CastoffCaptain
Obsess. Hunt. Manipulate. Repeat.
May I remind people that an entire chapter can be a single sentence.
William Faulkner:
"My mother is a fish."
William Faulkner:
"My mother is a fish."
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Understandable.In context of my post, I was discussing what they look like, not what they're doing.
I agree that visual descriptions of the scene around them or how they're reacting are important.
I meant describing them in the context of a character customization screen.
One liner....May I remind people that an entire chapter can be a single sentence.
William Faulkner:
"My mother is a fish."
All great one liners, but those are in books... Not rps."Jesus Wept."
First off... No one was yelling at anyone. I have stated plenty of times that my words are 'MY' opinion.
I personally feel that a paragraph is a one liner because there's no real depth to it.
We do all come here to have fun. And I look for rpers that want to post just as much as me.
Imagine four lines of dialog.Out of curiosity what do you consider a paragraph? Or one-liner for that matter?
I mean I was told for years that a paragraph was at least four sentences ( although some people have since told me that like single line of dialogue could also count as a paragraph so maybe I was just labelling paragraphs wrong ).
Also what do you consider a one-liner? Again I was always told that meant a literal one line of text. So I actually agree a paragraph ( assuming it's one line of dialogue or even four short sentences ) could certainly be a one-liner.
Now I personally don't necessarily mind one-liners ( I am more about being able to actually interact with characters and have something to respond to than I am the exact amount of details involved in either of those things ). But just wanted to say that assuming I have the definitions of both paragraph and one-liner correct I certainly agree that a single paragraph counts as one-line of text.
So if I make a paragraph that puts a lot of expression and thought towards a character and post it doesn't count as a one liner?Imagine four lines of dialog.
Or one line of action and then three lines of dialog.
One liners to me are lack of expression and thought towards a character and post.
The irony. Especially after we all have most definitely compared RPs to books at some point.All great one liners, but those are in books... Not rps.
Please provide an example.So if I make a paragraph that puts a lot of expression and thought towards a character and post it doesn't count as a one liner?
Gonna have to do some digging through various RPs. Much easier than making one from scratch.Please provide an example.
Again, you're failing to distinguish the difference between a one-liner and a paragraph.All great one liners, but those are in books... Not rps.
If someone posted those after I placed a lot of effort into my characters and post.... I would drop the rp in a heat beat.
All my efforts for nothing.
What is enough to work with?Again, you're failing to distinguish the difference between a one-liner and a paragraph.
One-liners can be brilliant, but they're not enough.
A paragraph can be enough. It honestly can.
If it gives you enough to work with, then it's up to you to make something better back for them. If you don't want to, ok.
But as long as you have enough to work with, it's enough.
me said:"Oof."
The impact hadn't affected Grant much but he had almost knocked the smaller boy down.
"Sorry about that." He said quickly. "It's completely my fault. I wasn't looking where I was going and- your ring is glowing." Grant said this in a rather nonchalant manner as if it happened all the time. In truth it wasn't the strangest thing he'd ever seen. The ring looked kind of familiar, though. It almost looked similar to... "The dome?" Grant wondered. "You wouldn't happen to come from the dome would you?" This was directed at the other boy.
me said:Dammit! Grant thought. Dammit! dammit! dammit!
Grant Kimoto aka daemon tamer Kimoto had been spit out of the space between dimensions known as the dome. Grant had always hated that place. He preferred to travel between dimensions under his own power. Unfourtanetly after a botched dimension hop, that's what he called it, he had landed in the dome. After that he wandered around for a bit before being thrown through a doorway somehow and ending up in a place he barely recognized. Still, the dome had its reasons for sending people places and Grant figured he'd better figure out what they were before it found him.
I believe this paragraph sums my character up very nicely.
The polls a secondary thing actually. I didn't have it in originally. I just added it as an afterthought. I really made this for the debate.But uh, little thought from me here since I don't think that the poll does the question justice;
That's based on your writing ability, passion, and creativity.What is enough to work with?
me said:Dammit! Grant thought. Dammit! dammit! dammit!
Grant Kimoto aka daemon tamer Kimoto had been spit out of the space between dimensions known as the dome. Grant had always hated that place. He preferred to travel between dimensions under his own power. Unfourtanetly after a botched dimension hop, that's what he called it, he had landed in the dome. After that he wandered around for a bit before being thrown through a doorway somehow and ending up in a place he barely recognized. Still, the dome had its reasons for sending people places and Grant figured he'd better figure out what they were before it found him.
He took a good look at his surroundings and realized he was in a town of some sort. There didn't seem to be anyone around but he figured the sight of a glowing female with ears and a tail would probably scare people so he un transformed. Kyro, his fox daemon, transformed out of his amulet form and grant transformed into his civilian form wich was that of a teenaged guy who looked supremely annoyed. Annoyed was more or less his default look, really.
"Where are we?" Kyro asked.
"If I knew that answer so would you." Grant said, annoyed as usual. His statement was more or less true. Ever since he'd met Kyro the pair had been inseparable, much to grant's annoyance. He continued to argue with the daemon and didn't notice where he was going until it was too late and he ran straight into a boy in a blue tunic.