Gao
[sad jester jingle noises]
I love how u set up CS they are so PRETTY
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ach1lles
doomed by the narrative
Remember, kneecaps are a privilege, not a right!
And adfasgd- Thank you! Though a lot of them are inspired from stuff that I've seen online, or my friends do, so it's really nothing big.
And adfasgd- Thank you! Though a lot of them are inspired from stuff that I've seen online, or my friends do, so it's really nothing big.
Gao
[sad jester jingle noises]
It looks better than my CV
ach1lles
doomed by the narrative
NO, IT IS NOT. SHOW ME YOURS. NOW. AND I WILL SHOWER YOU WITH PRAISE.
Gao
[sad jester jingle noises]
I AM NOT SHOWING U MY CV I HAVE NO QUALIFICAITONS
With CS I literally just type out the thing and that's it I am boring
With CS I literally just type out the thing and that's it I am boring
ach1lles
doomed by the narrative
Wait, give me a sec, I need to read your CCFA characters. Then I can slap you with my love and appreciation for your talent.
Gao
[sad jester jingle noises]
IM GOING TO BEAT U I LL DELETEHTME RIGHT NOW
Cello.
We are going to trust the giant flying sharks?
BUT YOUR OC CHARTS ARE GOOD AND HAVE A GOOD SET UP!
Gao
[sad jester jingle noises]
stop I will get an ego
Cello.
We are going to trust the giant flying sharks?
good.
ach1lles
doomed by the narrative
My wifi did the thing, but let me beat you to death with compliments now!
Gigi, Emery, Grayson??? Absolutely iconic. You managed to create three completely distinct characters, with complex motivations, interests and relationships without being repetitive, or sinking into overused stereotypes. Their backstories are well fleshed out, and provide insight onto who they are today, and why they might've possibly chosen to attend school. Everything makes absolute sense when it comes to them; you can see why they might enjoy certain things and why they might dislike others, how their personalities reflect onto their fashion sense. All this combines to make characters that are believable; if this was a published novel, I could totally see Gigi and Emery being the sassy popular siblings, and Grayson being the mysterious love interest for the MC. Or hell, any of them could the main character for a good novel because they're well-written characters.
My point is that GAO, YOU ARE GOOD AT WRITING, AND IF THIS ISN'T ENOUGH, I WILL CONTINUE TO CLOBBER YOU WITH MORE COMPLIMENTS.
Gigi, Emery, Grayson??? Absolutely iconic. You managed to create three completely distinct characters, with complex motivations, interests and relationships without being repetitive, or sinking into overused stereotypes. Their backstories are well fleshed out, and provide insight onto who they are today, and why they might've possibly chosen to attend school. Everything makes absolute sense when it comes to them; you can see why they might enjoy certain things and why they might dislike others, how their personalities reflect onto their fashion sense. All this combines to make characters that are believable; if this was a published novel, I could totally see Gigi and Emery being the sassy popular siblings, and Grayson being the mysterious love interest for the MC. Or hell, any of them could the main character for a good novel because they're well-written characters.
My point is that GAO, YOU ARE GOOD AT WRITING, AND IF THIS ISN'T ENOUGH, I WILL CONTINUE TO CLOBBER YOU WITH MORE COMPLIMENTS.
Cello.
We are going to trust the giant flying sharks?
ACHILLES HAS A DAMN POINT GAO
Gao
[sad jester jingle noises]
STOP R WE GONNA HOLD HANDS RN
ach1lles
doomed by the narrative
IS THAT A THREAT OR A PROMISE?
(EITHER WAY, I'M STILL GOING TO SLAP YOU WITH COMPLIMENTS.)
(EITHER WAY, I'M STILL GOING TO SLAP YOU WITH COMPLIMENTS.)
Cello.
We are going to trust the giant flying sharks?
ABUSEEEEEEEEE But in a nice way LMAO
Gao
[sad jester jingle noises]
ITS BOTH
ach1lles
doomed by the narrative
[Holds your hand while continuing to shower you with compliments.]
Shall I go on? Because I can and will read through the entire CCFA thread to validate your writing.
Shall I go on? Because I can and will read through the entire CCFA thread to validate your writing.
ach1lles
doomed by the narrative
[Said with utmost seriousness, in the tone of the former boyfriend in a Hallmark movie who got tossed aside for the sexy lumberjack who lives in a cheery prairie town.] Babe, I will read through bad grammar for you.
Cello.
We are going to trust the giant flying sharks?
That is alot of writing-
Gao
[sad jester jingle noises]
NO I ASSURE U I AM CONTENT
Cello.
We are going to trust the giant flying sharks?
Ima be honest. Being able to rp on here with people who can actually write has helped me improve my writing to be alot better. Not by any means am I good but like if you look at my first rp on here compared to now I have come a long way-
ach1lles
doomed by the narrative
Good, it seems as if my job as the little voice in your head that talks about the Disco Demolition Night and aggressively validates you is fulfilled!
And yeah! My old Discord RPs is actually where I picked up a lot of my writing style, and being a thirteen year old who basically worshipped the ground these people/authors/geniuses (ONE OF THEM ATTENDED BROWN UNIVERSITY) walked on certainly helped a lot. And even from those who around my age, because we actively encouraged each other to write more and improve. All of my previous RPs have left imprints of my aesthetic and style today; I picked up my love for em dashes from a Starbucks barista who wrote like a God, my habit of naming CSs after vines from an Aussie girl who raised chickens, the way I write emotional development from the boy who introduced me to Mirror's Edge. The way I express myself is a culmination, a mosaic of all the people I loved, even if but for a moment.
Wow, I got way too poetic there.
And yeah! My old Discord RPs is actually where I picked up a lot of my writing style, and being a thirteen year old who basically worshipped the ground these people/authors/geniuses (ONE OF THEM ATTENDED BROWN UNIVERSITY) walked on certainly helped a lot. And even from those who around my age, because we actively encouraged each other to write more and improve. All of my previous RPs have left imprints of my aesthetic and style today; I picked up my love for em dashes from a Starbucks barista who wrote like a God, my habit of naming CSs after vines from an Aussie girl who raised chickens, the way I write emotional development from the boy who introduced me to Mirror's Edge. The way I express myself is a culmination, a mosaic of all the people I loved, even if but for a moment.
Wow, I got way too poetic there.
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Gao
[sad jester jingle noises]
thats deep af
my writing evolved from
girl who is daughter of satan wolf demon hybrid very strong never die can transform into dragon and wolf and butterfly and snake is immortal eyes change colour depending on emotion
to
he eat meat funny haha
my writing evolved from
girl who is daughter of satan wolf demon hybrid very strong never die can transform into dragon and wolf and butterfly and snake is immortal eyes change colour depending on emotion
to
he eat meat funny haha
Cello.
We are going to trust the giant flying sharks?
I agree. I have become really close friends with a couple people on this site. I have helped one of my friends improve in writing but they also helped me. Its like one of those three-legged races ya'know? You have to work together and help each other out to reach the end and win. I see that alot like rping. I look over alot of my old work from lets say a month ago and I cringe in the name of it but the people who have helped me on this site write the slightly bigger posts I have done on here.
People are so patient on here lmao- Ima be honest one of the main reasons I joined this site was so I could learn some patience and I have-
Also any tips for dialogue because I constantly seem to get suck there and never put enough to place that out with my actions. AND SAME GAO- but mine went to edgy hunting chick who really has a soft spot.
Im doing a 1x1 rp with knight right now about the backstory of Artemis, fae and Josiah and I have successfully made him cry.
People are so patient on here lmao- Ima be honest one of the main reasons I joined this site was so I could learn some patience and I have-
Also any tips for dialogue because I constantly seem to get suck there and never put enough to place that out with my actions. AND SAME GAO- but mine went to edgy hunting chick who really has a soft spot.
ach1lles
doomed by the narrative
My first character was basically me, but suave and charming and having manageable hair that wasn't in a bowl cut, as was the dream of all Asian children.
My current character thinks Nevada is something you can eat.
My current character thinks Nevada is something you can eat.
