Fantasy Heart's At War OCC

[FireMaiden]

Leo Radomir who hasn't answered what question

Also I'm hoping to have a light pack fighter or two kidnap Alara if it's okay with FireMaiden and Al the lovely jazz Ferosa could get kidnapped when the dark pack goes to raid light and can't find Alara because they took her off somewhere different for questioning.

Yeah, it's fine with me.

 

[Raku]

Would anyone be interested in being the "adoptive parents" of a pup in the light pack? I had an idea for one last night.

 

[BloodWolfRising]

Clash of Kinds Interest Check

Hey guys here's the interest check for my Clash of Kinds rp I'll get everything else set up once I'm off work

 

[Raku]

BloodWolfRising I can have Du'Mar run into Sephera and Gwen. He too went out hunting, and he is one to venture.

 

[BloodWolfRising]

Yyesss and Wen can watch her sister get all weird as such haha

 

[FireMaiden]

BloodWolfRising NekoQueen49 Unwelcome tag along!

 

[Malice Queen]

Sorry guys, I'm going to drop this. I'm not really feeling it and honestly I don't want to continue this. I'm sorry if I disappointed any of you. Feel free to take my character down OR feel free to put my character up for "adoption" or whatever. I don't really care.

 

[BloodWolfRising]

Okay sorry...

 

[Malice Queen]

Joker is going to take over Carnin, if that's alright with everyone

 

[BloodWolfRising]

Yeah

 

[Peculiar3]

Are you still accepting?

 

[Leo Radomir]

Are you still accepting?

i'm still waiting to be accepted then goes back into lurking

 

[Leo Radomir]

Yeah

where is my pack

 

[BloodWolfRising]

Well Snake has control of Zarah bit they won't be active just yet until then we can entertain ourselves amongst the three of us.

 

[BloodWolfRising]

As for where they are, there is no current location just another new forest until they get to the packs

 

[Raku]

Working on post now.

 

[Leo Radomir]

I want to make a decent post also thinking what slots are left for the light and dark packs going to make another char with out stepping on someones toes because they have signed up but it's not up there @RacingBloodWolf

 

[Terezi]

hello, i'm new here, i'm here to build up my posts and get some pointers! can you help me?

 

[Leo Radomir]

hello, i'm new here, i'm here to build up my posts and get some pointers! can you help me?

well off the top of my head paying attention to what's been said and what's around and thinking about things are all key factors, as for powers one it makes it more interesting one one does something another hasn't done.

 

[Terezi]

well off the top of my head paying attention to what's been said and what's around and thinking about things are all key factors, as for powers one it makes it more interesting one one does something another hasn't done.

what? that sentence was very confusing to me.

 

[Leo Radomir]

what? that sentence was very confusing to me.

What's confusing i'm saying how to make posts better in a number of ways and that's many of the factors

 

[Terezi]

What's confusing i'm saying how to make posts better in a number of ways and that's many of the factors

how it was written, i guess. punctuation is important.
but after reading it a few more times i think i get it.

 

[Leo Radomir]

how it was written, i guess. punctuation is important.
but after reading it a few more times i think i get it.

Ah i see fair enough my bad i just didn't want to prattle on much so i shortened it.

 

[Terezi]

Ah i see fair enough my bad i just didn't want to prattle on much so i shortened it.

now is a good time to prattle on! prattle away! >

 

[Leo Radomir]

now is a good time to prattle on! prattle away! >

I know this maybe be duh i knew that but one of the things that helps rpers not be confused is to slowly read over the post any one can punch a post out but if it doesn't make sense what's the point.
Like i said before paying attention to how chars talk or acts around each other can determine how one or a third party reacts.
In thoughts are sometimes a good way to get a better idea of how to make the rest of the post
i'm not sure if i missed anything but i hope this helps