Naruto Rebirth: Kakureyami OOC

What Is Naruto Rebirth: Kakureyami's Most Glorious Ship!? (Multiple Votes Are Allowed!)

  • Dove Nokuma x Shinsei Fugita

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  • Kiyomi Uchiha x Ryuu Kato

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  • Akago Hideki x Shirokko of the Sand

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  • Orisas x Mekuto Meimiri

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  • Tsukiko Hanashi x Toshiro Toshino Toshimi Shi IV

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  • Chiaki Yoshinawa x Hanbungetsu Hozuki

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  • Ja Jankin x Machi Uchiha

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  • Roku Senju x Nana Uzumaki

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  • Dru Rinha x Romi Watanabe

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  • Jinan x Wunan

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  • Shinobu x Nanko

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Stickdom said:
he's a joke about being the only one who's still single.
Shinobu was single the whole RP too... She has potential with Nanko right now, but... Her crushed soul is barely managing hold together, and I don't even know what Nanko's response is gonna be... Maybe Nanko will be able to piece her back together, but he's the only one who can and I just don't see him being able to realize it until it's too late, due to him not being the best at realizing what's happening inside of others...
 
Stickdom said:
... that hurts, White.
I gave it my all every chance I could. I wanted to leave an impact in some way. I tried my darnedest for people to give a damn about Maika. And yet somehow he ended up as some kind of gag character whose only claim to fame is being so entirely wishy-washy that he's a joke about being the only one who's still single. And that's being generous. I don't hold it against you personally, White, I know you were trying your hardest, I guess I just wasn't compatible with whatever grand plans you potentially had, because for every opportunity you said I missed, I never saw. I guess I just wasn't cut out to rise to the occasion, because it certainly wasn't for lack of trying to be involved.
Ah, I'm sorry. I can get very animated sometimes. I will tone it down!


Naw, I don't think anyone seriously saw Maika as a joke for being single. I sure didn't. I know his potential and I was waiting for it to come out. When you asked me about him having the Poison-Release Kekkei Tota, I was like, "Damn. Alright! Sure, sure. Whatcha gonna do with it!??" The crocodiles were so cool! I hate, hate, hate RPs were the GM is lax and lets players do whatever they want. I hate, hate, hate RPs where the GM is strict and some kind of anal Mastermind. I want to fight with players, and I want players to fight with me. Sometimes I win. Sometimes I lose. But that's what I think makes a real, engaging, story. So what if a 100 people die as you instead save your character's love interest? It's odd to hear a GM say, but be selfish with me. I'll take your arm, but take my leg. I'll take your head, but take my heart. We'll both suffer, but it's worth it.


@Kiyoko Tomoe


Shinobu was too busy for love.
 
@Strawberry Preserves (> :D )


You keep Stealth-Changing your CS on me, rofl. Not that that is a problem. It's quite intriguing every time I go look at it and see something different.


Anpanini is TOTALLY a nickname!


Omg...you hid white text in there!! (OUO)
 
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Yeah, I wonder whose fault it is that Shinonu was too busy for love... Hmm... Maybe if she weren't constantly being pushed toward insanity by the hands of some fiend, she could've realized feelings for Nanko sooner, wound up in a relationship with him, then perhaps had a bit better a future to look forward to than never finding her mother, potentially being disowned by her family up on the moon for her failures, and possibly be hated by an entire third of the Ninja World for her actions in Iwagakure...


Also, I just realized that Shinobu's getting her first ounce of sleep in about six months, White. That's how much you had her dealing with, I just can't see any point in time where she could have gotten any sleep.
 
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[QUOTE="Kiyoko Tomoe]Yeah, I wonder whose fault it is that Shinonu was too busy for love... Hmm... Maybe if she weren't constantly being pushed toward insanity by the hands of some fiend, she could've realized feelings for Nanko sooner, wound up in a relationship with him, then perhaps had a bit better a future to look forward to than never finding her mother, potentially being disowned by her family up on the moon for her failures, and possibly be hated by an entire third of the Ninja World for her actions in Iwagakure...
Also, I just realized that Shinobu's getting her first ounce of sleep in about six months, White. That's how much you had her dealing with, I just can't see any point in time where she could have gotten any sleep.

[/QUOTE]
What are you going to give me for letting her finally get some sleep? I deserve some kind of reward. Surely?
 
@Sinister Clown


Heyoo! Even though Kimura is a vegetable at a hospital in Kirigakure (ROFL), he's still a part of this RP, so he will be getting a small closing post as well. If I tag you that's why.


@hudhouse


Your character as well will be getting a small closing post too.


@Hellkite


Your character will as well!
 
White Masquerade] [URL="https://www.rpnation.com/profile/20597-sinister-clown/ said:
@Sinister Clown[/URL]
Heyoo! Even though Kimura is a vegetable at a hospital in Kirigakure (ROFL), he's still a part of this RP, so he will be getting a small closing post as well. If I tag you that's why.


@hudhouse


Your character as well will be getting a small closing post too.


@Hellkite


Your character will as well!
Oh lord I remember this, What happened?
 
hudhouse said:
Oh lord I remember this, What happened?
Well, the ninja successfully freed Kirigakure and most of Konoha too. Most of them are gathered at the Hokage's Mansion in a stalemate with the enemies' King and Queen. There are a trying to resolve things peacefully, but everyone pretty much feels one side is going ot have to be wiped out for the war to stop.


So here we are at the final posts I'm doing for each character in the RP before the close!
 
[QUOTE="White Masquerade]Well, the ninja successfully freed Kirigakure and most of Konoha too. Most of them are gathered at the Hokage's Mansion in a stalemate with the enemies' King and Queen. There are a trying to resolve things peacefully, but everyone pretty much feels one side is going ot have to be wiped out for the war to stop.
So here we are at the final posts I'm doing for each character in the RP before the close!

[/QUOTE]
So its going to end on a cliff hanger?
 
[QUOTE="White Masquerade]What are you going to give me for letting her finally get some sleep? I deserve some kind of reward. Surely?

[/QUOTE]
You don't deserve a reward, because it's your fault she wasn't able to sleep (>A>)


Besides, Onee-Chan, isn't having me around a reward in itself? I totally understand if I'm not good enough for you, Onee-Chan, and I'd be happy to walk away if I'm not enough of a reward for you (>u>)
 
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hudhouse said:
So its going to end on a cliff hanger?
Nope. I will do an end. Each character's post will lead to the final one I do for Konoha. So if you have a place in mind where Shiso would be, let me know, or I will have him be seen around Kirigakure where he last was.
 
White Masquerade] [URL="https://www.rpnation.com/profile/2664-lucem-tenebris/ said:
@Lucem Tenebris[/URL]
Mm, it's like a missed a very cool and interesting chapter to the book Naruto-Reb. Man. Hyōryū. It's such a shame. As I go through these I want to explore them. So many damn good characters. Feels like I missed a few pages torn out of a very good book.


Edit: And wow. There are really a lot of people dead. I am sighing to myself =/. How did it get here?


Edit: Looking ahead to Kou! His picture looks so serene and conflicted!
I regret not being able to go through the events I had planned for the NPC characters and Kouki, but it couldn't be helped. I plan to go through a few origin stories about them and what they did during the Gaiden. I think most of them have fairly interesting backstories and diverse abilities. It will also give me a chance to show how Kouki ended up becoming more human, since it looks like it came out of the blue without knowledge of past events.


Also, it looks like I missed the suffering contest.
 
@Kiyoko Tomoe


*sighs*


No, no. You are reward enough >_>


@Lucem Tenebris


Give me that Edo Tensei Showdown!! Those people fighting against the Edo Tensei were so interest-peaking. That puppet-lady I immediately wanted to have some sort of ties with Orisas. I love me some puppet masters.


@hudhouse


You are completely fine. It's actually my fault. The arc where you left, I should have done better with. I let it get a little too out of control.
 
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@Mekuto


Mek-Mek-chan. Mekuto will be mentioned! If you get this, let me know what you want. It may be a bit before I get to him. It' won't be anything big though =P


@Tekigami


Tekigami! The same goes for you! Tenzumaki's section may be coming relatively soon, so just let me know!
 
White Masquerade] [URL="https://www.rpnation.com/profile/20597-sinister-clown/ said:
@Sinister Clown[/URL]
Heyoo! Even though Kimura is a vegetable at a hospital in Kirigakure (ROFL), he's still a part of this RP, so he will be getting a small closing post as well. If I tag you that's why.


@hudhouse


Your character as well will be getting a small closing post too.


@Hellkite


Your character will as well!
Welp, there is the closing out post for her!
 
White Masquerade] [URL="https://www.rpnation.com/profile/5040-strawberry-preserves/ said:
@Strawberry Preserves[/URL] (> :D )
You keep Stealth-Changing your CS on me, rofl. Not that that is a problem. It's quite intriguing every time I go look at it and see something different.


Anpanini is TOTALLY a nickname!


Omg...you hid white text in there!! (OUO)
:^) ????? I have, like, nooooo idea of what you are talking about.
 
hudhouse said:
Welp, there is the closing out post for her!
Nonono, Onee-Chan's the one who gives the post. Nobody's supposed to have posted after she started the ending posts, soo... I don't know what Onee-Chan's gonan do about this postin business... If she does nothing about it, then I'm gonna be mad because I'm not allowed to do my own post for Toshiro right now thanks to things 'ending' (>A>)
 
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@White Masquerade


Blame it on Kanra for hijacking the plot and introducing an unneeded element to the last arc then popping right out of the RP. I have no regret about killing my character and dropping out of the RP after building him up.


270


If only this guy came out earlier, he would have made a good Roku face claim. His VA was Biscuit from IBO, Kaneki Ken from TG, and Rokuro from Twin Star Exorcists.​
 
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Errr... You didn't need to delete it, since Onee-Chan didn't say to... I was just lettin' you know she may or may not allow the post...


Why does this always happen? People take everything I say a bit too far into the serious zone and do stuff like deleting posts...


@White Masquerade


I'm gonna just go now, Onee-Chan... My words are like a curse upon this world, causing things to happen at mere utterance of them...
 
Welp, since the post is gone, I'll just put it in spoilers here for anyone to read the 'end' for my guy


@Kiyoko Tomoe I deleted it since the "is or isn't allowed'. I would just prefer to play it safe until I can get the go or the no.

Location - ??? / Kirigakure Beach


Shisokoku's body raised from the Earth, finally alive after all this time. He grasped for his heart, his fanged snarling to the air. He looked left and right before realizing the truth. His white glowing eyes were weak, his chakra drained to the furthest extent. He was too weak to go on, so he dissolved away at first. But his heart was protected, at least one. He felt inside himself... and it was only one. He raised himself into a Humanoid form and began to use his chakra to compress himself. He compressed down and used his chakra to warp his form. When e was finished, he stood as a child. She tested her new voice,
She coughed before trying it again, highering her pitch.
Shisokoku changed her last name to Harukachou, 'Distant Butterfly' in the common tongue. She reached into her memory and came across a horrifying discovery. Most of her memory was gone, but where it went she had no clue. She looked around the beach where her corpse last was, a giant hole in the Earth that ran so deep light refused to shine. She reached her arms out, using the Earth Grudge Fear to climb out of the pit. She pretended to breathe as she awoken her Byakugan. She made false organs, replicating what a woman's body would be like around 14 years old. She further added onto her disguise by making her body cut itself up. She placed her hands on her stomach and played a little bit with it. Her heart finally felt at peace, though she couldn't tell why.


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She limped towards the Hidden Village she was supposed to head towards long ago. Now all she wanted was to finally relax and have a home. Her sealed heart held the last of his memory of her past lives. With her most precious gift there, she limped towards Kirigakure. She held her fake clan of the Harukachou close, but knew she would keep her final name. She whispered it as she made her steps through the rain, "I am Mizutsune Harukachou. I am from the clan named after the Distance Butterflies, and I myself? I am the Bubble Fox, or at least that is the meaning behind it. And I love it all~!" Her little tale ends as she sung one of the many songs that she knew from heart...

The final ritual


One body is all we need for this to be complete


And when the day



Begins to take form



You won't be leaving those doors



You'll only live with us



Inside the darkness



As we tear you up inside



...I was left behind...
 
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White Masquerade] [URL="https://www.rpnation.com/profile/9893-quirkyangel/ said:
@QuirkyAngel[/URL]
Quirky, lol. I have a confession to make to you. Might as well since the RP is coming to be over. You're the 1st person I met in this RP that I admired and really, undercover, thought was absolutely adorable. You will always hold that place in my heart Quirk, and I'm not embarrassed anymore to say that ( :P ).


What made me want to go like this,
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Was when I first read your CS for Lily. Aw, it was so cute how you capitalized the words you really wanted to put an emphasis on. Whenever you look at it again, you'll see what I mean =).


EVIL, was my favorite.
Aww, White, I had no idea to thought that way about me<3 I'm glad you find me adorable, but also slightly saddened...cause it sounds like you're saying goodbye.


Just so you know, you're the first person on this site whose managed to make dynamic characters that both entertain and draw sympathy from me at the same time. As a gm, you've definitely inspired me.


@Kiyoko Tomoe


Shinobu's problem is she tries too hard and takes to much burden upon herself. Gyuuki wasn't her fault. The events at Yuugakure was an accident. The death of some of the Shirotaiyo couldn't be helped. Being single isn't a bad thing either.


@Stickdom


I'm going to say the same thing to Maika. There's nothing wrong with being single. Never really thought of him as a joke character and I didn't think he was wishy-washy either. If he wanted to be more relevance, all he needed to do was follow the plot...that's all Chiaki did :P However, he went outside the box, tried to change the story, but didn't post enough to make a major impact. Shin's irrelevant to the main story as well. His main involvement with the "main plot" was being Dove's love interest...and causing chaos.

[QUOTE="Lucem Tenebris]
Also, it looks like I missed the suffering contest.

[/QUOTE]
Personally, I think Kouki is the most tragic character.
 
QuirkyAngel said:
@Kiyoko Tomoe
Shinobu's problem is she tries too hard and takes to much burden upon herself. Gyuuki wasn't her fault. The events at Yuugakure was an accident. The death of some of the Shirotaiyo couldn't be helped. Being single isn't a bad thing either.
That bit about being single wasn't being used as an example of Shinobu's suffering, just me telling stick his character ain't the only one who remained single most the RP. As for the trying too hard, don't you think you would try hard too if you had as much on the line as Shinobu did? She had a mother she had to find. Her family raised her from moment one teaching her of a goal she had to achieve, making her feel that if she didn't achieve it, she would be thrown out by her family. Shinobu was one of the only people who realized how much the Tailed Spirits suffered in the war, so she couldn't help but feel that it was her responsibility to aid them, as the only one who really was in a position to help them out. The Shirotaiyo, Shinobu had already caused problems for back in Iwagakure, so of course she would feel at fault for being unable to make it up to any of them, half of which she never will get to now that they're dead.


Topping it all off, Shinobu has the strength to protect those things, yet she failed to do so. Can you really blame her for feeling the way she does, when basically the whole world pointed in the direction of her being responsible for half, if not more, of the things she failed to protect? That's her personality, the kind of person who takes responsibility for protecting and dealing with things that others can't. Heck, in the end, it's the Shirotaiyo's fault Shinobu ended up the way she is, for putting the blame on her for what happened in the Crystal Cavern, and for getting on Shinobu's case for doing nothing more than taking custody of an enslaved Tailed Spirit... That's where her feelings of responsibility toward the Tailed Spirits came to be, and where her feelings of regret came from when she couldn't protect the Shirotaiyo members who she owed for having 'caused' those issues in Iwagakure.


Nobody's even there to tell Shinobu those things weren't her fault, so there's almost little hope left for her. She's probably just going to end up wandering off from everybody now that she's brought closure to everything, and never be seen again by people. That's how much burden others placed on her without even realizing what they were doing to her by making her feel so responsible :/
 
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