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My phone is dying and I'm at a late night dance, so I'll probably get my reply out sometime later tonight when I get to my hosts house.
 
I need to delay my Martin reply. I need at least Lumina, Tobi, or Mayhem to post first.
 
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I understand, :(
 
Yunn said:
finally done with my character _ :( ´ཀ`」 ∠):_ …
@CRiTiCAL ERR0R - she is ready to be reviewed. ρ(￣ﾍ￣ ﾒ)
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Oh wow, I adore her. I think she'll grow into a fine Exorcismo once she gets enough training under her belt. The only thing is, when you mentioned San Circa, you actually put "Sac Circa" instead. xD


Other than that, you're all good! Feel free to pick a team to join and then make your first post!
 
[QUOTE="CRiTiCAL ERR0R]Oh wow, I adore her. I think she'll grow into a fine Exorcismo once she gets enough training under her belt. The only thing is, when you mentioned San Circa, you actually put "Sac Circa" instead. xD
Other than that, you're all good! Feel free to pick a team to join and then make your first post!

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Fudge. And I thought everything was perfect xD . /coughs. That was totally on purpose. I guess I'll fix this it sometime tomorrow if I remember.


I'll join team 3 since it seems a bit lonely there atm. Expect a post sometime in the next 24 hours~
 
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Ugh, so tired .-. Probably gonna post tomorrow morning, my phone is still charging and away from the couch I'm crashing on, and I can't even think straight .-.
 
I like the idea of this RP, would there be room for one more?


I've been working on a character that has 'forgotten himself'. He's also kinda insane, but in the nicest way possible.
 
Well I'm heading down to Miami for a family day thing. So I won't be on until like later tonight. Or if I can find free wifi. Or if I'm bored a s decide to use my data. Anyway everyone have a great day!!!
 
Okay so the skeleton outline right now is (and I am not sure if this has been asked before, still reading up on things):


My character used to not be affiliated with the Vatican, instead to be of a very obscure line of master/apprentice that thought Domare-type magic. A cult attempted to resurrect a higher demon called 'The Prince of Madness', but when using the master failed, they instead turned to use the apprentice. They couldn't open a portal to get the demon out, so instead send them to the lair of the demon, trying to lure them out/catch their interest.


Long story short; my character realised that the only way to resist forced madness, is to become utterly insane under their own terms. Having very little to no use to the cult anymore, he was beaten, and dumped. In the process he lost all his memories of who he was before, and his insanity never really was quite cured, not even by the Vatican.


That's the outline of what I have so far, so let me know if that'd make sense in the world
 
'Insanity' in this sense also has to be defined; he can't be afraid or scared or sad of demons/evil. Everything and everyone is good, fluffy and funny to him, no matter what they do. Basically he tried to counter a very evil state of madness with an over the top good one, so now he can't quite remember that he is supposed to be scared of things.


He's not dumb/stupid or slow though, so he won't run to a demon to hug them or things like that.
 
I'll join team 2 if possible; I already know Jackie xD


+ he has the gun, and Liam is the gunmaker... makes sense
 
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I'm heading to work. I will look over things tonight.


And who is Jackie and Liam? Dx
 
@InsanEleven, I've got a few things to address before I get to that PM. A lot of them are fundamentally important.


He is INCREDIBLY young to have all of this happening to him. This is A LOT happening to one kid in a short amount of time. That in itself makes me weary.

InsanEleven said:
and though his parents tried to ignore and hide it, it was very clear from as early as four that he somehow attracted daemons.
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How does he attract daemons? What attracts daemons in this rp, is Umbra. People just happen to be tasty and in the way when they're looking for Umbra. So in order for him to attract daemons, he would have to pretty much be coated in Umbra all the time. Though, if that were the case, he would be extremely sick. I have more information on Umbra on the 'Lore' page. It would be very useful to use.

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It got worse over time, and after his third possession
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No possessions. Sorry, not using that concept here.


And under this, I don't like the concept of golems. A daemon's spirit can only be contained temporarily as a one-time-one-use kind of thing. They are not familiars because they cannot be resummoned. When a daemon dies, they pretty much just turn back into Umbra. So there's no spirit to use. Its all Umbra.

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his desperate yet paranoid parents were looking for any solution that wasn't 'The Vatican'.
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In this world, the Vatican is not just the church. It is the superpower of the world. If there's something going on with daemons and attacks, high chances even non-religious would go to the Vatican (or local church) for help. There very well could be a reason why his parents didn't want to take him to the Vatican, but the chances of that are unlikely.

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Miss Dvorak; an unmarried 50-something woman, originating from Eastern Europe
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There's not really a Europe anymore. There hasn't been for over a thousand years now. Just for quick reference.

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she had been looking a long long time for someone who could become her apprentice in a form of Domare called 'Artificing'.
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Domare is a field of expertise ONLY known by Dark Chapter members. No one outside of the Dark Chapter know any of the fields of expertise (Ensis and Tempesta have special techniques too, yes), so she couldn't possibly teach him unless she was a Dark Chapter member herself--meaning that Liam's family would have had to go to the Vatican/local church where she could teach him there.


Artificing is umbrella'd under Domare abilities.

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despite his insanity
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I feel like there's a better way at expressing this. 'Instanity' doesn't really describe it very well. He had a lot of traumatic things happen to him, but I wouldn't really say he was insane without explaining how he was insane. What characteristics does he show that one would call him insane?
 
I think I went into the insanity part before, saying he can't see evil. Basically partial acceptance. He'd always be happy and innocent, even about things he shouldn't be, just because the moment he has the bad feelings memories will come. And if he remembers he'll also remember what happened to him, which he is sort of in denial about.


I also don't think he's too young? The character would never work on someone age 18 or older, besides you stated yourself any ages are acceptable. He's smart and he started training early, so to me 16 wouldn't be too young.


I can change the umbra things no problem, but without a third party other than the Vatican/Dark Chapter his backstory makes no sense. That's pretty much essential, I see no other way how he could have been a target for the cult; if he never had his powers shown he wouldn't be a target, and if he already was part of the Vatican I doubt the cult could have kidnapped him as easily.
 
I'm doubting whether or not I can do with the no familiars thing. It seems to me that the summoning aspect is fairly ingrained in Liam as a character. One time use summons don't seem to fit here, mainly because his companion 'Mouse' is pretty important.


Then again I can make mouse an actual mouse...
 
I can't really budge on anything that I've said. So if he can't make changes or can't fit, then I unfortunately can't accept him.
 
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I think I went into the insanity part before, saying he can't see evil. Basically partial acceptance. He'd always be happy and innocent, even about things he shouldn't be, just because the moment he has the bad feelings memories will come. And if he remembers he'll also remember what happened to him, which he is sort of in denial about.
I also don't think he's too young? The character would never work on someone age 18 or older, besides you stated yourself any ages are acceptable. He's smart and he started training early, so to me 16 wouldn't be too young.


I can change the umbra things no problem, but without a third party other than the Vatican/Dark Chapter his backstory makes no sense. That's pretty much essential, I see no other way how he could have been a target for the cult; if he never had his powers shown he wouldn't be a target, and if he already was part of the Vatican I doubt the cult could have kidnapped him as easily.
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InsanEleven said:
I'm doubting whether or not I can do with the no familiars thing. It seems to me that the summoning aspect is fairly ingrained in Liam as a character. One time use summons don't seem to fit here, mainly because his companion 'Mouse' is pretty important.
Then again I can make mouse an actual mouse...
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You have to remember this. You have to fit the character into this world and it's rules. Cit didn't make this awesome world just for it to be bent to everyone's characters. Our character are meant to be apart of this world, thus following it's rules. Thus you need to do your research and mold your character to what's set in this world.
 
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