Snipewing
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So, on my discord server we currently have a roleplay event going on based on the Old Gods of H.P. Lovecraft's mythos (Cthulhu, Nyarlathotep, etc.), and I would like a little advice on how to progress it. The OCs taking part in the roleplay are all the well developed characters by my friends and I, which we have developed to the points to where they are quite powerful. (We do not irresponsibly OP, we manage it well and do not use absolutes, are susceptible to death and damage, and so on.)
This is what I have to initiate the RP:
"Eons after the time of humanity's lonesome existence as the apex predator on a run-down planet in some backwater galaxy, the Gods had breathed new life into the planet after a mass extinction. Snipewing had managed Earth for some time, keeping the planet flourishing after its near eradication, along with others. Earth was now a bustling planet with numerous interactive species, both of old and new, within the atmosphere's reach. Cities grew, wildlife prospered as much as civilization, peace was more common than not. But most had forgotten about the dangers beneath the depths of the oceans and the crusts of the Earth. Lately, great tremors cracked the planet's shell, and reports of maddening whispers had grown in numbers. Snipe and most of the Gods were gone now, working on LOFAR or within their own worlds, and had neglected the cosmic powers stored within. The stars were aligning once again, the very night sky gave a foreboding sense of despair and insanity, and soon the Old Ones would rise from their depths to burn this world in madness before they move on to the next.
R'lyeh rose from the sea, blessing now overthrown ships with the choking grips of insanity as He ascended the overbearing abyss. Cthulhu soon went over the planet, driving all within his gaze into a blissful, destructive madness. Earth was aflame. Nothing would soon remain. The few not yet inflicted with the Old One's gift fled to the mages that upheld emergency portals to Erion. Earth's pantheons abandoned their dying world and worshipers. Families fled, leaving behind their seizing children to be consumed in Insanity's flames. True anarchy. Those inflicted would chant for their new Lord as they would cut down any and all near them until the burning of the Earth had licked at their skin as well.
Soon, Erion's palace had been flooded with Gods and refugees of the dying world."
And there's a little more, just simple dialogue, but that's not very important. I would like some advice as to how I could improve this, and find a logical way for the Old Gods to make their way to my rp team's world, Erion. Any help and advice would be greatly appreciated. I have read Lovecraft's stories numerous times, yet I still have trouble with implementing my own twist. If needed, I can explain our OCs, the world, and more backstory.
Thank you! Have a great day!
~Gunter (Snipe)
This is what I have to initiate the RP:
"Eons after the time of humanity's lonesome existence as the apex predator on a run-down planet in some backwater galaxy, the Gods had breathed new life into the planet after a mass extinction. Snipewing had managed Earth for some time, keeping the planet flourishing after its near eradication, along with others. Earth was now a bustling planet with numerous interactive species, both of old and new, within the atmosphere's reach. Cities grew, wildlife prospered as much as civilization, peace was more common than not. But most had forgotten about the dangers beneath the depths of the oceans and the crusts of the Earth. Lately, great tremors cracked the planet's shell, and reports of maddening whispers had grown in numbers. Snipe and most of the Gods were gone now, working on LOFAR or within their own worlds, and had neglected the cosmic powers stored within. The stars were aligning once again, the very night sky gave a foreboding sense of despair and insanity, and soon the Old Ones would rise from their depths to burn this world in madness before they move on to the next.
R'lyeh rose from the sea, blessing now overthrown ships with the choking grips of insanity as He ascended the overbearing abyss. Cthulhu soon went over the planet, driving all within his gaze into a blissful, destructive madness. Earth was aflame. Nothing would soon remain. The few not yet inflicted with the Old One's gift fled to the mages that upheld emergency portals to Erion. Earth's pantheons abandoned their dying world and worshipers. Families fled, leaving behind their seizing children to be consumed in Insanity's flames. True anarchy. Those inflicted would chant for their new Lord as they would cut down any and all near them until the burning of the Earth had licked at their skin as well.
Soon, Erion's palace had been flooded with Gods and refugees of the dying world."
And there's a little more, just simple dialogue, but that's not very important. I would like some advice as to how I could improve this, and find a logical way for the Old Gods to make their way to my rp team's world, Erion. Any help and advice would be greatly appreciated. I have read Lovecraft's stories numerous times, yet I still have trouble with implementing my own twist. If needed, I can explain our OCs, the world, and more backstory.
Thank you! Have a great day!
~Gunter (Snipe)