Elision of Ecritures
The Demon Librarian
@DaughterofAthena How do you feel about our characters? Sorry if we posted them and weren't supposed to.
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Freedom? C-Can I have that? I'm sorry, I don't mean to sound rude... Bu-But are you being serious? Kibto |
You say needle and thread weapons and i think this Kushimaru KuriarareFelix said:@Elision of Ecritures Really nice character, but I have one request: could you not use the poison part in your fighting style. It looks a lot like my fighting style. Moreover, only needle and threat can be powerfull enough on it's own. I immediately had to think of Machi, the sowing girl from Hunter x Hunter and she is pretty bad ass without poison.
I would honestly not have time to respond adequately to such a chat. There is a thread with rules on what we are and aren't accepting as far as characters go and we even have a skeleton available in said thread. That thread is here.Scribbler said:Ah that's wonderful!
Thank you very much for such a swift response.
I better get to work then!
Could you possibly invite me to a chat?
I'm unable to make one as of this time and wish to ask a few questions about an already potential character I have in mind.
@DaughterofAthena
Unless the CS is PMed to me and the rest of the mod team, chances are I won't be able to read it until we actually have a thread where it is posted within the RP itself. Sorry, but I do have a life and I've already got a lot of CS's to read in addition to a few more pages to put together for the RP itself.Elision of Ecritures] [URL="https://www.rpnation.com/profile/13833-daughterofathena/ said:@DaughterofAthena[/URL] How do you feel about our characters? Sorry if we posted them and weren't supposed to.
Scribbler said:I hope I did a good job on this, would love to hear people's input on her.
ARANEAE SPINERRET
"THE CRIMSON WIDOW"
WANTED DEAD
16,000,000
The Basics
Name: Araneae Spinerret
Nickname: Lil Red
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Position: Mechanic / Scientist
Appearance: Araneae has an eye-catching appearance that matches her memorable name. With medium-length red hair that has the texture of soft silk, her eyes match with a bright crimson glow that can almost hypnotize all that look in their gaze. She stands at a short height of 5'2Ft, with a slender body that reeks of elegance and grace with every move she makes. Often, her expression is one of sly cunning and enjoyment or pure satisfaction. In terms of attire she rarely changes, keeping to her red skin suit.
Likes & Dislikes
+Engineering
+Perfection
+Science!
-Marines
-Imperfection
-Selfishness
Strengths & Flaws
+Benevolent & Kind
+Amazing Intelligent
+Radiates positivity
-Overprotective
-Whimsical
-Forgetful
Abilities
Fighting style: Araneae doesn't have a particular fighting style, nor can she actually fight for herself. Instead, she heavily relies on her own vast intellect and robotic inventions to do the fighting for her. She's the puppet master, never on the front lines but always doing something. Her capability to produce highly advanced technology is her main advantage in battle, capable of making things no one would even expect possible.
Araneae has, however, modified her body at the back by building robotic tendrils, seven to be exact. They each end in red, human-like hands that help her build robotic contraptions and move about if she is in the rare instance, deprived of her Kumokyar?. They are built to be quick and agile so they may help in building processes and are in no way suited for combat usage as of this time. She has also included a small microchip within her own brain that allows her to control her robotic inventions remotely.
Inventions
Kumokyar?: Not exactly her own invention but heavily modified from its initial appearance. It is a robotic spider chariot with six legs and an open top, where Araneae sits and controls it. It is mainly used as a transport for her current invention and herself given her inability to walk; a badass substitute for a wheelchair. Inside of the sitting area, she has included a number of stereo's and electronic instruments so she may listen to some "sick beats" whilst walking around. It's only notable ability thus far is that it can climb up walls or overcome a variety of terrain with utter ease.
Dor?n: Currently her only form of offence. She can deploy a maximum of twelve small bowl sized drones with a spherical body, two wings and three pairs of legs. They each have four eyes, with one large "eye" in what would be considered the mouth region, that allow them to shoot photonic lasers. Individually, they deal minimal damage but when together can act as a useful ranged weapon or scouting device.
Personality & History
Personality
Araneae can be accurately described as being a Motherly figure despite her age. Her great knowledge in nearly all things but fighting can make her a sort of guide and maternal representation for people to follow and rally to. This is further exemplified by her overprotectiveness, quick to anger if those close to her are put in direct harms way or bullied. She shows great joy in this motherly role of hers, more than willing to answer a million questions someone has to ask or teach someone how this and that works. This patience to answer so many questions stems from her profession of inventing and plotting schematics, failure is part of the work and so is redoing it. If she fails, she won't despair or suddenly give up but continue on until it is done and complete to utter perfection. Anything not perfect will be deconstructed and made to be in optimal condition. Creation can pull out the little perfectionist in her, and even though she will continue on trying she does nitpick her own inventions or the flaws of another device. Going back on her natural maternal instincts, she is kind and benevolent to all she meets. You won't experience a shred of abuse or rudeness; well, as long as you don't count sass and friendly sarcasm.
The most notable thing about her is the power of her mind. She blossoms creativity, imagination and intellect. You will never find her short of future plans to create some bizarre and highly complicated design; a natural visionary is what she is. Dreaming and constantly thinking about all the things she could do and make, it's impossible for her to run out of motivation and ideas. This goes onto daily life as well, for you'll never find her not doing something. Constantly at work or reading a book, she's a busy bee and always has everything planned out. Though this is often complimented with a bit of whimsy. She does many things and can occasionally forget that she's doing something entirely! One second she's in the middle of the book and the next she's suddenly creating something new, absolutely forgetting about the previous novel she was reading. This forgetfulness also extends to the vast equipment and tools she carries, often having to spend a good few minutes between making something scouring for that one screw or circuit.
History
Araneae was born to a couple of intellectuals living on the island of the future. Karakuri. Her father was a renown Scientist and Inventor working alongside the World Government whilst her mother was an Archaeologist with a thirst for knowledge. Whilst her mother was often away, going on a grand expedition or adventure, she developed a strong bond with her father that has remained ever since. Life was as simple and wonderful as it could be. She'd often prefer to help her father build a new robotic invention or machine, her bedtimes were filled with scientific terminology and learning instead of your usual child's story. The amount of love couldn't go any higher and everytime her mother came home, she would bring back the grandest of tales to tell about ancient civilizations and lost knowledge rediscovered.
One day, however, her life would be changed. At the age of seven a man dressed in black robes and masked knocked upon their door. He came coveting something there mother had brought back and demanded to be let in; hoping his flintlock would be the only convincing thing he needed to be let in. Her father did not back down and immediately charged the man, with each of them engaging in a fight as she stood there and watched. In the ensuing fight, however, the flintlock suddenly went off as they both vied for it. The bullet shot straight through her body and spine.
She can't recall anything else after that, but her father said the man ran away and she was immediately taken to the hospital. The doctor announced that she would never be able to walk again and would need a wheelchair for the rest of her life. It was demoralising, to say the least but they made on. A year went on like this and her spark had faded away, with her father clearly worried he devoted his time and energy to make something just for his daughter. Upon the eve of her eighth birthday, he unveiled the best present he could think of, a robot made just for her. It was bit bigger than an actual wheelchair but could still fit through doors quite nicely. She herself, was absolutely ecstatic and loved it entirely. Her spark came back and life went on as normal, now with an even increased interest in her own father's work in the field of cybernetics and robotics.
This time of happiness could not go on forever and soon enough the marines came knocking their door much like the man seven years ago. It was one of the days where her mother would rest and get some time to relax with her own family which she could rarely do. They came storming in, guns loaded and swords ready claiming that her mother had conducted one of the worst crimes possibly. She had been conducting research into the Poneglyths and Void century. An act that would immediately sentence someone to death. Before the marines could even lay hands on her mother, all of her father's dormant and half completed inventions suddenly reactivated. These robots wreaked havoc in the marine ranks but could most certainly not hold them forever. So she was forced to leave by her parents, who would make their last stand. Whilst all the automatons fought on, her parents remained to finish business as she left. Grabbing a ship in their local town and setting sail, she could hear gunfire and see flame spew from the place she had always called home.
How long or how far she sailed was unknown even to her, but she had apparently made it an incredible distance in the few days she had fled from the Marines, apparently being in the East blue. There she remained, working with a variety of pirates. They let her on board in exchange for her mechanical and technological expertise, improving their weaponry and creating a few gadgets every once and a while if she particularly liked them. It was as she constantly hopped from one ship to another that she learned about the bounty placed on her head, 16,000,000 for allegedly "Having Knowledge and conducting research into the Void Century" along with numerous other things such as the "Illegal creation of Weaponry and Robotics." She had no knowledge of her mother's true workings apart from the occasional story, though the Illegal creation thing might have some truth to it..given she was literally making a pirates rifle much better when she learned of this.
Two years have past since she has made her temporary home in East blue and recent news of this One piece has interested her. She had no real "family" or "friends" since she had left Karakuri two years ago, and maybe finally finding a new family could do her some good. That and she could set up a proper workshop for her inventions.
Wanna hear something creepy? This is almost the exact character I had in mind as my second character: a genius inventor from Karakuri who loses control over their legs and became a pirate. Mine was actually a boy and somewhat younger, not to mention a completely different way of losing his legs, but still... it's so much coincidence that it's creepy.
I'm still doubting what to do. I did apply with this character for a Devils Fruit, but seeing how far your character already is I might resign, or not. It's complicated.
*hugs the soul eater comrade*Kaine said:You people and your fancy characters ._. makes mine feel lamesauce
Lol thanks. I like mine, dont get me wrong, but he is pretty generic in terms of everyone else. except maybe his back story. its a little extra depressing.Sunbather said:*hugs the soul eater comrade*
Better a generic character with a really good writer behind it than a fancy character that falls flat during the rp.Kaine said:Lol thanks. I like mine, dont get me wrong, but he is pretty generic in terms of everyone else. except maybe his back story. its a little extra depressing.
True i suppose. Ive done enough OP rps over the years to know i fail hard as devil fruit powers. Im just simply not creative with them. So im just making a brute xDFelix said:Better a generic character with a really good writer behind it than a fancy character that falls flat during the rp.
I didn't know he was called that. I don't really watch Naruto. I had pictures of him though, 'cause I used him for my very first SE character, and since I already went with the piercings-look... heck yeah.Kaine said:im confused. gonna make your character look like yahiko? he is a smeckzie beast. =x
This is what I was intending my second character to be.Peaceswore said:I don't think anyone has applied as a navigator (just putting this out there)
Inb4 old badass pirate womanKaine said:How many years were we from when gold rogers died. i know its a slightly longer gap than usually but my character is older than every character ive seen so far so.