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[Flame Demon]

The.Girl.Who.Waited why are your characters always ill tempered and rude to everyone else?

 

[The.Girl.Who.Waited]

i'm trying to make it that way and I was trying to fix that before it got too far

 

[Flame Demon]

Well it sort of already went too far

 

[The.Girl.Who.Waited]

well how can I fix it? she already said sorry

 

[Flame Demon]

She was rude to pretty much everyone there, not to mention her first impression was horrible too

 

[Flame Demon]

She does have to do chores the entire vacation, so she could do that without complaining

 

[The.Girl.Who.Waited]

first impression? she went up to ruby and the others trying to be nice and make friends.

 

[Flame Demon]

Yes, but I meant among her own classmates and the first years

 

[The.Girl.Who.Waited]

besides insulting the slytherin house, it wasn't exactly her fault

 

[Flame Demon]

It was... if she had't said out loud she absolutely didn't want to be in Slytherin

 

[The.Girl.Who.Waited]

besides that part because that WAS her fault, the clumsiness and embarrassing moments weren't on purpose

 

[Flame Demon]

they made it worse since everyone in her year already has a horrible opinions of how she is

 

[The.Girl.Who.Waited]

they're welcome to have the opinions but the whats with the way sirius treats her?

 

[Flame Demon]

He wanted to surprise them and she refuses to listen, then he gets an attitude

 

[The.Girl.Who.Waited]

and yet over and over she apologized, what does she need to be? get on her knees and beg for forgiveness? idk what else I can do to show shes sorry! she already feels guilty and tried multiple times to say sorry

 

[Flame Demon]

He still got an attitude and saying sorry only to complain about having to do chores isn't saying much

 

[The.Girl.Who.Waited]

complaining?! she was having a panic attack and yet they refused to let her leave and still they were petty and condescending to her a little bit

 

[The.Girl.Who.Waited]

all i'm saying is there is fault on both parts. before jumping to conclusions give her a chance to say sorry at least, is that a lot to ask?

 

[Flame Demon]

Just gonna say this: actions speak louder then words.
She wants to redeem herself, she should show it instead of constantly saying sorry

 

[The.Girl.Who.Waited]

okay i'm sorry i came across that way. i do have her written that she has anxiety as well fyi

 

[Flame Demon]

So she suddenly had anxiety? Cause this is nothing like that

Olivia is a hard worker and a very kind person. She always looks for ways to help people and always tries to go above and beyond. Olivia can be a bit annoying to others sometimes and comes across as overly nice. She loves to work out and hopes to play on the quidditch team one day. Olivia can hold a grudge when she gets upset and is difficult at forgiving.

 

[The.Girl.Who.Waited]

i meant to add it in. i thought i did thats on me

 

[Flame Demon]

So she can't have anxiety, cause then you wouldnvt be overly friendly

 

[The.Girl.Who.Waited]

i'll change that then. but can we at least move on from this and still be cool??

 

[Flame Demon]

Just make sure it doesn't happen again and get some variety in your characters