Airagog
And all at once, the universe groaned.
That is what I just said. I said RAISED in Texas. Stop resaying what I'm sayin, I read the rules, I got this.
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Then why don't I just make an ENTIRELY NEW character?Shog said:Because people get offended. I have bean in enough powered RPs to note that when someone gets accepted with a power already accepted for someone else then tension builds between the two because they feel that they deserve that power to be special to them as they were accepted for it. Then they try to fix the problem on their own and their power level grows exponentially, forcing everyone else to do so as well and the next thing you know everyone has the power of gods. This might sound far fetched to you, but I have seen it happen on several occasions.
Now, I am going to go practice Viola and work on this when I get back; hopefully with a real reply to the RP.
I took that as you wanted to change where you were born. I'm sooooooooo sorrrrrry for being human and misinterpreting what you said. Next time I will try to be a robot that is perfect at understanding what people are saying. Earlier I was trying to unwind the tension between us, and that reply most certainly DID NOT help with that.Airagog said:That is what I just said. I said RAISED in Texas. Stop resaying what I'm sayin, I read the rules, I got this.
I never said you couldn't.PlaguedWithInsanity said:Then why don't I just make an ENTIRELY NEW character?
I read the rules, yet you still didn't accept me.Shog said:@Airagog
Sorry about that. Sometimes I just get overly annoyed with someone once I spend too much time around them; especially during debates. Anyway, just tag me when you finished changing whatever you think needs changing and I'll look at it. And you were actually one of the few to read the rules first.
I'm fairly certain this is going to be redundant, but I need to make sure. At the very beginning you will not be able to hover as you should have no idea what that part of your DNA is. Ad for monster appearance, you do understand that the gif you showed is not what ;you really look like, right? That is why you were supposed to note the differences in appearances.slimmyjimjim7 said:Name: Surrey Williams
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Place of origin: Ireland
Human appearance: Standing at five foot four and weighing one hundred and fifty four pounds Surrey has long white hair and bright blue eyes. She has smooth pale skin and long legs and always seems to be in the same white dress.
Monster Name: Will-o'-the-Wisp
Monster appearance:
Powers: able to hover a few feet off the ground, teleport up to five yards, and clairvoyance/fortune seeing.
Personality: Surrey is a very shy person she likes to keep her distance from people preferring to watch from a distance. She isn't easily scared or particularly melancholy in fact she is quite the opposite she's always bright and has something uplifting to say. She likes the outdoors and wide open spaces, she doesn't like her feet touching the ground and hovers almost any where she goes.
Accepted, but what happened to your other powers?slimmyjimjim7 said:Name: Surrey Williams
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Place of origin: Ireland
Human appearance: Standing at five foot four and weighing one hundred and fifty four pounds Surrey has long white hair and bright blue eyes. She has smooth pale skin and long legs and always seems to be in the same white dress.
Monster Name: Will-o'-the-Wisp
Monster appearance:
Her body alights with a blue flame body becoming her eyes glowing and skin becoming transparent.
Powers: Skin becomes intangible for seconds at a time, clairvoyance/fortune seeing.
Personality: Surrey is a very shy person she likes to keep her distance from people preferring to watch from a distance. She isn't easily scared or particularly melancholy in fact she is quite the opposite she's always bright and has something uplifting to say. She likes the outdoors and wide open spaces, and enjoys playing games with people.
I'm not going to have you change your concept again, but I would like to point out that there is no such thing as a "Devil Satyr" as the devil did not come until Centuries after the term Satyr was no longer in use. Your hypnosis thing is nice, but please change it to "influence" so people have a way of breaking free. You might be already doing this, but make sure you're telekineses is harder to use the larger it is or the more it moves on its own. It's just a pro caution to make sure you can't just throw around your opponent with no chance for them to retaliate.PlaguedWithInsanity said:Demetria Valeska ZarkotideusDuh-Mee-Tree-Uh Vuh-Less-Kuh Zark-Oh-Tee-Day-Us
Nickname: "Demi"
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Place of Origin: Thessaloniki, Greece
Human Appearance: With gray skin, piercing red eyes, and white hair that falls in straight drapes, this petite girl doesn't hide her demon side whatsoever. Often mistaken for a child, Demetria looks far younger than her age, whereas she is often thought of being around the ages of ten to thirteen, but not any older. The clothing she wears doesn't help any in her case, being all baggy and clouding of her petite figure.
Height: 4'7
Weight: 98lbs
Monster Name: Devil Satyr
Monster Appearance: Demetria transforms to a tall hellbeast, with gnarled and curling horns, jet black feathery crow-like wings, a white mask with red glowing pits for eyes, as well as a purple mist that seems to follow her wherever she goes in this form. Made partially of demon energies as well as possessing the ability to fly, her demon form consists of an aviary-based structure with light and fragile bones, making her as light as she is.
Height: 10'6
Weight: 236lbs
Power(s):
- Hellish Hypnosis - The user can induce certain feelings on others, so in which they are hypnotized into doing a certain task, from doing one's homework to jumping off a tall building.
- Telekinesis - Self explanatory. The user can force objects or living beings to float off the ground. This is usually performed via mind control, but in a Satyr's case, magical elements are transmuted from the two horns protruding from their skull.
- Jurisdiction of Blood - With demon blood activated, the can user can use loss and dispersed blood as a weapon, creating and fabricating crimson masses into weaponry, flying/pinning needles, shadow-like walls/protectors, etc. This may only be used in extreme situations, and requires substantial amounts of both energy as well as adrenaline to perform.
Personality: Demetria may be incredibly small, but she is known to be quite rough. She likes to talk, and not very nicely either. She won't take anyone's ridicule and isn't afraid to give someone a piece of her mind. She likes to hurt people and cause pain to others, and couldn't care less about the feelings of others. She often waits for others to come to her and make friends, because she knows that if she tries, it will not be successful because people tend not to like her outwardly aggressive nature. She has a quick temper, and doesn't awfully hard at censorship. She also tends to be quite decent at provoking others as well. Demi is very argumentative, and prefers to have most things go her way or no way. It almost seems as if she actually wants to get into fights, as she is quite decent at holding herself in verbal confrontation. She is quite experienced in physical fights, despite her small and thin stature, and doesn't avoid provoking them. Demetria is a loner, and will often be seen doing things by herself. She loves to train and make herself better, because she believes that there's always room for improvement. She can be quite stubborn, and does find combat to settle most things. In actuality, Demetria is a lost soul with no purpose, finding enjoyment in hurting others to mask her own pushed-away pain.
Other: Demetria has a heavy Greek accent that is very prevalent even when speaking English.
Leave them in there so I know you still have them. What I was mainly referring to was the floating. You can do that once you learn what you are, but not right off the boat.slimmyjimjim7 said:I got rid of them because I thought that she would be able to learn them later, which ones would you want her to have at the beginning>
I honestly hadn't thought of it that way and I do apologize for that. I will concede that that is unreasonable. I want to explain what I am thinking right now though. Kira is fairly weak as it is. She is only about as strong as your average high school girl - and that's not very strong. She loses muscle mass in her monster form so there she is even less strong. Her sense of death is actually more of a hindrance than a help. Kira will never kill anyone intentionally simply because to do so would cause the same emotional pain for her that it would cause physical pain for the person she killed. In the end, this doesn't leave her with a whole lot. Earlier, you mentioned in a post that you wanted everyone to be on a level playing field. A person with control over any single element could fry, freeze or blow away Kira the moment they sensed her - even if they didn't sense her, the most she would do is knock them out and she even really lacks the strength to do that in one blow and after her first blow it would be easy to demolish her. A minotaur who can lift an elephant could squish her in a single blow. Many of the currently accepted characters turn into things that look similar to wolves - they have improved senses and would find her easily. This is just what is going through my head as I try to edit this character to be reasonable. I am willing to concede that my previous statement was unreasonable and am willing to edit it so that to be in her invisibility in monster form is limited. However, I am curious - how am I on a level playing field with everyone else at this point? I apologize if that sounds rude, but it is a legitimate question that is in my head and I can't think of any other way to put it. If you would like me to leave, I can, but I really like the character I have and I want to make her work while also being in agreement with you. I just don't know how to do that while maintaining her as a competitive and level character with everyone else in the rp.Shog said:So anyone who engages in combat with you must have seen death, or have the super senses to smell and/or hear where you are to stand a chance? Am I the only one who sees a problem with this?
You will be taught how to fight, but you will be at a disadvantage against really strong people.Kyra said:I looked again at the Thestral page and all it says about speed is that they can fly faster than the fastest broomstick... where do I go with that? I also don't want to have to run away all the time...
Oh snap a rival let's have some fun if your accepted and interested buddyPeaceswore said:Name: Aouli (ah-oh-OO-lee) Hale
Age (15-17): 16
Gender: Male
Place of origin: Hawaii
Human appearance: View attachment 105562
Max is 5"9 and weighs 118 pounds
Monster Name: Keravnos
Monster appearance: (Couldn't find a good half human/electric dragon pic) Currently he can have feathers cover his forearms all the way up to his elbow (the stronger he gets the more feathers he gains). His nails also grow. He also gains electric blue scales that go from his elbow to his finger tips, from his ankle to his thigh (only on the outside the scales on his legs do not cover the entire leg) and from his underarm to his waist. His ears turn electric blue and become pointer and his teeth become sharper. He also grows a tail that goes down to his ankles. In this from he weighs 219 and his height is 7"4 View attachment 105565
Power(s): He can use electricity. Currently he can use it to give him a small speed boost. Ie the average human runs fifteen miles an hour he can run seventeen (will increase later). He can send sparks from his finger tips that can shock someone but the most he can do right now is make someone's hair stand on end. Immune to electrical attacks.
In his half form. The feathers attract electricity around him making it if someone touches the feather they get shocked. If a feather is pulled out it will burst into electricity and be replaced after a certain amount of time. His hearing increases, also if he bites someone they once again get electrocuted.
Personality: He is pretty shy and always wears his hood around people unless he knows them or feels safe around them. He speaks his mind and sometimes is to honest for his own good. At times he is pretty ignorant, but tries to learn from mistakes. He blushes and gets embarrassed easily. He is also pretty laid back.
Other: Hates cooked carrots, can't swim and dislikes bossy people.
PlaguedWithInsanity said:?Demetria Valeska Zarkotideus
Duh-Mee-Tree-Uh Vuh-Less-Kuh Zark-Oh-Tee-Day-Us
Basic Information
Nickname: "Demi"
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Place of Origin: Thessaloniki, Greece
Human Demographics
Appearance:
With gray skin, piercing red eyes, and white hair that falls in straight drapes, this petite girl doesn't hide her demon side whatsoever. Often mistaken for a child, Demetria looks far younger than her age, whereas she is often thought of being around the ages of ten to thirteen, but not any older. The clothing she wears doesn't help any in her case, being all baggy and clouding of her petite figure. With dark and twisted protruding from her skull, to the furry goat-like legs of the same color that begin where the top of one's pants would sit, Demi definitely isn't anything close to human or mundane.
Height: 4'7
Weight: 98lbs
Monster Demographics
Creature: Devil Satyr
Appearance:
Demetria transforms to a tall hellbeast, with gnarled and curling horns, jet black feathery crow-like wings, a white mask with red glowing pits for eyes, as well as a purple mist that seems to follow her wherever she goes in this form. Made partially of demon energies as well as possessing the ability to fly, her demon form consists of an aviary-based structure with light and fragile bones, making her as light as she is.
Height: 10'6
Weight: 236lbs
Power(s)
- Hellish Hypnotics - The user can induce certain feelings on others, so in which they are influenced into doing a certain task, from doing one's homework to jumping off a tall building.
- Telekinesis - Self explanatory. The user can force objects or living beings to float off the ground. This is usually performed via mind control, but in a Satyr's case, magical elements are transmuted from the two horns protruding from their skull. That being using one's mind to move objects without making human contact with the item. Objects (or even animals or people) may be levitated or launched at the being of desire. Telekinesis is often used for good, but may also be turned evil.
Strengths: Pretty much any standard sized object may be turned into a weapon, from a pencil to a desk to a plethora of glass shards. Speed and trajectory varies upon the user's wishes, the object impacting from as soft as a touch to as hard and damaging as a ramming rhinoceros.Objects may also be bent and changed in shape. People may also be lifted/levitated.
Weaknesses: There is a weight limit to this power, the heavier the object, the more physical energy is used. Like running, telekinesis has its own specific amounts of endurance. And, like any person trying to lift a heavy object, there will be struggle.Demetria's own threshold of easy carrying stops at around 200lbs. Anything heavier may cause struggle; she cannot 'carry' anything more than 350lbs.As well as a weight limit, Demi's telekinesis cannot reach farther than 150 feet.[/i](Easiest way to defeat her is to shove her into an empty room with no doors or objects, and then take her on.)
- Jurisdiction of Blood - With demon blood activated, the can user can use loss and dispersed blood as a weapon, creating and fabricating crimson masses into weaponry, flying/pinning needles, shadow-like walls/protectors, etc. This may only be used in extreme situations, and requires substantial amounts of both energy as well as adrenaline to perform.
Personality: Demetria may be incredibly small, but she is known to be quite rough. She likes to talk, and not very nicely either. She won't take anyone's ridicule and isn't afraid to give someone a piece of her mind. She likes to hurt people and cause pain to others, and couldn't care less about the feelings of others. She often waits for others to come to her and make friends, because she knows that if she tries, it will not be successful because people tend not to like her outwardly aggressive nature. She has a quick temper, and doesn't awfully hard at censorship. She also tends to be quite decent at provoking others as well. Demi is very argumentative, and prefers to have most things go her way or no way. It almost seems as if she actually wants to get into fights, as she is quite decent at holding herself in verbal confrontation. She is quite experienced in physical fights, despite her small and thin stature, and doesn't avoid provoking them. Demetria is a loner, and will often be seen doing things by herself. She loves to train and make herself better, because she believes that there's always room for improvement. She can be quite stubborn, and does find combat to settle most things. In actuality, Demetria is a lost soul with no purpose, finding enjoyment in hurting others to mask her own pushed-away pain. She was one with a horrible and torturous past, full of pain and regret, and the girl feels horribly misunderstood. Under all the rude remarks, snarky comments, and physical provoking mannerisms is a girl who just wants for someone to listen, someone to hold and comfort her.
Other: Demetria has a heavy Greek accent that is very prevalent even when speaking English.
Accepted.
Lol, I was joking with you! You're fine xDPeaceswore said:Wait what? No! I just found this intresting! I swear I'm not that person! @The Suspicious Eye
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~Her full appearance is that of a kirin. Her hair turns white she grows scales and emits a glowing interchanging colors. (WIP There is this really gorgeous picture of a black kirin but I am emotionally dying on deciding wether or not to swap her appearance.)
Height: (Half) 6'9'' She keeps her normal height but her horns make her a good foot taller (Full) 7'9'' Weight: (Half) 138lbs (Full) 159lbs
Powers: Full listing here. In her half form has the ability to walk on water, is fire resistant, and able to repel dark energy (not shadows or physical atracks). She has a enhanced condition so she is stronger, faster and has enhanced sences.
In her full form she can wind walk, breathe fire, bestow luck (full healing in this case), Can control elements including celestial elements (gravity, time, ect) in the presence of a calm environment. Can calm a crowd of people or animals.
(Sounds like a powerhouse in full form huh? Well let me tell you something she can only fight evil in her full form, if you're not evil them it is physically impossible to harm you. The attacks wouldn't touch you, but move through you, causing no damage.)
Personality: Anli is somewhat opposite of what a Qilin should be like. She is extremely aggravated when she's stuck in a crowd and hates being around most people. She didn't know why they just gave off such a horrible feeling. She isn't one to pick fights, so she tried her best to stay away from them. She prefers to spend time either in the large forest behind her grandmother's shrine or around her close friends. Anli has a strong bond to those she approves of. She is willing to do anything to protect them and will come to their side when they are in need . She doesn't know why she feels so strongly for them, but continues to protect them and wish them happiness. She steers sway from meat, she would never eat it as a child so she has not ever tasted any meat. (Even Bacon!( ))
Other:
You don't ever reach the point of full monster form. Sorry. I realized i need to edit my paper now so I will clear my notifications and get back to reading Characters at home.
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