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Fandom Naruto: Retribution

Shadowborn Omen

A White Wolf
Character thread is up here!:

Official lore is in the link below, the stuff written here has been reworked!:

There has been a fragile and shaky piece between the Five Great Shinobi Nations for decades, ever since Pain’s failed assault on Konohagakure. Pain’s death spelled the end for the Akatsuki as the Shinobi world knew them, and they quickly dissolved. All remaining major threats to the peace of the world were either eliminated or fell silent.

While relations between the Nations aren’t necessarily friendly, nothing more than petty squabbles and the usual cycle of distrust have occurred in generations. Recently, however, all communication from the Land of Lightning has ceased. After nearly a month of complete silence, many villages throughout the nations began to receive cryptic messages with outlandish demands and alarming threats. However, the most concerning part of these messages were that they referenced items or people that no one outside the nation they belong to should know about their existence, or their whereabouts. All of the messages contained one constant: all of the demands were to be sent to Kumogakure.

As outlandish as the demands and the threats are, the suspicious knowledge of the writers of these messages aroused concern in the intelligence communities in the nations. So far, the demands within these messages have been ignored. The Great Shinobi Villages, excluding Kumogakure, have agreed they should begin planning an investigation mission among the four of them in order to assess the situation. However, these efforts have not yet come to fruition, and no team has yet been assembled. It has been two weeks since the messages began to be received by villages, and as of yet no further attempts of communication have been made by the message writers. However, that will soon change, and the next method of communication will be much less diplomatic.




This is just a check for initial ideas and to read you peoples’ thoughts. If you’re interested, continue reading.

This roleplay takes place in an alternate universe branching from the end of Pain’s Assault arc. It is generations in the future, and no named characters in the original Naruto universe are still alive, but their descendants are. Clans have mixed, disappeared, come anew. We will start in Konohagakure (The Village Hidden in the Leaves) specifically. If you’re interested in making a character and playing them from another village, let me know here. As time goes on, if there’s enough interest in a certain village, I’ll open up character creation for that village and start a game from there. I will likely let character from other villages join the roleplay eventually regardless (once the Konohagakure Shinobi go to other nations), but I won’t be accepting large volumes of character from outside Konohagakure unless there’s enough interest to start a game specifically from that village.

As far as character creation, try being creative! I’ll be accepting Shinobi of vast different skill levels, so don’t feel like you’re pressured to make some insanely powerful ninja. In fact, I’m not looking for one man armies in this roleplay. Kekkei Genkai are fine, but keep a cap on it! I don’t want one shinobi with 3 Kekkei Genkai! 2 MIGHT be accepted on a case-by-case basis if it doesn’t make the shinobi insanely powerful. For those who are interested, you can get a skeleton for your character by using this:

Is your character from a named clan? If so, which?:
Jutsu Releases, Kekkei Genkai, or special arts/abilities:
Earned Rank:

Ratings-
Chakra Control:
Chakra Pool:
Strength:
Speed:
Durability:
Utility:

Use a scale of 0-10 on your ratings. These represent your shinobi’s effectiveness in categories in relation to other shinobi. A rating of 0 is abysmal. A rating of 3 is below average, but not necessarily poor. A rating of 5 is average, and is nothing to be scoffed at. A rating of 7 would be above average, but not exceptional. A rating of 10 would be flawless. Use these as guides. These numbers will be added together to determine a ninja’s Shinobi Effectiveness Index, which ranges from 0 to 60. An average ninja will have an SEI of 30, anything above 42 is considered good, anything below 20 is considered poor.
Note - these numbers don’t define your character. They are more like a performance review given by a superior. An ANBU Jonin might be the best of the best, but they’ve still got to be put on paper to be filed against the others. These numbers aren’t concrete, a character with a low score in a specific stat might be able to perform above their rated skill in that category every once in awhile, and over time characters can grow (or falter). A quick description of these stats follows:
-Chakra Control is a rating on how well your character can control and manipulate their chakra with precision. If your character manipulates and creates their own jutsus, as opposed to using jutsus created by others, they likely have high chakra control. This rating could also be used for taijutsu or weapons that rely on chakra channeling, ninjutsu requiring precision, or genjutsu.
-Chakra Pool is a rating on how much chakra your character has before they need to rest. Every ninja can train to increase their chakra pool, though this takes time and dedication. Chakra pool will also naturally grow, and will increase with stamina.
-Strength is a fairly straightforward one, characters that are effective in using jutsu or weapons that require brute force likely have a high strength rating.
-Speed is not necessarily how fast your character can move, but how agile they are. All ninjas can move relatively quickly, but can your character use that speed to their advantage? More dexterous weapons or fighting styles will appreciate more speed.
-Durability is a rating on how much your character can take before they punch out. Sure, an agile ninja may be able to avoid being hit most of the time, but once you get hit, how long are you going to stay standing? Note that most ninjas have a remarkable ability to stay standing. A low rating on this doesn’t necessarily mean your character will quit because of a paper cut. Just like in any other category, a 5 is average for other shinobi, not people in general. So use that as your guide.
-Utility is an odd one to describe. Use it for all skills that don’t fit above. A general rule is to use this as a general rating for how useful your character is in combat other than what’s covered above. For example, medical knowledge, genjutsu, or even summoning jutsu (as an example, the Leaf Hokage is a shinobi with exceptional summoning skills, and he’s got a maxed out utility score because of it!)
 
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Ohhhhh, cryptic and mysterious. I like it, it's intriguing. Would the PCs be the investigation team? Or is this freeform?
Me and Hibiscus Hibiscus are running this together, and our current plan is to start with events that will be happening in the Hidden Leaf Village two weeks after the messages have been received. We will be accepting characters of many different skill levels, and we expect all of them to get a fair piece of the action and story. I can't give much away as it stands, but there can be characters anywhere from Genin level to S-Class.

If enough interest in other aspects comes forth, we can open more threads or take on a Discord server on the side to accommodate that. For example, we're starting in the Hidden Leaf Village, but if multiple people voice interest in the Hidden Sand Village, we may open up a game for that as well, and they will eventually merge once the individual plots progress beyond the events of the villages.
 
This seems really cool, I'm interested

What's the scaling with the SEI? You said average is 30, but average for genin vs. average for s-class?
 
This seems really cool, I'm interested

What's the scaling with the SEI? You said average is 30, but average for genin vs. average for s-class?
Rank is somewhat separate from SEI. For example, when Naruto met the Sage of Six Paths and got his powers, he was still a Genin. At that point, Naruto would have had an extremely high SEI, surpassing most Jonin, even though he was just a Genin canonically. If you want a general rule of thumb, I'd say Genin would be 15-20, maybe up to 25 on average. A Chunin would be around 30, being the average of most ninja. Jonin would be on the upper scale, looking at 35-45. S-Class Ninja would be up towards 50+. A ninja having a perfect 60 is unheard of, and unless there's a really good reason behind it probably won't happen over the course of this roleplay.

However, these aren't concrete. You can have a freshly graduated Academy Student that's so good in one or two areas that he reaches well into Chunin or even Jonin territory (most of the characters in the original Naruto series were at Chunun+ level SEI when the Chunin exams started, despite all being Genin). You can also have a Jonin that is only really a Jonin because of their skill in a specific category, such as Utility. They could have a perfect Utility score of 10, making them very useful, but still have an abysmal SEI.

Hopefully that helps explain it a bit better.
 
Sure if this is still open I'm down for some Naruto rp. Thinking of doing a ninja with none of the Kekkai Genkai but with lightning, paintings to hide behind and mainly works in surveillance for the team but can fight when necessary
 
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I'm totally up for this! I have an Uchiha I can use! Though I can change him a bit if they never really recovered!

I do plan on limiting the number of Shinobi from canon named clans, though that doesn't mean yours can't be an Uchiha. My character will possess the Sharingan, but he's not a direct Uchiha, he's a descendant from them. You're welcome to make your character as though he/she is an Uchiha, but just be aware that I'm going to be more strict on canon clans.
 
Alright. I think I'll be a descendent as well. I already have a clan I've made, so I can use that one, and have one of his parents be an Uchiha. Thanks, dude! I promise not to make him too overpowered.
 
Sure if this is still open I'm down for some Naruto rp. Thinking of doing a ninja with none of the Kekkai Genkai but with lightning, paintings to hide behind and mainly works in surveillance for the team but can fight when necessary

That works. I'm not sure how much purely-surveillance stuff we're going to have for the main RP but I'll try and give them something to do. I might see if there's enough interest for a full surveillance team and try and get them less direct combat, or at least a subdivision of the team that branches out for surveillance.
 
Ok, like I said they can fight and use actual damaging moves, it's just that their expertise lies more within the information gathering side of things and if there isn't an interest in a surveillance team I'm fine with that and if needed I can always just drop the focus on surveillance and focus more on trickery and such.
 
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Sorry guys, had some car trouble today and spent most of the day fixing it. I'm going to get food and then going back home, and when I get there I'm going to work on the CS. It shouldn't take me that long, there isn't a whole lot of required information right out of the gate.
Here's basically all the information that's going to be asked in it:


Name:
Age:
Gender:
Biography:

Title/Nicknames: (Teacher, ANBU callsign, etc)
Rank:
Releases, Kekkei Genkai, Techniques, etc:


If your character has any special jutsu or special abilities, include it in the 'Releases, Kekkei Genkai, Techniques, etc' category.
 
It's alright! I'm thinking that my character's clan is special in two ways: they excell in kenjutsu, and have a technique where they put their chakra into their weapons, making them sharper, more durable, and easier to flow chakra through. Secondly, at some point, one of them married an Uchiha, or someone who carries the Sharingan Gene, so every once and a while, one of them is born with it.
 
I'm interested in making a character! Just have a question regarding the number of techniques(including kekkai genkai and releases) we could have in total
 
I'm interested in making a character! Just have a question regarding the number of techniques(including kekkai genkai and releases) we could have in total

There's no hard limit, but generally 2 standard releases. As far as Kekkei Genkai, you can have one for the most part. I am open to accepting 2 Kekkei Genkai on one as long as they don't make your character too incredibly powerful, but chances are I'm not going to be accepting any more than one on a character. Your character should have an affinity for one type of nature release, then they can have learned one other. More advanced ninja can have a third but probably aren't as proficient in it as they are the other two.
 
That's what I was thinking, as my character would naturally be gifted in Lightning Release, but as someone related to the Uchiha's, he learned some Fire Release Jutsus.
 
It's alright! I'm thinking that my character's clan is special in two ways: they excell in kenjutsu, and have a technique where they put their chakra into their weapons, making them sharper, more durable, and easier to flow chakra through. Secondly, at some point, one of them married an Uchiha, or someone who carries the Sharingan Gene, so every once and a while, one of them is born with it.
I believe the chakra into weapons is a rare, but still prevalent weapon already. Asuma, all the samurai dudes from the war stuff. Not saying this couldn't be a unique technique, just have to build on it. Would love to chat about it if you want to bounce ideas off someone!

Hopefully we'll get a few more players and by the weekend possibly have the story going. So, Bump!
 
I believe the chakra into weapons is a rare, but still prevalent weapon already. Asuma, all the samurai dudes from the war stuff. Not saying this couldn't be a unique technique, just have to build on it. Would love to chat about it if you want to bounce ideas off someone!

Hopefully we'll get a few more players and by the weekend possibly have the story going. So, Bump!
I do have a few ideas on why it's different from them, though I would love to discuss it with ya!
 
Ok, so what about techniques themselves? I'm assuming there's a limit to what our characters know at the start right?
 
Interested in doing a Hachimon (Eight Gates) user, was wondering if it was possible/okay to be able to use elemental release techniques in tandem with it
 
Ok, so what about techniques themselves? I'm assuming there's a limit to what our characters know at the start right?

We'll have various skill levels in Shinobi. As long as there's a reasonable explanation as to why your character knows what they know, I'll probably let them through. If there's an issue, I'll PM you and get it resolved. No worries. :)
 

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