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Ah, a tablet, how nice! I have been wanting one for a very long time but I never have the chance to try my hand on one.
Well, I don't draw very often, I am not that artsy to begin with so I guess I just have to give you some general critique?
I would say that this is very good for your first attempt!
I can't really say much about the proportion, it's fine, but it's just a little off(the face is a little too wide, the neck a little too thin relatively)(the outline of the eyes should be smaller or the iris should be larger to fill in the 'white space' or scelera of the eyes above the iris so that it looks more natural, the way you scaled them makes it looks like she is opening her eyes wide by force, as the eyelids will usually cover the iris partially when relaxed, so the outline of iris is usually in contact with the upper and lower eyelid), and that's complete normal for newbie when drawing face and anatomy! Using some reference when drawing will guarantee to help with that. And if practice oftenly, I believe if will not be a problem!

This is a very good draft, and if you are planning to refine this, I suggest applying some line dynamics? That is one of the privileges of using a table instead of a mouse after all!
I would assume your tablet is sensitive to pressure and will create varying thickness of line in response to that? You can try to utilize that by creating lines with varying thickness in your line art. This makes the line art looks smoother and helps to create the illusion of depth and volume.
 
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Alright then. I will go on improving it. But I don't quite get it on what you mean by using the thickness of lines.
 
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I only noticed the difference of her eyes, looking good. :3

Here is an example I found on how you can improve your line art I guess?
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Pay close attention to the thickness of the lines, especially curved lines.

Btw, is that skull a reference from :The World God Only Knows'?
I watched it when you recommended it, the most memorable part from that anime so far is the OP, lol.
 
As a fellow artist, could I. Critique? Its the shading. Under then chin is two colours meant for shade e. If you perhaps saded this area and used darker colours to bring the shading out, It will improve. Highlights in the hair is also a thing that happens, and that is done using a lighter colour of the hair where the light may be. The shading in the hair could do for the aides to be blended in, but that's more advanced. Really good on your first try BTW. I've been making bases so far cause I can't keep a stable brush size. I assume you don't have that.
 
Nope, Cosmic_Chaos Cosmic_Chaos . I definitely don't use bases because I think it would make my improvement slower as I would depend on them for creating drawings. Thank you for your critique by the way. What do you mean by 'the aides to be blended in'? I do not quite understand that.

Also Dreamtique Dreamtique , yeah. It is a reference from that show.Did you like it?
 
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Also Dreamtique Dreamtique , yeah. It is a reference from that show.Did you like it?
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The idea is definitely unique and creative. It's entertaining to watch. But if I have to critique, I think the idea and the direction of that anime would definitely get repetitive over time, and due to the format of the show, stuff like in-depth character development, climatic plot and conflicts would be hard to plan out, this may make the show more of a short-term temporary entertainment(like game show, talk show) rather than a story, or something memorable by allowing audience to form emotional attachment and sympathize with the characters. But perhaps that's due to personal preference.
But well, I only watched season one, so yeah.
In short, that's kinda why I said the most memorable part so far is the OP. I really enjoy that anime nonetheless.
 
I have to agree somewhat. The OP was quite interesting. Instead of the normal rock and anime song OPs you definitely always hear all the time, it uses a Christian song format, an oratorio. I like the show because it doesn't really follow Harem tropes which I adore greatly. No actual Harem, actual emotional closure and the main guy is not a bloody idiot. It would be hard to develop in-depth character and conflict but, without spoiling, something big is going to happen Season 3 which changes a lot of things
 
Sorry for the MIA, it's just academic stuff if you're wondering, which can take away a lot of focus and energy.
Phew, I hope to find my balance soon.
 
Ah!!! Finally finished it....kinda...
Take your time to read it through....please don't mind the mistakes...just enjoy the backstory and their significance on the characters...
I think after all of the rushing I am a little too lazy to proof read...

I was going to have something like this for every character, I'll try to, lol, considering how time-consuming they can be.
 
Hm. Finally able to sit down for a great few hours and try to put things together!
And... I guess at this point I wouldn't have to explain as to why I had been playing dead lately.

Here's a preview to at least proof that I am up to something, lol. Be hyped, I hope you will.

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Great....I missed my slumber for the day again, guess I'll just have to sleep past the noon for the next day, again.
Excuse my ramble, it's just that I am starting to get a little bit worry about my schedule if this cycle continues.
 
I hope it's going to be Ok that I use basic Coding. Learning, but the basics look so nice. :3. I didn't really know what Alex or Julian would say in that situation so they're the first up. xD
 
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