Baby Bear
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[QUOTE="CRiTiCAL ERR0R]From what I see, I only have two main issues with your character, but each could be easily fixed.
First, I am not accepting characters with two proficienies. For him being so young, there is absolutely no way he would have two.
Second is regarding his age and years in the Dark Chapter. For my comfort, I feel like he might be too young to be on the field. Honestly, I would much prefer him to still be training, and thus be rankless for now. He can grow and develop through the rp to Indocto.
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Understandable, so I'll get rid of his second proficienies. Can i keep his age and replace the Indocto with still in training, or do you want me to make him a bit older, like 12-14?
First, I am not accepting characters with two proficienies. For him being so young, there is absolutely no way he would have two.
Second is regarding his age and years in the Dark Chapter. For my comfort, I feel like he might be too young to be on the field. Honestly, I would much prefer him to still be training, and thus be rankless for now. He can grow and develop through the rp to Indocto.
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Understandable, so I'll get rid of his second proficienies. Can i keep his age and replace the Indocto with still in training, or do you want me to make him a bit older, like 12-14?