Naruto Rebirth: Kakureyami OOC

[White Masquerade]

[QUOTE="Kiyoko Tomoe]White, I think you may have given too much power to those participating because it seems we're all going to get out of hand eventually xD

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Naw, that's the point of Naruto.

 

[Pequeno Burraidh]

In the actual series every character has at least one time where their power gets out of hand for one reason or another, and in Dove's situation, only one of the three will happen, and none of them are for any lengthy period of time.


The key to high power is moderation, either in usage or availability, just like Naruto's usage of the fox in Shippuden.

 

[White Masquerade]

[QUOTE="Veirrianna Valentine]In the actual series every character has at least one time where their power gets out of hand for one reason or another, and in Dove's situation, only one of the three will happen, and none of them are for any lengthy period of time.
The key to high power is moderation, either in usage or availability, just like Naruto's usage of the fox in Shippuden.

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This is true. However towards the end, the author just...(> )


I can't even begin to wonder what he was on. V. I was shocked and distraught. Naruto started off so good.

 

[Pequeno Burraidh]

I wish I knew... sometimes xD

 

[Kiyoko Tomoe]

Are we talking anime or manga here? If anime, then don't entirely blame Kishimoto because the anime itself was a bit different than the manga. If the manga, however, then I dunno what the hell Kishimoto was on during the end of Shippuden, but I'd gladly like to have some if it'll make me successful in something xD

 

[SephirothSage]

Someone posted at me, what?


 
I just realized.


The hyper skilled swordswoman with Storm Release.


Is one of the weaker PC's, oh good god.

 

[Kiyoko Tomoe]

So White, it took you eighteen days to decide upon 'fun post' for the rating of my first post after the start of the boss battle, yet you'd rated basically everything else past it...? xD

 

[White Masquerade]

Someone posted at me, what?
 
I just realized.


The hyper skilled swordswoman with Storm Release.


Is one of the weaker PC's, oh good god.

Yeah, the end of #314 --->

Camp Kumo


Reappearing back in his hut Akago dashed out of the door slowing only to snatch a single bottle and a few spare kunai. Stopping a short distance away he turned around and without hesitation formed a series of hand seals. "Fire Release: Great Fireball!" Not wasting a moment to watch his home go up in flames Akago began to shout. "My name is Akago Hideki and I have just condemned this place to destruction! If you want to live come to my signal and I will take you to Kumogakure or you can start running now."


Looking around Akago saw a civilian man staring wide eyed at the conflagration, stabbing a kunai into the dirt he dashed forward and grabbed the older man's arm and warped again.


Kumo Castle


Appearing on top of the marker he hadn't retrieved before leaving the village he released the civilian and glanced around until he located Rozu. "Raikage-sama." he said with a small nod, glancing at his passenger he said shortly. "Explain." and disappeared.

[QUOTE="Kiyoko Tomoe]So White, it took you eighteen days to decide upon 'fun post' for the rating of my first post after the start of the boss battle, yet you'd rated basically everything else past it...? xD

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Yeah =P Have to keep things in order

 

[Duwang]

My dude's power set was designed specifically to not be BIGGER LAZERBEAM.

 

[White Masquerade]

^ Everything after the Rinnegan was ( O.o )


I remember when the Chidori/Rasengan was the ultimate etchqniue

 

[Kiyoko Tomoe]

[QUOTE="White Masquerade]I remember when the Chidori/Rasengan was the ultimate etchqniue

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Yeah, I remember that too... Then they threw in Shinra Tensei/Bansho Ten'in and Chibaku Tensei! xD

 

[SephirothSage]

I mean, Pein was cool. But.. I think his death was...


Naruto VS Pein was to Naruto


As Ichigo VS Aizen was to Bleach. Agree/Disagree?

 

[Duwang]

My favorite fight is still the team vs Zabuza and Haku.

 

[SephirothSage]

Yeah. That fight was reallyyy cool.

 

[White Masquerade]

I mean, Pein was cool. But.. I think his death was...
Naruto VS Pein was to Naruto


As Ichigo VS Aizen was to Bleach. Agree/Disagree?

I could agree with that. I see the similarities

My favorite fight is still the team vs Zabuza and Haku.

xD Nice pick.


Gaara Vs Lee for me. Every other match for the exams was terrible except theirs. And when Lee took the weights off his legs...Oh my. That was a shocker!

 

[Kiyoko Tomoe]

[QUOTE="White Masquerade]Gaara Vs Lee for me. Every other match for the exams was terrible except theirs. And when Lee took the weights off his legs...Oh my. That was a shocker!

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Holy hell that one was great. I swear I died once or twice when Lee took the weights off xD


 
Oh! Oh! Drunk Lee versus Kimimaro was also really great! It was hilarious when Lee fell flat on his face and then blamed Kimimaro for it xD

 

[izayoiix]

"She may be a girl but she definitely is stronger than me."

I know SOOOOOO many people who would kill you for writing that xD

 

[White Masquerade]

[QUOTE="Infinities Lover]I know SOOOOOO many people who would kill you for writing that xD

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I'm more worried about this

With a moment's hesitation, he reached shyly with his left hand and pat her on the head. "You did good" he mumbled.

Nana is a dog to Shion.


._.

 

[Kiyoko Tomoe]

Ooh, we should totally put characters against each other in OOC and all discuss who would win! xD

 

[White Masquerade]

[QUOTE="Kiyoko Tomoe]Ooh, we should totally put characters against each other in OOC and all discuss who would win! xD

[/QUOTE]
No, lol.


@Infinities Lover


O.m.g. I wish they had a 5-star rating...that was amazing. I even think you beat Luce with that one. There were multiple ratings I could have gave. Like, every post so far has been on the mark.


I'm so freaking interested


Two more spots to tie up then we move to the next arc!

 

[izayoiix]

Lol glad you liked it! xD


I started writing it because I thought of the healer thing. Then I got stuck like twelve times until I said why not. FLASHBACK! xD

 

[White Masquerade]

That's how you have to do it! One door closes, there's always another :5/5:

 

[izayoiix]

Mainly it was just how do I make her decision believable? Then FLADHBACK! xD

 

[White Masquerade]

=P Hey. Veirianna (so hard to spell) is doing it with Dove. Long as you're doing it right, I didn't see anything

 

[izayoiix]

Lol glad it worked out. My first idea was the very end with Kiyomi taking Chiita's hand as she said she was a healer. Then it became a chant for her xD


Ahhh I'm so tired....it was worth it though. I wrote that post xD