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The Duck Overlord
Good stuff! Although some of us still need to finish a CS for their actual character. :x
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Good stuff! Although some of us still need to finish a CS for their actual character. :x
i thought i already fixed it and thats exactly what it is his limit is he only physical abilities with strength, he has no mystical powers what so ever no defense ive capabilities to combat mystical abilities unless they use mystical abilities to attack physicaly. if he did have defenses against mystical or mind abilities i would have said he has defenses against thoseAlright, time for some CS stuff:
Daniel Reaving So athereal mentioned it before but I'll reiterate it so you can make the proper changes, you can't indicate that he has an unparalleled level of strength and endurance. It means he has no equal or superior. So I know it's semantics, but try to replace unparalleled with a different word, "exceptional" perhaps. It indicates he still has limits. Also, make hint at some weaknesses. Being such a physical tank, maybe he's more prone to mystical abilities and abilities that affect the mind.
Reis Only ability I have a concern about is Animus which is left rather vague. I know it's part of Hephaestus' repertoire in mythology (he built automatons to assist him) so I won't tell you to get rid of it. Just be careful not to abuse the ability. Other than that, the character is accepted.
sounds good. and i do apologize. Having a rough day and i unintentionally went off. i do apologize please forgive meDaniel Reaving Okay, that's fair. Just change the word "unparalleled" relating to his strength and endurance to something else and you'll be good.
AnimeGenork There isn't a minimum or maximum, just do what you think would work within reasonable bounds. Look at the character's mythology and adapt their powers from mythos into the character's abilities in the RP.
sounds good. and i do apologize. Having a rough day and i unintentionally went off. i do apologize please forgive me
Alright, no problem. I'll take away some of his elemental abilities.DatGuyWelbz So the only problem I have is with his physical strength which is considered to rival even the strongest gods. You have to tone this down considerably as he also possesses elemental abilities. You have to strike a balance.
Blu Horus' abilities now just consist of his strength, shapeshifting, and weapon summoning.
That's actually a good idea. Thanks!Could we have it so that he's maybe exceedingly above average, but still within human range, in human form? It's only when he's either wielding his weapons/armour or in his beast form(s) that he has incredibly high strength/endurance?
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