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Futuristic Freelancer Legends

Freelancer Application Packet:
Full Name: Ryan Anderson

Alias (If any, If not put N/A): Chef

Age: 28

Height: 6’0

Weight: 200

Personal Exo-Armor:
Hive Class armor, Many dents around the chest and head from rocks while mining. It's crudely painted red with an unknown flame like sigil painted on his right shoulder. He prefers to use a large flame belcher and a pickaxe while in combat. His helmet has a sticker of a cartoonish looking chef hat on the top.
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Specialties:
He has extensive knowledge with all blasting and cratering explosives his hive suit contains geological data for hundreds of planets and thousands of asteroids.
Ryan enjoys cooking as well. He uses a small removable data pad from his suit that's loaded with extra recipes so he can cook for others.

Physical Description (Plus face claim if you have one):
Shaved head and some light scarring around the right side of his head and face from an accident while planet-side mining before deciding to join the freelancers (I couldn't find a perfect reference image but here's a close resemblance, this is the closest I could find just without hair)
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Behavioral Description:
While he mainly just enjoys cooking he loves to go out on missions to other planets to work explore for new ways to cook. He tends to get distracted by food vendors as this means he can explore more ways to make food. He also enjoys to work underground as it tends remind him of being home. He loves to help his friends and tends to be protective of the people that are nice to him.

Background (Major events in the characters life leading up to now):
Ryan was the second of six kids and grew up on a mining planet. His father worked in the mines and his mother operated mineral scanners for the company that owned the planet, Weinhard Heavy Machinery. Because both parents worked full time, Ryan and his older brother, Liam, had to grow up quick in order to take care of their siblings. Ryan and Liam turned out to be an excellent team and went to work with their father in the mines once they both turned 15. In the beginning all they had to do was haul minerals from where they were extracted in the mineshaft out into a sorting facility. After a couple of months, they started working with handheld mining equipment in some of the safer shafts. By the following year Ryan had already proved himself to be a promising miner for WHM. Ryan's love for mining grew as he worked and he was eventually rewarded with a suit of Spartan exo-armor with a M.U.L.E. upgrade to make new tunnels for WHM. While working in the planet-side he used some less than legal explosives to break up a large chunk of rock into more manageable pieces of rubble, unfortunately doing so launched slag and rubble into Ryan damaging his suit and tearing through his helmet causing quite the injury to the right side of his face. Ryan wanted to work off planet so moved to asteroid mining for few years but that got quickly boring, creating a desire to find new work in the freelancers. Because the Spartan exo-armor was destroyed and it wasn't his anyway, Ryan used some of the funds from planet mining to buy a suit of Hive exo-armor that he loaded with mining data from his family's scannings and set off for work in the freelancers. He still sends portions of his paycheck back home to help his family. He also sends mail and videos to keep in touch with his siblings.
 
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@crumbelivable CalamityQueller CalamityQueller ONI ONI @JamsTheOrc @FabulousTrash YsFanatic YsFanatic @Chiester

Hey y'all,

Just wanted to touch base with you guys and see how you character sheets are going, I know some of you have reached out and asked me questions and whatnot.

I will be on a guard shift for the next 6 hours over here, Its the middle of the night and not much is going on so I will have lots of time to check out character sheets as they are posted. Ive liked the Character sheets that have been submitted so far, If yours has more meat and potatoes, hell yeah. If it has less and you need some help coming up with Ideas, Shoot me a PM, I love brainstorming and coming up with cool shit. We will find something that's right up your ally and that you'll have a ton of fun RPing here.

Anyway, Hope the planning is coming along nicely, Id appreciate an update if you get a chance. Otherwise Ill see them once you post them!​
 
I'm about... half done? Got physical and behavioral sections to do as well as the background. Did the rest on my lunch break and during the evening when it was slow at work.
 
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I'm about... half done? Got physical and behavioral sections to do as well as the background. Did the rest on my lunch break and during the evening when it was slow at work.
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Sounds good!

Thanks for getting back to me!
 
My schedule suddenly became really hectic so I might postpone my character sheet till Sunday. I'm sorry for the delay!
 
Freelancer Application Packet
Full Name: Adam Davidson

Alias: Bones

Age: 33

Height: 5 foot 7 inches

Weight: 185 lbs

Personal Loadout and Exo-Armor: Bones uses a Spartan Exo-Armor that has been somewhat modified. Visually it looks almost identical to the V3 of the Spartan design, normally painted with the appropriate camo for the terrain and a red crossbones on the left shoulder pauldron. The head faceplate has been replaced with one that sports additional sensors, making it look like the Spartan has six eyes scattered across it's face. An additional laser based range finder and target acquisition unit has been bolted onto the right side of the head as a backup.

A thicker torso and reinforced legs betray the unit's upgrade with a M.U.L.E. package to allow the use of heavier shoulder mounted equipment, though currently only a smaller missile launcher sits on the left shoulder. Of note the arms were not reinforced as Bones did not want to change their performance parameters.

Target Acquisition Gear: The sensor array on the Spartan was modified so that it could better acquire improved targeting information to more precisely direct fire support from friendly units than would normally be possible. However, to relay this targeting information beyond the local area Bones will need support from either another Freelancer with enhanced communications gear or a series of communication relays. To be a spotter for guided munitions being used against moving targets he must maintain line of sight to allow for real-time updates of targeting information, which at times could make him a tempting target for enemy forces. An additional downside is that tuning the sensors for this kind of work has reduced their effectiveness at closer ranges.

M.U.L.E.: This upgrade has allowed Bones to equip a 4-tube missile launcher onto the left shoulder of the Spartan. Ammo capacity is limited, only allowing for a trio of salvos, but the missiles do benefit from his sensor modifications and are thus more accurate than normal so long he maintains line of sight to the target.

Rifle: Other than having a preference for rifles tuned for shooting targets at medium range, Bones largely does not care what make or model he ends up using and will frequently change what he is using to better suit the needs of the mission and his team.

Forearm Blade: An incredibly sharp blade that is normally retracted inside a sheath mounted on the left forearm. His backup weapon for when things go badly or something manages to sneak up on him.

Sidearm: When on duty but not in his Exo-Armor, Bones normally carries a 9mm handgun for protection.

Specialties
Medical Imaging: Prior to learning how to use Exo-Armor Bones used to be an imaging technologist for a hospital and is familiar with a variety of imaging modalities, though he specializes in x-ray based equipment including DXA (bone density) and fluoroscopy equipment. While he does not have the training needed to fill the role of team medic, he is capable of assisting a medic as needed. It was because of this skill set that he ended up with the nickname ‘Bones’.

Target Spotter: Bones has plenty of experience with directing fire support and knows that sometimes means sticking your head out while under fire for a longer duration than you feel comfortable with.

Physical Description: Black hair kept in a buzzcut and face is clean shaven, athletic, prefers simple and comfortable clothing and as such frequently just wear scrub pants with a t-shirt when not on duty
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Behavioral Description: Normally has a good bedside manner with patients and is usually amused by how often they get directions backwards (especially with turning left vs right), enjoys board games and reading books, values punctuality, while he can appreciate moments to relax alone he does have a preference for group recreational activities and is a team player on the field

Background: Born on the mostly oceanic world of Poseidon, Adam has a pretty average life. While it wasn’t the wealthiest world by any stretch of the imagination, his job at one of the larger hospitals allowed him to live comfortably, but it wouldn’t last. Unrest over the world’s poor economic status eventually erupted into multiple riots across the planet. The local militia attempted to gain control over the situation but instead the violence grew worse and soon turned into outright combat. Unfortunately for Adam that included his hospital when it was raided for medical supplies and several of his friends and co-workers were killed in the process. Wanting to put an end to the end of the fighting before anyone else he knew was killed.

Enlisting in the militia he was given a crash course in Exo-Armor training before being given one of the cobbled-together Armors that the militia had and thrown into the fighting along with the other new recruits. Adam wasn’t sure how he managed to survive the fighting, but in the end the militia was able to regain control, at least for the time being. However the planet’s economy had suffered even more from the fighting, and in particular with the damage to his hospital, Adam found himself out of a job with little to no prospects for new employment any time soon. He could have stayed with the militia, but just as many people blamed them for the damage as they did the insurgents.

Not liking his prospects, he reluctantly decided it was time to leave home and the easiest way to do that was to sell his skills to Freelancer units. Not having a Exo-Armor he personally owned he could only sell his medical skill until he found a unit that was willing to provide him with an Armor he could use during his time in the unit. Eventually Adam was able to save up enough money to buy his own personal Spartan years later, giving him the opportunity to strike out on his own or join another unit. After he saved up some money to modify his Spartan a bit he decided to go for the latter option, signing up for an opportunity to join a new crew that was forming.
 
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Freelancer Application Packet
Full Name: Adam Davidson

Alias: Bones

Age: 33

Height: 5 foot 7 inches

Weight: 185 lbs

Personal Loadout and Exo-Armor: Bones uses a Spartan Exo-Armor that has been somewhat modified. Visually it looks almost identical to the V3 of the Spartan design, normally painted with the appropriate camo for the terrain and a red crossbones on the left shoulder pauldron. The head faceplate has been replaced with one that sports additional sensors, making it look like the Spartan has six eyes scattered across it's face. An additional laser based range finder and target acquisition unit has been bolted onto the right side of the head as a backup.

A thicker torso and reinforced legs betray the unit's upgrade with a M.U.L.E. package to allow the use of heavier shoulder mounted equipment, though currently only a smaller missile launcher sits on the left shoulder. Of note the arms were not reinforced as Bones did not want to change their performance parameters..

Target Acquisition Gear: The sensor array on the Spartan was modified so that it could better acquire improved targeting information to more precisely direct fire support from friendly units than would normally be possible. However, to relay this targeting information beyond the local area Bones will need support from either another Freelancer with enhanced communications gear or a series of communication relays. To be a spotter for guided munitions being used against moving targets he must maintain line of sight to allow for real-time updates of targeting information, which at times could make him a tempting target for enemy forces. An additional downside is that tuning the sensors for this kind of work has reduced their effectiveness at closer ranges.

M.U.L.E.: This upgrade has allowed Bones to equip a 4-tube missile launcher onto the left shoulder of the Spartan. Ammo capacity is limited, only allowing for a trio of salvos, but the missiles do benefit from his sensor modifications and are thus more accurate than normal so long he maintains line of sight to the target.

Rifle: Other than having a preference for rifles tuned for shooting targets at medium range, Bones largely does not care what make or model he ends up using and will frequently change what he is using to better suit the needs of the mission and his team.

Forearm Blade: An incredibly sharp blade that is normally retracted inside a sheath mounted on the left forearm. His backup weapon for when things go badly or something manages to sneak up on him.

Sidearm: When on duty but not in his Exo-Armor, Bones normally carries a 9mm handgun for protection.

Specialties
Medical Imaging: Prior to learning how to use Exo-Armor Bones used to be an imaging technologist for a hospital and is familiar with a variety of imaging modalities, though he specializes in x-ray based equipment including DXA (bone density) and fluoroscopy equipment. While he does not have the training needed to fill the role of team medic, he is capable of assisting a medic as needed. It was because of this skill set that he ended up with the nickname ‘Bones’.

Target Spotter: Bones has plenty of experience with directing fire support and knows that sometimes means sticking your head out while under fire for a longer duration than you feel comfortable with.

Physical Description: Black hair kept in a buzzcut and face is clean shaven, athletic, prefers simple and comfortable clothing and as such frequently just wear scrub pants with a t-shirt when not on duty

Behavioral Description: Normally has a good bedside manner with patients and is usually amused by how often they get directions backwards (especially with turning left vs right), enjoys board games and reading books, values punctuality, while he can appreciate moments to relax alone he does have a preference for group recreational activities and is a team player on the field

Background: Born on the mostly oceanic world of Poesidon, Adam has a pretty average life. While it wasn’t the wealthiest world by any stretch of the imagination, his job at one of the larger hospitals allowed him to live comfortably, but it wouldn’t last. Unrest over the world’s poor economic status eventually erupted into multiple riots across the planet. The local militia attempted to gain control over the situation but instead the violence grew worse and soon turned into outright combat. Unfortunately for Adam that included his hospital when it was raided for medical supplies and several of his friends and co-workers were killed in the process. Wanting to put an end to the end of the fighting before anyone else he knew was killed.

Enlisting in the militia he was given a crash course in Exo-Armor training before being given one of the cobbled-together Armors that the militia had and thrown into the fighting along with the other new recruits. Adam wasn’t sure how he managed to survive the fighting, but in the end the militia was able to regain control, at least for the time being. However the planet’s economy had suffered even more from the fighting, and in particular with the damage to his hospital, Adam found himself out of a job with little to no prospects for new employment any time soon. He could have stayed with the militia, but just as many people blamed them for the damage as they did the insurgents.

Not liking his prospects, he reluctantly decided it was time to leave home and the easiest way to do that was to sell his skills to Freelancer units. Not having a Exo-Armor he personally owned he could only sell his medical skill until he found a unit that was willing to provide him with an Armor he could use during his time in the unit. Eventually Adam was able to save up enough money to buy his own personal Spartan years later, giving him the opportunity to strike out on his own or join another unit. After he saved up some money to modify his Spartan a bit he decided to go for the latter option, signing up for an opportunity to join a new crew that was forming.
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Awesome, Love it.

Looks like Adam will be taking some of the medic role.

As long as we can get them back to the nautilus
 
I forgot I hadn't posted anything, had to write up rq. Tried a semi-resume take on it.

  • FULL NAME: Bully Talisi Tupuola

    ALIAS: Buj

    AGE: 47 standard years.

    HEIGHT: 6'6"

    WEIGHT: 260lbs.

    PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:
    A male of heavily mixed Polynesian descent and imposing stature, stood at an unarmoured height of 6'6" with a solid, well refined physicality as the result of a well-fed labour's lifestyle. Typically sporting a thick beard that serves to compliment his facial tattoos and head of grown out black locks, on the way to greying. They've a pair of brown eyes and a rather uninviting visage.​

    BEHAVIOURAL DESCRIPTION:
    Considered to be an exemplar of Jovian hospitality, jovial to the end of his days. A lover of music, a good game of cards and open to sharing a plate with anyone. Though very likely to feed any guest, he isn't without a fighting heart, known to get into brawls with servicemen and civilians while in spaceports, particularly in Earth Orbit.​

    SPECIALITIES: Search, Rescue, Recovery. Technical Assistance.

    PERSONAL LOUADOUT:
    • A940 Assault Rifle - A classic assault rifle design modernised, paying homage to older AK-style rifles., taking both conventional caseless and plastic rounds for ship-boarding.
    • 808 Jovian Journeyman - A caseless sidearm with a high capacity, taking both conventional caseless and plastic rounds for ship-boarding.
    • Europan Survival Hatchet - A typical survival weighted hatched, crafted in the rugged and classic Europa-style.
    • Arch-Knife - A rather crude combat knife definitively designed to puncture reinforced environment suits and, as technology progresses, potentially Exo-Armour.
    EXO-ARMOUR: Jaguar Exo-Armour.

 
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ONI said:
I forgot I hadn't posted anything, had to write up rq. Tried a semi-resume take on it.

  • FULL NAME: Bully Talisi Tupuola

    ALIAS: Buj

    AGE: 47 standard years.

    HEIGHT: 6'6"

    WEIGHT: 260lbs.

    PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:
    A male of heavily mixed Polynesian descent and imposing stature, stood at an unarmoured height of 6'6" with a solid, well refined physicality as the result of a well-fed labour's lifestyle. Typically sporting a thick beard that serves to compliment his facial tattoos and head of grown out black locks, on the way to greying. They've a pair of brown eyes and a rather uninviting visage.​

    BEHAVIOURAL DESCRIPTION:
    Considered to be an exemplar of Jovian hospitality, jovial to the end of his days. A lover of music, a good game of cards and open to sharing a plate with anyone. Though very likely to feed any guest, he isn't without a fighting heart, known to get into brawls with servicemen and civilians while in spaceports, particularly in Earth Orbit.​

    SPECIALITIES: Search and Rescue/Recovery. Explosive Ordnance Disposal. Technical Assistance.

    PERSONAL LOUADOUT:

    • A940 Assault Rifle - A classic assault rifle design modernised, paying homage to older AK-style rifles., taking both conventional caseless and plastic rounds for ship-boarding.
    • 808 Jovian Journeyman - A caseless sidearm with a high capacity, taking both conventional caseless and plastic rounds for ship-boarding.
    • Europan Survival Hatchet - A typical survival weighted hatched, crafted in the rugged and classic Europa-style.
    • Arch-Knife - A rather crude combat knife definitively designed to puncture reinforced environment suits and, as technology progresses, potentially Exo-Armour.
    EXO-ARMOUR: Spartan Exo-Armour V3 based personalised prototype build.

    • Built upon a Spartan EA/V3 chassis with various urgent operational changes, aftermarket upgrades and significant personal re-works including but not limited to an enhanced rebreathing and pressurisation suite refined for prolonged activity at extreme depth. [OTHER THINGS I FORGOT TO LIST]

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Looking really good!

Super awesome layout, I could never lol.

Make sure to utilize the Spartan's Versatile trait to pick a benefit from another Exo-Armor

Other than that it looks great
 
But I'm also one who will constantly re-read his options when making a configuration for power armor/mecha/whatever to make sure I'm not missing anything important.
 
Valorous Order x Code by Serobliss
Master of Masks
Grímr
Freelance agent
Full Name / Madae St. Francis
Code Name/ Grímr
Gender / Female
Combat Experience / Decent
Birthday / November
Race / Human
Height / 5'8"
Weight / 163 lbs
Personal Details
General Description
A fulltime freelancer with experience in covert operations and espionage. Agent Madae St. Francis is a decorated freelancer that will be your serpet and spy. Your eyes within off-limits locations.

Personality
Madea is known to be a very no-nonsense person who takes her work seriously. She is known to switch faces in order to mesh into many environments. Some have called her two-faced because of this, but she thinks that she is a social chameleon. She isn't very open to people and prefers to stay within the fringes when it comes to social gatherings. Should she come to develop bonds with someone, she tends to be very doting and ultimately all too caring.
LEVEL
1
EXP — Grade: B+
0 / 1000— Ascension: 1
General information
❖ Echelon:⠀Espionage Expert
❖ Rank: Double Agent
❖ Position: Close range DPS
❖ Tags: Rouge, Single target DPS, Glass anon
Kills
-
Operations
-
Medals
-
Service Term
-
Personal Loadout
CQC Tactile Defense Carbine
When things get out of hand, one must be prepared. The CQC Tactile Defense Carbine is a weapon applauded both for its offensive and defensive capabilities. Madae keeps this weapon on her person at all time should she be put in a difficult situation.
LRP 7.62 mm Laser Sniper
Her weapon of choice, the LPR 7.62 mm Laser Sniper is known for its uses stealth missions, particularly within freelancer work. As she practiced, Madae found she enjoyed the feel of the gun and adopted it into her personal arsenal.
Ka-Bar "Tactile Sting"
Modelled after the iconic Ka-Bar knife, the Ka-Bar "Tactile Sting" is a close combat melee weapon built from a material referred to as "Astride" which is excavated from astroids and refined. In the right hands, this weapon allows for clean and efficient kills.
Historical Biography
Year 000
Madae Saint Francis was born an only child on the planet colony CoRoT 7B. Her father, Helio St. Francis, worked as an experienced urban planner within GreyHound Inc. While her mother, Anetta Viotto, was a renowned archaeologist and historian, fascinated by the history that Earth holds. Her early days were spent with her Aunt, Alcina Viotto, A senior codebreaker who instilled within her a love for secret codes by teaching her about morse code. It was her aunt who Madae looked up to the most, wishing to be like her when she grew up.

Year 010
Life was sweet for a while, until tragedy struck within her teen years. At the age of 15, Madae lost her mother during an archaeological trip. She never got the full details of what happened that day. That loss of closure haunted her for years to come, causing her to isolate herself from others. She didn't wish to experience that sort of loss again, nor did she ever want to feel that lack of closure.

Year 020
In her 20s, Madae threw herself into her studies. She came out of it with a master's in criminal justice, and a bachelor's degree in psychology and computer sciences. It was at this point in life she aimed to work as an intelligence officer, following in the footsteps of her aunt.

Year 030
After finishing her studies, Madae began to look for work. Here, she began her work as a freelance agent, briefly working with the USEC as an information officer on the Cyber Hound Cartel, an organized crime group that specialized in artefact smuggling. It was here that she obtained her "Cloak" exo-armour. She left that job at the age of 32.

Year 040
Now, Madae St. Francis, codename Grímr, works as a freelancer. Her expertise lies in espionage and covert operations. She now hopes to find a place where she is able to work as the master of masks, using her skills to root out information and assist in any way she can.

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and so it is done! That took me longer than I hoped it would ._. Sorry if her backstory isn't as fleshed out as everyone else's! I hope you enjoy ^-^
 
CalamityQueller said:
Valorous Order x Code by Serobliss
Master of Masks
Grímr
Freelance agent
Full Name / Madae St. Francis
Code Name/ Grímr
Gender / Female
Combat Experience / Decent
Birthday / November
Race / Human
Height / 5'8"
Weight / 163 lbs
Personal Details
General Description
A fulltime freelancer with experience in covert operations and espionage. Agent Madae St. Francis is a decorated freelancer that will be your serpet and spy. Your eyes within off-limits locations.

Personality
Madea is known to be a very no-nonsense person who takes her work seriously. She is known to switch faces in order to mesh into many environments. Some have called her two-faced because of this, but she thinks that she is a social chameleon. She isn't very open to people and prefers to stay within the fringes when it comes to social gatherings. Should she come to develop bonds with someone, she tends to be very doting and ultimately all too caring.
LEVEL
1
EXP — Grade: B+
0 / 1000— Ascension: 1
General information
❖ Echelon:⠀Espionage Expert
❖ Rank: Double Agent
❖ Position: Close range DPS
❖ Tags: Rouge, Single target DPS, Glass anon
Kills
-
Operations
-
Medals
-
Service Term
-
Personal Loadout
LWRC M6 PSD
Madae carries a LWRC M6 PSD for close quarters ranged combat.
Remington 700 5R
When faced with long ranged combat, Madae's personal choice of weaponry is the Remington 700 5R.
Ka-Bar BKR7
One of her favorites, Madae is fond of using the Ka-Bar BKR7 combat utility knife whenever engaging in close ranged melee combat.
Historical Biography
Year 000
Madae Saint Francis was born an only child on the planet colony CoRoT 7B. Her father, Helio St. Francis, worked as an experienced urban planner within GreyHound Inc. While her mother, Anetta Viotto, was a renowned archaeologist and historian, fascinated by the history that Earth holds. Her early days were spent with her Aunt, Alcina Viotto, A senior codebreaker who instilled within her a love for secret codes by teaching her about morse code. It was her aunt who Madae looked up to the most, wishing to be like her when she grew up.

Year 010
Life was sweet for a while, until tragedy struck within her teen years. At the age of 15, Madae lost her mother during an archaeological trip. She never got the full details of what happened that day. That loss of closure haunted her for years to come, causing her to isolate herself from others. She didn't wish to experience that sort of loss again, nor did she ever want to feel that lack of closure.

Year 020
In her 20s, Madae threw herself into her studies. She came out of it with a master's in criminal justice, and a bachelor's degree in psychology and computer sciences. It was at this point in life she aimed to work as an intelligence officer, following in the footsteps of her aunt.

Year 030
After finishing her studies, Madae began to look for work. Here, she began her work as a freelance agent, briefly working with the USEC as an information officer on the Cyber Hound Cartel, an organized crime group that specialized in artefact smuggling. It was here that she obtained her "Cloak" exo-armour. She left that job at the age of 32.

Year 040
Now, Madae St. Francis, codename Grímr, works as a freelancer. Her expertise lies in espionage and covert operations. She now hopes to find a place where she is able to work as the master of masks, using her skills to root out information and assist in any way she can.

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Looks very cool.

There's a lot of stuff we wont necessarily be using like her level, strength/speed bars and stuff, Rank, "Echelon", experience grade, ascension, position, and tags and things like that.

All super great mechanics for a video game or if that was how we were going to track it, However I'm much more of a Honor player and realistic judge when it comes to that kinda stuff. I'm not going to be giving players levels so that no one feels like they are weaker than the other, just different strengths and weaknesses.

Other than that, I like the character, Her background is... hectic haha lots of very different things such as her schooling and experience but it sort of makes sense due to her prior job. She will defiantly be taking the roll of an intel officer, lots of time spent of the ship trying to listen in on enemy comms or decipher clan/cartel/guild/insurgency secrets

Another thing I have to say is that the Cloak EA does not give you the ability to survive hostile environments. So you cannot be out in space if using Cloak EA. In addition, any extreme temperature or irritable atmospheres are off limits to you until your suit is Self Contained.

This mechanic is purely to combat literal invisibility. Very few entities in the galaxy have anti-cloaking devices right now. Stuff like thermals are the cheapest way to see through a cloaking ability but that still requires them to be looking at a screen in order to see you. Its very difficult to apprehend something you cant see.

A few places where this excels will be: In other ships in space, on planets with non-hostile environments, and inside planet side bases (if the planet has a hostile atmosphere you'll have to find a way to get inside without leaving a climate controlled space i.e. flying the ship straight into a climate controlled hangar bay)

I just want this to be brought to your attention before the character is accepted and moved to the permanent page.

Lastly, your weapons are EXTREMELY out of date haha they are todays modern weapons after all and the M700 has been around for decades. (Still works like a charm though!)

If these are just references, that's fine. We can all draw the connection between your references and their equivalents in the far future.

Basically what it translates to is that you wield an 5.56 Compact CQB Carbine and Precision Sniper Rifle. Ka-bar is a super iconic knife, I'm sure the future has thick combat knives still so that's less of an issue.

I know I put a lot in here, please read through it all. If you make any changes let me know, most of what I covered was just for your awareness.

The background and descriptions looked fine :D
 
Just for everyone's awareness.

All character sheet submissions are editable at all times until we officially move them over to the Permanent Character Sheet thread

You can completely scrap your current character and make a new one, I don't care. I will be reading and accepting each one before they migrate.

Once they have been migrated. No edits are allowed. If I catch an unauthorized edit of a character sheet while it is in the Character sheet thread, you and I will have a talk and it will most likely will result in your removal from the RP.

We don't cheat here. Thanks for understanding.
 
Nessuno said:
Looks very cool.

There's a lot of stuff we wont necessarily be using like her level, strength/speed bars and stuff, Rank, "Echelon", experience grade, ascension, position, and tags and things like that.

All super great mechanics for a video game or if that was how we were going to track it, However I'm much more of a Honor player and realistic judge when it comes to that kinda stuff. I'm not going to be giving players levels so that no one feels like they are weaker than the other, just different strengths and weaknesses.

Other than that, I like the character, Her background is... hectic haha lots of very different things such as her schooling and experience but it sort of makes sense due to her prior job. She will defiantly be taking the roll of an intel officer, lots of time spent of the ship trying to listen in on enemy comms or decipher clan/cartel/guild/insurgency secrets

Another thing I have to say is that the Cloak EA does not give you the ability to survive hostile environments. So you cannot be out in space if using Cloak EA. In addition, any extreme temperature or irritable atmospheres are off limits to you until your suit is Self Contained.

This mechanic is purely to combat literal invisibility. Very few entities in the galaxy have anti-cloaking devices right now. Stuff like thermals are the cheapest way to see through a cloaking ability but that still requires them to be looking at a screen in order to see you. Its very difficult to apprehend something you cant see.

A few places where this excels will be: In other ships in space, on planets with non-hostile environments, and inside planet side bases (if the planet has a hostile atmosphere you'll have to find a way to get inside without leaving a climate controlled space i.e. flying the ship straight into a climate controlled hangar bay)

I just want this to be brought to your attention before the character is accepted and moved to the permanent page.

Lastly, your weapons are EXTREMELY out of date haha they are todays modern weapons after all and the M700 has been around for decades. (Still works like a charm though!)

If these are just references, that's fine. We can all draw the connection between your references and their equivalents in the far future.

Basically what it translates to is that you wield an 5.56 Compact CQB Carbine and Precision Sniper Rifle. Ka-bar is a super iconic knife, I'm sure the future has thick combat knives still so that's less of an issue.

I know I put a lot in here, please read through it all. If you make any changes let me know, most of what I covered was just for your awareness.

The background and descriptions looked fine :D
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I enjoyed the aesthetic of this character sheet and found the game-like mechanics interesting. It's merely for aesthetic purposes honestly, :] Just there to look and be fun!

Also, thank you for the additional information on the cloak EA! I understand putting limitations on it lest it becomes too powerful. I'll keep that in mind for future reference.

Also, sorry about that. It's just for reference. I'm not very knowledgeable on weapons personally. It's not my area of expertise. I hope that is okay. If I can find the time, I'll probably come up with unique ideas to fix up her load out.

Thanks for the intel! This is one of my first experiences doing anything sci-fi, but I hope I don't disappoint :]

(Also, if anyone knows the song in her little trivia section: we are now best friends and you have great taste)
 
Aesthetic it is! Im glad Im not letting you down when I say I wont be using those portions.

No problem on the Cloak disclaimer, Just wanted to make sure you were aware.

Its all good, I know not everyone is into guns and shit so thats why I figured they were just references, Both good picks!

You're good, this is a few peoples first RP so let alone first Sci-Fi RP. Im here to help y'all come up with cool shit that you wanna play and make it work.

As long as you aren't trying to God mod your guy I have no problem hashing out a character Idea with you for as long as it takes.
 
Calamity, I love sci-fi stuff and been coming up with stuff for over a decade at this point and STILL can't come up with fancy names for my gear. A shotgun is always just going to be listed as 'shotgun' on my sheet, same with plasma rifles or whatever else I'm making at that time, so don't feel bad about not knowing what to name your gear, lol. Hell, I have a whole sci-fi faction that has bland names for almost everything
 
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