Fantasy Freelancer Files (Red vs. Blue)

[Assailant]

Rhodey: *Stops* Wait... this is my thread. How'd I end up here?


Max: How'd I end up here?

 

[Wintermute]

JESUS CHRIST RPN


THIS TIME YOU'VE GONE TOO FAR


MORE THAN 30 FUCKING PAGES


WHAT THE HELL

 

[Scottybird Corvus]

Oh! By the way, Dark, I have a request for when you post in game. It will probably help you when you are creating imagery.

 

[Wintermute]

[QUOTE="Darth Corvus]Oh! By the way, Dark, I have a request for when you post in game. It will probably help you when you are creating imagery.

[/QUOTE]
Go ahead, there's always room for improvement.

 

[Scottybird Corvus]

Basically, the one thing that I have noticed you and Church do that could be made waaaaay better is you use (a) 1st person and (b) present tense. For the most part, you actually have more freedom in your writing and it sounds better when you use mostly past tense verbs and 3rd person nouns/pronouns.


 
3 part post, DONE!

 

[MockingXbird]

xD

 

[Scottybird Corvus]

Howdy, Thou Avian Of Mockery.

 

[MockingXbird]

Yo

 

[Scottybird Corvus]

*thinks for a little bit*


*decides to put Mockingbird on his shoulder, just to see if he can*


*walks around like that for a bit*

 

[Assailant]

Darth, Just gotta say, ten covenant on your own MAY be a bit too easy given how hard we've made them out to be.

 

[Scottybird Corvus]

Ten? No! Two!


 
And not the super elites that you guys hit, either.

 

[Assailant]

[QUOTE="Darth Corvus]Ten? No! Two!
 
And not the super elites that you guys hit, either.

[/QUOTE]
Oh... I coulda sworn I saw ten.


Also, this is a personal one, seeing as I don't know the full extent of the armor, but would a five story drop onto concrete leave no injuries?


*remembers the freelancer drop into the rebel base*


Scratch that.

 

[Scottybird Corvus]

Also, this is a personal one, seeing as I don't know the full extent of the armor, but would a five story drop onto concrete leave no injuries?
*remembers the freelancer drop into the rebel base*


Scratch that.

HAH! Pretty much.

 

[Mysterion7514]

Damnit RpN, I missed 40 frickin pages.

 

[Scottybird Corvus]

Damnit RpN, I missed 40 frickin pages.

That happens with this group. I recently joined the spam posting fun.

 

[TheAncientCelt]

If it's alright with ya', I'm gonna let a bit of time pass before replying again. Let everyone else do some stuff so we can better react.

 

[Assailant]

I WOULD like if Huntery responded to Rhodey.


HINT HINT

 

[AvidElmV2]

Damnit RpN, I missed 40 frickin pages.

Same.....

 

[Scottybird Corvus]

I WOULD like if Huntery responded to Rhodey

@Huntrey I think they're complaining about you, sir.

 

[AvidElmV2]

@Huntrey[/URL] I think they're complaining about you, sir.

KILL THE SNITCH!

 

[Assailant]

KILL THE SNITCH!

My pleasure

 

[Scottybird Corvus]

KILL THE SNITCH!

What? Oh. Right. People don't hear the snarkiness in my voice when I type.


Don't get me wrong, Avid. I'm not throwing you under the bus. I'm pushing for Huntrey to allow this game to move on.


 
Assailant! Calm you'self!

 

[Assailant]

[QUOTE="Darth Corvus]What? Oh. Right. People don't hear the snarkiness in my voice when I type.
Don't get me wrong, Avid. I'm not throwing you under the bus. I'm pushing for Huntrey to allow this game to move on.


 
Assailant! Calm you'self!

[/QUOTE]
Stabbing my sword into your meat carcass repeatedly would calm me down...

 

[Scottybird Corvus]

Stabbing my sword into your meat carcass repeatedly would calm me down...

Woah there. No homo, bro.

 

[Assailant]

[QUOTE="Darth Corvus]Woah there. No homo, bro.

[/QUOTE]
No, just necrophilia