Naruto Rebirth: Kakureyami OOC

[Lucem]

You can't have the Kubikiribocho, Maika can and will kill you for it >

A fight for the sword seems appropriate. It would be even more interesting to see a battle between characters that are meant to be on the same side.

 

[izayoiix]

On another note, if a girl's being held at gunpoint and is waiting for her boyfriend to show up so she can figure out why the hell there's people pointing a gun at her in the first place (tho she knows it's cause of bf they did call him), how should see react while waiting for him to arrive?


if that made sense

 

[GasMaskie]

Channel Liam Neeson and subdue all of them.

 

[izayoiix]

xD


Hm...see if I hadn't had her crying already I might've done that.

 

[Lucem]

"Why am I still dating this man? "

 

[izayoiix]

Well she never knew about it. lol


She's pretty confident she's going to die right now


Plus, she can only suspect why he knows them. I made the guys holding her hilarious assholes who like to play games. So she asked and they said they'll let him explain.


While I dislike failing at writing gang people, I'm enjoying this immensely

 

[Stickdom]

[QUOTE="Lucem Tenebris]A fight for the sword seems appropriate. It would be even more interesting to see a battle between characters that are meant to be on the same side.

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I just hope it's clear that Maika has no side in this, he'll kill and/or leave any one of you to die if it's in his best interest. He let's Chanda hang around because she seems to owe him after he fed her (a choice he is steadily regretting), anyone else is disposable to him, he's not here to be buddies.

 

[izayoiix]

He let's Chanda hang around because she seems to owe him after he fed her (a choice he is steadily regretting)

The true meaning of friendship

 

[Lucem]

I just hope it's clear that Maika has no side in this, he'll kill and/or leave any one of you to die if it's in his best interest. He let's Chanda hang around because she seems to owe him after he fed her (a choice he is steadily regretting), anyone else is disposable to him, he's not here to be buddies.

Kouki is meant to be purely neutral in everything he does. He just acts when something interesting comes along.

 

[QuirkyAngel]

[QUOTE="Infinities Lover]Well she never knew about it. lol
She's pretty confident she's going to die right now


Plus, she can only suspect why he knows them. I made the guys holding her hilarious assholes who like to play games. So she asked and they said they'll let him explain.


While I dislike failing at writing gang people, I'm enjoying this immensely

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There's nothing wrong with making gang people hilarious assholes=P

I just hope it's clear that Maika has no side in this, he'll kill and/or leave any one of you to die if it's in his best interest. He let's Chanda hang around because she seems to owe him after he fed her (a choice he is steadily regretting), anyone else is disposable to him, he's not here to be buddies.

He doesn't even like her a little bit? I'm sure she makes his life more entertaining^^

[QUOTE="Infinities Lover]On another note, if a girl's being held at gunpoint and is waiting for her boyfriend to show up so she can figure out why the hell there's people pointing a gun at her in the first place (tho she knows it's cause of bf they did call him), how should see react while waiting for him to arrive?
if that made sense

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She should curse her bf...after crying of course.

 

[izayoiix]

There's nothing wrong with making gang people hilarious assholes=P
She should curse her bf...after crying of course.

It's not that there's anything wrong with making them this way, I just dislike writing people in gangs xD


Ehhh she kinda was. She loves him, but kinda blames him. But still loves him, kinda accepted she's gonna die, wishing this wouldn't be the last way she'd see him. Keeps crashing into her damn coffee table...

 

[QuirkyAngel]

People who believe they are about to die might or might not lose their sense of inhibition xD

 

[izayoiix]

lol


I dunno, I'm going with what pops in my head here. But I'm having fun with this. Even if I think me writing a gangster is pathetic xD


I mean, I think it's pretty sad lol

 

[QuirkyAngel]

[QUOTE="Infinities Lover]lol
I dunno, I'm going with what pops in my head here. But I'm having fun with this. Even if I think me writing a gangster is pathetic xD


I mean, I think it's pretty sad lol

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Lol. Don't worry about it. The only people who can write good gang members are people who have been in a gang. Or people who watch a lot of gang movies...


In the end, gangs are only groups of people who gather together either for a purpose(like making money), protection, or just because they're friends...

 

[izayoiix]

Eh my characters boyfriend has done some bad stuff. I think he occasionally sells drugs and has killed for protection, but that's about it.


But the ones I have to write have no real story xD


They just want my partner's character dead so they can have all his stuff xD


But honestly, they just seem so pathetic to me lol /fail

 

[QuirkyAngel]

[QUOTE="Infinities Lover]Eh my characters boyfriend has done some bad stuff. I think he occasionally sells drugs and has killed for protection, but that's about it.
But the ones I have to write have no real story xD


They just want my partner's character dead so they can have all his stuff xD


But honestly, they just seem so pathetic to me lol /fail

[/QUOTE]
Wanting someone dead to get their stuff seems pretty gang-like to me...


 
In fact, there are quite a few characters in this rp who want Uza-chan dead to get her stuff...

 

[izayoiix]

lol it's just.... xD


Like...I just feel like my writing of them is awful. It makes me laugh it's so awful. Tho my last scene that I just posted I was slightly proud of...

 

[Stickdom]

In fact, there are quite a few characters in this rp who want Uza-chan dead to get her stuff...

Actually, Maika might have a hard time fighting her, if she's the chosen of the Kubikiribocho and shows her skill with it, he may just let her keep it/not fight her for it and try to persuade her to join his side instead xD I can see it now, Maika, Chanda, Akago, and Uzazab starting their own faction.


Maika: "We will stand for honour and justice the ninja world, protecting the innocent and..."


Chanda pulling on Maika's shirt: "Can we just eat now?"

 

[QuirkyAngel]

Actually, Maika might have a hard time fighting her, if she's the chosen of the Kubikiribocho and shows her skill with it, he may just let her keep it/not fight her for it and try to persuade her to join his side instead xD I can see it now, Maika, Chanda, Akago, and Uzazab starting their own faction.
Maika: "We will stand for honour and justice the ninja world, protecting the innocent and..."


Chanda pulling on Maika's shirt: "Can we just eat now?"

Uzazab wouldn't join Maika, Chanda, and Akago. She doesn't like Chanda.


And she's super loyal and dedicated to her job/goal. So dedicated, in fact, that she's willing to work for someone like Kuro.

 

[White Masquerade]

Uzazab wouldn't join Maika, Chanda, and Akago. She doesn't like Chanda.
And she's super loyal and dedicated to her job/goal. So dedicated, in fact, that she's willing to work for someone like Kuro.

Wow. You're hitting all the nails on the head. Nice


@Infinities Lover


I can help you with the gang members if you'd like. The best way to explain why they've gone after your character, is because your character's boyfriend made them look like fools. If there's one thing they hate, it's being embarrassed. They've been trailing your character's boyfriend for a while now, and have found out he is dating.


These people could be malicious and wait till he gets there to kill your character, or just rough her up and leave her on the doorstep with a note on a necklace, saying "think twice before you mess with (gang name here)."


I abhor gang RPs =/


 
Oh. Peace and quiet. It's so lovely here ^~^ Now I can sip my tea and think.

 

[Kinzu Hekmatyar]

Jaws music insert here ,Wild Kinzu appears and uses the skill steal to take White tea than flees * Morning Whiitttttteee i like tea to,though namely black (:3)

 

[izayoiix]

Lol thanks Kin

 

[White Masquerade]

Hello & good morning to you Kinzu


Heya Infini's Infi :5/5:

 

[BlacklegSanji]

[QUOTE="Infinities Lover]Well I guess that makes sense...
/never leaves house, wouldn't know what parties are like\


Kin what are you going on about?

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Parties.... I like parties they are fun... I usually can't remember anything that happens after 10 o'clock though.

 

[White Masquerade]

>.>. I'll keep my mouth shut