion she ended up snapping on someone, which sometimes lead to trips to the infirmary for the student and periods of confinement and monitoring for Morrigan. In the end she made very little progress and was made to repeat her Freshman year.
  
  
  MORE TO COME...
• Deena Louis
  
  
  The mother figure of the patchwork family. Formerly a seamstress, she became indebted due to her failing business and ended up homeless. There she met Louis, and together they've come together to make as nice of a home for the children they come across as possible.
  
  
  Louis Dean
  
  
  The father figure within the family. Formerly a teacher, a bout with depression and alcoholism put him out of a job and out on the streets. There he met Deena, and together they helped support one another, and now help to support the children they come across.
  
  
  Kerrie
  
  
  Morrigan's older brother figure. He ran away from a destructive home and has been on the streets ever since. He picks on Morrigan often and chides her for the smallest things, but when push comes to shove he's there for his siblings. He's not-so-secretly upset that Morrigan is taller than him, despite him being older.
  
  
  Bella
  
  
  Morrigan's little sister figure. She was found discarded in a dumpster as a toddler by Louis and Deena, who took her in as their own. She's somewhat more frail on the health side of things, but that doesn't stop her from trying to keep up with her older siblings.
• Warp
  
  
  Morrigan can teleport to any empty space within a thirty meter radius from herself as long as her full height can fit in it. This includes being able to port through walls and out of boxed spaces. The exact method of travel is currently unknown, but studies during her power examination have picked up readings of foreign particles in the wake of her teleportation. This had lead researchers to believe that she may be using an alternate realm as a means for travel.
  
  
  
  
  
  • Alien Form: Morrigan's body displays something slightly beyond that of the usual genetic coding of the super gene. She's taller than the average human, but shows no signs of strain on her bone structure. Her muscles are woven in a way that allows for a surprising amount of strength despite her form, and her skin has shown to be more resilient to being cut or pierced. It's theorized that she is this way to withstand the method of her teleportation.
    
  • Mood Ring Eyes: When Morrigan activates her teleportation her eyes change colors to a vivid purple. Her eyes also change to this coloration when she is upset.
    
  
  
  Limitations
  
  
  
  
  
  • Fluster Fried: At the moment it takes quite a bit of Morrigan's concentration to teleport at her own will, which makes up about 10% of such instances. If Morrigan is surprised or becomes extremely nervous/embarrassed/scared, she'll spontaneously teleport to a random location within her range.
    
  • You Must Be This Tall To Ride: Morrigan can only teleport into spaces where she can stand up at her full height. Her teleportation seems to predetermine this in order to place her in a location meeting this standard.
    
  • Rain, Rain, Stay Away: Morrigan's skin reacts extremely poorly to unfiltered water, which acts much like acid once it makes contact. Umbrellas are a necessity.
    
  • Bulletproof Vest: Morrigan's skin is more akin to a simple kevlar. That means that, while bullets and similar high speed projectiles won't penetrate her skin easily, they still hurt like a bitch.
    
  • 30 Shades of Grey: Though the true nature of Morrigan's physiology is a little out of reach, one thing that researchers have been able to figure out is that Morrigan has less grey matter than the average human. This - combined with her muscle structure - have been attributed as to why Morrigan has the brute strength that she does. Because of it though she's not as capable of fine motor skills, and as such struggles with them more than others.
    
  
  
  
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[Crimrose]

All of this is W.I.P, I'm just using the public as a form of "Spellcheck."


I'm typically not good at making sure everything adds up, so I use others for that.


Abnormal would be things like the various different versions of elemental attacks, like dark flames and such. Things that are of non-earthly origin. Eventually, tech with capabilities akin to an Armored Core/ Orbital Frame may be useful.


EDITS GALORE: @Captain Hesperus There's a threshold for heroism? Last time I checked this place was just to train you not to be a douchebag with powers... Not become a superhero.


S-Rank should be able to end the world from what I've heard, so at most this'd be A rank. Which would make my stats even more irritating...


@St Indigo

 

[Meredith]

@Crimrose


Though I'm not a GM, I'd also say stats doubling (especially high ones) is a no-go. The normal stat points for a normal human is a 2 in all non-heroism stats. Because of that, a boost of +1 to a stat also isn't very small. She's also basically immune to everything - she's a little bit OP, almost, though I'm sure that can be fixed up~


Also, one of her weaknesses - magic. There's not been any magic in Aegis thus far, so if I were you, I'd probably change that?


With the number of stat points she has, she'd also be an A-rank.


EDIT: Also, abnormal attacks don't really exist in the RP?

 

[Captifate]

@Crimrose I'm not sure the RP's setting supports the existence of vampires. If it was just a colloquial term to describe her unique situation, I think it'd be a little more feasible. (But she'd have to be human, perhaps suffering from severe anemia?)


Major irritants (I assume you mean things like garlic) and the need to drink blood are two separate weaknesses.

 

[Lemon Boy]

@Suzuki Mine


HAVEN'T EVEN READ ANYTHING BUT HER SUPERPOWERS BUT SHE SEEMS REALLY CUTE AND I WANT HER.

 

[Crimrose]

Check back to page 127, I edited my responses to some things.

 

[ManicMuse]

Any opinions on this?

Écarlate, R

• Heroism
• Statistics

• Aspect	Scale
  COUR	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	00
  ALTR	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	00
  ORDR	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	00
  KIND	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	00
  PRCT	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	00
  DIPL	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	00

• Aspect	Scale
  HLTH	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	00
  STRN	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	00
  DEFN	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	00
  AGLT	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	00
  INTL	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	00
  WILL	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	00

• General
• Appearance
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name
  
  Rene Écarlate
  
  Nicknames
  
  Cliche
  
  Codename
  
  "Different"
  
  Gender
  
  Female
  
  Age
  
  16
  
  Rank
  
  B
  
  Limiter
  
  Active LVL 2
  
  Role
  
  Student
  
  
• Race
  
  Caucasian. (European seemingly.) (Quite pale)
  
  Hair
  
  An odd color, seemingly gray-blue to gray-lavender...
  
  Eyes
  
  Red, the one thing that wasn't different.
  
  Height
  
  5'4
  
  Figure
  
  She's rather average, if not a little small in frame.
  
  Notes
  
  I'M DIFFERENT. (Totally not cliche...)
  
  
• Personality Trait 1/4 (Positive)
  
  
  She's actually quite nice if you manage to gain her trust, which is easy if you know what you're doing.
  
  
  Personality Trait 2/4 (Neutral)
  
  
  Rene can be a bit nonchalant at times. Can either be good or bad depending on the person.
  
  
  Personality Trait 3/4 (Neutral)
  
  
  She's loyal to an extreme should she find you someone worthy of it. This can be exploited at times...
  
  
  Personality Trait 4/4 (Negative)
  
  
  She could care less about you if she didn't know you at all. This can be averted if you at least did something to get you recognized by her, but it tends to be the case that she still doesn't care. Unfortunately, this has led to some humans being taken... Luckily she hasn't been caught as of yet, and now she tends to just mention her need for blood.
  
  
  History
  
  
  ---
• Other Character's Name
  
  
  Random Human Victims. Not too important.
• Main Power
  
  
  Vampire Physiology
  
  
  Her power is... Being a vampire. The general benefit is basically doubling the stats she has when not in sunlight. Regen factor is quite the issue as well (Why won't my .50 do anything?! Essentially magic. Killing without using unusual damage is a no-go.) , yet magic and abnormal types of damage seem to ignore the regen, if not cancelling it in that area temporarily. Claws and wings, the usual.
  
  
  (Abnormal meaning well... Things that aren't common. Basically, things that aren't bullets, swords, brute force, fire, water, other various typical Earth things... When we start crossing over into radiation and stuff like that, then we're talking. Holy Hand Grenades... Hellfire...)
  
  
  • Supporting Power A: She can manipulate blood and it's properties, but only if she can expose it. Basically, she needs to cut you before she can deal real damage with the ability. She could also help others by removing a poison from the bloodstream. The uses keep going. Drinking blood gives a small stat boost of +1 to every stat. Basically, she gets a bit better from drinking blood.
    
  • Supporting Power B: What I'd call razor wings. They're actually pretty big when not in sunlight. (As seen in picture.) High-Speed can be expected.
    
  
  
  Limitations
  
  
  • Weakness 1: Unfortunately, this also gives her an absurd weakness to sunlight, not normal light or simulated sunlight. (Reduces her to standard human levels if in direct sunlight.) (No plant lamps today!)
    
  • Weakness 2: Other things related to vampires are major irritants to her. Not deadly, but very irritating. They need blood at least once a week. At least a cup a week. More is enjoyed, and the quickest way to her approval is through this.
    
  • Weakness 3: Unusual damage types, or what some would call magic is quite effective. Just think before you act, and you'll be fine.
    
  
  
  
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First and foremost, I love playing vampiric creatures. So please understand I am very passionate about them. I really dislike how the powers are put down for this character. Even referencing magic seems like a no go in this role play! Not to mention there are scientific reasoning for vampires and why they exist if written correctly. Heck, look to the references to redheads over the centuries. At times people joke they are vampires! Light sensitive, fragile, uniquely immunity to some illnesses but still fragile beings.


I would work to reword your main power. The secondary one, I am on the fence about. I feel it needs to be more clearly describe what it does and does Not do. Blood manipulation within its self is a very powerful gift!


Also again with references to magic.... you have been in the OOC with alot with questions. I am honestly a little disappointed. It almost feels like you dragged this from another rp and just slapped it into the profile.

 

[Crimrose]

Nah, I just get really lazy the longer I have to make things. I remember hearing about a demon once being here, so hellfire should be a thing. Doing too much research just makes me loophole...


@Manic Muse

 

[Aldur]

@Captain Hesperus


I don't think there's a threshold for students. My first character had 24% on the Heroism meter and I had no problem with her joining the roleplay.

 

[D. Rex]

Alrighty! First post. I'll pretty up the macro when I learn how. Hope I didn't miss anything.

 

[Lemon Boy]

@Crimrose


Well, If you're not willing to put the effort into making a proper character, especially after all the advice you've been given.


I really don't see a point in you joining this Rp and you really don't seem suited to it.


That's just my opinion though.

 

[Crimrose]

Oh, and the primary reason I'm even going for this is because I can't use some other stuff without being blatantly OP. Hiroshima anyone?

 

[Captifate]

Alrighty! First post. I'll pretty up the macro when I learn how. Hope I didn't miss anything.

I'm more than happy to share my post template with you if you'd like. ('course, the others make prettier ones xD )

 

[Suzuki Mine]

@welian


I almost put welshian instead of welian for that tag.


Lemme just... roll a 1d3 on the matter, 'cause lawd I'm terrible at deciding on my own. D;


[dice]23429[/dice]


DAMN IT DICE


SHE DOESN'T EVEN NEED TO BE THERE


Lawd, she's gonna get so bored~! DX

 

[D. Rex]

Pretty please?

I'm more than happy to share my post template with you if you'd like. ('course, the others make prettier ones xD )

 

[Crimrose]

I mean, it's not particularly easy for me to get these profiles done because my mind can't stick to one thing. Just something I have yet to learn how to deal with. Now if anyone wants to give me something that isn't going to turn out becoming the Jesus of the RP, please say so. I mean, I was thinking Vehicle Physiology ... But that leads to MPBMs. I'll let you search that yourself xD .

 

[Lemon Boy]

@welian


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Pretty sure It will be haunted after the students get slaughtered by Religious zealots. I hope you're happy.


You monster.


Edit: JK YOU COOL, DON'T SMITE ME.

 

[Crimrose]

<p>I'm pretty sure the Religious Zealot issue could be solved near instantly by some of the people here...</p>

 

[ManicMuse]

I mean, it's not particularly easy for me to get these profiles done because my mind can't stick to one thing. Just something I have yet to learn how to deal with. Now if anyone wants to give me something that isn't going to turn out becoming the Jesus of the RP, please say so. I mean, I was thinking Vehicle Physiology ... But that leads to MPBMs. I'll let you search that yourself xD .

As this point, I am going to 'not say anything at all,' as they say. I wish you the best in making a profile.

 

[Necessity4Fun]

Any opinions on this?

Écarlate, R

• Heroism
• Statistics

• Aspect	Scale
  COUR	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	00
  ALTR	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	00
  ORDR	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	00
  KIND	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	00
  PRCT	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	00
  DIPL	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	00

• Aspect	Scale
  HLTH	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	00
  STRN	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	00
  DEFN	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	00
  AGLT	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	00
  INTL	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	00
  WILL	▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮	00

• General
• Appearance
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name
  
  Rene Écarlate
  
  Nicknames
  
  Cliche
  
  Codename
  
  "Different"
  
  Gender
  
  Female
  
  Age
  
  16
  
  Rank
  
  B
  
  Limiter
  
  Active LVL 2
  
  Role
  
  Student
  
  
• Race
  
  Caucasian. (European seemingly.) (Quite pale)
  
  Hair
  
  An odd color, seemingly gray-blue to gray-lavender...
  
  Eyes
  
  Red, the one thing that wasn't different.
  
  Height
  
  5'4
  
  Figure
  
  She's rather average, if not a little small in frame.
  
  Notes
  
  I'M DIFFERENT. (Totally not cliche...)
  
  
• Personality Trait 1/4 (Positive)
  
  
  She's actually quite nice if you manage to gain her trust, which is easy if you know what you're doing.
  
  
  Personality Trait 2/4 (Neutral)
  
  
  Rene can be a bit nonchalant at times. Can either be good or bad depending on the person.
  
  
  Personality Trait 3/4 (Neutral)
  
  
  She's loyal to an extreme should she find you someone worthy of it. This can be exploited at times...
  
  
  Personality Trait 4/4 (Negative)
  
  
  She could care less about you if she didn't know you at all. This can be averted if you at least did something to get you recognized by her, but it tends to be the case that she still doesn't care. Unfortunately, this has led to some humans being taken... Luckily she hasn't been caught as of yet, and now she tends to just mention her need for blood.
  
  
  History
  
  
  ---
• Other Character's Name
  
  
  Random Human Victims. Not too important.
• Main Power
  
  
  Vampire Physiology
  
  
  Her power is... Being a vampire. The general benefit is basically doubling the stats she has when not in sunlight. Regen factor is quite the issue as well (Why won't my .50 do anything?! Essentially magic. Killing without using unusual damage is a no-go.) , yet magic and abnormal types of damage seem to ignore the regen, if not cancelling it in that area temporarily. Claws and wings, the usual.
  
  
  (Abnormal meaning well... Things that aren't common. Basically, things that aren't bullets, swords, brute force, fire, water, other various typical Earth things... When we start crossing over into radiation and stuff like that, then we're talking. Holy Hand Grenades... Hellfire...)
  
  
  • Supporting Power A: She can manipulate blood and it's properties, but only if she can expose it. Basically, she needs to cut you before she can deal real damage with the ability. She could also help others by removing a poison from the bloodstream. The uses keep going. Drinking blood gives a small stat boost of +1 to every stat. Basically, she gets a bit better from drinking blood.
    
  • Supporting Power B: What I'd call razor wings. They're actually pretty big when not in sunlight. (As seen in picture.) High-Speed can be expected.
    
  
  
  Limitations
  
  
  • Weakness 1: Unfortunately, this also gives her an absurd weakness to sunlight, not normal light or simulated sunlight. (Reduces her to standard human levels if in direct sunlight.) (No plant lamps today!)
    
  • Weakness 2: Other things related to vampires are major irritants to her. Not deadly, but very irritating. They need blood at least once a week. At least a cup a week. More is enjoyed, and the quickest way to her approval is through this.
    
  • Weakness 3: Unusual damage types, or what some would call magic is quite effective. Just think before you act, and you'll be fine.
    
  
  
  
• ---

A-Ha! I was waiting for someone to have those abilities :33


And her face claim is Remilia Scarlet my fav Touhou Character Yay! *O*

 

[Lemon Boy]

@Suzuki Mine


Okay, actually read the whole thing this time!


You're amazing original in all your character profiles from what I've seen you do and It's amazing, I really admire it!


You always seem pretty capable at balanced powers that don't make them too powerful, yet also giving them that air of interest.


The character herself is written out wonderfully and the powers, are like I said super unique whilst not being overly powerful!


I can definitely see her and Kyle being friends.


Especially given Kyle is rarely one to judge, so he'd be left undisturbed or concerned by all of her habits and oddities. That and he could possibly chill her out when she's going into one of her explosive moods.


I think she's a wonderfully written and great character!

 

[Swoob]

at a swim meet so i can't make a lengthy response but a. the stats are supposed to be of someone at their highest potential power and b. the stats are only there to help you get a feel for your character and their limits

 

[Captifate]

@Suzuki Mine Caught a small thing on her stats: The numbers and colored pips don't match up under DEFN & AGLT. Can't say much else aside from mysteriouuusssss...

 

[Semblance]

Mine will be entering his freshman year quite soon. He's probably gone to every college campus within an hour's commute. Dunno if you can use that xD
edit: @ everyone What if our characters knew of each other through the internet yet never exchanged offline/identifying information? Until now...

Yeah my character is about to be a freshman as well! Perhaps they met when they were touring colleges? Maybe they're going to the same college? (There's a University of Maryland Baltimore Campus)

 

[Crimrose]

If that's what the stats are for, how do you describe things that enter various forms? At max potential some things can go really far...