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Fantasy Howl's Flying Castle - OOC

XD I don't know anymore because I'm...I'll admit it: I'm not good at creating mean characters. Even if I do the opposite of what I like, it's just like...Whhhhyyyyyyy? XD
Hmm, then don't create a mean character. Give the character a good reason. Like, the mean girl was actually paving the way for a friend who is a nice girl who, let's say, Johnny had saved back at Holt when he was guarding the airships. This nice girl has always wanted to meet him and thank him and was the one who bought a lot of his tickets to support him when his play first came out. Like she had escaped to another country during the war, and it was only this year that she was able to rebuild her fortune enough for an air ship ride to Dawnsfield. She could be someone Johnny knew for a long time as someone who is a fan and they had written letters to each other over the years. She could be someone he easily jives with, a real friend, and instead of making her an obvious rival to Echo which would automatically make Johnny go against her too, put her on Johnny's side like a supportive friend so that it's like she and him are on the same team, and then as the author, casually put a divide that isn't hostile between that team and Echo, like she and Johnny are into theater and talk about things Echo doesn't know much about --- but never to be mean to Echo, it's just honest enthusiastic conversation about something they both like. Until Johnny is already spending a lot of time talking to her unaware that Echo is starting to feel like a third wheel. What's more nice girl likes cuddly things too and they're hugging the same fluffy something and Echo sees they are basically hugging with something in between them, still they're touching. And then you can gradually make it worse by let's say nice girl becomes part of the theater, but there was no hostile take over, she just gradually became a part of Johnny's life and what's more a close friend.
 
Hmm, then don't create a mean character. Give the character a good reason. Like, the mean girl was actually paving the way for a friend who is a nice girl who, let's say, Johnny had saved back at Holt when he was guarding the airships. This nice girl has always wanted to meet him and thank him and was the one who bought a lot of his tickets to support him when his play first came out. Like she had escaped to another country during the war, and it was only this year that she was able to rebuild her fortune enough for an air ship ride to Dawnsfield. She could be someone Johnny knew for a long time as someone who is a fan and they had written letters to each other over the years. She could be someone he easily jives with, a real friend, and instead of making her an obvious rival to Echo which would automatically make Johnny go against her too, put her on Johnny's side like a supportive friend so that it's like she and him are on the same team, and then as the author, casually put a divide that isn't hostile between that team and Echo, like she and Johnny are into theater and talk about things Echo doesn't know much about --- but never to be mean to Echo, it's just honest enthusiastic conversation about something they both like. Until Johnny is already spending a lot of time talking to her unaware that Echo is starting to feel like a third wheel. What's more nice girl likes cuddly things too and they're hugging the same fluffy something and Echo sees they are basically hugging with something in between them, still they're touching. And then you can gradually make it worse by let's say nice girl becomes part of the theater, but there was no hostile take over, she just gradually became a part of Johnny's life and what's more a close friend.
That's a good idea! ^W^ It's kind of like...the villain in Magic Knight Rayearth. The three main girls wants to save the princess, who has to pray everyday to keep her world afloat and well, from the guy who captured her. When the girls finally reached her, they realized that it was her that they had to kill, not the guy who took her. The guy and the princess had fallen in love, which was bad. If the princess's heart isn't pure, then her world would start to destruct itself. The guy was trying to protect her from the main girls. It's kind of like that, right? He wasn't a mean character despite being the villain. He had a good reason to want to keep the princess alive and put her in a secret and sealed area.
 
That's a good idea! ^W^ It's kind of like...the villain in Magic Knight Rayearth. The three main girls wants to save the princess, who has to pray everyday to keep her world afloat and well, from the guy who captured her. When the girls finally reached her, they realized that it was her that they had to kill, not the guy who took her. The guy and the princess had fallen in love, which was bad. If the princess's heart isn't pure, then her world would start to destruct itself. The guy was trying to protect her from the main girls. It's kind of like that, right? He wasn't a mean character despite being the villain. He had a good reason to want to keep the princess alive and put her in a secret and sealed area.
Yup, yup.
 
Storyline is interesting, with its twists and turns. Currently learning about the past of Nick Valentine with Dima.
 
Oh, and, is there a particular scene you want me to lead the story to? I was thinking of starting the premiere, but you may want to do other stuff? Katsuya Katsuya
 
Katsuya Katsuya , hmm, I know not where to go. Shall I end the premiere? Or go for like a fifteen minute interlude where the audience has a break and they can go stretch their legs and go to the bathroom?
 
Katsuya Katsuya , hmm, I know not where to go. Shall I end the premiere? Or go for like a fifteen minute interlude where the audience has a break and they can go stretch their legs and go to the bathroom?
Hmm. Go into the interlude, i guess. Maybe Johnny can introduce Echo to Madam Goodhart? And the twins and Minnie can be like: "We told you!" XD
 

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