Digital GIVE ME UR OPINION!

[Rizu]

I DREW A PICTURE AND I NEED UR OPINION!!

I THINK ITS RLY CUTE

 

[Rizu]

DOKI DOKI SENPAI

 

[Rizu]

PLEASE NOTICE ME SENPAI!!!

 

[Hall Kervean]

I like it. But the bun kinda contrasts and detracts from the rest of the picture.

 

[Satire]

If this is a base, or how to guide, then no.
If you actually hand-drew this, then it's fine.

 

[Hall Kervean]

Satire I personally like Kirito-levels of detail to the face. But the bun just feels so... unnecessary to the picture.

 

[Satire]

Satire I personally like Kirito-levels of detail to the face. But the bun just feels so... unnecessary to the picture.

Yeah, the bun looks a little awkward. Maybe they could also try a different eye style?

 

[Hall Kervean]

I totally love the eyes lel.
Those should stay.

 

[Black Rain]

This looks pretty good! D
The main things that I see that would really bring more dynamic to the drawing would be the inking, symmetry and line variation.

Inking and Line Variation: anime is a very ink and colour based medium which bases around cell shading. You have the colouring down it seems when it comes to the eyes, but I feel as though, if you really want to make this an illustration and not something to actually animate, you could use thicker lines for the darker areas and thinner lines for the sides of the jaw, neck, upper and lower part of the nose and in the middle and corners of the mouth. Don't be afraid to really make those dark areas more intense! D

Symmetry: anime is also known for it's symmetry! It's a medium meant to be 'perfect', although when animated it may not seem like it. What I noticed with the jaw was that the corners were not on the same level which may give an odd appearance to the face. )

Also, don't be afraid to clean up your lines if you make a mistake and make a few thinner strands for the hair and some natural bumps. Believe it or not, anime is merely an over exaggeration of the human face, and they really are quite similar once you get to know it. ! )

 

[Radioactive Rose]

Change up the line art. Don't be afraid to use different sizes of thickness/thinness.

 

[Ghost Toast]

Well, I'm no art expert unlike the other guys who commented and can't draw for shit but I think it's pretty good but then is obnoxious IMO. While the bun is well drawn, it feels like it is just something added last minute to have more detail

 

[zebedeebones]

Better than what I could do. Then again given what I can draw it's not much of a compliment kekek

 

[Rizu]

Its not a base. I drew it on ms paint. I don't use bases...

 

[Oath__]

KAWAIIDESU~

 

[Nozomu]

Its not a base. I drew it on ms paint. I don't use bases...

Spoiler: reference

I drew an example for you, but mainly I wanted to help you with the bun since Black Rain has done a good job with everything else! Your face is a little off, I can tell you did not draw a base before you did the face as
Where the arrows are, you should make those smoother, hair isn't blocky! And where the line is, that's where her jaw should be curved in more! Also when you do a bun, you need to make sure your hair flows towards that bun in some sort of way other wise it will look unnatural! The way you drew your bangs makes a top bun look much more natrual (If you need more detail from me let me know, I'll do the best I can!) And you should be using a circle for the starting point of the head to keep your anatomy in check

 

[Val Quirno]

I Love it!!!

 

[TrumpCard]

And... By draw, you mean digitally right? Either you have some good software or some of this is definitely pre-rendered material.

 

[FoxxTheSleepy]

Pretty good for Ms Paint lol I can't barely do anything in that program

 

[The Lightning Flash]

THOSE EYES ARE PERFECT OMG